Another great episode! I loved the story, the soundmixing fit perfectly, fantastic voicework and visuals, and overall it was just an awesome video! Keep up the great work!
Nice work so far! The entire TD&W team is definitely putting in some great work to bring the idea further and further along each time. I do have a few criticisms though, and I think they're the same as last time. First off, some of you camera compositions can get stale rather quickly. When you're having a long string of shots revolve around the Middle third of the frame, you're going to disengage the audience. I'd recommend you guys take a look at some "rules of thirds" things to get more interesting camera compositions. Second, your pacing is off at times. I understand mixing slow and fast so that your stories have some variety, but there seem to be a large number of points where the series drags. It's especially true for the opening scene. I understand wanting to introduce office politics into the series, but you have to realize when enough is enough in terms of time. Lastly, add some music. There are a lot of points where a royalty free track could have really spiced up your storytelling. Believe me when I say that audio other than voices and narration go a long way to helping a story stay interesting. Again, I like the way you're going about this. It's great that you're diving into the history first and then moving into some more mundane, early Thomas-esque stories. Keep it up!
Another great episode! I loved the story, the soundmixing fit perfectly, fantastic voicework and visuals, and overall it was just an awesome video! Keep up the great work!
Also, Laurence Kaufmann sounds like the pentrex narrator. It suits this episode perfectly
Great Wolf Western Railroad that's because they're voiced by the same person
@@DeanNickChase No, The Real Narrator of Pentrex is Dave Drui. Laurence Kaufmann is Jimmy Lambert's Voice
Fucking hell that narrator sounds like someone you could actually see voice acting in a real life professional documentary!
He takes great k owledge in knowing that, he's done some other works. Come on over to our Discord and we can share them!
Wow, what a well developed background. I love the lore/history you guys are putting into the series, and Bradley's origin as well.
Really liked it!
Very nice! Excited to see more!
Very nice work! Your cinematography never fails to amaze.
Edit: I also *highly* approve of the 1880s era locos having period appropriate facial hair.
Hello Rocky
I remember you
Great series dude! Can wait to see more of it! :)
2:13 and now someone has gotten squished by a UP steam engine
In the board room I saw an explosion and some bullet marks. Explain
Uh, what time? Im going back through these to try and answer years of unanswered questions.
Time marker 3:16. There’s an explosion mark on the floor and a bullet hole in the baseboard behind Mr. Duncan.
So what was this yellow mineral?
Uranium. An accurate and important resource in the region.\
Isn't the Ozark northern from msts?
Yes, Correct me if I'm Wrong, but I think Nick Ozorak did an episode on it for At The Railyard.
Ah ha! Someone knows their stuff.
Ince talking to Ince is fun.
Nice work so far! The entire TD&W team is definitely putting in some great work to bring the idea further and further along each time. I do have a few criticisms though, and I think they're the same as last time.
First off, some of you camera compositions can get stale rather quickly. When you're having a long string of shots revolve around the Middle third of the frame, you're going to disengage the audience. I'd recommend you guys take a look at some "rules of thirds" things to get more interesting camera compositions.
Second, your pacing is off at times. I understand mixing slow and fast so that your stories have some variety, but there seem to be a large number of points where the series drags. It's especially true for the opening scene. I understand wanting to introduce office politics into the series, but you have to realize when enough is enough in terms of time.
Lastly, add some music. There are a lot of points where a royalty free track could have really spiced up your storytelling. Believe me when I say that audio other than voices and narration go a long way to helping a story stay interesting.
Again, I like the way you're going about this. It's great that you're diving into the history first and then moving into some more mundane, early Thomas-esque stories. Keep it up!
First....... I’ll let myself out