15:18 😭♥thank you so much for critiquing my drawing, Jackie!! I absolutely love how you made the shoes big and chunky and how fluffy and loose the sweater feels! I'd definitely think more about making shapes in different sizes and checking my values!!
Yeah, I was looking at it, and I thought, gosh, that looks perfect. If I were in that situation, I'd have no idea what to say about how to improve the drawing, and would be trying hard to find something, anything, to improve. But she made it look from great to *incredible*!
5:40 Can I just say thank you for keeping the spirit of the character? You enhanced the proportions but you kept the nose shape and lip shape all the same, and I really appreciate that :D (not my drawing for the record, I just noticed that you were really respectful that way!)
I think my favorite part about your “fixing/roast” videos are that unlike a lot of artists I usually see make these kinds of videos, you actually try to match the artsyle of the artwork you’re “fixing” instead of just making it look like your own artsyle. These videos are super entertaining and helpful! Love it ❤
I love watching art critiques from ppl who actually know what they're doing and explain the logic/theory behind each change they make. Jackie gives off great vibes and always shows respect to the original artist's work while giving them valuable pointers too
that second example is actually so crazy, just the one change of moving the nose and lips down with no other alterations besides that immediately improved the anatomy and facial structure
It’s crazy how a lot of the changes are just moving the artists own lines around and after it looks so much better. Like when she doesn’t even draw on top and just shifts the original drawing it’s like the original artist has the skill they just need some guidance in applying it.
The way you criticize, the way you work, the way you explain and advise shows just how of a PROFESSIONAL you are! The thing that really makes it impressive is that you fix and show a better version of the drawing without changing the art style and not make it feel like your own unlike other artists that destroy the spirit of the drawing rather than fix it. Nice work Jackie!!💌
I’m so glad to find an art RUclipsr that critiques art rather than entirely changing it to their art style and the characters design because they feel like it.
I really appreciate just how respectful you are to the artist and their work. Usually when I see people attempting to "fix" others art, they unintentionally come across as rude or completely change the artstyle to their own without giving advice to improve (Kooleen is a good example on how not to fix someones art) but not only do you give actually helpful criticism and advice, but you keep the artstyle the same as the orignal while giving praise on what does work in the orignal
Please do more of these!!! I usually don't learn much from that kind of video but the way you do it has actually taught me a lot. I'm so glad I found your channel!
I'm absolutely in love with how you critique/ "fix" peoples art while still fitting in their original styles. So many people change the person's art entirely, basically making it their own piece and i love to see constructive criticism in the community :)
A lengthy comment to a small jump-cut at 2:47 I think one of the problems with the first drawing was the eye. Human eye physically can't rotate past 50 degrees, + the view cone is about ~40 deg (yep I googled). So even when going for the most bombastic sideeye, the eye can't look straight at you while the face is in full profile. On the drawing though due to quite a bit of white of the eye left of the iris it looks like the eye is staring straight at us, making it look uncanny. Jackie improved it by tucking the white space in, which clearly helps, but did not comment on it, so I thought I'd mention that.
I love how such simple things make it look so much different and helps improve the art!- its just all these little things added together that really change the piece as a whole and its so fun to watch ^^
Genuinely love this so much more than other art fixing videos because you enhance instead of changing completely, first time seeing your channel and I believe more beginners should follow you
It's mindblowing how much a few little changes can completely change a drawing up. This is the type of stuff i try to do after taking a day or two break from a piece to get fresh eyes. Amazing work, this channel is so valuable to an artist like me who totally gets tunnel vision during a piece
I’m taking digital art this year and a phage no clue what I’m doing. Watching your videos as well as hunting for tips has helped me learn from other peoples mistakes and how to avoid them myself. If anyone sees this and has tips for me, please share! I’m excited to learn how this sorcery works 😂. ❤❤❤
i recently found your channel through youtube’s shorts and i LOVE how you don’t insult anything while you fix the stuff. its so nice and refreshing from other artists who think they are better than everyone else
this is fascinating actually!! i've been drawing for as long as i can hold a pencil but i'm still not confident to create my own characters. this is giving me more confidence for sure
I don't know if anyone has pointed it out to you yet, but just a tip, the drawing with the braids, they were drawn mostly correctly! They were drawing them not as braids that you would see in your hair, but as box braids which are tightly braided so they don't tend to be bumpy! In fact, if braided really small, the edges are so smooth that it moves and resembles straightened hair! I understand your critique, but I would personally consider the culture/type of braid before changing something like that, as the type of braid the artist originally did was an entirely different thing than what it was turned into! :)
So excited for this one! Best to learn on certain mistakes with practise, your videos help so much, and for the people featured, great art, keep going!
Would love to see more of this! This is great to see and genuinely super helpful. I've been drawing for years but still have plenty of room to improve, this all helps a lot
I wish my professors would have done something like this. I swear this was so much more helpful and educational than any of their critique sessions ever were.
Side note, the way you push the drawing to be more interesting and more dynamic really remind me of how drag queens really push their costumes to be these big amazing works of wearable art. I'll keep that in mind when working on stylizing my character designs. I tend to think of things as needing to be proportional like it would be irl, but the beauty of art and design and being able to really push those boundaries. Will be keeping that in mind more often now
3:00 Woah the art looked weird to me (I don't draw) but I didn't know why, then when you added the low part of the lip it all made sense and suddenly it looked much better!
I know what you mean by the "references are for guides, not for drawings." But Im gonna have to disagree on this one😅 not every drawing is meant to be stylized. Some people like more realsitic styles and proportions
helloo i have a question! around 11:25 you said that references are for guides, not actual drawing, which is very opposite to what i’ve heard many artists say - can you (or anyone in the comments section) explain why you shouldn’t use references for actual drawing?
No you should use references! I mean copying exactly the pose without pushing it or stylizing is not helping you get better at making choices in design.
i would have kept a blue tint over her in the mermaid drawing, having that bright skintone doesn't make her look immersed in her surrounding which in water it matters a lot
I love this series!! It’s super helpful for me as an artist to visually learn, so it’s been helping more than you know! Also, not sure if this has been mentioned already or not, but I noticed around 7:34 there’s some extra voice overlap (from what I think is the sponsored dialogue) and it was difficult to hear what was being read/said.
Ok photoshop question - how are you able to lasso tool pieces of each drawing to where when you move the piece it looks like it’s on its own layer? Is the drawing just duplicated and you cut away from the top layer? Like the face and ear at 8:24
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OMG?? I've rewatched some of the older fix-your-arts several times on this channel, and now we get A NEW ONE? God bless
178 and no comments let me fix it
Literally I LOVE these videos
My impatient ass tryna watch the vid in 10 mins before I have to go 💀
You made the 3rd one more ugly!!
11:00 holy shit, the colour correcting made that drawing pop right off the page and breathed life into her
15:18 😭♥thank you so much for critiquing my drawing, Jackie!! I absolutely love how you made the shoes big and chunky and how fluffy and loose the sweater feels! I'd definitely think more about making shapes in different sizes and checking my values!!
Awesome work!
I like your drawing it's cute love the expression of it 😊
Yeah, I was looking at it, and I thought, gosh, that looks perfect. If I were in that situation, I'd have no idea what to say about how to improve the drawing, and would be trying hard to find something, anything, to improve. But she made it look from great to *incredible*!
hi, do you have an insta/twitter account? I reeeeeeeally like ur art style and i would like to see u create more and more.
Your art style is so cuteeee
"ROOOAAASSTTT" - kindly makes small changes whilst complimenting each character 🥰
I love Jackie sm she's so wholesome hehe
5:40 Can I just say thank you for keeping the spirit of the character? You enhanced the proportions but you kept the nose shape and lip shape all the same, and I really appreciate that :D
(not my drawing for the record, I just noticed that you were really respectful that way!)
I think my favorite part about your “fixing/roast” videos are that unlike a lot of artists I usually see make these kinds of videos, you actually try to match the artsyle of the artwork you’re “fixing” instead of just making it look like your own artsyle. These videos are super entertaining and helpful! Love it ❤
7:27 the audio doubling had me laughing way harder than it should have
💀💀😭
My laptop is on the brink of death and I thought it was finally keeling over T^T
I THOUGHT MY PHONE WAS BROKEN SO I REPLAYED THAT SHIT LIKE 10 TIMES 😭😭😭😭
lol
I love watching art critiques from ppl who actually know what they're doing and explain the logic/theory behind each change they make. Jackie gives off great vibes and always shows respect to the original artist's work while giving them valuable pointers too
11:09 such a big improvement just from changing and moving down the proportions! I also have the same issue so ill definitely keep note of this!
When I look at some pieces I’m like. „Oh this looks great how do you improve that really?” and then Jackie adjusts some things and I’m like „OHHHHH…”
thank you for critiquing my drawing!!💕
I've been struggling with stepping up my art to the next level, your advice helps so much!
you have such an amazing piece!!! your character is so adorable😻‼️‼️
@@privatedomicile thank you sm! ☺️
your character is so cute❤❤❤
that second example is actually so crazy, just the one change of moving the nose and lips down with no other alterations besides that immediately improved the anatomy and facial structure
For reals, I gasped! like what witch craft was that!? Runs to work on my anatomy furiously.
I WAS THINKING ABOUT IT like she just moved a little bit the nose and lips and the drawing was another
It’s crazy how a lot of the changes are just moving the artists own lines around and after it looks so much better. Like when she doesn’t even draw on top and just shifts the original drawing it’s like the original artist has the skill they just need some guidance in applying it.
The way you criticize, the way you work, the way you explain and advise shows just how of a PROFESSIONAL you are! The thing that really makes it impressive is that you fix and show a better version of the drawing without changing the art style and not make it feel like your own unlike other artists that destroy the spirit of the drawing rather than fix it. Nice work Jackie!!💌
I’m so glad to find an art RUclipsr that critiques art rather than entirely changing it to their art style and the characters design because they feel like it.
I really appreciate just how respectful you are to the artist and their work. Usually when I see people attempting to "fix" others art, they unintentionally come across as rude or completely change the artstyle to their own without giving advice to improve (Kooleen is a good example on how not to fix someones art) but not only do you give actually helpful criticism and advice, but you keep the artstyle the same as the orignal while giving praise on what does work in the orignal
Jackie, I bought your course, and it is one of the best on Domestika. Congratulations!!!
Wooo!
Please do more of these!!! I usually don't learn much from that kind of video but the way you do it has actually taught me a lot. I'm so glad I found your channel!
I'm absolutely in love with how you critique/ "fix" peoples art while still fitting in their original styles. So many people change the person's art entirely, basically making it their own piece and i love to see constructive criticism in the community :)
Around 7:30 two voices seem to be overlapping?
LOL NOOOOOOO THE AD READ
lol rip i was wondering if it was my phone bugging
samee 😭
Ooof common mistake if your not used to editing. @@JackieDroujko
@@magicdolphin3090 same bro
A lengthy comment to a small jump-cut at 2:47
I think one of the problems with the first drawing was the eye.
Human eye physically can't rotate past 50 degrees, + the view cone is about ~40 deg (yep I googled).
So even when going for the most bombastic sideeye, the eye can't look straight at you while the face is in full profile.
On the drawing though due to quite a bit of white of the eye left of the iris it looks like the eye is staring straight at us, making it look uncanny.
Jackie improved it by tucking the white space in, which clearly helps, but did not comment on it, so I thought I'd mention that.
I love how such simple things make it look so much different and helps improve the art!- its just all these little things added together that really change the piece as a whole and its so fun to watch ^^
my toxic trait is thinking i could draw any of these
Real
08:40 OMG, just a subtle thing changed everything Ur are so kind and amazing! Loving to watch your vids
I just bought your course! I'm so happy! I work as an storyboard artist and animator, but I love character design and want to improve on that too.
Genuinely love this so much more than other art fixing videos because you enhance instead of changing completely, first time seeing your channel and I believe more beginners should follow you
It's mindblowing how much a few little changes can completely change a drawing up. This is the type of stuff i try to do after taking a day or two break from a piece to get fresh eyes. Amazing work, this channel is so valuable to an artist like me who totally gets tunnel vision during a piece
Just moving the ear up and nose/chin a bit for perspective in the 2nd one made it so much better, wow! Like the art was good just in the wrong places
I’m not even an artist and I watched all 3 videos in this series in amazement. Hope you keep making them
I’m taking digital art this year and a phage no clue what I’m doing. Watching your videos as well as hunting for tips has helped me learn from other peoples mistakes and how to avoid them myself. If anyone sees this and has tips for me, please share! I’m excited to learn how this sorcery works 😂. ❤❤❤
I love how your analyses focus on composition and balance, it’s such an effective skill to have and just as important as your rendering technique
anyone else hearing two voices at 7:28
Me too, maybe the audio clips layered or smth?
@@Liam-bi7woits ad read. read the description of the video
The thing I loveeee about your art critiques is that you keep the style for each piece!!!
i recently found your channel through youtube’s shorts and i LOVE how you don’t insult anything while you fix the stuff. its so nice and refreshing from other artists who think they are better than everyone else
18:12 the bunny is sooo cute!!❤
this is fascinating actually!! i've been drawing for as long as i can hold a pencil but i'm still not confident to create my own characters. this is giving me more confidence for sure
I don't know if anyone has pointed it out to you yet, but just a tip, the drawing with the braids, they were drawn mostly correctly! They were drawing them not as braids that you would see in your hair, but as box braids which are tightly braided so they don't tend to be bumpy! In fact, if braided really small, the edges are so smooth that it moves and resembles straightened hair!
I understand your critique, but I would personally consider the culture/type of braid before changing something like that, as the type of braid the artist originally did was an entirely different thing than what it was turned into! :)
I don't even draw, but that was very insightful!
Same I can't draw this good but I'm fascinated how she enhances it and she gives such great feedback 🤧
Amazing!!! This is so helpful to watch and hear what kinda of things you look for to make art work better with just a few well placed changes
Great video, glad I found the short about this!
You're comments are so informative and are helping me learn as well ! I really like your content as well ! :'))
So excited for this one! Best to learn on certain mistakes with practise, your videos help so much, and for the people featured, great art, keep going!
these are 100% my favorite videos, this is so helpful as an artist
First time watcher and i love this i wish i had someone help me this way when i tried to learn
I found this video through a short. Oh my goodness this is so delightful!
Would love to see more of this! This is great to see and genuinely super helpful. I've been drawing for years but still have plenty of room to improve, this all helps a lot
If Jackie ever sees my art, she'll probably shit her pants.
Post it in #critiquemejackie on IG!
I wish my professors would have done something like this. I swear this was so much more helpful and educational than any of their critique sessions ever were.
i love how she says exactly what i think when i look at these pieces (except the 3rd one) it validates mr so hard
I love these you're one of my favorite artists if not straight up my fav
My best friends draws appear at 19:48!!!!!! So cooooollll!!!
Am I the only one who watches these to fall asleep. Her voice is just so relaxing I can’t explain 😅
the changes on the first one are so insanely good
Every Jackie's video is a holiday
Side note, the way you push the drawing to be more interesting and more dynamic really remind me of how drag queens really push their costumes to be these big amazing works of wearable art.
I'll keep that in mind when working on stylizing my character designs. I tend to think of things as needing to be proportional like it would be irl, but the beauty of art and design and being able to really push those boundaries. Will be keeping that in mind more often now
Just so much stuff to learn from in one video. Always awesome, Jackie 😎
A lot of youtubers will just redraw the entire art in their style and call it "fixed," so seeing you keep the original style is so nice
I am loving the spider-punk holding the mic in the beginning lol, awesome video!!
Wow!! I saw you on tiktok and I really like this type of content, because you can actually learn out of the mistakes of others. Thanks! ❤
More of this please ❤
It is really inspiering to see what a huge difference relatively minor changes kan make. It makes me want to improve my own art, too!
These kind of vids are really helpful, i love em!
im so mad ive never been on this side of youtube, this is so fun to watch
I LOOOVE these series
these videos are SO helpful
Real early today, can't wait to see how the video goes
3:00 Woah the art looked weird to me (I don't draw) but I didn't know why, then when you added the low part of the lip it all made sense and suddenly it looked much better!
I love these, thanks jackie!
Love "art roast" sessions lol
Do you on only critique pictures? Have you ever critiqued a fan submitted animation
I’m glad that she isn’t going THIS SUCKS and she is being like “what if …”
8:30 WOAH WHAT THE HELL YA WIZARD
Unpopular opinion i rathered a lot more from the original than what was changed 12:00
Omg same! And The braids were way better before!
loving the hobie mic
I know what you mean by the "references are for guides, not for drawings." But Im gonna have to disagree on this one😅 not every drawing is meant to be stylized. Some people like more realsitic styles and proportions
You know that these people themselves send their work to her? 🤨
@@dushistaya yes ik but just saying
helloo i have a question! around 11:25 you said that references are for guides, not actual drawing, which is very opposite to what i’ve heard many artists say - can you (or anyone in the comments section) explain why you shouldn’t use references for actual drawing?
No you should use references! I mean copying exactly the pose without pushing it or stylizing is not helping you get better at making choices in design.
@@JackieDroujko i see, thank you!
love your mic
i would have kept a blue tint over her in the mermaid drawing, having that bright skintone doesn't make her look immersed in her surrounding which in water it matters a lot
thank you so much, I can finally understand portion 😍
I don’t even draw or anything but this video was still entertaining and interesting as hell
0:21. Cool spider-mic 😅
Pls do more video's like these, I really enjoying them and I can learn sth after it too :>
Great series. I'd love to see more
I love this series!! It’s super helpful for me as an artist to visually learn, so it’s been helping more than you know! Also, not sure if this has been mentioned already or not, but I noticed around 7:34 there’s some extra voice overlap (from what I think is the sponsored dialogue) and it was difficult to hear what was being read/said.
7:27 something is wrong with Audio - 2 audios are in the same time
I love this kind of videos 🎥🎨🖌️
Does anyone know what mic she uses? The quality seems so good for such a small mic, or does she have it linked somewhere? I sadly can't find it :(😊
I love this kind of video. It helped me a lot ngl
I used to draw when I was a kid and young adult. How would you suggest I get back into drawing at the age of 43 as a hobby.
I’m not an artist at all, I can’t even draw stick figures, but this was so entertaining
hmm i was wondering, do you critique drawings of animals? i’ve been wanting to get my art critiqued for awhile! but i unfortunately don’t draw humans.
Thank you so much this video and all your others have helped me a lot ❤️
This is a good teacher
This is incredibly helpful
i joined her patreon but can't find the discord link :(
I spend hours trying to fix my art and it ends up looking worse and then I give up, while you can fix stuff in a minute 😭
Ok photoshop question - how are you able to lasso tool pieces of each drawing to where when you move the piece it looks like it’s on its own layer? Is the drawing just duplicated and you cut away from the top layer? Like the face and ear at 8:24
That’s right I just duplicate the layer
@@JackieDroujko Sweet, thanks for confirming!! 😊
*Need someone to fix my life like that* 💀
7:32 not sure if this has been pointed out yet but sounds like there's something funky going on with the audio here!
Cool jackie, just watch out for the AD call duplicate..