0:15-0:17 more hip movement for miniskirt, and movements on the beat after “miniskirt” and “pretty pink” can be sharper 0:25 not sure if Kyra is supposed to be turning in at the same time as Kyla and Emily or after but it looks unclear so make the timing/movement more purposeful 0:28 set how hands should be on the hips (ik kiof does different hands but setting this would look more uniform) 0:31 for the tummy move, drag out the second “ha” more and set circle size and where the hand should end (should be pretty much above the hip) 0:35 i think you guys can be more loose / add more sass here 0:39 Emily make sure to turn your head back 0:43 hips/leg stance should go right first then left for “cash in” 0:45 Emily arms up on “whether” (just a tad late here) 1:00 Emily and Kyra can open arms bigger before the clap (reference Kyla and Sammy) 1:02 texture for arms coming down should be harder on the beat and match timing of the arms coming down 1:05 there should be two moves on “bitter” just like on “venom” 1:09-1:12 again match hands on hips, match circle size, and ending point of the hand 1:20 kyla can orient body more side so she is looking at front instead of the side 1:21 Sammy hold pose with everyone before moving position 1:23 Position here can be closer together & should be a diagonal with Sammy right behind Kyla 1:26 Emily can be positioned more at an angle 1:26 Sammy and Emily go over the move here with timing 1:27 make sure to look at your hand with arm swing here 1:28 make sure to also look at your hand with arm swing here too (everyone) 1:33 Emily and Sammy should be still facing the back here 1:34 Kyla should also jump to face middle towards Kyra 1:39 Adjust position here Kyla can be closer to Emily 1:41 Kyla make sure to keep angle position until next move 1:43 Kyla and Kyra should be in a semi-squad towards Emily + Sammy needs to be position so hips is towards Emily but face is looking to make vs the way she is standing right now 1:50 Kyla can be closer in position wise 2:01-2:02 Sammy don't rush the sequence here 2:04 Make sure everyone here is crossing arms in front as an X 2:06 Kyla make sure leg is coming out to the side here 2:06-2:08 go over timing of when you are going to lift and drop leg timing, a little different between everyone 2:06 arms should point up as an X and then come out straight to the sides instead of from the body 2:08 move here should be a transfer of balance like how Kyla does it instead of being straight up 2:09 watch timing here of the initiation 2:13 the arms hits should match with the snare drums in the background noise, I think right now they are initiating and ending too early 2:14 Sammy hitting too early it should be up and then down here 2:16 set a timing for when you guys will grab the sunglasses 2:17 Sammy and Kyla make sure your fingers are out when grabbing glasses like Kyra and Emily
0:15 kyla u can turn ur head slower / up (told u in person) 0:22 Emily hand / fingers can be lower 0:26 Emily ur Landing on be instead of cause (ur prob getting used to the timing) 0:30 Kyra u can be more out 0:32 kyla do the head tilt for "i can melt an igloo" specifically for the right side U also missed the second hip hit 0:36 Emily u can be less upright + looking back 0:40 sam wrong knees + Emily during "for" head can be tilted more towards center 0:44 Emily bring hand up faster for 'whether' 0:50 Emily knee up move can be bigger / clearer timing O:55 to 0:59 Kyra wrong foot, left foot for regular, and wassup left foot should be up 1:00 kyla head can be bigger for the first three moves 1:01 Kyra explosion hands can be higher up Kyla neutral body position 1:05 i can't tell if it's bc of camera angle but Kyra try to keep chest forward but gaze to the side 1:09 Kyra touch body / hand placement 1:15 turn on hot instead of dang 1:40 Emily kinda cut off the hand swipey move so looks like ur rushing 1:42 kyla look out and then in when doing the body orientation move 2:04 kyla arms and legs after the clap 2:08 the grabby move, specially the second one remember to still pump in after grabbing (when we do the head nod) Emily elbows can be down, they're parallel to the floor rn 2:10 Kyra dont turn wrist for the nae nae part 2:11 kyla more head for walky nae nae part 2:12 kyla the hand shaky shimmy b4 the clap xan be bigger 2:15 kyla and Kyra forgot to touch hip b4 grabbing glasses
0:15-0:17 more hip movement for miniskirt, and movements on the beat after “miniskirt” and “pretty pink” can be sharper
0:25 not sure if Kyra is supposed to be turning in at the same time as Kyla and Emily or after but it looks unclear so make the timing/movement more purposeful
0:28 set how hands should be on the hips (ik kiof does different hands but setting this would look more uniform)
0:31 for the tummy move, drag out the second “ha” more and set circle size and where the hand should end (should be pretty much above the hip)
0:35 i think you guys can be more loose / add more sass here
0:39 Emily make sure to turn your head back
0:43 hips/leg stance should go right first then left for “cash in”
0:45 Emily arms up on “whether” (just a tad late here)
1:00 Emily and Kyra can open arms bigger before the clap (reference Kyla and Sammy)
1:02 texture for arms coming down should be harder on the beat and match timing of the arms coming down
1:05 there should be two moves on “bitter” just like on “venom”
1:09-1:12 again match hands on hips, match circle size, and ending point of the hand
1:20 kyla can orient body more side so she is looking at front instead of the side
1:21 Sammy hold pose with everyone before moving position
1:23 Position here can be closer together & should be a diagonal with Sammy right behind Kyla
1:26 Emily can be positioned more at an angle
1:26 Sammy and Emily go over the move here with timing
1:27 make sure to look at your hand with arm swing here
1:28 make sure to also look at your hand with arm swing here too (everyone)
1:33 Emily and Sammy should be still facing the back here
1:34 Kyla should also jump to face middle towards Kyra
1:39 Adjust position here Kyla can be closer to Emily
1:41 Kyla make sure to keep angle position until next move
1:43 Kyla and Kyra should be in a semi-squad towards Emily + Sammy needs to be position so hips is towards Emily but face is looking to make vs the way she is standing right now
1:50 Kyla can be closer in position wise
2:01-2:02 Sammy don't rush the sequence here
2:04 Make sure everyone here is crossing arms in front as an X
2:06 Kyla make sure leg is coming out to the side here
2:06-2:08 go over timing of when you are going to lift and drop leg timing, a little different between everyone
2:06 arms should point up as an X and then come out straight to the sides instead of from the body
2:08 move here should be a transfer of balance like how Kyla does it instead of being straight up
2:09 watch timing here of the initiation
2:13 the arms hits should match with the snare drums in the background noise, I think right now they are initiating and ending too early
2:14 Sammy hitting too early it should be up and then down here
2:16 set a timing for when you guys will grab the sunglasses
2:17 Sammy and Kyla make sure your fingers are out when grabbing glasses like Kyra and Emily
0:15 kyla u can turn ur head slower / up (told u in person)
0:22 Emily hand / fingers can be lower
0:26 Emily ur Landing on be instead of cause (ur prob getting used to the timing)
0:30 Kyra u can be more out
0:32 kyla do the head tilt for "i can melt an igloo" specifically for the right side
U also missed the second hip hit
0:36 Emily u can be less upright + looking back
0:40 sam wrong knees + Emily during "for" head can be tilted more towards center
0:44 Emily bring hand up faster for 'whether'
0:50 Emily knee up move can be bigger / clearer timing
O:55 to 0:59 Kyra wrong foot, left foot for regular, and wassup left foot should be up
1:00 kyla head can be bigger for the first three moves
1:01 Kyra explosion hands can be higher up
Kyla neutral body position
1:05 i can't tell if it's bc of camera angle but Kyra try to keep chest forward but gaze to the side
1:09 Kyra touch body / hand placement
1:15 turn on hot instead of dang
1:40 Emily kinda cut off the hand swipey move so looks like ur rushing
1:42 kyla look out and then in when doing the body orientation move
2:04 kyla arms and legs after the clap
2:08 the grabby move, specially the second one remember to still pump in after grabbing (when we do the head nod)
Emily elbows can be down, they're parallel to the floor rn
2:10 Kyra dont turn wrist for the nae nae part
2:11 kyla more head for walky nae nae part
2:12 kyla the hand shaky shimmy b4 the clap xan be bigger
2:15 kyla and Kyra forgot to touch hip b4 grabbing glasses
Arm during ass part can be fixed, fix ending