Galactic Council Tortured Human Child So We Burned Their Worlds | Sci-Fi Reddit

[@WilliamCairnes-fi2po]

Sorry, your "asterisks" killed it for me. I couldn't even finish. Does no one edit these things?

[@MarthaPearce-f6k]

Same.... I didn't even get past the first set.

[@stevewhite-ko4zj]

Agreed..

[@raytaylor2342]

Your story jumped around and repeated events. Also I noticed that the Dad kind of disappeared from the second half of the story. Umm. Kind of bad. Maybe proof read next time?