Unpleasant -- Undertale Comic Dub [ft. wintermelon]
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- Опубликовано: 11 дек 2017
- Unpleasant pasts can't stay in the past forever.
Big thanks to wintermelon for helping me out with this!
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Comic by PotooBrigham ( / potoobrigham )
Music:
"Flooded Ruins" - OneShot OST by Nightmargin
"Mettaton Medley" - from Undertale the Musical by Man on the Internet
"Rainy Day" - Night in the Woods OST by Alec Holowka
"Pretty Bad" - OneShot OST by Nightmargin
"Collapse" - OneShot OST by Nightmargin
Mix and Editing by Cellochicita
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Wow! Thanks so much everyone for the support for this dub, I can't believe how excited you all are!
THERE WILL BE A PART 2, A CONTINUATION OF THIS SERIES
I am currently in the editing stage and hope to be finished some time around the end of January! I'm just one person and this level of editing takes a lot of effort (heck this dub took me a solid month to put together). Thank you for your patience!!
Cellochicita OH THE FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEL'S
I'm waiting. Please make it soon this is great
Oh Shoot! moody teenager mode activated hold on to your hats!!!!!
Cellochicita the drawing is suuu cute its o adorable
Cellochicita
This is why people should focus more often on actual game facts to make up stories.
Might just be me but
*This is reaaalllyyyyyy gooodddd*
I agree! This AU is one of my favorites for that reason.
And thank you so much! That means a lot :)
Camila Cuevas ogm!! Go back into your animating cave and stop watching videos!!
Sarcasm noted
HOLY SHIT ITS U
troll lolokoko, if ur serious, shut up and let her do what she wants to do
if not, and she's okay with it, I'm okay with it
Camila Cuevas Take you time on Glitchtale series besides,we all have something to do while we wait.
"I must've killed Frisk thousands of times!"
"*And that's with some generous rounding down."
God damn I love this comic already.
Same
Nobody's Normal change your picture please
Nobody's Normal I always think there is a hair on my screen
No
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When son and husband are both serial killers
Well...with one being someone to give the order that resulted in that, while the other was a broken sociopath who did it simply because they could, one had no one to stop him and the other had nothing to hold them back.
NetMoverSitan cool
NetMoverSitan Deep...
The apple doesn’t fall far from the tree
...on BOTH side of the family.
"I MUST HAVE KILLED FRISK THOUSANDS OF TIMES"
*and that's with some generous rounding down
By far best line yet
agreed
@Jacob Desousa they did i think
I died
....
Agreed
Wow, one undertale comic where sans isn't mentioned once? Holy shit that's rare.
fluffypuppies 3579 Indirectly mentioned actually. Asriel killed *almost* everyone in the Underground as Flowey. Sans overpowered him, however
More like implied
Right? I want more AU's that focus on the Dreemurr family.
he is memtioned only once in about 5 panels for a mini comic about jokes
Suuuuuuuuuper rare
I really love Frisk's overall indifference and sarcasm throughout all of Asriel's rant about his genocides as a flower.
It's cause this Frisk here actually did a genocide run before
i figure he's jsut use to it- like Same shit as always :P
@@ProjectNetoku Yeah, it's like edge of tomorrow, you experience and do the same shit over and over, eventually you just become indifferent and numb to it.
For them, it's Tuesday.
This undertale au is my favourite because it shows the true essence of Asgore as he is the most complicated character in the game.
Aleezaa Bella most comics also underestimate how powerful asgore is. He only does not display his true power because he does not want to fight us
@@noodlesandwich497 I don't think some fans see it that way
@@dreademperor2094 some fans are wrong
@@noodlesandwich497 exactly why I said that
Dread Warrior on god
*"so tonight, its cocoa, cookies, and pixar movies."*
The best way to do anything.
Except it's not Pixar movies its random animated series I found on RUclips
"Well as long as you are in bed by 11."
"Hey mom can I make a suggestion?"
and confessing that you murdered in the past
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY
Solid mood
Roses are red
Violets aren't blue
Asriel has done unpleasant things
But the human race has too
*way* more unpleasant
Many way more unpleasant things
Monsters would've done it too if they were in our place, but then again souls are different.
Six humans deaths for eternal peace between an *entire civilisation* would be good
AYYY
JEVIL, MY BOI
I love this, because it hits in something thats pissed me off about the undertale fandom. For all the depth of looking at the other characters, their background, their motivation, its seemed like for the longest time, Asgore got given the shaft the most.
He isn't a bad guy, in fact to me he's the sweetest guy in undertale. He just went though hell, losing his children, and the weight of so many people on his shoulders needing him to do something, he was pushed into a single path he couldn't find a way to deal with his grief besides what happened to the humans.
But he didn't want it, he just wanted his family back, his kids, and Toriels hatred for him in the end isn't justified, sure she was dealing with grief in her own way and went though hell just as much, but he never turned his back on her, they needed one another, and she turned her back on him.
MrTaurenshaman I agree! This is part of why I love this comic, is it highlights that Asgore isn't completely to blame, and that Toriel isn't blameless.
What happened to the Dremurrs caused Asgore to lash out, and Toriel to run away from the issue. Both actions were wrong in their own ways.
Preach. This has also pissed me off as well especially since most the time Asgore is just thrown to the side for sans and toriel to get together.
"I'm a fan of undertale." If I say this to anyone besides my other undertale friends, I'm portrayed as a weirdo or a jerk. In fact, someone I knew since third grade mocked me for listening to the undertale ost. This is what the stereotype of the undertale fandom does to just normal people who are invested and fell in love with the characters of this game. Not to say that your opinion is bad, I agree, asgore has definitely been shouldered by the community. I'm just saying that these kinds of things (such as just giving random important characters the shaft) has torn the UT fandoms reputation to pieces. But, welcome to the internet.
P.S. if you like this kind of portrayal of asgore, watch handplates. Granted, 90% of it is about gaster, sans and pap, but if you go far enough, asgore will enter the Frey as someone who is haunted by and regrets his path. He is darkened by losing his children and his wife. He is a LOT more down to earth than most portrayals.
JackPlaysMTG Love Handplates. It's flashback of when he found Asriel, and his fury is exactly how I pictured it. Not that the one from Growth Spurt isn't good. They are both actually really accurate on how people can act when greaving.
And who's to blame the entire time...?
Toby fox.
what? where you expecting chara?
I really like the Growth Spurt AU.
Mainly thanks to a more sassy, back-talking Frisk.
And mainly focusing on asriel becuase the only attention he gets are the ships
It seems pretty lit. Frisk decided not to reset the timeline and let everyone continue with their lives in freedom (including him/herself)
@@greghiskhan7426 like me.
I also like how the comic address Toriel's failures in the game. Obviously Asgore was still in the wrong for his decisions and actions but this AU also has Toriel acknowledge that she didn't even try to stop Asgore and she didn't go confront him to save any of the other 6 humans.
Can’t forget your very best friend!
When your a magical goat monster that was turned into a flower, then turned back into a magical goat monster, then back into a flower, THEN back to a magical goat monster.
Yep
Ya know, that one relatable moment.
Just yesterday, it happened to me
relatable
@@FloweyAsriel youer*
6:13
Asriel : i must killed frisk 1000 of times
Frisk: and that's with some generous rounding down
Azzy: EXCEPT I HAVE, MOM.
This is my new favorite line!
BrokenMemories k
ITS NOT A FASE MOM!
Where did he say that again?
That's where the feelings start hitting
"I mustve killed Frisk thousands of times!!"
"And thats with some generous rounding down."
"AND THATS HAUNTS ME!!"
The rounding down? Going for a solid even?
No, the many timelines he's gone through, the many lives he took while but a shell of himself internally.
@@bubbykins4864
Woosh.
@@memes_the_dna_of_the_soul5487 Diagram for you:
/-----\
Disaster upon self >-/ me \-> you
@@bubbykins4864 buddy thats not how it works
6:18 I love how Frisk is so casual about that fact. She's like "Yep, no, he's done stuff"
Skylar Vail *fun fact frisk is said to be a boy also frisk is said to be 16 XD*
Edit:It said frisk is between the ages of 5-16
So maybe I was incorrect but from the way it is he’s about 8-10
Maybe younger idk
*Ik frisk gender’s isn’t told but idk pull down it’s underwear to find it*
Also I’m calling frisk an “it”from now on because’s it’s better for me to ID it as an it than having a gender and being smacked by people who care too much about property
Said by who?
The Lonley Ghast google
Google also says the most of the cast are teenagers when clearly they’re adults so I wouldn’t rely on anything that isn’t said by Toby Fox himself
The Lonley Ghast ...the only thing Toby fox didn’t say dats huge is dat sans is in smash
OH HEY TEARS, I HAVENT SEEN ENOUGH OF YOU TODAY. ON NO PLEASE, COME IN
PhillDubs they are miserable house guests, make a mess and never clean up
Anyone with divorced parents might relate well to this comic.
Or, anyone who's had a parent that killed people and is trying to get over the "I-was-a-murderous-King" thing.
*Giefs tissue*
* walks in * so do you remember that scene on the titanic where the guy dies.
I laughed at that scene in titanic. Silly romantic dingus. Now you're fishfood.
Cellochicita
daammm puberty struck hard
Frisk addressing themselves in the 3rd person was unexpected, but it doesn't feel wrong either. All the voice actors did a wonderful job. The music was good too though I didn't notice it the first time through because that's how good background music should be.
Benjamin Coyle that was second person - 'you' is one word used in second person perspective
This was done because the creator of the comic decided that he'd rather keep Frisk more like they were in the game by keeping their dialog in second person. He believed it captured more character.
Indeed, Chara seems to still be narrating Frisk’s actions.
I was expecting a cringe worthy comic but instead I got emotions
"Except I have, mom!" And "And that haunts me!" I feel like are the best voiced lines in this entire video. Terrific job, whoever did Asriel's voice. ^^
0:05 I really appreciate it when an artist uses in game references such as how Frisk sleeps in bed sometimes.
I freaking love how frisk does not care Adriel said “I must have killed frisk thousands of times!” Frisk just says “and that’s with some generous rounding down” 🤣😑😑😑
"And that's with some generous rounding down"
I'm dead from laughter on that one, and supposed to be a serious situation. And Frisk also says in such a flippant manner like: Yep, them's the truth.
Toriel:I neee your help.
Asgore in his mind:Hell yeah!
I don't see it
neee
6:12 *NOOOO!!!!* Not the paperboy!!!
John Sears who’s the paper boy?
idk
The paperboy must have been a monster who delivered the newspaper mentioned in the Snowdin library
The Paperboy was my favorite character :(
#paperboydidnothingwrong
I know it’s just the art style but the dreemurs horns are floating above their head
04:20 *and dat neck..*
Shit, the fourth wall is broken
The horns are like that because, according to the artist, it would feel weird drawing the horns attached to the head
I dont mind it, it looks kinda better
Yeah it looks so much better with the horns floating though
This comic series is hilarious and also somehow manages to make me feel emotions too, but it raises a question. Frisk has been shown to be small and childlike in this comic so far, and is probably anywhere from 7 to 10. They later admit that they were killed at the very least a couple thousand times by Asriel, and that doesn’t even count how many times they were killed by other characters. How are they not in therapy and/or scarred so badly they can’t look at any main character without panicking in fear of pain and death? How are they even FUNCTIONING?!
6:15 - 6:20 This version of Frisk will continue to be a masterpiece.
My feels when Asriel spilled his past. I think my heart clenched in sadness.
The way Frisk tightens the hood on their hoodie like that is freakin adorable
Asriel: ITS TEARING ME UP INSIDE
Frisk: •_•
Asriel: IVE KILLED FRISK THOUSANDS OF TIMES
Frisk: •_•
Frisk: •_•
Frisk: •_•
Frisk: ya ultimate flowey went all out
*_FINE RUclips! I’LL WATCH IT!!!_*
This was me
*YEA U BETTER*
‘I must have killed frisk 1000 time’ ‘and that is with some generous rounding down’ CONGRATS FRISK YOUR SO SUPPORTIVE AND HELPFUL
A-
am I in heaven?
Advanced Penguin i ask myself that same question when i saw this video
Advanced Penguin no . U r alive
Yes, heaven on the internet
No but I scraped my knee crawling out of hell
No
Toriel: what's next are you going to tell me frisk killed people too!
Frisk: ..... well
Asriel might've been a satanic, heartless evil flower in the past, but he's still cute!
This could be the redeeming cartoon for undertale.
THIS IS LITERALLY THE DELTARUNE UNIVERSE IM DEAD
Were you not paying attention to the part where Asriel talks about being Flowey?
He was probably thinking that the storyline in this might have possibly sounded like some parts of Deltarune.
Meshnarr *3 then they should check the dates.
Frisk is a thing not kris and asriel references being flowey but apart from that it is a bit like deltarune especially because asgores shirt is the same
lol
Toriel: Frisk it’s not like you killed everybody countless times right?
*Sweat goes down your face
*You say no but extend it like you’re lying
I frequently find myself coming back to watch this and the voice acting is amazing.
That "You have...what?" sounds so genuine. The way what was pronounced. You can feel that confusion. Hearing something that sounds impossible and her confused tone nails home how she couldn't mentally process hearing those words.
So this is the comic I've been hearing so much about! You two did such a good job! And your choice of music is perfect, you create a perfect atmosphere for every scene :D
QueenCreeps only the best for you waifu :3
Glorious.
o hey potoo
Can somebody tell me why Frisk is so sarcastic?
Asriel: "I MUST HAVE KILLED FRISK THOUSANDS OF TIMES!!!"
Firsk: "And that`s with some generous rounding down."
Me: "..." waits three hours, "😂😂😂😂😂"
"Even Frisk doesn't know were they fall on the spectrum" XD
Frisk: *is angry* *you know plenty of guy stuff.
Frisks gender, is Yes.
Speaking of being in bed by eleven...I’m in bed watching this.
while i dont agree that asgore's killing wasn't 'justified' (i mean all killing is bad but come on)i absolutely adore this comic... the voice acting and music and sound effects brought it all together too. the way their voices portrayed their anger and regret was just so well done.... i love this comic because it shines a light on how unfair toriel is being to asgore as well. the part where toriel and asgore talk (not seen in this dub) points out a lot of the mistakes that toriel made, which a lot of people don't focus on. because they like the thought that goat mom was perfect and blameless and asgore is unredeemable, which is the opposite of the message of the game. i could write a full essay about this but the comment section isnt really the place lol
anyway this was some amazing dubbing, great work!!!!!
I love that Frisk sleeps by lying face down on top of the covers just like in the game
Theres so much emotion in their voices it's so good ;-;
Oh goodness... I think I'm feeling ;_;
You and SlickSlack did a BEYOND amazing job with this comic!!! You did a marvelous job with Frisk and Toriel, and I was SUPER impressed with Slick's Asgore :))) And his adult Asriel voice... AAAHHH I LOVED IT SO MUCH!!! I really should check out his channel, he seems like he's an incredible voice actor :D
Also, you both did FANTASTIC with displaying the emotions in this comic!!! I felt those characters' feelings so much, it began to physically hurt at one point 'x3
I will definitely be watching this dub again, and also definitely looking more into this AU series :D
Agreed . I ... something I burieid in the memory which I forgot has ... similiar issues , when the jokes were not pleasant and I felt them as they affected me deeper .
Now sometimes I feel like I'm stabbed continiously , sometimes .
I'd like to know , if I coulld find a solution there and find something similiar here.
OH MY GOODNESS MAR IS FEELING
1:12 I hear Undertale the Musical!
Dakota Metzgar i love thet musical
Yup that is Undertale the musical and it is the Mettaton EX part
Kinda makes sense, since Mettaton became famous once he reached the surface.
Genet Hagos it’s not death by glamour, it’s actually the mettaton medley, the part right before the cooking and news show I think. You can tell because of the speed and it sounds lower in pitch
I thought I was the only one who recognized it.
Years watching this video again & again, it never fails to break my heart at Asriel's outburst
This is an amazing comic, and you both make it even better with your nigh-perfect narration.
A line I found most amusing: "*And that's with some generous rounding down"
1:06 that is a very interesting radio you've got there…
Savannah Harris *winks* you know me, I am the trashiest of the trash
Cellochicita XD I am too, wouldn't be able to live without Undertale the musical
Wut do u mean
I love how frisk is so chill about everything
I love it frisk acts calm and acts like the player still.
that MOTI cover in the background is great
Oh my golly, a collaboration with just Slick and Cello? ALL I'VE EVER WANTED
Seriously though, you guys have amaaazing chemistry in this. I've been a fan of Pootoo's for so long, and it felt so to hear it in audio form, and even to recite some lines along with you guys. Your REALLY did a good job setting the theme. And the video and audio editing is amazing, and so immersing! I especially like the music. It was seriously well chosen and just felt like it was designed to be with the scene - I found myself checking he description to see if it was custom-made just because it was so hecking fitting. Also, it was hilarious to hear Mettaton Medley and Slick asking if Asgore should be cut slack. Everything that a comic dub should be in just a few minutes! Boy am I going to have this on replay.
Oh my god :O the feels
the voice acting ;A; The perfectly edited comic ;w;
AND OH MY GOD THE MUSIC CHOICES
Honestly you both did an EXCELLENT job here. wow.
Donna Paella I know right it must be fun making someone rage that hard
God Asgore is just like my Dad's personality lmao. I even appreciated I got a father like Asgore.
I know it was supposed to be an emotional and sad moment, but the "generous rounding down" line killed me XD!
-RU =)
WOW. I've just gotten onto the Growth Spurt train but I am AMAZED by the dub quality in this.
I've been lurking around MoTI's videos since Death by Glamour, so eventually, seeing your comment every video was essential. Hearing you made it into Chrono Trigger the Musical gave me dancing-in-my-seat joy. Imagine my surprise when this pops up in my recommended.
I think one of my favorite moments is when Frisk is super casual at letting Toriel know just how many times Flowey's killed them.
Also, YES METTATON MEDLEY .
Slack's energy as Asriel really drives home his letting out of his pain. Your Toriel and Frisk are solid, and Slack's Asgore is great too. He really does sound like Asriel's father--an advantage of both voices coming from the same VA ;)
I'm pretty sure Growth Spurt is now one of my absolute favorite "potential future" AUs.
Great job, Cello! I look forward to more!
Oh my goodness thank you so much! You are so kind :)
i love how chill frisk sounds and looks. it's way more accurate and good for a laugh when your sobbing from the feels...
My god this was amazing both the comic and the voice acting, keep up the great work! (Also much respect for using the Oneshot soundtrack that game needs more recognition and is amazing)
Love how frisk is chill about everything.
*listens to background music* Hey wait a minute this isn't Undertale music.
Nope! I actually made an effort to use music outside of the undertale soundtrack, because I feel like sometimes it's done to death in dubs
The voices, THIS IS SO PERFECT!!!
Yeeeeeeees
I just love how Frisk doesn't care and just says. "And that's with some generous rounding down. "
Toriel went from Mom of the Year to worst mother in the Underground real quick
Goat Mom was best mom to worst mom...
she even threw away the flowers that asgore gave her in deltarune.
Momika
KEVIN ACKERMAN metamomphosis
Holy shit the acting here is superb! Get Netflix on board with this!
Yes
I love how timelines are a normal conversation with these two 😂
I love when azzy's all like 'I've been a bad boi' and tori's all like 'wait wtf'
Emotions, great voice acting, video editing. These are the ingredients chosen to make the perfect comic dub
Thats some nice OneShot music in the background there❤
nice
You know,I'm really glad someone got the idea to call out Toriel for her judgment on Asgore. No one seemed to think or even discuss about this way back(it's more noticeable to me since I had thought about it for a while now),so it's nice that it's finally brought into light.
I love how Frisk speaks in 2nd person. XD
DAMN THAT WAS GOOD.
This is so good! I can feel the emotions!
Am I the only one who noticed the runtime?
solar flare believe me. You're not. I get about 3 comments a day saying the same thing.
solar flare koo
oh wow
Thank you so much for getting me into this AU. Before this, the only other AU I was interested in was the Flower Pot AU, but this, both the comic with its excellent writing, and the dub with its amazing voice acting and music, this is truly wonderful. A rare treasure.
Holy moly, do I hear oneshot music in this
Holy crow I think you're right
I NEED MORE. *NOW.*
The creator of the comic has a continuation of this arc on his tumblr! It's not finished yet, but so far it's really good and totally worth reading :D
Asgore: is that really you, son?
Asriel: yup! I'm "asriel" as it gets!😂
Asgore: time to go back into the flower.
i love how frisk talks like they’re narrating their conscious
_IS THAT THE ONESHOT OST I HEAR?!?_
_WHY ARE THERE SO LITTLE ONESHOT RELATED COMMENTS_
Did i just hear undertale the musical by man on the internet at 1:05
Yup it’s mettaton ex
Frisk laying on their face, like in the game...that’s adorable
I love how their horns just float, it makes them look more like game characters.
Woahhhhhh
This is the best comic dub i have seen in my life.
No kidding! It seems like the most on-point with the storyline thing, like it could actually happen in a sequel!
Good job!
My favorite undertale comic series I art style is really charming and the voices are great
I don't know if it's funny,sweet, or much more depressing the fact Frisk can keep so calm and light during Asriel's rage and the fact he even points out he slaughtered Frisk thousands of time, being GENEROUS. Frisk has seen some shit haven't they
The angst is strong in this one, you know u done messed up when hear Toriel yelling...
But GOD do I love this comic
Is it just me or does this feel like DeltaRune in a way?...Asgores shirt, the car, idk maybe it’s just me
I was about to comment the same thing.
Yeah...it’s so weird. In a cool awesome weird way
For the time being I'm accepting this comic as canon for Deltarune's world until we get confirmation otherwise... Also makes me wonder if any Deltarune characters might appear in future comics.
Thank you Deltarune for bringing me back to this fandom.
It honestly brought me back too.
Thanks for commenting! ( made my night :) )
deltarune didnt exist yet
Just puttin it out there, Asriel is HAWT
Martin Studios furry
Pls leave this comment section
Hayden Barton Oi tell that to most of the community
Martin Studios....I agree...why did I type that
Logan Magoc Please actually learn more about furries and what they do. You're completely misjudging us and if you think we're all about yiff and that shit, just know the majority of our community actually stays away from that.
6:09
Asriel: *talking things out with his mother*
Frisk: yep this is casual
I didnt take my eyes and focus off it for one second. That's when you know this is a good video
1,000 sub, congrats Cello and amazing work!
You too Slick you magnificent bastard 👍
slaper12x Thank you so much Chris :D
Awww, thanks!
"You know plenty of guy stuff." LMAO Dead 😂
Asriel and toriel: **having an argument**
Frisk, in the background sipping cocoa like it’s nothing: *ah yes just a normal day*
I feel like asgore would be like that army dad who comes home with PTSD. He always seems calm but he gets rather wound up when stressful situations happen