Great story! What I'm now incredibly curious about is why would Barry go to the gas station and get the matches and tank to later burn down that elevator. I mean it could just be a coincidence, but if at that point, it already wasn't the real Berry, it'd be the perfect way to keep the real one stuck in there. So now I have to wonder, did the swap happen much sooner than we thought?
What would have finished this story for me was him realizing his friend WAS swapped, but admitting he likes this version of him better. For some time, I actually thought he was going to do just that!
Reminds me of the Pepe le Pew cartoons where the skunk was stalking a kitty who had a stripe of white on her fur from spilt paint. Bloody sleazy skunk, lol.
Brett, Today is a day you NEED to get on the red eye 👁🗨 to North Alabama asap. We got storms & possibly 🌪., but no elevator. Anyway awesome story and narration as always. I hope that you have a terrific Tuesday. 😇😇😇
At the point where they want to hold you back a year, you might as well kill the principal and anyone else. Best case scenario you get away with it and move on a grade, worst case you probably still get out when you're 18. 🤣
Great story and narration! Wonder why the other Barry did not follow them. If the elevator worked for the two of them it would work for the other Barry as well. Then I think maybe the other Barry could not cross the fire ring. Thanks! Great narration!
I mean.. would you wanna go back to the place that you knew was unsafe? and besides I think the elevator had something to do with barry's emotional and psychological state where is he is trying to forget his old self and start as his new him, where as his friend (us) think about the two sides of him as if there was literally two of him.. i dunno if this theory is correct but judging about the context it focused onto barry being changed rather than us.
Who knows if the elevator is still there? And sadly he seems to kinda like this Gary version a bit better. The other Gary is probably suffering in an isolated world with no one but himself there or him and another version of the guy telling the story. while this one free is happy to have the change. If he tried to go back could be the other footsteps he heard might have just been his other self and if he tried to go back and get that Bary his other self might step in and leave them locked in that dimension. Usually stairs in the woods or elevator in the woods are chanced sightings and it moves it doesn't stay forever there.
I stand by my previous comment about your subs. You have been the only narrator pumping out consistent constant just about every single day. That’s dedication! Side note, how’s work been Brett? You hope you can go RUclips full time or will this always be a side thing
A few options Barry number 1 got snatched up by doppleganger Barry while main character was looking in his house for his parents. To which Barry number 2 suggested to burn the elevator so that Barry number 1 could never escape. Option number 2: It’s Barry number 1 that came back and that elevator made him experience some type of personal hell that made him change his ways. Option 3: The doppleganger switched in mid fight and knew to take the gas can
Good one.. author should make the elevator the main character and have other people have encounters with it.. explore the different buttons.. different dimensions or times. Or an astral projecting maintenance button or the phone could talk to Eric Clapton 1973...lol either way thanks really enjoyed it you're voice is relaxing and intimidating lots of times to me. It keeps me tuned in to the story.. I'm going to subscribe.. gracias amigo
Some of these stories are so descriptive with details it kinda puts me off...being half the story with useless details and I think to myself, "how is this relevant to the story?". Sometimes I have to fast forward to when I think the good stuff is going to happen. I don't normally critique but I think it might be helpful to keep in mind when picking a story out. I love your channel! It (and you lol) were the first to introduce me to the whole creepypasta genre here on The 'tube and I'll always be a supporter! Some things just need to be said though and I'm all about constructive criticism as well as compliments, they bode well together and you can't have one without the other. I don't want to sound offensive or anything its just a personal preference I guess...idk. I'm sorry if it comes off as rude or distasteful..it's not at all my intention. I still love your channel and I'll always be here to listen 😊 💙❤💜
Honestly, this. I prefer the longer stories but very much dislike when its scene setting and character summary readouts like it were a pitch. I havent got that far into this one to place this minor annoyance here...but others seem to agree. There are times i dont mind it though, but it cant sound like filling a required word count
Younger inexperienced writer. Little polish and practice tyeres potential. Narrations, as always, are smooth. Now why the hell are there so many modes of entry in these woods?
I'm thinking of all the unavoidable errors, and there's a few. These include fragments, run-ons, problem with subject-verb agreement and problems with verb form and tense. To the author: I commend you for your effort, and I'm not bashing the story. You have potential to be a revered creepypasta author, and your originality is there. Keep leveling up.
I wouldn't have minded the build up, had the story culminated into something interesting. The crescendo felt unoriginal, predictable, and largely uneventful. The uninteresting and barren premise just didn't warrant the pace.
This REALLY needs a part two!!!
Yes, lets make the point of the story pointless
@@phylippezimmermannpaquin2062 🤷 ehh that's your opinion
Agreed! Get Barry back and see where the other floors lead!
Great story! What I'm now incredibly curious about is why would Barry go to the gas station and get the matches and tank to later burn down that elevator. I mean it could just be a coincidence, but if at that point, it already wasn't the real Berry, it'd be the perfect way to keep the real one stuck in there. So now I have to wonder, did the swap happen much sooner than we thought?
This guy is absolutely INCREDIBLE!!! Best story teller EVA!!! 🎉😊😮
Seriously, it took the guy months to think "Heeyyyyy... I wonder if I brought back the correct Barry".
Lol right
"It was too big to be a skunk" how big was that cat?
Author doesn't want to admit he likes Barry's Doppelganger better than the original
Well I guess it's better then finding woods in an elevator.
This story needs a sequel.
... stairs in the woods proved to be too much work climb so now it's elevators...
Yup! 🤣
Happy new year let’s hope we have a better year than we have had!
Thanks CGS For providing an escape for the insanity!!
"going down? Always room for one more.." 😏😈
Well, this is a new escalation of the stairs in the woods stories.
I’ll… see myself out.
No, no, I had the same thought. I mean if we're meant to avoid the stairs, why the hell would someone go in a LIFT?
I see what you did there lol
heck nah the stairs evolved
I enjoyed this one so much. Excellent work CGS! Thanks 💜
Many thanks for all these excellent video's I hope everyone is having an awesome day 🙂
I absolutely love your channel. Keep up the amazing work. 😊😊😊
The denial is strong with this protagonist! Thank you, CGS. Stay well.
What would have finished this story for me was him realizing his friend WAS swapped, but admitting he likes this version of him better. For some time, I actually thought he was going to do just that!
Thanks for another video, I hope everyone is having an awesome day 😁👍
Currently searching Amazon for a cat skunk costume.
Just skin a skunk, it will look more realistic
Paint a white stripe down the back of a black cat, it's much easier
Think it's called spray paint regrettably
Glad I wasnt the only one
Reminds me of the Pepe le Pew cartoons where the skunk was stalking a kitty who had a stripe of white on her fur from spilt paint. Bloody sleazy skunk, lol.
Brett,
Today is a day you NEED to get on the red eye 👁🗨 to North Alabama asap. We got storms & possibly 🌪., but no elevator. Anyway awesome story and narration as always. I hope that you have a terrific Tuesday. 😇😇😇
At the point where they want to hold you back a year, you might as well kill the principal and anyone else. Best case scenario you get away with it and move on a grade, worst case you probably still get out when you're 18. 🤣
15:10 the Elevator is finally found!
Don't want to nitpick, but I've come across some GIGANTIC skunks. Like the size of 3 large house cats combined
Great story and narration!
Wonder why the other Barry did not follow them. If the elevator worked for the two of them it would work for the other Barry as well. Then I think maybe the other Barry could not cross the fire ring.
Thanks! Great narration!
Most def a banger video! Blessings and much love
Oh man I feel for original Barry
So the dude just accepted he saved the wrong friend and didn't go back??!!
I mean.. would you wanna go back to the place that you knew was unsafe? and besides I think the elevator had something to do with barry's emotional and psychological state where is he is trying to forget his old self and start as his new him, where as his friend (us) think about the two sides of him as if there was literally two of him.. i dunno if this theory is correct but judging about the context it focused onto barry being changed rather than us.
I'd cross the Gates of Hell to save my best friend's life.
Who knows if the elevator is still there? And sadly he seems to kinda like this Gary version a bit better. The other Gary is probably suffering in an isolated world with no one but himself there or him and another version of the guy telling the story. while this one free is happy to have the change. If he tried to go back could be the other footsteps he heard might have just been his other self and if he tried to go back and get that Bary his other self might step in and leave them locked in that dimension. Usually stairs in the woods or elevator in the woods are chanced sightings and it moves it doesn't stay forever there.
So after the stairs in the woods its now elevator. I was expecting an escalator in the woods before that.
I stand by my previous comment about your subs. You have been the only narrator pumping out consistent constant just about every single day. That’s dedication!
Side note, how’s work been Brett? You hope you can go RUclips full time or will this always be a side thing
stairs, doors, elevators... dude you sure we're still in the woods 🤔
Turns out the trees are just the wallpaper and we are all inside of a giant mansion.
" We Found Wallpaper In The Woods I Wish I never Put it on my Walls" on the Next CGS!
Stairs, doors, elevators.... the only thing that never appears in the woods is the only thing you really need there: a toilet XD
@@DarkAlex1978exactly, it’s infuriating
Like when I want to take a dump I have to pee out in the woods openly with mosquitoes biting on my ass
Thank you as always bro 🤘
A great story. Thank you for reading it to me.😊❤ as always you read superbly..
A few options
Barry number 1 got snatched up by doppleganger Barry while main character was looking in his house for his parents. To which Barry number 2 suggested to burn the elevator so that Barry number 1 could never escape.
Option number 2:
It’s Barry number 1 that came back and that elevator made him experience some type of personal hell that made him change his ways.
Option 3:
The doppleganger switched in mid fight and knew to take the gas can
I think it’s 3 - he didn’t even recognize his house, and Barry 1 wouldn’t have bought the gas, imo
Good one.. author should make the elevator the main character and have other people have encounters with it.. explore the different buttons.. different dimensions or times. Or an astral projecting maintenance button or the phone could talk to Eric Clapton 1973...lol either way thanks really enjoyed it you're voice is relaxing and intimidating lots of times to me. It keeps me tuned in to the story.. I'm going to subscribe.. gracias amigo
Excellent story
Dude didn’t even hesitate 😮
Omg i need and want a continuation pls
Jason Hill is an intensively equèsive narrative with the narrations on another level.
Thanks for the narration 👍
Thank You!!! 🤗
Nice one great story 💜💜
The scariest thing when it comes to a doppelgänger….what if he’s better then you
doppelganger
Some of these stories are so descriptive with details it kinda puts me off...being half the story with useless details and I think to myself, "how is this relevant to the story?". Sometimes I have to fast forward to when I think the good stuff is going to happen. I don't normally critique but I think it might be helpful to keep in mind when picking a story out. I love your channel! It (and you lol) were the first to introduce me to the whole creepypasta genre here on The 'tube and I'll always be a supporter! Some things just need to be said though and I'm all about constructive criticism as well as compliments, they bode well together and you can't have one without the other. I don't want to sound offensive or anything its just a personal preference I guess...idk. I'm sorry if it comes off as rude or distasteful..it's not at all my intention. I still love your channel and I'll always be here to listen 😊
💙❤💜
Honestly, this. I prefer the longer stories but very much dislike when its scene setting and character summary readouts like it were a pitch.
I havent got that far into this one to place this minor annoyance here...but others seem to agree. There are times i dont mind it though, but it cant sound like filling a required word count
Think some times highlighted points so you can acknowledge a shift in character personality or traits ect.. I like longer stories myself
Amazing!!!
Well good grief. I missed this yesterday Surprise 🎉
You had Me at hello. Also the title is awesome
Thank you, good sir.
I'm trying to think of what I would do if I found a working elevator deep in the forest. Would I get in and hit the down button? Um, no.
WELL, IS IT GARY OR NOT??? ❤️👍
It's definitely not Gary.
His name is Barry.
@@laughingmask3118 🤣🤣🤣 I was hoping for the Miracle... 😁
He got the clone. 🤣
Hoh mah gawddd I still haven’t found my Barries🥴
Press the fire alarm button.
Younger inexperienced writer. Little polish and practice tyeres potential. Narrations, as always, are smooth. Now why the hell are there so many modes of entry in these woods?
I'm thinking of all the unavoidable errors, and there's a few. These include fragments, run-ons, problem with subject-verb agreement and problems with verb form and tense.
To the author: I commend you for your effort, and I'm not bashing the story. You have potential to be a revered creepypasta author, and your originality is there. Keep leveling up.
he still had the gas can so im gonna say it was still Barry 1
How did he have all of this graded work on the 1st day of school?
This story seems real just because how realistic this friendship is I was the kid that did jack shit I now own a buisness lol
Nothing creepy about replacing worthless with useful.
Thats the wrong barry isnt it
It's Barry not Gary lol great story
Berry is a goner
thats not the real barry.....
Is this real??
Imagine if this was real..
I would be down to explore this elevator
Obviously not
Done
I knew some barry. Yeah i have friends like them. Theyre not doing well academically but some of them are actually smart.
I dont want to learn Archer - But the other Barry wants ^^
This isn’t scary. Took too long to kick in, got bored.
I wouldn't have minded the build up, had the story culminated into something interesting. The crescendo felt unoriginal, predictable, and largely uneventful. The uninteresting and barren premise just didn't warrant the pace.
Gave up after 10 minutes. I understand build up but this is 30% of the story and all I heared was boring **** about school and friends.
Berries almost always come in 🍓🍓 twos.