A paragraph is 5 sentences. Although you could get more brownie points from your teacher, you will be using more brainpower to structure the sentence while only writing one sentence.
To remember this tip, always recall the triangle of persuasion: ethos, pathos, and logos. All of these techniques enhance your essays by tenfold and keeps the reader engaged whenever one of them is mentioned.
@@TheStickCollector hahahaha🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣. Well hes mad that he didn't get to use this life hack and that reply pops up so I think it's a win win. Ps I know it's a bot
Writing an essay can be a daunting task, especially if it's something that is long and complex. It requires a lot of research and organization in order to pull off a successful and effective piece. There are several steps one must take in order to write a successful essay. The first step is to conduct thorough research on the topic at hand. This means gathering various sources and perspectives that relate to the topic and delving into them to gain a more comprehensive understanding of it. Secondly, creating an outline for the essay is essential to ensure you stay on track and keep your focus sharp throughout the writing process. The outline should include the main points that will be discussed as well as any supporting evidence or arguments that will be used to back these points up. Additionally, it's important to use proper grammar and syntax in order to make the essay clear and concise. Lastly, it's important to proofread and edit the essay once it is complete to ensure that all the points are articulated properly. This can involve rewriting sentences, adding additional information, or removing irrelevant elements. Writing an essay is not a simple task, but it can be accomplished with precision and care. With the right steps and processes in place, anyone can effectively craft a comprehensive and well-thought-out essay.
@@mufflescat then I'm sorry but you sound like chatGPT in that first comment which isn't a compliment:( it's comprehensive and structured but it really like enthusiasm and soul, it's cold like the frozen CPU in my basement.
Also in the first part you put the however in the end which made the argument sound weak rather than having it at the beginning but distinguishing one over the other at the end which makes it sound more impactful.
"RUclips shorts are better than tiktok, although both have lots of videos, youtube have five times as much utility and three times as much information". -my essay: "youtube shorts are btter than tiktok, because gohar khan does not have a tiktok account".
This is basically what I do since the beginning of me making essays and boi o boi most of my essays are about 20-23 sentences and sometimes I write "goodluck" at reading this at the intro of the essay
This works I made an essay about dogs here Title: The Loyal Companion: The Enduring Bond between Humans and Dogs Introduction: Dogs have been our loyal companions for thousands of years, serving as faithful friends, protectors, and even working partners. Their unwavering loyalty, unconditional love, and unique abilities make them an integral part of human society. In this essay, we will explore the deep bond between humans and dogs, examining their roles in our lives, their impact on our well-being, and the lessons we can learn from them. Body: 1. Companionship and Emotional Support: Dogs have an innate ability to provide companionship and emotional support to humans. Their presence alone can alleviate feelings of loneliness and provide comfort during difficult times. Studies have shown that interacting with dogs can reduce stress, anxiety, and depression, leading to improved mental well-being. Whether it's a wagging tail or a warm cuddle, dogs have an uncanny ability to lift our spirits and make us feel loved and valued. 2. Unconditional Love and Acceptance: One of the most remarkable qualities of dogs is their ability to love unconditionally. They do not judge, hold grudges, or discriminate based on appearance, wealth, or social status. Dogs accept us for who we are, flaws and all. This unconditional love teaches us valuable lessons about acceptance, forgiveness, and the importance of embracing others without prejudice. 3. Guardians and Protectors: Throughout history, dogs have served as guardians and protectors of their human companions. Their acute senses, loyalty, and protective instincts make them excellent watchdogs and working partners. From herding livestock to assisting law enforcement, search and rescue operations, and even providing therapy in hospitals, dogs have proven their worth as reliable and trustworthy allies. 4. Teaching Responsibility and Empathy: Owning a dog comes with great responsibility, teaching us valuable life lessons. Dogs rely on us for their basic needs, such as food, shelter, and exercise. Taking care of a dog instills a sense of responsibility, discipline, and empathy in individuals, especially children. It teaches them the importance of nurturing, compassion, and the value of selfless acts of kindness. 5. Lessons in Living in the Present: Dogs have an incredible ability to live in the present moment, free from worries about the past or future. They remind us to appreciate the simple joys in life and to cherish each moment. Their playful nature and zest for life serve as a gentle reminder to slow down, enjoy the little things, and find happiness in the present. Conclusion: The bond between humans and dogs is a testament to the power of companionship, unconditional love, and the positive impact animals can have on our lives. Dogs teach us valuable lessons about loyalty, acceptance, responsibility, and living in the present. As we continue to share our lives with these remarkable creatures, let us cherish and celebrate the enduring bond between humans and dogs, recognizing the profound impact they have on our well-being and happiness.
The pattern I picked up is not about the length of the sentences but the fact that the order of the information was different first you share the common benefits and only then you shared the advantage of one option over the other
It makes the essay more confident, by putting something like a counterargument and then a rebuttal, it will strengthen the argument a lot. i learn what you just showed me in 5th grade :)
I have the exact opposite problem, I always think my sentences wil be too short or will cut off too early so they all end up the length of the last sentence in the second example and I have to figure out how to extend what I'm talking about for 2-3 more sentences before starting the next paragraph.
That’s cool here is a long essay about pizza! Pizza is one of my favorite topics! Pizza is a mouthwatering dish that originated in Italy. It's made with a thin, crispy crust topped with a variety of delicious ingredients. The possibilities are endless! From classic Margherita with fresh tomatoes, mozzarella, and basil, to meat lovers' pizza loaded with pepperoni, sausage, and bacon, there's a pizza for everyone's taste buds. One of the best things about pizza is its versatility. You can customize it to your heart's content. Whether you prefer a traditional Neapolitan-style pizza or a deep-dish Chicago-style pie, there's no wrong way to enjoy this cheesy delight. You can even experiment with different toppings like mushrooms, olives, peppers, or pineapple (if you're into that debate) to create your own unique masterpiece. Pizza is not just about the taste, it's also about the experience. Picture yourself sitting in a cozy pizzeria, surrounded by the aroma of freshly baked crust and melting cheese. The anticipation builds as you watch the pizza being pulled out of the oven, the cheese bubbling and the crust turning golden brown. It's a sensory delight! Pizza brings people together. It's the ultimate party food, perfect for sharing with friends and family. Whether you're having a movie night, a game day gathering, or simply hanging out, pizza is always a crowd-pleaser. It sparks conversations, laughter, and creates memories that last a lifetime. But pizza isn't just limited to savory flavors. Have you ever tried dessert pizza? It's a sweet twist on the classic. Picture a warm, gooey crust topped with Nutella, fresh fruits, or even a scoop of ice cream. It's a heavenly treat that satisfies your sweet tooth in the most delicious way. Now, let's talk about the global love for pizza. It has become a staple in many cultures around the world. You can find pizzerias in almost every city, each with their own unique spin on this beloved dish. Whether you're in New York, Rome, or Tokyo, you can always find a slice of pizza to satisfy your cravings. In conclusion, pizza is more than just a food. It's a culinary masterpiece that brings joy, comfort, and connection. So, the next time you bite into a slice of pizza, savor the flavors, appreciate the craftsmanship, and enjoy the Pizza is such a delicious and popular food. It originated in Italy but has become a global sensation. The beauty of pizza lies in its simplicity and versatility. It starts with a dough base, topped with tomato sauce, cheese, and various toppings. The crust can be thin and crispy or thick and doughy, depending on your preference. The tomato sauce adds a tangy and savory flavor, while the cheese melts and creates a gooey, irresistible texture. And let's not forget about the toppings! From classic choices like pepperoni and mushrooms to more adventurous options like pineapple and barbecue chicken, there's a pizza topping for everyone. Pizza is more than just a food; it's a cultural icon and a symbol of togetherness. So next time you're craving something delicious, why not indulge in a slice of pizza? It's a guaranteed way to satisfy your taste buds and put a smile on your face.
I think I would keep it that way then revising cause I can’t think of more sentences after that and will have trouble trying to make it a 5 sentence paragraph.
I told my phone to put your channel back into my recommended by saying essay tips and college tips into the mic and it worked but a little too late cause the essay was due yesterday at least they tried lol
Another reason this works well is because the other option uses more description all while staying concise and instead of accidentally rebuking your claim at the end, adding the antithesis at the beginning and rebuking that adds more strength to your claim
This actually seems like a question to appear in the rephrasing grammar portion of the SAT
it does though
Wow.
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BRO NEXT WEEK ITS MY SATS
Hi fellow Brawl Stars player who has a Spike Pfp
"Quantify your claims" that's some sound advice! Now hopefully I actually remember it...
@laith just go to your history and save it or just like it
A paragraph is 5 sentences. Although you could get more brownie points from your teacher, you will be using more brainpower to structure the sentence while only writing one sentence.
😂😂😂bruh
lol fr
advice*
advise is the verb.
"Thoughts?'
*"mid"*
Based teacher.
Fr
@Bat_Dragon how tf is that relevant?
@blu that’s not the point
@@Weezeler then what is...
@@TheSpacePlaceYT mah azz
Bro I’d be crying if if asked my teacher “thoughts?” And they respond with “mid.” 💀💀
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As an English teacher, I actually teach this to my students and remind them of this very often. Great tip!
Teacher
I don't think a teacher would use meme pfp with a yt name duck
@@Noobman69420 yea
@@Noobman69420 my science teacher does and plays games and he's just 25
@@Noobman69420 Teachers can be fun too, my students actually know my gamer name is Duck. I've been teaching for 14 years.
To remember this tip, always recall the triangle of persuasion: ethos, pathos, and logos. All of these techniques enhance your essays by tenfold and keeps the reader engaged whenever one of them is mentioned.
Then why did you click on this video if you didn't like it?
@@AbbeyKitty1013 who said I didn't like it? I already know it in another form that I'm sharing here. It's a good tip!
@@liquidice1677 because I AM OWO
@@AbbeyKitty1013 what the hell is wrong with you.
Logos is language or smth in Greek
Great advice, though walking your reader through the logic is also very valuable in cases where the correlation is not as obvious.
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Y’all: talks about stuff
Me: HOW THE HELL ARE HIS DRAWING SO BASIC BUT PERFECT
@Xixi Xixi …get away from my comment
"Thoughts?"
"Mid"
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Lol
So is the banana
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Who is here after pune porsche accident
What is that idk
No body
Me 😂😂
What a great tip Gohar! This was so great and I'm definitely going to use it, thanks for all of your tips, they really help! GET THIS MAN TO 1 MIL!
Yes!
Wow this is awesome I’m going to keep doing this on my essays. Thanks so much Gohar. Keep up the great work.
"Your essay is about to be a masterpiece once you do this"
Me who already forgotten what he just said in the spand of literal milliseconds: ok, got it
Perfect! I just got a new essay assignment today, soo, this is going to be helpful. :)
You have a nack for humor! It is so subtle and yet so effective 😂😂😂😂
Had to be recommended this AFTER I handed in my essay
Damnit bro I just had an in class essay like 7 hours ago 😭😭
Always when you don't need it
@@TheStickCollector hahahaha🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣. Well hes mad that he didn't get to use this life hack and that reply pops up so I think it's a win win. Ps I know it's a bot
Writing an essay can be a daunting task, especially if it's something that is long and complex. It requires a lot of research and organization in order to pull off a successful and effective piece. There are several steps one must take in order to write a successful essay. The first step is to conduct thorough research on the topic at hand. This means gathering various sources and perspectives that relate to the topic and delving into them to gain a more comprehensive understanding of it. Secondly, creating an outline for the essay is essential to ensure you stay on track and keep your focus sharp throughout the writing process. The outline should include the main points that will be discussed as well as any supporting evidence or arguments that will be used to back these points up. Additionally, it's important to use proper grammar and syntax in order to make the essay clear and concise. Lastly, it's important to proofread and edit the essay once it is complete to ensure that all the points are articulated properly. This can involve rewriting sentences, adding additional information, or removing irrelevant elements. Writing an essay is not a simple task, but it can be accomplished with precision and care. With the right steps and processes in place, anyone can effectively craft a comprehensive and well-thought-out essay.
Im not reading all that 💀
This sounds like chatGPT
@@Aerosklice ik u prob won’t believe me but its not lol
@@mufflescat then I'm sorry but you sound like chatGPT in that first comment which isn't a compliment:( it's comprehensive and structured but it really like enthusiasm and soul, it's cold like the frozen CPU in my basement.
How am I going to edit my essay if I'm in essay writing competition?💀
If I’m gonna be completely honest, I am in middle school and these clips are literally the reasons I get A’s. TY Gohar
Also in the first part you put the however in the end which made the argument sound weak rather than having it at the beginning but distinguishing one over the other at the end which makes it sound more impactful.
I already do this, the weird thing is that I am in fourth grade 💀
Great tip! Going to use this if needed!
These are like transitions for writing. This will help. Thanks.
I’m gonna try this. Thanks!
Bro I used this tip on my SS essay test, and got a 98. Thank you so much 🙏🏻
Queen (From Deltarune): Get da banana.
Kris: oki *Eats banana*
Queen: *Potassium 👍🏻🤖👍🏻*
I literally have a comparison english mock in an hour, thank you for this. 🙏🏾
the first paragraph is persuading the reader
Here after the Pune accident case ☠️
"Thoughts? Mid"
Imagine a teacher really saying this 💀💀
Gen z teacher
Person:”thoughts?”
Teacher:”MID.”
I think this is changing the simple sentences to more complex/compound ones.
"RUclips shorts are better than tiktok, although both have lots of videos, youtube have five times as much utility and three times as much information".
-my essay:
"youtube shorts are btter than tiktok, because gohar khan does not have a tiktok account".
Agreed lol but I just got a tiktok ad after this 💀
Also the numbers and percentages make it better
Really appreciate the Help!!
Very useful can we have part 2 or a series ❤😊
Wow this is a lot of help tysm
“Bandannas are better because…. Well.. you know 😳 😏 “
Seeing this a day before my History exam, thanks!
This is basically what I do since the beginning of me making essays and boi o boi most of my essays are about 20-23 sentences and sometimes I write "goodluck" at reading this at the intro of the essay
Thx for this!!! I have a 10 page essay due tmrw and I see this in my essay.
Seen bro's desk more times than my family this year
Sounds like something that you’d find on LSATs
Thank you so much I am writing an argumentative essay right now so this is perfect
I am in the 4th grade and I started using this b4 I watched this and it really helps it will give you more points when you compare
We learn this in middle school! Varied sentence length and structure is something we are taught in like year 5. Some even learn it in first school.
Imma be thinking about this during my sba test today
Also ending on a sentence proving your point
This works I made an essay about dogs here Title: The Loyal Companion: The Enduring Bond between Humans and Dogs
Introduction:
Dogs have been our loyal companions for thousands of years, serving as faithful friends, protectors, and even working partners. Their unwavering loyalty, unconditional love, and unique abilities make them an integral part of human society. In this essay, we will explore the deep bond between humans and dogs, examining their roles in our lives, their impact on our well-being, and the lessons we can learn from them.
Body:
1. Companionship and Emotional Support:
Dogs have an innate ability to provide companionship and emotional support to humans. Their presence alone can alleviate feelings of loneliness and provide comfort during difficult times. Studies have shown that interacting with dogs can reduce stress, anxiety, and depression, leading to improved mental well-being. Whether it's a wagging tail or a warm cuddle, dogs have an uncanny ability to lift our spirits and make us feel loved and valued.
2. Unconditional Love and Acceptance:
One of the most remarkable qualities of dogs is their ability to love unconditionally. They do not judge, hold grudges, or discriminate based on appearance, wealth, or social status. Dogs accept us for who we are, flaws and all. This unconditional love teaches us valuable lessons about acceptance, forgiveness, and the importance of embracing others without prejudice.
3. Guardians and Protectors:
Throughout history, dogs have served as guardians and protectors of their human companions. Their acute senses, loyalty, and protective instincts make them excellent watchdogs and working partners. From herding livestock to assisting law enforcement, search and rescue operations, and even providing therapy in hospitals, dogs have proven their worth as reliable and trustworthy allies.
4. Teaching Responsibility and Empathy:
Owning a dog comes with great responsibility, teaching us valuable life lessons. Dogs rely on us for their basic needs, such as food, shelter, and exercise. Taking care of a dog instills a sense of responsibility, discipline, and empathy in individuals, especially children. It teaches them the importance of nurturing, compassion, and the value of selfless acts of kindness.
5. Lessons in Living in the Present:
Dogs have an incredible ability to live in the present moment, free from worries about the past or future. They remind us to appreciate the simple joys in life and to cherish each moment. Their playful nature and zest for life serve as a gentle reminder to slow down, enjoy the little things, and find happiness in the present.
Conclusion:
The bond between humans and dogs is a testament to the power of companionship, unconditional love, and the positive impact animals can have on our lives. Dogs teach us valuable lessons about loyalty, acceptance, responsibility, and living in the present. As we continue to share our lives with these remarkable creatures, let us cherish and celebrate the enduring bond between humans and dogs, recognizing the profound impact they have on our well-being and happiness.
The pattern I picked up is not about the length of the sentences but the fact that the order of the information was different first you share the common benefits and only then you shared the advantage of one option over the other
The original seems like something I’d do to have more sentences if I didn’t have much ideas for the topic
I learnt writing and speaking like this from observing friends and people with better grades and now I’m one of those people
Wow great timing, I was about to write my essay thanks
im so grateful that my primary school already taught this, its drilled in my head
Me watching this scrolling on yt shorts trying to procrastinate away having a 40 paged essay to write 😭😭
Pov: u just got a break from studying and thus appears
It makes the essay more confident, by putting something like a counterargument and then a rebuttal, it will strengthen the argument a lot. i learn what you just showed me in 5th grade :)
This is good. Also, the syntax of the phrases is important
Probably never gonna remember this but I'll keep that in mind lmao
THANK YOU I STRUGGLE WITH THIS
Thanks!! Really helped.
I finished school and now I’m on summer break but I will do that next year for sure
I’m gonna watch u more often
Cuz ur channel is gonna help me through high school and collage
I have the exact opposite problem, I always think my sentences wil be too short or will cut off too early so they all end up the length of the last sentence in the second example and I have to figure out how to extend what I'm talking about for 2-3 more sentences before starting the next paragraph.
As someone who has to start an essay in two days, thank you
These are gonna be so helpful
OMG this guy is saving me like everyday even though I am 12... I will be using these tips in the future.... Thank you!
I legit had a state test today and I just saw this video I am in pain
Thanks this was really helpful 🙏
Wait this is sooooo helpful, the SBAC for English is next week and there's an essay part
thank god someone who is helping me with my essay
@ElonMusk
I literally am going to have a final essay tomorrow and this helped me! Thanks! :)
This is so much better for my solar power vs wind power presentation
Did he just roast my favorite fruit!?
Yo you made me get full marks in essay writing, thank you!
love ur vids man
That’s cool here is a long essay about pizza! Pizza is one of my favorite topics!
Pizza is a mouthwatering dish that originated in Italy. It's made with a thin, crispy crust topped with a variety of delicious ingredients. The possibilities are endless! From classic Margherita with fresh tomatoes, mozzarella, and basil, to meat lovers' pizza loaded with pepperoni, sausage, and bacon, there's a pizza for everyone's taste buds.
One of the best things about pizza is its versatility. You can customize it to your heart's content. Whether you prefer a traditional Neapolitan-style pizza or a deep-dish Chicago-style pie, there's no wrong way to enjoy this cheesy delight. You can even experiment with different toppings like mushrooms, olives, peppers, or pineapple (if you're into that debate) to create your own unique masterpiece.
Pizza is not just about the taste, it's also about the experience. Picture yourself sitting in a cozy pizzeria, surrounded by the aroma of freshly baked crust and melting cheese. The anticipation builds as you watch the pizza being pulled out of the oven, the cheese bubbling and the crust turning golden brown. It's a sensory delight!
Pizza brings people together. It's the ultimate party food, perfect for sharing with friends and family. Whether you're having a movie night, a game day gathering, or simply hanging out, pizza is always a crowd-pleaser. It sparks conversations, laughter, and creates memories that last a lifetime.
But pizza isn't just limited to savory flavors. Have you ever tried dessert pizza? It's a sweet twist on the classic. Picture a warm, gooey crust topped with Nutella, fresh fruits, or even a scoop of ice cream. It's a heavenly treat that satisfies your sweet tooth in the most delicious way.
Now, let's talk about the global love for pizza. It has become a staple in many cultures around the world. You can find pizzerias in almost every city, each with their own unique spin on this beloved dish. Whether you're in New York, Rome, or Tokyo, you can always find a slice of pizza to satisfy your cravings.
In conclusion, pizza is more than just a food. It's a culinary masterpiece that brings joy, comfort, and connection. So, the next time you bite into a slice of pizza, savor the flavors, appreciate the craftsmanship, and enjoy the Pizza is such a delicious and popular food. It originated in Italy but has become a global sensation. The beauty of pizza lies in its simplicity and versatility. It starts with a dough base, topped with tomato sauce, cheese, and various toppings. The crust can be thin and crispy or thick and doughy, depending on your preference. The tomato sauce adds a tangy and savory flavor, while the cheese melts and creates a gooey, irresistible texture. And let's not forget about the toppings! From classic choices like pepperoni and mushrooms to more adventurous options like pineapple and barbecue chicken, there's a pizza topping for everyone. Pizza is more than just a food; it's a cultural icon and a symbol of togetherness. So next time you're craving something delicious, why not indulge in a slice of pizza? It's a guaranteed way to satisfy your taste buds and put a smile on your face.
i got this the day i turned in my essay
Me seeing this right after my English state test
I needed this I have state testing next week
I also liked how the data was shown as a measurement "bananas have 5x as much vitamin A"
I think I would keep it that way then revising cause I can’t think of more sentences after that and will have trouble trying to make it a 5 sentence paragraph.
I told my phone to put your channel back into my recommended by saying essay tips and college tips into the mic and it worked but a little too late cause the essay was due yesterday at least they tried lol
thank you this helped so much
These tips are pretty good
you changed my life never stop
Should have known this before my exam two days ago
should be useful for the state testing next week
Thanks you just got yourself another sub.
Another reason this works well is because the other option uses more description all while staying concise and instead of accidentally rebuking your claim at the end, adding the antithesis at the beginning and rebuking that adds more strength to your claim
Eyyy, got an essay next week, let's go
Kinda had my Eng 2 exam today, coulda used this earlier
What markers do u use for your props? They look sooo vivid and are really clear to sight
i was a little shocked at first, the revised version is how i usually write my essays
Thank you Gohar! This actually is helpful and the way you explain is very understanding.
Dang the teacher really just called them MID. Biggest insult ever
Thanks dude ur so helpful
I love you vids BTW; they're very helpful 😊
Dude. I just did my essay like a week ago. WHY MUST RUclips RECOMMEND ME THIS NOW?
It also ends on the good things which I think helps