@@jjgreen1333 ?????????? That's what I love to hear 😆 I have to finish shadow war first though so take your time! And as always, thank you for narrating/taking the time to do this!
The pace for this one was a but fast but I understand your books always have som3 variance in length. My only real other critique is when you said at the start something like "the black dogs was my" which made me think she owned it and was confused for a little while longer. It's not a big deal but I felt that I should bring it up anyways.
I enjoy your story shadow war and this one. I was surprised another came so fast! However, your character die off too easily not giving the character to build up. Well. Keep it coming
I noticed that your protagonists are into pilots❤ I on the other hand am really loving your content thank you again.
True, lol. That is a similarity between Carina and Jas, though in Carina's case Stevenson is just about the only stable man on the ship.
@@jjgreen1333 thanks 🙏 for your reply
Thanks,great story 😊
You're welcome, Alex.
❤A lot like Andre Norton, with a twist. I am glad to have found this entertaining series. ☆☆☆☆☆
Glad you like it!
Very enjoyable story! And the narrator has a lovely voice!❤
Thanks, Craig. You're my favourite kind of listener!
I've missed some scifi fantasy recently
Hope you enjoy this one, Crusina. Part two next Friday. I would have uploaded both parts together but the book is too long for RUclips's standards.
@@jjgreen1333 ?????????? That's what I love to hear 😆 I have to finish shadow war first though so take your time!
And as always, thank you for narrating/taking the time to do this!
Sh&t I got to quit reading these comments
Did you pick the name Cadwallader from Twilight Zone? 🖤
Interesting question. I actually picked it from an ancient British king.
You've piqued my interest. Which episode of The Twilight Zone contains a Cadwallader?
@@jjgreen1333 it’s called Escape Clause. It’s about a hypochondriac who sells his soul for perfect health. Cadwallader is the Devil 😈
The pace for this one was a but fast but I understand your books always have som3 variance in length.
My only real other critique is when you said at the start something like "the black dogs was my" which made me think she owned it and was confused for a little while longer.
It's not a big deal but I felt that I should bring it up anyways.
Thanks for letting me know.
Thanks for giving it all away
@@DavidTeerTheBackyardUfologist You're welcome!
I enjoy your story shadow war and this one. I was surprised another came so fast! However, your character die off too easily not giving the character to build up. Well. Keep it coming