They Laughed At "Tiny Army", Until They Realized It Had HUMAN Soldiers! | HFY Sci-Fi Story
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"..weaponized gunships.."??
It wouldn't be much of a gunship if it wasn't weaponized!
You have to admit the AI is getting better
Gestures angrily in human. "It's in the name!"
The writer has NO IDEA about weaponry. They just mix terms like a shitty blender. I’ve given up at the surface to air missiles that have both tungsten and depleted uranium rods in them that are released… first that would be explosively fired from the warhead and there would be only one type of metal since the missile speed and explosive delivery needs to be tailored for the mass and density and effect on target of the two rod metals.
Next will be neon yellow with reflective strips for cammo jackets….
@@danielleriley2796 Its an AI.
They committed the crime of perfidy - false surrender. No quarter is to be given.
Bajorans: Consider the fate of your women.
Human: Clearly you don’t know our women. I should have just marched them up here judging from what I’ve seen.
Lol. Good one, Leonidas !!
I like the sequel better."I'm not here as a witness"
@chadrowe8452 any sequel that features Eva Green dressed (or un, as the case may (or may not) be) as she was in this movie is automatically better than the prior entries in the franchise. Subsequent sequels as well.
Stand alone anthology stories.
Anything based on fan fiction, shot in an iPhone and uploaded to RUclips.
And many unrelated movies as well.
Of course, my opinions on the matter are subjective. You're free to disagree. Everyone has the right to choose beinf wrong😂😂😂😂
When I see something using well-known sci-fi names like 'Bajoran' it makes me think it was the product of an AI, and that no human editor even bothered to look it over.
This channel is 100% AI generated stories
very impressive, then
@@pkill23 Except it's not, most of the videos are just an AI voices reading reddit posts to make money off other people's writing...
@@iamabadger I like "SciFi Stories" (scifistories1977), still ai voices and reddit stories but the channel owner will contact the story writer, ask permission and share revenue with them from their videos. He also uses different ai voices for different characters.
Well, considering Star Trek and Star Wars have borrowed heavily from people, places, and things that do, or have existed (maybe in a different language) it's not surprising that many words get modified, or repurposed to fit the narrative of science fiction.
"Fenris" and "Bajoran"...
good lord, the AI is strong in this one!
Nice catch.
Something tilted me, I couldn't say what... But now I know.
The only thing that gives away that an ai is writing this is when it uses the same words to describe something . The words it uses are totally correct but it cannot understand that even though those words are the best choice to describe something, we english language speakers find it off putting to use the same metaphor or turn of phrase multiple times in the same body of text. The Ai cannot understand such subtleties of writing.
Great idea,,,,,, if AI is really up to this task
At least until the AI gets enough data sets (containing those human-written subtleties) fed into it. Today's AI doesn't understand or philosophize about anything. It just mimics and reformulates what us humans create.
Also, Humvees in a scifi setting? That's something I'd expect a human writer to catch.
This should be the base story for a movie. No drama. Just, confidence, carnage and victory....🤔
Gotta make space for the woke messages and pontification.
@@robinstuyvesant7187 wokeness killed Star Wars...and Halo....and Star Trek.....
Good story, sighed and facepalmed at the Star Trek name references though. Only inconsistency was at the end which involved the child's doll. The commander had given it back to the little girl and told her to go hide, then he had it back in his hand at the end ("Whoops").
Yes spotte that too, could be a sign of an AI generated story. I don't know. I liked it besides that.
I thought it was a movie recap. I was surprised, to find it a storyline.
Very well written, written. Thank you.
That looks like Titus Pullo of the XIII Legion. I would not be messing with him.
That was my thought. RIP Ray Stevenson.
Pullo and Vorenus were like the Hulk and the Thing of the ancient world. Fuck yeah!
We march for Macragge! Courage and Honour!
I dunno , kinda looks like #47
The second guy in the picture looks like Connor MacLeod from Highlander.
This AIs grasp of battle field tactics is woeful.
Humanity is a force to be reckoned with.
They have a lot of experience after all, fighting each other.
Great fun, but please, please get the text proof read before publishing. There are LOTS of spolling mistakes!
'spolling' lmao kewl
Lot's of redundant chatter from the narrator. I thought he gave the doll back to the little girl.
The whole channel is fully automated, reading and generating thumbnails pulled from (sometimes) uncredited reddit posts. It posts a 30min to 1h long video every 2 hours. There will be no proofreading here at all. It's just a cheap way of making money off of other people's work and writing...
@@iamabadger How did you find that out?
@@durbledurb3992 " How did you find that out?" just look at the video release rate.
Also the quality.
It has been happening a lot on YT and other media and getting much worse.
A couple of years ago it was just people lifting stuff from reddit HFY and and other sources and running text to speech over them but now it is just wholesale AI randomness not worth wading through.
If it doesn't give a source for the story it is likely a lot of AI now.
On the RHS recommendation list you can click on the three dots and select "Don't recommend channel" and it isn't supposed to show them again, but sometimes it still does.
Hopefully it won't tempt me with this channel again.
I’m one of those old soldiers (11B), and this story was fantastic, thank you!
I’m old enough to know that sci-fi and Hollywood usually give us a hint of what’s to come or has already happened behind the scenes.
He gave the doll back to the little girl, but he looked at it in his hand later, and other strangeness, but an engaging story.
Dammmm, almost felt bad for the aliens for a minute! 😂😂😂
I hear bajorians i star thinking star trek lmao
Humans didn't have ftl, but are on this planet. Soo, they lived there too? Or they spent generations just to get 1% of the way there to aid them? I don't get this, the Bajoran Capital city is only miles away from the battlefield, so they also lived on that planet with the L aliens? So much is confusing and I barely started. These vids are great as a, "what not to do" if you do a little story writing.
We heard some talk of the Bajoran council back at the city. What happened to them? Are they still there? Not a bad story. But inconsistent.
Agreed! It's almost so good but then these stupid mistakes...
came through a stable wormhole, no ftl required.
@@williamoloughlin8298That doesn’t make it any better. So, now we’re supposed to believe that they can survive the infinite gravity of a black hole, but can’t go FTL?
The oppressed aliens brought the humans there
Aren't the Bajorans a race in Star Trek?
45:05 then 46:05 erm.. your AI needs to stop smoking weed
TF is wrong with smoking weed?!?
@@grogvaughan5649 Absoluting nothing! ! Smoke weed everyday! But dont post weirdass shit and expect more weed! .. hmm more weed please :)
@@grogvaughan5649I smoked one weed now I am gay and worship Satan.
@@grogvaughan5649 It make you say, do, write stupid things as the examples. This was definitely written by an AI. He hands the doll to the girl, "Get to safety, the battles over"? And in the next sentence he's in ship with self same doll?
@@TheSolidSnakeOil sounds like a you issue
America, we are failing miserably........
Humvee's far in the future? They wouldn't have made anything different by then?
Nope! Humvees and outdated super bombers will never go out of style.
Wait?! Did you take any care to see what time frame this video took place? It was the year 2024
@@handleyourowntool It's an alternative present?
@@handleyourowntool Lamborghini would be pleased to know. But about war, we used to have Willys Jeeps. One quote from a Warhammer game is an orc saying, "I got me an idea for making walkin..... faster." Jeeps are for making walkin faster, but eventually, with power armor, walkin... will be faster. A bombers purpose is to deliver bombs.... until bombs deliver themselves, as in missiles. We are seeing that evolution being played out in a couple modern war theaters. Bombers are rarely used to deliver bombs anymore, because they are perceptibly interceptable. They are also expensive. With the Phalanx system and other systems, intercepting even missiles and shells is becoming more a reality. Eventually, missiles and shells will have stealth tech and armor, maybe shielding. Tank armor won't be enough. It will be better to have fast, light vehicles. Probably power armor.
Even if this was 1,000 years in the future, you know how humans like their nostalgia. They could have named a new all terrain vehicle a Humvee just because it was a vehicle of war in the past.
I recommend taking it down, then change Bajoran into something else and reupload it, otherwise you might have Paramount knocking on your door with a lawsuit. Bajor is a planet in the Star Trek universe and Bajorans are a rather prominent species in said universe.
Will you relax 🙄
What if the AI voice and speech to text got it wrong and its Bahyorans? Huh?
How are they going to prove that its Bajorans
YOU CAN'T SUE AN AI...if it created this story using open source material, Paramount can kiss their arses...and that ridiculous trash that Roddenberry created? That's open source in this case...get yourself a law degree or shut the f up, kid.
@@paulholmpileborg6340the subtitles.
@@malahammerno. Hes right.
He was adopted...biological father is George s. Patton...
We don't know that to be true. What are the odds? There is a lot about those stories that can't be confirmed
I swear, if they try to ban my railgun I will go postal 😆 Good story.
Bajorans getting their asses kicked? Sign me up.
Wrong Bajorans! These are insectoids with purple blood.
Or Reptillian!
🤣
88 I am a veteran of combat, the closing words by the commander have never been truer!
88 thank you sir for your service
@@markmedlin9731 plot twist: grandpa is from germany /s
@@haha__hihiThats all I think when it asks for 88, H-H
Amen, Brother. Been and done that.
The Bajoran Wormhole is now secured by Captain Benjamin Sisko. Lets hope the Cardassians dont join the Dominion.
They throw a few rockets at themselves and blame whoever it is they want to invade at the time..........
Yep america
Kinda ironic that the ruthless, imperialist invaders are Bajorans, considering Bajor's fate in DS9.
I always thought Bajoran's were just religious nutters who complained about the Federation and got occupied by the Dominion. 😂
Bajor? They're from DS9
I am 52 years old and when I grew up we didn't have PlayStations we barely had television to the best part was when my mom read stories from us and I give you an 88 thank you for your story
Bajoran? DS9 gonna be calling.
BAJORANS? WHERE THE HELL IS CAPTAIN SISKO????
Pounding the table put a dent in the "hardened" metal? LOL!
I really want to corrct the mistakes in the close captioning! 😆
Nah guys, it wasn't accidental - these are in fact, THOSE Bajorans, just with the Cardassian precedents never diverging as a separate people, but forming Bajoran society from the onset - Perhaps under the watchful eyes of the Pah' wraith?...
Hi, Saagar I have seen a UFO flying around the top of the full moon
& also have been visited by the Tall people while cleaning up the
the beach where I live & also had & a visit by the reptilian as well
who was standing by & an old car when I approached him he through a coffee cup on the ground so I picked up the cup & then moved to the shelter shed to clean up around the area then I saw a male sitting on the bench with his finger moving around the phone on my movement while I continued to pick up the rubbish. as 2 reptilians were sitting on the bench seat to moving their fingers on their phones too & the next day while turning on my TV there was a figure of 4 greys looking at me from my TV .so people wake up & let these aliens to show them a peace full greetings to the world we live in.
So I guess the far more advanced species in this story has never heard of mixed unit tactics? Never even considered developing a method to jam an enemies radar/targeting systems? Hell, never even heard of radar in general??? Never considered developing heavy armor for things like troop transports? Or tanks?!
Sea, air, land...seal.........
War they wanted it now they'll regret it
I really like your story. I'm a vet, and a lot of what you said in the story is true to how a soldier is and will do. Be blessed. 88.
When u attack someone and lose. Your not returning for revenge. Revenge implies something was done wrong to u. But attackers r the ones doing the wrong ones so ya
Depends on the point of view of the attackers. And in a story where you got a warlike, ruthless species like these Bajorans, they could see defeating their invasion force as a humiliation, and want take revenge for said humiliation.
You see, it's about establishing the barbaric point of view of the attacker. And make them more dangerous, but yet, predictable.
88 Nice warrior fantasy for Memorial day😅 Refreshing to have Humanity lifted up for once 😅 In Part Two, we learn the human CIA arranged the invasion.
88. This was an amazing story. No truer words could have been spoken near the end.
Avatar is truly what humans are like
Bajoran? Reptilian? Has the AI that wrote this piece run out of names and species for extraterrestrials?
The ai has been trained on the sum total of all data available to it via the internet.
What we are witnessing is the zeitgeist of human thinking.
The ai regurgitates precisely what the ‘average person’ is thinking sci fi stories sound like.
Given 90% or more of the population do not know anything about sci fi, yet are willing to give an opinion on it, we are where we are.
F38 raptors...
last i checked bajorans arent reptiles...
Blue blood, not purple...copper base...humans are iron base.........
I've only been listening to these for about a month or so but in that time I've heard several references from different franchises such as Stargate, Star Trek, Sliders, Quantum Leap, DC Comics, Doctor Who, Twilight Zone, etc
i keep laughing every time thinking ds9
Bajoran sounds like a name plucked from Star Trek Deep Space Nine.
Because it is.
Perhaps renaming the aliens as Bad-yings? Would avoid a costly cpoy right court case. However, an excellant short story. Many thanks to the author and this channel.
Good man he stopped being like them
Come up with a non copyrighted alien name, and you’ve got something here.
The only surprise in this story is that the bad guys are called Bajorans. There’s no nuance here.
You own the air, you own the war.......
45:05 and a minute later
schroedinger doll
Bajoran should be like human. When did they became scaly reptile?.
Lol, ah AI scripts. "He felt the bullet fracture his skull, then nothing at all. Meanwhile, ..." xD
0:24 "the humans had been providing humanitarian aid" yeah that sounds like a very human thing to do
That something a lot of the writers or, let's be honest, AI never takes into a count with these stories. Also, using Bajorans.
@@TheSolidSnakeOilit's one of the ways you can tell it's written by an AI
The assumption that the galaxy is consumed by darkness is irrational. But it is fantasy I guess.
So new story
Human visited some aliens.
They had a nice chat.
Peace reigned though out the galaxy.
The end.
@@user-dk5um1ig4d : I did not say there was no darkness. There would be plenty to fight. There always is. But there is more light than darkness.
@@larryselkirk426 there is no way to tell what other races will be like when we meet them so no way we can judge weather there will be more light or dark out there. But it doesn’t matter my point was that it would make a short and boring story.
A verbal comic strip. Disney, your finished.
seems like the AI got stuck in a loop when writing the end.
You could have thought of a better name than Bajorans that was already used in star trek DS9.
It would also be cool if there was some sort of animation or still pictures to go along with this.
the end of the battle repeated itself twice, then the aftermath of the battle repeated itself twice.
Poorly edited
One of the traits of AI is repetition. One of the other stories used the exact same description three times for different things.
So beautiful of that little girl and the doll😢😭💕, But, wtf was she doing on the battlefield?
Civilians are far too often on battlefields.
executing war prisoners because of some of some ambush is a war crime anyway
Loved it.
I can get by the names and stuff. ..
Thankyou to the Author..
Gave me a needed departure from my days activities
Why is so much Sci Fi enchanted by the warrior creed? Having a defense against troublesome species is wise but only a tiny part of the full picture. Abundance and creation of the new is far more important than the warrior code.
Odd. They won the battle, and rather than reinforcing their positions, they all went home to Earth. Sounds like American doctrine during the Vietnam War.
You view the war in military terms, but war is an extension of politics.
The 60,000 U.S. soldiers that were lost in Vietnam was the political defeat that U.S. couldn't accept.
They lost because there was no will in U.S. citizens to fight that war, and yes, it's a loss, Communists of Vietnam won in the end defeating the South Vietnamese Democratic army.
Same thing happened in Afghanistan, they never lost their will to fight, all while U.S. couldn't continue this senseless money sink.
It's a good story. The only mistake the author made was at the end. When Greg looks at the doll in his hand.
The mistake was that he had already handed it back to the little girl who went away.
But again. Great story. :)
Put two pictures side by side and tell me he ain't.........
and then you have a captivating voice that somehow just rings through! in the way you tell the story 🥰
So...he gave the doll back to the girl, then, lster, he looks down at the doll in his hand.
AI screwing up.
Good tale! Keep the good Work.
Thankyou
how would an alien know a white flag to be a sign for surrender...
lost me there
I do notice in all these stories ,it always just the beginning,as usual we have upset every warlike race in. The universe
Some reptilians can fly and have wings...we too can fly, without wings.......
I know you're saying that as a joke. But I CAN kinda fly. I have levitated or risen quite fast to a height of say 40feet. I've stuck myself to the ceiling of the office. All of this with witnesses. All by people that knew me or still do. Only ONCE was it voluntary. The people that saw all this don't want to talk to me anymore. Just saying. It IS possible and DOES exist. Don't ask me how I got it or how I discovered it. All by accident and it happens when it happens. It never freaks me out. But boy do others lose it. One woman fainted cold out, right in front of me, after watching me be pegged against the ceiling in the office like a star fish.
@@bicanoo_magic3452 I see you edited this.....obviously, not enough!
Thank you for these great stories :)
To me that was there fault you must be brutal with people surrendering but you don't have to kill them
So the undisputed masters of the galaxy share a planet with another race / peoples which is not under their control. And humans are able to land on their home planet (as the Bajoran council was on the same planet) and kick their ass whilst there is no mention of the presumed space-battle. This just makes no sense.
Bajorans are human in appearance, cardassians are lizard like. Both groups are formidable warriors and a few humans would not stand a chance.
Your AI desperately needs an editor...
I am getting hooked on these SF stories. Reminds me of the eighteen eight-eight westerns on radio.
The humans became more powerful and tried to help other worlds be free of slavery from evil empires controlling them. But alas, it failed when a few human politicians out of selfishness and greed sold the human weapon technology to the evil empires. That's what happens in real life, so this story might as well resemble it.
Seems to be some continuity problems. He handed the doll back... and later he still had it. AI generated?
This sounds like our futures history. My father worked for the experimental design department for one of our arrow space companies. He did DARPA stuff before there was a DARPA. He was very stoic about his work. At times we would be watching a documentary on future stuff like pulse weapons and pulse engine technology. I would hear him scoff As a young child I would ask "what Dad" All he would say is " we've had that technology for....hell twenty years now" and then stone face stoic again. A man of few words. I truly believe we know and posses far more technology than we will know in well, my life time. I am sure if the need arrives we will be amazed with the stuff that has been hidden from the general public. It is a shame but, true.
Ok, i stopped it at Humvees. This is bollocks.
What is humanity, “an upstart pre-FTL species”, doing in another star system? How did they get there?
Delivering freedom to oil rich planets 😅
I enjoyed your story!
Bajorans? What is this? Star Trek?
no quarter - the oriflamme has been raised
Must have been the Maquis
Great story. I enjoyed it very much. 1 to 10, I give it a 10. It was so interesting I tried to imagin in my mind how every action and order was taken place. Even trying to picture the girl with the doll.
There were indeed a lot of errors in this story, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. And that is what I came here for, entertainment. Thanks. However, I hope to see less errors in the future, despite them, I liked it.