@@saniairfan9357 please write something about how people these days try to be cold to each other assuming that kindness is always misused Also write about " holding on and letting go" in life
@@saniairfan9357 I don't if you have already, but could you write about men through a woman's lens? As in how some actions that may seem insignificant or manly to a man are the ones that hurt the women the most. Like, catcalling which is so normalised in this world men find it insignificant but it's hell for women.
People already said that but I want to say again, you really should publish your work. They would have a special place in my heart, and my library. Seeing thoughts we had but couldn't explain being said with such clear sentences and well-chosen words is amazing, thank you for showing up on my fyp ❤
Oh my, thank you SO much for this lovely and very, very kind comment. Hopefully I will, one day! Until then, if there is something you’d like me to write about next, please tell me ❤️
@@saniairfan9357You're welcome! Let us know if you do. I'm not really sure, but maybe you could write something about seeing everything what's happening in the world and getting upset over it but not being able to talk about it with people around you because they say you're being a killjoy whenever you bring up a serious topic so you have to deal with the weight on your own. Sorry if this was too specific, it's kind of what I'm dealing with right now and I couldn't come up with something better. 💜
This was such a great idea. I just wrote a poem about this and would love to credit you by screenshotting a part of this comment and tagging you. Let me know if you’re not comfortable tagging you, and I won’t!
@@Cranberry_Shell Awesome! I don't think it is always worth having serious conversations with folks who are unwilling to listen for the sake of your own peace. But for when you do speak up, here is the poem. I hope you like it. Thanks so much again for this idea! ruclips.net/video/Lzwal1wW9ps/видео.html
This is beautiful. I've always thought of it that way but you're the one I've seen put it into words so clearly. Love when you mention friends who can comfort others and how it's 'learned'. I strongly feel that people often overlook the fact that everything is learned, and already done. When people stand out just a little in some way or the other people make it out as this unattainable, natural skill that cannot be ever replicated when in reality it's not natural but built on observations and learnings. Thank you for bringing up such small, unspoken things. Your self- awareness is amazing.
I found your channel 3 or 4 days ago and I'm very glad it happened! Your poetry is sooo beautiful! and has something about it that makes me feel peaceful and grateful. Thank you so much for being here💓
What a wonderful piece! Especially the rhythm you demonstrate. I usually bounce off spoken word as a genre, but there’s something special about the work here. Keep it up. Many blessings to you!
my my ❤ what an interesting creation & above all the fabulous narration that speaks volumes of ur confidence to remarkably bring up the unattended issues that need some weightage ....adding more n more relevance to sp many issues ..that fade away ..... unattended... ❤❤❤ proud of u young girl keep up the josh 👍👏👏👏
@@saniairfan9357proud of u young girl ❤ in fact I feel honoured to have heard such a fabulous composition ❤🎉 keep it going & let your thoughts jus flow ..... magically
Beautiful as always🙂....I love the way u transform a story into poem...i am mesmerised by the way you integrate multiple aspects of a story into your poem...And i see your clear visions about life in your poems...i feel people can relate a lot while reading your poems....keep up the good work....n thank u🙂
i) Definitely read/listen to more poems. I follow Button Poetry to listen to spoken word poetry. ii) Do a brain dump of all your ideas for a poem first, then polish it. Finding a good structure, correcting the rhyme and rhythm can all come after the brain dump. Don’t try to perfect every line as you go! iii) Write as much as you can! Even if it doesn’t feel like a good poem, it can spark ideas for a better one. Also, as one of my professors said, you’ve got to get the “bad” writing out of your system to arrive at the “good” writing. These are some tips that I find helpful myself!
Please consider publishing your work...your writings deserve to be known to all..deserve recognition
Thank you so much! One day hopefully. If you have ideas about what I should write next, please let me know!
Really!
How about some deep lines on life?@@saniairfan9357
@@saniairfan9357 please write something about how people these days try to be cold to each other assuming that kindness is always misused
Also write about " holding on and letting go" in life
@@saniairfan9357 I don't if you have already, but could you write about men through a woman's lens? As in how some actions that may seem insignificant or manly to a man are the ones that hurt the women the most. Like, catcalling which is so normalised in this world men find it insignificant but it's hell for women.
We need more poets and artists like you! Such an eloquent speaker and thoughtful writer❤ Much love from India!
That is so kind of you! Thank you!
People already said that but I want to say again, you really should publish your work. They would have a special place in my heart, and my library. Seeing thoughts we had but couldn't explain being said with such clear sentences and well-chosen words is amazing, thank you for showing up on my fyp ❤
Oh my, thank you SO much for this lovely and very, very kind comment. Hopefully I will, one day! Until then, if there is something you’d like me to write about next, please tell me ❤️
@@saniairfan9357You're welcome! Let us know if you do. I'm not really sure, but maybe you could write something about seeing everything what's happening in the world and getting upset over it but not being able to talk about it with people around you because they say you're being a killjoy whenever you bring up a serious topic so you have to deal with the weight on your own. Sorry if this was too specific, it's kind of what I'm dealing with right now and I couldn't come up with something better. 💜
This was such a great idea. I just wrote a poem about this and would love to credit you by screenshotting a part of this comment and tagging you. Let me know if you’re not comfortable tagging you, and I won’t!
@@saniairfan9357 Wow, thanks a lot! This made my day! And yes you can tag me, no problem, thanks for asking :)
@@Cranberry_Shell Awesome! I don't think it is always worth having serious conversations with folks who are unwilling to listen for the sake of your own peace. But for when you do speak up, here is the poem. I hope you like it. Thanks so much again for this idea! ruclips.net/video/Lzwal1wW9ps/видео.html
The beauty of your words gives me chills while i'm listening to you.
Thank you so much!
Thank you, for sharing this hopeful words. In these desperate times, hope is our greatest strength ❤🌸
Thanks for listening!
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Wow, ❤
This is beautiful. I've always thought of it that way but you're the one I've seen put it into words so clearly. Love when you mention friends who can comfort others and how it's 'learned'. I strongly feel that people often overlook the fact that everything is learned, and already done. When people stand out just a little in some way or the other people make it out as this unattainable, natural skill that cannot be ever replicated when in reality it's not natural but built on observations and learnings. Thank you for bringing up such small, unspoken things. Your self- awareness is amazing.
Thank you so much for listening and for sharing your thoughts!
Lovely, touching and astute!
Thank you!
YOU. ARE. AMAZING. !! 👏💅
THANK YOU!!
I found your channel 3 or 4 days ago and I'm very glad it happened! Your poetry is sooo beautiful! and has something about it that makes me feel peaceful and grateful. Thank you so much for being here💓
It makes my heart so happy that my work resonates with you. Thank you so much for listening!
Such an extraordinary poetry ❤❤ mashallah...I have no words
JazakAllah!!
Mashallah.... I'm really impressed ❤
@@zainab7438 JazakAllah!!
DAMN 🤯 ! your Genuine and soothing poetry communicates before it is understood😌
Thank you so much!! ❤️
You are so good at articulating your thoughts, and even a better orator. Please keep writing, I always look forward to your videos
Thank you so much!! It means a lot that you look forward to these.
What a wonderful piece! Especially the rhythm you demonstrate. I usually bounce off spoken word as a genre, but there’s something special about the work here. Keep it up. Many blessings to you!
Thank you so much! I am so glad you enjoyed this.
This is extraordinary!!
Thank you!!
my my ❤ what an interesting creation & above all the fabulous narration that speaks volumes of ur confidence to remarkably bring up the unattended issues that need some weightage ....adding more n more relevance to sp many issues ..that fade away ..... unattended...
❤❤❤ proud of u young girl keep up the josh 👍👏👏👏
Thank you so, so much for listening with care and for taking the time to write this very kind comment ❤️
@@saniairfan9357proud of u young girl ❤ in fact I feel honoured to have heard such a fabulous composition ❤🎉 keep it going & let your thoughts jus flow ..... magically
You are UNDERRATED!!🌚 BIG FAN FROM SRI LANKA🇱🇰
THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Beautiful as always🙂....I love the way u transform a story into poem...i am mesmerised by the way you integrate multiple aspects of a story into your poem...And i see your clear visions about life in your poems...i feel people can relate a lot while reading your poems....keep up the good work....n thank u🙂
Thank YOU so much for always listening and for being so generous with your praise!
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I absolutely love this one. I couldn't agree more, what a truly beautiful poem. Thank you for creating and sharing Sania.
@@typingstuff Thank you so much for listening!
You are incredibly real..please keep up the good work. I smile whenever I read your poem. Stay blessed 😊
I am honored you think so. Thank you!!
Beautiful 🤗🤗💗💗
Thanks so much for always listening! ❤️❤️
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Seriously I would purchase a compilation of all your work
🥹🥹 You are so kind!! And this is so encouraging. I hope I can keep writing things that resonate with you.
I would too! But listening to you narrate is awesome
@@amreetha7 Thank you so much!!
Wow this is so damn gooodddddddddd
Thank you so much!!!
@@saniairfan9357 I am trying to work on my poetry skills too!!Can you give some tips?
i) Definitely read/listen to more poems. I follow Button Poetry to listen to spoken word poetry.
ii) Do a brain dump of all your ideas for a poem first, then polish it. Finding a good structure, correcting the rhyme and rhythm can all come after the brain dump. Don’t try to perfect every line as you go!
iii) Write as much as you can! Even if it doesn’t feel like a good poem, it can spark ideas for a better one. Also, as one of my professors said, you’ve got to get the “bad” writing out of your system to arrive at the “good” writing.
These are some tips that I find helpful myself!
@@saniairfan9357 I am trying to implement these, the second point that you mentioned has been really helpful. Thank you so much🥰
publish your work man!!!!!!
Thank you Ibaad!! Hopefully someday soon IA