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  • Опубликовано: 4 янв 2024
  • A waitress doesn't notice the two criminals in her section.
    NIGHT CAFE is used with permission from Joshua Nowak. Learn more at joshuanowak.com.
    Nicky is working as a waitress at a diner. She's on the late night shift, and it's not been a good one, with an injury to her head, an irate boss and customers stiffing her on tips.
    She's having such a bad day that she barely notices the two criminals in her section, who are embroiled in their own disagreement. On this eventual night, their fates will intertwine as the "compound interest" of thoughts and actions culminate, changing Nicky's life in unexpected ways.
    Directed and written by Joshua Nowak, this short crime drama functions like a slice of Americana, with its extended cast of characters gathered in an archetypal setting. Those who enjoy how the Coen Brothers riff on the crime and noir genres, such as FARGO, might find much to admire in this short, which similarly applies quirky but character-focused storytelling to a humble setting and unexpected philosophical resonance.
    The center of this setting is the waitress Nicky, played by actor Kimmy Shields with an aggrieved, worn-out demeanor. Injured and treated without compassion by her boss, she's simply trying to get through the night, one so bad that she barely notices the criminals sitting in her section. The excellent writing weaves a cast of characters around Nicky, each with their distinct perspective or story. Nicky's boss Jack doesn't care about her injury; he only wants her to get back out there to attend to customers. The two criminals sitting in her section bicker about the approach they have toward the crime job they've just committed. Sydney -- played by veteran character actor Gene Jones with unusual gravitas -- talks about the accumulation of small daily actions, adding up positive investments in behavior and thought and taking in each moment. But his co-conspirator isn't buying it. He's focused on getting back on the road and putting as much distance as possible between their crime scene and themselves.
    Another customer has been waiting so long for takeout that Jack comps him his meal, making Nicky lose out on important tips -- which makes her confront the customer out in the parking lot, thinking he was stealing. As Nicky, her manager and the customer trade arguments and insults, the criminals take advantage of the ruckus to move on. But Sydney's conspirator, still in a rush, leaves Nicky an unexpected bonus -- one that might help free her from the cycle she's stuck in.
    Part of the pleasure of NIGHT CAFE -- beyond its beautifully careworn visuals and the stealthy stylishness of its down-home take on crime drama -- is to observe the unknowing interconnections between characters. There's also a philosophical thoughtfulness, with conversations and arguments about compounding good actions and "victim mentality." Nicky is berated for acting like a victim, but she is certainly exploited and treated less than human at her job. So it is deeply satisfying to witness nothing less than good luck or perhaps even karma at work, like watching the pieces of a puzzle of life fall into place.
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  • @ViVi-yw5sr
    @ViVi-yw5sr 5 месяцев назад +50

    I adore this kind of plot, random strangers whose lives get connected one night in a random cafe. Superb job.

  • @dc-wp8oc
    @dc-wp8oc 5 месяцев назад +28

    The manager is Jack, Mr. Jack Ass. The world is full of them.
    Great acting, great dialogue, lighting and frame composition. Awesome work by everyone.

  • @2hard2knock
    @2hard2knock 5 месяцев назад +74

    Loved the gripping dialogue between the newbie and expert criminal. Great short film!!

  • @tracyzoon5805
    @tracyzoon5805 5 месяцев назад +11

    She was part of the process showing up every day.

  • @GlasUndMetall
    @GlasUndMetall 5 месяцев назад +17

    I love this channel so much, binge watched the last two days while making a dolly for my granddaughter. It's wonderful to see all the creativity in film.

  • @foreverbeloved8956
    @foreverbeloved8956 5 месяцев назад +91

    Really great to see Gene Jones! I think he deserves more roles. Loved him in No Country for Old Men

    • @anilachar323
      @anilachar323 5 месяцев назад +14

      So, that was him! - well, he did sweat in that movie scene with Javier Bardem! - and who wouldn't?

    • @eugenetswong
      @eugenetswong 5 месяцев назад +4

      Which character was Gene? I looked at the credits, but I don't recall the names of the characters in the film.

    • @debloml
      @debloml 5 месяцев назад +5

      @@eugenetswong He was the gas station owner in the first scene.

    • @sparkythancztwise
      @sparkythancztwise 5 месяцев назад +4

      @@eugenetswong in the beginning when the criminals are in the car, the younger says to the older, "Sydney, it says cash only". And when the credits roll, it states that Gene Jones played the role of Sydney.

    • @sparkythancztwise
      @sparkythancztwise 5 месяцев назад +2

      @@debloml I think eugenetswong was asking which character in *this* film was Gene Jones. Not sure why they didn't simply go back and check for themselves in a such a short film (which makes it really easy), but I chose to be magnanimous and explained for them.

  • @alwayspooh1588
    @alwayspooh1588 5 месяцев назад +40

    Short films have more depth of character and better writing than most 2 hour + films these days.

    • @Vinsomer
      @Vinsomer 5 месяцев назад +2

      To be honest, I think it's much easier to create tense situations and interesting characters in a shorter time frame sometimes. There doesn't have to be a massive build up before the climax. Given the opportunity to be 2-3hrs long, most of these shorts would flop from having to pad out and dilute their films.

  • @thebookdoc.writing.and.editing
    @thebookdoc.writing.and.editing 5 месяцев назад +13

    6:00 ... That guy is from No Country for Old Men... Good actor.

  • @letstalk6007
    @letstalk6007 5 месяцев назад +8

    Old man in red has been putting his whole life on that coin flip.

  • @marnyfrancesca2526
    @marnyfrancesca2526 5 месяцев назад +37

    If the bank notes were marked with anti-theft ink, how would they be of any use to the waitress?

    • @TehF0cus
      @TehF0cus 5 месяцев назад +10

      Either that or it was blood. In both cases, tough luck

    • @irfanjames6551
      @irfanjames6551 5 месяцев назад +3

      Someone here said the Anti-Theft Ink will Dry

    • @thebigdog2295
      @thebigdog2295 5 месяцев назад +7

      I get money from the bank sometimes with dye pack ink on it. I don't think they really care about it at most banks.

    • @roberthoffhines5419
      @roberthoffhines5419 5 месяцев назад +6

      @@thebigdog2295 I think the dye is supposed to explode to eventually/potentially ID the robbers, the bills go back into circulation?

    • @bjb7587
      @bjb7587 5 месяцев назад

      ​@@roberthoffhines5419Dye, or a separate device?

  • @mooksplays
    @mooksplays 5 месяцев назад +10

    this was so incredibly nice. from the dialogue to the music choice.

  • @willowclay5406
    @willowclay5406 Месяц назад +1

    Brilliant dialog, acting, and camera work! The underdog comes out on top!

  • @Havanacuba1985
    @Havanacuba1985 Месяц назад +2

    The best part of this was the elderley robbers philosophy of “The Process” that was pure genius ,the rest Well what can I say

    • @ermo5623
      @ermo5623 14 дней назад

      I agree-the dialogue with them is great. The story just never really went anywhere.

  • @bonktownboy
    @bonktownboy 5 месяцев назад +10

    great directing. cool to see the supporting cast with recognizable faces from projects like uncut gems and no country for old men. and is this the cinematographer from Barbarian? pretty legit stuff. would love to see what all of these actors and this filmmaker do next.

    • @HoldenNY22
      @HoldenNY22 4 месяца назад

      Wasn't the Manage the killer Thug who killed the Adam Sandler character in Uncut Gems?

  • @rggndfw
    @rggndfw 4 месяца назад +2

    This is like an all-star cast. So well done.

  • @Munt_digital
    @Munt_digital 5 месяцев назад +4

    The writing was superb!

  • @Mooncatdadon
    @Mooncatdadon 5 месяцев назад +2

    Beautiful story told. Wow and great cinematography

  • @pumpupthevolume4775
    @pumpupthevolume4775 5 месяцев назад +27

    More like this please. Good directing and the dialogue was excellent and so was some of the acting. Love Jack. The premise and plot were a bit lacking, but were well made up for by the writing, acting and directing.

  • @alwayspooh1588
    @alwayspooh1588 5 месяцев назад +28

    Tipping on take away/take out??? WTF? The USA is strange with tipping!

    • @karolinaszczudlo9871
      @karolinaszczudlo9871 5 месяцев назад +17

      Yep... it's absolutely insane, sure she should be rewarded extra just for bringing few boxes from kitchen window to his table....wow indeed 😂 and then get worked out about not receiving extra for it 😅 seriously victim mentality+entitlement big time

    • @groyperfuhr4871
      @groyperfuhr4871 4 месяца назад

      it's not the people that follow that though, it's the greedy restuarants for even suggesting it. when I get takeout and they ask me what the tip is I stare blankface. most normal people do this too, only bootlickers tip on a takeout order. cause that tip aint going to the chef so it's pointless

    • @PeetaGrifffin
      @PeetaGrifffin 3 месяца назад

      Ikr especially that she didn't even do anything.

    • @ermo5623
      @ermo5623 14 дней назад

      I was a waitress in college & I’d rather wait on 2 tables than have to do 1 takeaway order. It takes more time to box everything up, put sides & condiments in there individually than to just bring the plate right to the table. Also, I don’t think people understand that at the end of the day your server has to then tip out other people (busboys, bartenders, food runner) based on their sales not what you actually made. So, when someone stiffs you, you actually have to pay out for it. It’s a messed up system, but you can make good money.

    • @rickandosca8262
      @rickandosca8262 День назад

      @@karolinaszczudlo9871 Guess you never did this kind of job. Lucky you.

  • @williamhoude4165
    @williamhoude4165 4 месяца назад +1

    Omeletto you really do a great job with your short films. I’m surprised you have never made a full length feature.

  • @YoungBlaze
    @YoungBlaze 5 месяцев назад +3

    This is well shot well lit well-edited acted everything

  • @thecluuchannel4705
    @thecluuchannel4705 5 месяцев назад +5

    Great film. Those criminals reminded me of Morgan Freeman and Chris Rock in "Nurse Betty". I was so happy the waitress came out on top.

    • @TheSamosaCritic
      @TheSamosaCritic 5 месяцев назад +2

      She's a terrible human being and an even worse employee.

  • @missKate72
    @missKate72 5 месяцев назад +8

    Great acting and plot

  • @carlosidelone8064
    @carlosidelone8064 5 месяцев назад +10

    Very well acted and shot. Interesting characters. A little suspense. Worth a watch.

  • @joywilliams5861
    @joywilliams5861 5 месяцев назад +22

    Wow! That money came right on time. I wonder why he left her so much though. Did the blood scare him off?

    • @aspirespire8847
      @aspirespire8847 5 месяцев назад +11

      They were inked

    • @carlosidelone8064
      @carlosidelone8064 5 месяцев назад +8

      @@aspirespire8847 The money had anti-theft ink on it. I hope, that she would be able to pass them.

  • @ThereWasABadKittiFromBmore
    @ThereWasABadKittiFromBmore 5 месяцев назад +3

    Dang...she didn't break the dish boy off😆

  • @joymelton-bollen6383
    @joymelton-bollen6383 5 месяцев назад +3

    This was great!!!!!

  • @rickandosca8262
    @rickandosca8262 День назад

    VERY well done in all ways. In one of these short films on this platform(Chipper) and see/hear this short has terrific people in front and behind the camera.

  • @angiek9254
    @angiek9254 5 месяцев назад +6

    Thanks!

  • @dthomas4566
    @dthomas4566 25 дней назад

    This was very well done, but i hated that waitress 😂

  • @planreview
    @planreview 5 месяцев назад +1

    “Call it. Excuse me? Call it.”

  • @oneill765
    @oneill765 5 месяцев назад +1

    That's the guy from no country for old men, that owns the gas station.

  • @revilo1340
    @revilo1340 5 месяцев назад +10

    really liked this
    definitely deserves some sort of award

  • @conniehanses
    @conniehanses 5 месяцев назад +3

    Definitely could have watched longerrrrrrr!💙🌎

  • @IgorOcash
    @IgorOcash 5 месяцев назад

    good acting all the way around. Very impressive.

  • @magicsinglez
    @magicsinglez 5 месяцев назад +1

    That’s the shop-keeper from. . .’no country for old men’.

  • @salvatorefolisi3102
    @salvatorefolisi3102 2 месяца назад

    great acting!

  • @webstercat
    @webstercat 5 месяцев назад +3

    Is this the coin flip guy from No Country for Old Men?

  • @barkeyes8592
    @barkeyes8592 2 месяца назад +1

    I'm still trying to figure it out. I'm a Virgo and I trip out over this kind of a plot. That's why I love Omeleto.😅

  • @nikkisjeans
    @nikkisjeans 5 месяцев назад +2

    No diner serves peas 😂

  • @blackeyedincubus
    @blackeyedincubus 5 месяцев назад +3

    Am I the only one who instantly recognized Nonnie from Insatiable in the thumbnail? ^^"

    • @googlyeyes7700
      @googlyeyes7700 5 месяцев назад +1

      I did too!! I was happy to see her! :) I was looking for this comment lol!!!

  • @magicsinglez
    @magicsinglez 5 месяцев назад +1

    It’s kind funny how the boss criminal is a bit similar to the Boss proprietor?

  • @eddiemorris6428
    @eddiemorris6428 5 месяцев назад +4

    Gene Jones - what a GREAT actor. can't wait for some smart casting director to put him in his own movie ~ as the LEAD. He can be a scary mother****er, he was the BEST thing about "Killers of the Flower Moon"

  • @wannabemedontu
    @wannabemedontu 5 месяцев назад

    Tips with that service?😂

  • @KateSuhrgirlPlays
    @KateSuhrgirlPlays 3 месяца назад +1

    I only clicked on this one because i recognized her as from the show Insatiable.

  • @gmmunguu
    @gmmunguu 5 месяцев назад +3

    Nice parallel stories. Boss and female employee vs Old man and young man.
    Old man keeps talking about his processes and don't let the daily task to be your master. Which is reverse situation to the boss and employee where boss is very nervous guy that the daily tasks are his master. And the female employee stay true to her principle all the and gets rewarded in the end.
    1. compount interest = tips
    2. process = principle

  • @jordanbrown8278
    @jordanbrown8278 5 месяцев назад +1

    Old guy almost got killed due to the results of a coin flip once.

  • @philreynolds2465
    @philreynolds2465 5 месяцев назад +5

    I enjoyed the film but the guy who played Sydney (Gene Jones) was brilliant.
    Cheers

    • @jackhayden3953
      @jackhayden3953 5 месяцев назад

      Hi sidekick was brilliant too

    • @vincentdimitri169
      @vincentdimitri169 5 месяцев назад +1

      What's the most you ever lost on a coin toss?

    • @philreynolds2465
      @philreynolds2465 5 месяцев назад

      @@vincentdimitri169 I hardly gamble

    • @vincentdimitri169
      @vincentdimitri169 5 месяцев назад

      @@philreynolds2465 Never seen "no country for old men" i take it?

  • @beingsentient
    @beingsentient 4 месяца назад +3

    Good movie with interesting and enjoyable scenes. However, why did the young crook give the waitress so much money? Unless I missed something, that's a serious flaw in the movie.

    • @jwakk1
      @jwakk1 4 месяца назад +1

      It was all covered in dye or blood or something, doesn’t seem like a flaw

  • @h8shunlou
    @h8shunlou 5 месяцев назад +1

    Everything was fantastic, but those visuals were creamy! Great job Zack Kuperstein

  • @christineodonnell9391
    @christineodonnell9391 5 месяцев назад +9

    Can we have a one I understand next please? The last couple have baffled me 😂

    • @hank1519
      @hank1519 5 месяцев назад +3

      😂 I feel the same way!

    • @rudylikestowatch
      @rudylikestowatch 5 месяцев назад +3

      When I don't get it, I read the description. Then the comments. Someone will often explain the scene that isn't clear.

    • @felipelotas5609
      @felipelotas5609 4 месяца назад +1

      Same here...three in a row and today wasn´t my Omeleto day. I need a beautiful round and closed story from time to time.

  • @szlvid6
    @szlvid6 5 месяцев назад +4

    Gene Jones made this! He rocks!

  • @nimmichagger165
    @nimmichagger165 5 месяцев назад +3

    Gene Jones! Great actor!

  • @CedroneTravels
    @CedroneTravels 2 месяца назад

    great

  • @thedudeabides3138
    @thedudeabides3138 4 месяца назад

    My goodness, but Gene Jones is an incredibly natural actor.
    Mores the pity we don’t see more of him.

  • @gretatudeg4877
    @gretatudeg4877 5 месяцев назад

    So good! So understated!

  • @MTCali70
    @MTCali70 5 месяцев назад +2

    I just learned what TIPS means🙋‍♀️🤣

    • @dexterford8094
      @dexterford8094 5 месяцев назад +11

      I think it actually means "Trapped In Predatory System"
      or perhaps "Theft of Income by Petty Supervisors"

    • @MTCali70
      @MTCali70 5 месяцев назад

      @@dexterford8094 LOL..those are good too..

  • @FedSher
    @FedSher 5 месяцев назад

    This old ''FRIENDO'' looks familiar to me ...

  • @jackkoffman166
    @jackkoffman166 5 месяцев назад +6

    Didn't they already release this?

    • @JoshPhoenix11
      @JoshPhoenix11 5 месяцев назад +3

      Only released on the internet a few days ago on the 2nd, but it was screened at film festivals all throughout last year.
      How long ago were you thinking? Im just wondering if you could be experiencing a Mandela Effect.

    • @jackkoffman166
      @jackkoffman166 5 месяцев назад

      ​@@JoshPhoenix11I think I originally saw this on Film Shortage a couple days ago

    • @bonktownboy
      @bonktownboy 5 месяцев назад

      it went to Santa Barbara International Film Festival last year, if I'm not mistaken

  • @RHKhan86
    @RHKhan86 4 месяца назад +1

    Happy Ending.

  • @rickyibarra
    @rickyibarra 5 месяцев назад

    Gene Jones! Que gusto verlo desde 2008

  • @magicsinglez
    @magicsinglez 5 месяцев назад

    It’s actually cute that this is. . .topical.

  • @AP-gv6oz
    @AP-gv6oz 5 месяцев назад

    He stopped working at the gas station after the coin toss. Hes a changed man.

  • @estephaniap9027
    @estephaniap9027 5 месяцев назад +8

    At one point I thought she was part of the 'process'. The diversion was too perfectly timed

    • @helpstopanimalabuse8153
      @helpstopanimalabuse8153 5 месяцев назад +1

      Could you elaborate on the "Diversion" i missed it, still scratching my head (Don't want to get splinters).

    • @estephaniap9027
      @estephaniap9027 5 месяцев назад +1

      @helpstopanimalabuse8153 Lol, no worries. I actually don’t think there was a diversion. That was my first thought but looking back it just worked out like that. When the waitress and the guy who didn't pay were arguing, I thought she was a part of the plan, but there was no plan. Her surprise to the money confirms it.

    • @thecluuchannel4705
      @thecluuchannel4705 5 месяцев назад +1

      I almost thought this too. When she poured their coffee, she was totally silent and cold, like she knew them.

    • @GFINHK
      @GFINHK 4 месяца назад

      I think inadvertently, she was part of the process & that's what he meant when he gave his speech on it

  • @CraigNewellShow
    @CraigNewellShow 5 месяцев назад

    Is that the actor from No Country For Old Men? The gas station store keeper?

  • @HoldenNY22
    @HoldenNY22 4 месяца назад +1

    I don't understand why he gave the Waitress all that money. I gues I missed something.

  • @maximeanselot3007
    @maximeanselot3007 5 месяцев назад +4

    Beautifully shot, superb acting, very interesting dialogues, but the scenario is weird with big holes and zero clues.

    • @jwakk1
      @jwakk1 5 месяцев назад +2

      I don’t think it has holes, it’s just elliptical storytelling which works well for a short because you don’t have time fill in all the blanks but can leave things implied.

  • @felixmerz6229
    @felixmerz6229 5 месяцев назад +1

    So, she's clumsy, unfriendly, ungrateful, argumentative, aggressive and loud and gets rewarded with what? 3k cash? I must be misunderstanding something here.

  • @adriannathegreat9890
    @adriannathegreat9890 5 месяцев назад +7

    Is the waitress going to be able to use the bills or not??

    • @user-McGiver
      @user-McGiver 5 месяцев назад +6

      she has nothing to do with the crime, and she'll push them easily... the problem is that the rest of the loot in the trunk is inked too... so the lesson is about ''the process''... it failed!... it will be very difficult for them to push that money, and if they do, it will be cheap... that's why the ''fat tip''...

    • @MrMnmn911
      @MrMnmn911 5 месяцев назад +3

      No. If she uses them…she’ll be arrested and charged.

    • @eveleengray9067
      @eveleengray9067 5 месяцев назад

      @@MrMnmn911 Self Check out would work lol

  • @anilachar323
    @anilachar323 5 месяцев назад +9

    So, the sub text of the hard life of waiters in the US is clearly stated. As is the exploitative nature of the small scale diners.
    But, why did the younger criminal intern dump the whole stash of cash, because one note was bloodstained? - because 'he didn't follow the process'?

    • @carlosidelone8064
      @carlosidelone8064 5 месяцев назад +9

      I believe, that all the bills were stained with anti-theft ink.

    • @jamiejoygatto
      @jamiejoygatto 5 месяцев назад +6

      The bills were marked.

  • @georgemiller151
    @georgemiller151 2 месяца назад

    What’s the point? The waitress will spend the marked money which will almost immediately be identified and she will gain nothing except a police interrogation.

  • @janicemahan4772
    @janicemahan4772 5 месяцев назад

    Gripping stuff!

  • @dfb2913
    @dfb2913 3 месяца назад +1

    I didn't get it

  • @ericbain9016
    @ericbain9016 4 месяца назад +1

    not to be a dick but her whole argument was that he didnt tip and she cant survive without it. firm believer in the reservoir dogs mr pink idea that its not on the customer to help sustain pay when the establishment should pay a decent living wage. i know this is out of left field. im just saying.

  • @The_Beast_666
    @The_Beast_666 5 месяцев назад +1

    God works in mysterious ways!!

  • @razzlebautista79
    @razzlebautista79 5 месяцев назад

    this is what will happen if mr.beast becomes old and dine unnoticed which he cant do anymore .

  • @FelixIaccarino
    @FelixIaccarino 5 месяцев назад

    why giving evidence to a waitress instead of tossing the money in the garbage? doesnt make any sense................

  • @Toptracktreand
    @Toptracktreand 5 месяцев назад

    Thank you guys for supporting me ❤❤

  • @m.fadhiilhaekal7693
    @m.fadhiilhaekal7693 5 месяцев назад +4

    I think the money was stained by the dye so the criminal just better of leave it

  • @DaRyteJuan
    @DaRyteJuan 5 месяцев назад

    Mostly good except there’s insufficient motivation on the part of the restaurant owner for being such an over-the-top jerk. It’s not like the restaurant was even halfway busy.

  • @BBB-Schmuck
    @BBB-Schmuck 4 месяца назад

    It's the " No Country for Old Men" coin flip guy!

  • @dalemehana5015
    @dalemehana5015 5 месяцев назад +1

    It's marked bills, I hope she she's that.

  • @geoben9801
    @geoben9801 5 месяцев назад +5

    It's amazing what people read into things, some really skewed perspectives our there. It seems that the "process" of critical thinking is in serious decline. That explains a lot, about present day society and why our Country is so polarized. It's due to the
    "Dumbing Down of America" We're in a lot of trouble... 😵‍💫
    Btw, excellent Short ! Actors are all very talented. Excellent dialogue and writing. Masterful settings and cinematography!
    Nicole is 🔥❗😊
    👍👍 ✌️

    • @karolinaszczudlo9871
      @karolinaszczudlo9871 5 месяцев назад +4

      Your critique is pointless if you're unable to refute it , mind, not even give an example what's your point really...,

    • @geoben9801
      @geoben9801 5 месяцев назад +1

      @@karolinaszczudlo9871
      That you even ask what my point is, proves my point. You just wanted to use the word critique didn't you? Learn to THINK. Well, at least try to.🙃

  • @hadasitalki7247
    @hadasitalki7247 5 месяцев назад

  • @aliens_ate_my_brain
    @aliens_ate_my_brain 5 месяцев назад +1

    i’m so early yay!!

  • @Jaythecoolie
    @Jaythecoolie 5 месяцев назад

    E

  • @jennifergannuscio6086
    @jennifergannuscio6086 4 месяца назад

    GOD IS GREAT!!!!

  • @lyziemeowmeowmeow9787
    @lyziemeowmeowmeow9787 4 месяца назад

    Noice!

  • @Itzvnessa.
    @Itzvnessa. 5 месяцев назад +3

    FIRSTTTTTT

  • @JohnSmith-bq1sj
    @JohnSmith-bq1sj 23 дня назад

    Barely alive, unresponsive, entitled, but she needs the money. Go home honey, and stay in your bubble! Call your mother, so you can cry together.

  • @leme3503
    @leme3503 5 месяцев назад +8

    So what's the story, I don't get it..?
    "Criminals come into a diner, where a waitress is having a hard day and one of the criminals leaves her all his bills because they're marked with blood/ink, just as she gets fired."
    .. aaaand then what? That's not a plot, that's a scene. There's no story here? What's the conflict? What's the climax? I don't follow short films like this that don't seem to be about anything really. Just a few minutes in time that happened were showcased, that's it.

    • @1SwiftAngela
      @1SwiftAngela 5 месяцев назад +3

      You wrote ALL that for what 🤷🏽‍♀️

    • @leme3503
      @leme3503 5 месяцев назад +1

      @@1SwiftAngela an explanation? Re-read the first sentence, it ends in a question mark. Actually, there's a lot of question marks. Y'know why? 'Cause I'd love some answers. I've never understood short films with seemingly no plot, so I'd love to understand them. So please, do share any info on them you have.

    • @1SwiftAngela
      @1SwiftAngela 5 месяцев назад +1

      @@leme3503 sigh🤦🏽‍♀️

    • @leme3503
      @leme3503 5 месяцев назад

      @@1SwiftAngela It's a genuine question so idk what your problem is. I'm not trying to just bash it, I want to understand it.

    • @wamz9191
      @wamz9191 5 месяцев назад

      ​@@1SwiftAngela Are you slow?

  • @dcmirk
    @dcmirk 5 месяцев назад +11

    She was a horrible waitress

    • @carlosidelone8064
      @carlosidelone8064 5 месяцев назад +5

      She was a wreck. Give her a break !

    • @eugenetswong
      @eugenetswong 5 месяцев назад +1

      @@carlosidelone8064She might have simply bumped her head for all we know. I don't understand why she couldn't work. Why would she earn tips while sitting in an office?
      We shouldn't automatically assume that she is guilty, but we shouldn't automatically sympathize either.

    • @S.Waters.
      @S.Waters. 5 месяцев назад +14

      I think guy in the red hoodie lied about his order taking too long. The last thing he said was “I can make stuff up to get what I want too.”

    • @adriannathegreat9890
      @adriannathegreat9890 5 месяцев назад +2

      Didn't she bump her head on something that shouldn't have been in the way? What are you talking about?

    • @bonktownboy
      @bonktownboy 5 месяцев назад +4

      good catch. you're probably right. I think the whole film is about how this poor girl is getting dog-piled by a bunch of men taking advantage of her. the injury is just supposed to be a way for us as an audience to be dropped into the action immediately. @@S.Waters.

  • @nineballking06351
    @nineballking06351 5 месяцев назад

    I don't look for continuity errors, but when they smack me in the face like the old mans hands on the table starting at 5:21 and especially 5:41 it took me right out of the story.