Everything Wrong With Hazbin Hotel (Part 1)
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- Опубликовано: 1 июл 2020
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Original Video: • HAZBIN HOTEL (PILOT)
Remember, no animation is without sin! Which animation's sins should we expose next?!
Narrator:
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Editor:
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Him: these angels have no reason to be here.
Extermination day: *am i a joke to you?*
o Lunar Lace o well yes but actually yes
What's the point of extermination day? God can make hell big enough for the creatures of an earth that's existed (and will exist) for only a very finite amount of time. Not that He wants anyone to go there, it's just a righteous punishment. But that's another conversation altogether.
@@speedstackingmaniac i think god doesnt care about hell in this? Idk we will see when the show starts, im interested in the lore
@@filipignjatovic4344 One of the theories I've read about Hazbin Hotel was that god is absent, due to Blitzo from Helluva Boss saying "Well Christ on a stick, I guess there is a God"
@@hunterphillips2124 interesting..... We shall see.
Everytime we see “Part 1”” that means we’ll never see part two ever
Yup, still waiting for everything wrong with “the incredibles two, part two”
@@garfieldfan42069 same, same
Yes guys we won’t see a part two not intill [REDACTED]
“Don’t worry guys, part 2 of the enigma machine is coming”
Stay tuned...
I know I'm gonna get hate for this, the reason why there are so many characters that are only shown in the background, is because they are characters going to show up when a first season is made and in the comics. So giving them a bit of screen time makes us fans happy.
Some of the thinks I dont like about the pilot is that when some characters go into a zoom out shot, like when alastor says: the punishment is THIS!" and the camera zooms out to view the hotel. All the characters have weird proportions and look less cartoony which throws me off, also sometimes it looks like that the characters are just behind a backdrop.
In my opinon, she'd have to somewhat show them all in episodes, maybe be crammed or something, but I do like that she's trying to show them off! And yeah, some characters look like they don't belong-
Fare enough
The reason they get less detailed is because they only have as many pixels as they has when they drew the characters normally. Making them smaller and taking away some detail is a common animation trick to make sure the character is still readable but in scenes like that usually the trick is to make you look around the actual room. They could have done a lil better on that tho I agree xD
Its like other 2D cartoons duh, when the character is far away they'll just put dots for their eyes
I agree with on the first part, he's nitpicking too much
But on the second part, no, this is a pretty common thing in cartoons like
Steven Universe and other modern cartoons
"Please DO NOT harass the original animators!"
Boy, I sure wonder how well *that* aged!
They ended up getting uno reversed and harassed by fans of Hazbin didn't they
@@destroyerofmorons no, it was revealed that they bullied Ekrcoaster for not joining them
@@nightcrawler5409 No, they bullied these guys lmao
@@destroyerofmorons who?
lol
Him: These angels have no reason to be here.
Extermination Day's existence: *OH, HELLO THERE!*
yep
Guy: They don’t show up or are even mentioned, so showing them here is pointless
This guy: Ewww Cinema sins
They don't have a reson to be here because they never show up again. Helluva Boss doesn't count because those are different angles.
i bet yall feel stupid now lmaooo
Wow that a lot of sin counter
Thank you very much for the spoilers :-)
@@enderplant then why did you read the comments then?
Its hell there is always sin lol
It's nothing compared to psycho girl
@@kenwalkensdeadchannelcanal2886 it the first comment i didnt mean to read but i read it
“Why are you crying? I thought this song was rather pleasant” I don’t know why but that had me dying 😂
He sounded so genuine lmao
Does he not now that the song was about failure
control panel cannot can't seem to be controlled.
Let's fix that with a controlled shock.
Let me guess, that's a meme now is it?
@@kenwalkensdeadchannelcanal2886 it became a meme the moment the voice in fnaf said it in sister location
Using an outdated reference
Ah yes, a fellow fnaf fan
aye nice joke
The characters he said were pointless are the angels who kill demons each year to free up heck's space because they think that nobody is worthy of being an angel
I don't like cussing even though I watched the video
My family counts it as one
@@owenandrewmusic In my family hell is a bad word
@@sugarapple7288 My Oncle's familly name is Litterally "Hell" :/
@@owenandrewmusic Bruh- Im 15 and all I said was that my family considers hell a bad word
The “useless” characters he said in the start are actually angels or “exorcists” sent to hell every year to kill demons because of over population. So they are very important
then that should have been made clearer to the audience. if a character is that important why make it so hard to know what they are and what purpose they serve?
@@triciabaird2895 Maybe it's supposed to be a plot twist?
@@triciabaird2895 It's meant to be a point of mystery that is revealed later in the series, this is only a pilot don't forget
@@triciabaird2895 bro it's only a pilot they can't tell you everything in the pilot that what other episodes are for
@@chuuyashrrt There is no fuxking mystery. And they're never mentioned any further in the animation. You can say it's a twist, but that's a fucking lie as their clear purpose is stated and is never brought up again, you COULD say they were the main reason for the Hazbin Hotel, but that's it.
Animation Sins: **makes this video**
Everyone: *so you have chosen hate*
Indeed I have chosen hate
YES
Yep 👍
I personally liked the Hazbin Hotel Premier but I could find some stuff that could be altered. Just my opinion
same
Same dude, but of course, not everything is perfect.
Same
I think it was more to poke fun rather then insult
its a pilot, pilots are essentially concepts and may not be finalised in the real show
you forgot a sin, when angel dust's arm is over the car window, its just his glove. No arm.
blueberry fox Yeah
@Dolfan 2 wait so his glove is just floating? yes i’m sure that was a sin
Tbh, that is a usual thing characters in cartoons have done.
@@sugoi694 wait, really?
@@hollowknightfan2379 Yeah, I mean if you look at drawn animations, they usually would do that, and there is no way the animators thought putting the arm through the other car window would be considered correct anatomy.
Complains about an adult film making studio being named "Porn Studios"
Ever heard of Pornhub my friend?
Edit: come on guys I'm not complaining, I'm just joking. Despite Pornhub not being a studios the connection here is that the name is very literal. A hub for porn. That's it
Comparing irl and fiction is not a good topic to talk about my friend.
my friend
@@kutural7739 Exactly, that's why people pointing out all the nitpicky details about what is wrong in the show logic wise is extremely futile. Why? Because it's not real and it's not supposed to be.
Its not complaining. Stop making it sound worse than it is
Pornhub isnt a porn studio. It makes some porn as exclusives but most are user uploaded. Its a streaming site
why do people dislike the video before the thing even starts
edit: thanks for 150 likes and the replies explaining to me
ikr
dislike fairies
They subscribe and turn on notifications just to dislike
pillow man it’s obviously just bots
It's Becuz they hate him just blaintly saying what's wrong with it
"it's like 90s animation" yeah that's the point
When someone takes the jokes and count them as sins (the drug store for example), picks on tinyest of things to inflate sins and don't take into account the plot (angels at the begining)
10:14
Hey guys, just wanted to say that I think they put that sign in to show how the people there in hell are pretty lazy and they don’t really care because it’s hell.
thats what i was thinking. that sign was definietly designed this way on purpose
Plus, with the amount of drugs, there's probably a ton of drug shops, and they probably took the good names first.
That's what I thought too
I honestly got triggered over that line like i mean ANIMATION'S TAKE SO MUCH TIME pwq
Put effort in an animated show, sayng "It's hell who cares" is just supporting lazyness.
The first sin shouldn’t even count cause that’s what Viv was doing that was the point of the scene
And the many, many OTHER sins?
“Stay tuned for Part 2 - we mean it this time!”
*hasn’t uploaded in a year*
Me- sees video
Video- haven't started yet
Some people-dislikes
Me- wut._.
dislike fairies
Probably because he doesn't finish others movies first
@@astralwither8402 no
Haters have their notifications on
I don't think zam or mob can talk about crap animation when all they do is minecraft animations
10:13
That was- That was the joke.
You took alot of things very literally
😂😂😂
Well if you have no sense of comedy being able to spot jokes will be hard
*When you love an animation but agree with near every criticism on it*
THE CONSISTENCY PART ESPECIALLY
This is going to get a ton of crap I feel. Just because some hazbin fans and/or Stans might not like the critiquing.
I mean, it's partly true, but this mostly relates to such cricitcs like "Oh why is the background so red?" "Angel being a drug addict and a prostitute is homofobic" "Why are all the characters so thin, it''s bodyshaming" etc.
Hazbin Hotel Pilot went through some really undeserved critisism, which doesn't mean that it's perfect.
The artist style changes, some of the jokes, sound effects, yeah, this pilot has some serious flaws, but at least for me it does a kind of a good job at explaining the universe (of course, only when you actually dig a little, I'm looking at you Animation Sins and your sin at 2:15).
I honestly agree with many of the sins but some of them are reaaaaaaaally undeserved, so yeah, i guess that just when you sin an animation that has got a very loving fandom, you should be more careful at choosing what will you sin than normally, or else you are going to get quite a lot of shit.
Im a fan but this video was funny , and i don't care of critics i only care when they say that is shit and people shouldn't watch it, let me watch what i want
I dislike this vid
Sure some of these point are a valid son
But some is just stupid
The fact that he said angel have no purpose and exposition is too long tick me off
Think of it as I disliking his video because I find the humor humor terrible
They are making fun of how "bad" it is. Like what the fuck
“ or stand might not like the critiquing.” Why and who are “Stans”?
If I see smear frames being sinned in the next ep, I just want to let you know that smear frames have even been used in cartoon network shows. (Or adult swin even) I know that there is a lot of them, but what can I say? I'm not an animator, I just want to make this clear before any haters of hazbin go looking in the comments for people that like the show. Like yeah, we know that you dont like the show, but saying it sucks. 1. You aren't speaking for everyone. 2. There is always a falt to every show, even for fans. 3. This is a half an hour pilot?! How many pilots have you seen that are this long, have decent animation and good story? Ok, I'm know I'm rambling on, but this video would have been better if viv also worked with this video.
You sir, get a like from me, and i agree
This video is for satire purposes.
@@anthonymcneil4238 not really
@@kenwalkensdeadchannelcanal2886 thanks!
@@anthonymcneil4238 Not really its more like.... constructive critsism
Who likes cake?
Me too
Lol
Who doesn't
Ye
Bro same
Personally, I enjoy watching this Hazbin Hotel pilot episode, but I do agree some things could have been better and different! Still really good though, for being a RUclips animation.
@JosiexJosie Yup! Look at Helluva Boss. I know a lot of people who liked Hazbin Hotel weren't the biggest fans of the Helluva Boss pilot but as the actual show began to get released, it became way better! Pilots aren't the end all, be all for a show. They can always get better.
I watched hazbin hotel and i realized"oh no...this not for kids"
So? You have been warned about that, I knew that before I even watched the begining
@Lee Saddleback "welcome"
They've been here for years
10:25 How ‘bout a little more?
-Drug Dash
-Eric’s Ecstasy Emporium
-Carl’s Coke Corner
- “We’ll make you so high, you’ll fly out of hell!”
- Marijuana Mart
- White and Pinkman
7:23 PK Russl infamously made a similar complaint, however, you guys just said it a million times better.
PK Russl’s arguments felt half assed and rushed; some of his points just don’t make sense,
@@skybots1062 Indeed, this channel is usually just as nitpicky, but at least they make sense, and in this instance, they explained it in a valid way.
@@skybots1062 true
Damn they're gonna count all the sins from the bible for this series review
Enjoy it for what it is. She had such a small team working on this project, and she wanted to make it unique
Finally! The guy who truly understands what problems with animations the pilot has.
*BUT*
But other "not animation" sins are really weird.
An opening song in a pilot? Too many expositions! *Sin*
A female rowdy adult character? Clearly a feminist! *Sin*
The "not important for the story moment" flashes super quick. If you're interested you can *pause* the pilot and read it. Nope, *sin*
And name of this video should be like "A lot of problems in beginning of Hazbin Hotel pilot".
P.S. Oh, it's first part, excuse me. More like "A lot of problems in Hazbin Hotel pilot"
Bro, its a pilot. I know this was a year ago but look at helluva boss, as soon as the episodes progress we get to learn more. Since Vivziepop already confirmed Hazbin Hotel ep 1 is close to being finished, we'll just have to see. Pilot is where the concepts are dude
@@bunbunchan406 Indeed
Hazbin hotels stans be like: he no like show??????!!! Let's see him make better show!!!!
God, I hate the "let's see you do better" thing, I don't need to be a master chef to know if food tastes good and the guy is an animator himself. Though I agree that you need to have at least some knowledge of animation to criticise something on a deeper level
6:11
Animation Sins × Editor
Stop... we don't want to do that now do we? *Of course we don't*
You ever get your popcorn out for a comment section
9:11 we really just gonna ignore the floating arm
Uh yeah 911 we have a emergency called floating arm
@@AnimeMemers there is no 911 in hell they don't care if you get hurt 😂😂😂
I see I wasn't the only one who noticed
Oh! Never noticed that hahaha. Guess we gotta do better about writing the scripts.
@@grrawesomenessc.8399 are you actually one of the script writers? Or am I just misreading your comment
2:06 the point of having the background demons all the same is to show the one in the forefront standing out above the rest. Charlie is saying she wants to be different in a world where everyone is the same. Copy and paste isn't always a bad thing. It can be used for symbolism
4:20 I mean, it's not like it's tv, just pause the vid. But even so, it's meant to be a minor detail because the plot has nothing to do with val being rude to angel. That's for later episodes, but a quick flash can be later analysed is designed to make fans realize what is to come
8:25 cartoons have a long running trope of having limbs be nonsensically sticking in one place and sticking out somewhere else. It's just like how in Scooby Doo there is the rooms the characters run into and seeming no way they can connect. It's just for a visual gag to emphasize Angel's wacky arms pretty much
9:24 he just has a long neck, and his character is flexible
9:51 Bojack is a type of drug, but they did reference the show for a quick Easter egg. And also, how can you expect an independent animation written by a few friends and animated by people not used to more than shorts to be on the level of a show made by animation giants and alumni of famous writing academies with a Netflix budget...to be on the same level.
11:16 a common trick for animating is to not show as much detail in an object unless your focusing on it, otherwise the zoom out would feel clustered and it's just not necessary if you're not focusing on an object in a particular frame
The neck thing is still a sin
@@LaCalca the neck doesn't even look broken to me
Same, but I took a closer look and wow yeah. It’s BROKE
O
I don’t think you see that his neck is front of his bowtie
2:10 The angels were there to show the cleansing hell goes through every year. Charlie said that they just went through a cleansing along with the timer
3:20 Some towns and cities do have dumb names like that, but an overuse of it makes the content uninspired.
5:30 Hell would probably be smoggy and buildings that far away would disappear.
7:08 it’s the name of the show... What do you expect?
7:59 AngelDust’s gold tooth is different from his other teeth, it’s to show off something different in his mouth
9:51 Bojack was made in a studio with professionals while HH was made with some professionals. And put down Animation because I find something better than this.
10:13 That’s the joke, the joke was that the name is lazy.
4:10 *Ah yes, if you make a detailed background then you get a sin*
9:42 The way angel dusts pov was was the drugs was behind him. Travis's car goes to the right side of angel dust. The road hes talking about is the one next to the drugs, not the one on the right. He should really look at his work more carefully if he gets his stuff right.
9:53 If you make a reference to a show then you automatically get a sin, big brain time.
10:19 THAT'S THE JOKE!
Welp getting ready for a comments war to start.
Some of these points weren't exactly good 😬 like yeah, charlie is crying, that's not an animation sin, and the art in the back of the porn studio wasn't made for that image, it was made separately, besides, that's wouldn't be an animation sin AaAaAaH
have you even watched cinema sins? get ur facts straight
That’s wasn’t an animation sin that was a Steven sin
the guy who made disk/sphare must be like:reallity can be whatever i want
12:05 What even is this frame? My guy looking like garfield over here.
Would make cute merchedice, even if it doesn't fitt the rest of the shows style
@ARTEM DORDZHIEV copy pasted
“Jon, I require eggs.”
When they actually sin a 2D Animation
I mean it's still an animation, but it's uhh....unfitting
They already sin a 2D animation before.
Kyle Celezte really? I can’t think of when
@@kyllisto_ oh i see, never knew of it
@@peaceluv3578 It's the cuphead one.
Kyle Celezte oh yeah
I hate to say it, but this video is incredibly mean-spirited and nit-picky. An important tenet of film-criticism is to consider the source behind the material you are discussing. While popular, Hazbin Hotel was created by a small team of animators and was a relatively low-budget. It was made primarily through online coordination, not by an in-house studio. My argument here is not that Vivian and her team are “beneath” critique, but that pointing out such small and unnoticeable technical details comes across as callous given the circumstances under which Hazbin Hotel was made. It is difficult to take some of the genuine points you make seriously when so much of the video gives me the impression that this whole thing is a bad-faith attempt to tear Hazbin apart. Overall, the tone of your video confuses me, because I initially thought that it was intended to be humorous, but you go into such specifics about the technical errors of the animation that (as stated above) this reads more as an actual critique than a light-hearted jab. If you are going for a more humorous tone, it is better to keep your comments and observations short and witty and avoid including every single criticism you have in the finished video. Obviously your team prefers analyzing detail, which is a valuable skill and has the potential to be interesting to watch, but I think the depths in which you expose said details is better suited to looking at big budget movies. I enjoyed your Incredibles 2 and Scoob! videos, because the omission of technical quality in big studio, multi-million dollar film is more of a conscious choice. As opposed to an unintentional consequence of having a limited budget and small team which (in my opinion) is conquering relatively new and extraordinary circumstances of animation production.
2:05 they are exterminators and at the beginning of the pilot the cleansing aka extermination day,has ended
When they showed their face in beginning, the toxicity & everything everything else just made so much sense.
Nobody:
Not a single soul:
Him: let me make a video complaining about how many mistakes this animator made as a "JOKE"
Hey buddy, I don't know if you heard but...Nobody/No one jokes are outdated as fuck
@CB Happy just because you fucking work hard on something doesn't mean it cant be criticized. Anyone with a brain would understand that
Imagine trying to tell someone that they are putting too much effort into their work
This should be called (Everything wrong with the animation/art in Hazbin hotel) I usually like these kinds of videos just for some laughs but I wasn't expecting every complaint to be on the animation....Just an opinionated tip. Mabey make everything into one shorter video. If your video is in 5 different parts and just 15 mins of pointing out issues with animation....people may get bored really fast. find more things worth pointing out or you will get a lot of haters from the series.
It basically means everything wrong with the animation Animation Sins
The name of the channel is literally “Animation Sins”
@@SilasTheStrawberry doesn’t mean it has to be specifically about the animation.
@@TeenWithACarrotIDK what kind of logic is that?
I do think a channel called Animation Sins should be fine sticking with criticizing animation but I don't know if Hazbin Hotel's pilot was the right thing for this. Maybe Helluva Boss because it has more episodes but Hazbin Hotel was the very first thing that Spindlehorse made so obviously there's going to be animation errors and things they could've done better. But when the series comes out, having been made by a more consistent team, this is just gonna look like the fluke that it was. It doesn't change that this was a great accomplishment for Spindlehorse, making a 30 minute animated pilot with a team entirely of freelancers.
Bojack horseman is literally the most unfunny show my eyes have ever laid on. I'll take Hazbin over this any day thanks
@Shay Patel Heh, nice joke there man.
Fuck it, ill take neither. Couldn't stand a second of hazbin or bojack tbh
@Shay Patel try reading the prequel comic and their addict music video! itll help understand the plot more ^^
@Shay Patel ok! your opinion after all
try waiting for future episodes, but if those aren’t your taste, totally fine, we all have our own styles and i won’t pressure you into something you dislike ❤️
legends say hes still making a part 2 till this day
Hazbin Hotel was very edgy
I do agree
I also agree
Because heck
Well, because the characters are in hell.
Just wait for Doomguy to be in the show, he’ll take care of it.
ye no shit lol
2:18 a lot of the shown characters in this opening are relevant to the episode, they come later I think
Sins Anim: "I'm right, you're wrong."
Hazbin: "No! I am. You are just worthless."
Mortal combat: "Counter! Counter! Counter! Counter!"
9:54 **Sigh** I guess some people just don't understand hard work. To think I was actually about to trust you animation sins.
(Joke)
Prepare for the dislike wave of middle schoolers
Yessir
People just can't take opinions I guess.
I have no idea what this is someone explain please
@@Thaetaa-Terraainn watch it then you'll get it
Yup, Middle Schoolers Will Be Like
“I HATE YOU”
Genuinely, I love animation sins.
But if you come and dare judging a project that's been in planning for YEARS with a massive team of animators of all different styles, characters that show up in the pilot for later videos of the same series, or about characters being a certain way, then you lost me there.
Vivziepop puts so much work into this while a channel like yours gives them shit.
Come on, if you think you can do way better than what she did, I dare you to REANIMATE THIS WHOLE PILOT and then we'll see.
Because nothing has not a single problem. This is one of the animations that I really love, just because it is so damn well done for the length of the video and the storyline. So don't give it shit when you don't even really know about future plans.
This is criticism,not giving Vivziepop shit,Animation Sins is genuinely pointing out animation flawed,it's doesn't matter how hard you work on something,you can't expect people to treat it like it's perfect when it's not.And about the re animate part,Animation Sins is a critic,not a animator,his job is to give criticized animation,not creating animations
@@LolLol-qt4jt
Animation sins isn't a critic, more like a shitty cube animator.
I also hate how they are also sinning the art style
6:36 honestly I actually like when eyes and eyebrows go over eyes. It can just make for some pretty cool art styles
How about you try to animate a pilot.
I really liked the pilot and i hope they see this and fix the problems in later episodes
I hope so too.
Reminder this is only the pilot and every animation has a certain budget. The crew hired more animators recently for their music video which I'd love for you go over sometime soon! Like seriously the animation has improved immensely! The camera movement is my favorite part! I think the lack of camera movement was my main problem with the pilot. Hopefully the shows animation will be just as good as the music vid!
Oh Also Steven universe has a lot of inconsistencies when it comes to it's animation.Take peridot for example, her size difference fluctuates throughout the show due to the amount of story boarders. Of course Charlie's inconsistencies are back to back so it is a different situation, but honestly it's so small it's barely noticeable for an average viewer that doesn't dedicate their time studying animation. Sorry for the long sentence 😅
@@Smal.lilpip You're gonna compare am actually decent pilot to Steven Universe? Plus we've gotten lower budgets and gotten alot better products. Take Mods for example. Another thing is that Viz is a professional animator, so the lazy gif of a guy running shouldn't have been an issue at all. AND the consistency.
As much as i love this pilot, i will admit that it does have its issues. I fully understand why some people don't like it. Personally, I really hope it gets turned into a full on series, and that it is actually good and doesn't get ruined by censors/executives
Animation sins: Everything wrong with hazbin-
Everybody with a brain: *H E L L N O .*
*every blind fanboy who hates on anyone that criticises their favorite animation
@@uncommonsaucers2355 oh I’m sorry are you any different?
How can he think of 4 drug shop names, but i can't even think of a name for anything?
I know right, I have trouble coming up with one single name
And we never got part 2 lmao
Honestly, the *only* part I had a problem with, was when you added the style switch counter, keep in mind it was a "slightly random" grouping of animators and people working on the project, and was done with absoultely 0 studio behind it to help keep things a bit more cohesive with people being able to spend more time matching style, as this was not their "full time job" initially, and until it was out, for the amount of people that helped, they didnt get enough I felt to be able to ditch their jobs for it, so it really is understandable that some of them might rush and their own style slips out a lot
Addon Edit: (NOT Hating, still even gave the vid a like, as I love cinima cins and this is great as I love hazbin as well, its good for what it is, and for casual viewing is amazing, and with all the story being pre planned I have a **LOT** of hope for it, especially if a studio or someone grabs it up and lets viv have full control still but just giving her more resources for a better show [with adult themes it has, half hoping Adult Swim grabs it, they seem to understand letting the creator do their thing])
EditEdit: Also, earned a sub for this vid alone so far!
Alright i can emphasize with some of this, im not a hater saying this just cause its negative about hazbin. the tips are good but just,
*why all the aggression man*
Constructive criticism
@@parafaust6201 sinning them for referencing another show is constructive criticism?
I need just the clip of the scream from the neck comment on Angel, that was hilarious and I would love to use it for an edit or two later on
5:38 aww, he cares
People have to realise that this is a critique and it's designed to improve on the creator. NOT to put hate on the creator
@@barrybreadson2146 speak for yourself this shit was hilarious
This is like being offended by cards against humanity
This is the best comment
OKAY I AM NOT GOING TO JUST SIT HERE AND LET YOU TRASH TALK HAZBIN HOTEL
I understand nitpicking things like this and this will probably help Vizie pick out problems for her actual series if it comes through, but this IS a pilot episode. It’s meant to set things up, make a premise, and show what COULD become a polished series. If you watch some behind the scenes stuff (which I highly recommend because they’re hilarious) you will learn that originally this concept and story was a total fucking train wreck because of the people Vizie worked with, but because she loved the characters and premise so much she went forward and made a product anyway. This is an amazing animation and will always be a monumental moment for me, and even though there are mistakes I still love it to pieces.
9:12 where is Angels arm?
Me: i respect your opinion
The fandom: *you have provoked a gang war*
Why even bother with the sin counter. They are literally in Hell lol
8:55 ah yes, angle dust
Do people turn on notifications just to dislike because the premiere just started and theres 7 dislikes
They are disliking because this guy doesn't have the same opinion.
@@twist_ending7545 some people just don't understand how like/dislike system works. For example, someone can dislike this video because they don't like Hazbin or smth. Yes, it could be "super-duper-protectors" but that's not necessary.
1:35 exposition? It's a song from the 1910's. Lol
5:42 - Damn, if I had a nickel for every time a crying female character with red makeup spots on her cheeks was the daughter of someone important to the franchise, I would have two nickels, which isn't much, but it *is* weird it happened twice.
I dunno, these criticisms feel subjective, like, it's all opinions, just respect the creator's style choices :Y
On your 2nd sin the demon is from one of her other animations that she did a long time ago
"It never shows up again"
*shows up again 2 seconds later*
Like, Jesus, why would so many people dislike this? As an animator (a bad one) you shouldn’t get so angry when someone constructively criticizes something else.
Subscribed to you for your objectively correct opinions. Give this man more likes.
4:11
They guy: no arts should waste there time to be in a shot for 3 seconds
Me: so.....you dont wont detail
As an animator, You want everything to be visually clear its hard to look at lots of details in only a fee frames will confuse the viewers. It needs to be clear so we can process what’s going on.
1:47 I guess japan sank into the sea
so does new zealand
And when Angel was pointing Travis in the other side, only his glove 🧤 appears, but not his arm on the top!!!
How did I fucking miss this!?
THE KING HAS RETURNED!
No but seriously, I've been a fan since 2018! Great content man!
how are you gonna make a sin for a art piece that was too good to be in the background and make a sin because it was just a background piece ( 4:10 )
I can only focus on the face Vox is making in this frame
Honestly in my opinion i really enjoyed Hazbin Hotel mainly because of the humor and the quality animation. Although there are some mistakes in the animation that aren’t visible to the viewers eye, i agree that no animation is perfect and will probably never be perfect. But the only thing id disagree on is in 9:55 which was highly uncawed for. But it is just an opinion ontop of an opinion.
Alot of sins. It makes sense because they are in hell.
we are still waiting for a part 2
This channel is like the equivalent of the phrase “bro… stfu”
Ya know what…I can’t watch this anymore…these types of animation took love and time! If ya wanna give your opinion that’s fine but at least say 1 good thing about it…it doesn’t seem like it’s fun or informative at all. Some parts of this animation actually commit to the story ya know? I would very much appreciate it if you start to understand their work and try to give a few nice things about it. Hate me all ya want, but this is my opinion. Thank you.
I don't agree with what you said about the story, but I do with the constant switching of styles between smooth coloured lines and sharp black ones.
When you're not watching one of these videos. You find things perfect, then you realize and can't unseen the flaws, or sins.