My goodness!! This is quite well done! And I do not say that often about fandubs. Your acting range is impressive to be sure, I didn't quite realize it was you doing everything until I checked the description. The audio quality was clear and crisp throughout (the exception being Margaret, but that was more to do with the actress's recording space and/or mic quality and there's not much you can do with that) though I would personally suggest adding something to distinguish narration from dialogue when it's the same voice -- a slight reverb is a common method for this, as well as establishing thoughts. Your enunciation was impeccable, even with all the different accents and twangs being thrown around - and kudos to you as well for the variation. Really gives the cast a diverse feel and the whole thing an atmosphere of a place that's full of travelers. Though, perhaps consider when voices ought to be muffled instead of clear, for example: 4:47 when Steban's hat is over his face, I personally would have made it a bit muffled (a simple high pass filter with the highest 2-3 frequency ranges lowered). If done correctly, it sounds more accurate and adds a touch of comedy in and of itself. The pacing of the dialogue is a touch slow but that's coming more from a film-based (I.e. realtime flow of conversation) standpoint. In the context of an audio book, however, it's practically perfect! If you were going for the latter, awesome job! x3 I also enjoyed how you did the sound mix. You went with a more minimal approach to sfx (compared to realistic/film quality wherein everything that moves makes a sound) but that makes the sfx that were utilized more poignant. You did a great job combining the air swooshes with their subsequent collision sounds, in particular. Given the nature of this comic, I'd recommend looking to expand your collection of footsteps sfx - find some good footsteps on wood if you can, and some on dirt/grass/gravel as well so you can have plenty of variation. Scuffs/shuffling are good to have, too. Just make sure they sound like they're made with bare feet - if there was a shoe on while they were being recorded, it'll be obvious and it will *not* sound like pawsteps. Again, this was awesome and really well done! I look forward to seeing more! :3
oooo thanks for all this feedback! It's not often I get such a detailed response, and when I do, I really REALLY appreciate it :). I've seen your OMFA dubs and they're awesome! I'm glad you took the time to watch mine!! Yeah, this comic was a blast to read through and the story is fast paced and strong, so it was easy to find voices for almost all the characters (with Steban being an exception... Differentiating him from Martin was too difficult for me.) It didn't cross my mind to high pass him with the hat on his face xD I don't think that I'd do reverb on the narration, but instead I try to read it differently than the lines. Totally understand on the thoughts though! In retrospect, I did in fact move it a bit slow! Pacing during a lot of narration is difficult for me, whereas during action scenes I try to make it SFX driven, which usually works well. For SFX I have an absolute TON at my disposal, so it's more of a balancing act of where and how to add it, vs how much time I want to spend lol. I think of these voice projects in layers... The base layer is the comic itself, then the quality of the voice acting, then music, then pacing, then sfx, then adding motion to the comic. The best comic dub projects nail ALL that stuff, but when I'm crunched on time, I forego some of the top layers ;) Again, thanks for watching and I'm glad you liked it! It was a blast to make! :)
Oml OMFA is so old.... for both me and Skailla at this point, I think :') I've gotten so much better since then... film school helped. A lot. When I'm considering how to alter a line or an effect to fit the environment, I think of how it would sound in real life. Though I'm w/ you on the SFX thing. I hoard stock effects and music so even when I don't have active access to an online stock library, I've got my own personal one saved on three different drives :'D The more you do it, the faster you'll get, and the easier it'll be to get all of the layers done. My workflow is ordered differently than the one you described but I can bang out a 30-60sec dub in about 2 hours or less, just as good of quality as one of my larger ones that I spend days on. ...Don't ask how cos I have *noooooo* idea.
I would love to one day voice a female character. It’s my dream to become an “actress”. Even just a voice actress. This is an awesome comic! Can’t wait for part 2!
Funny how it's a dog's world with things sized for humans. They couldn't have built much with dog paws! But it's just a story - a beautifully-drawn enjoyable little escape. Awesome!
Dude, this was dope, and I HATE using that word, so that IS saying something! As a huge fan of Skailla, her artwork, comics, and stories, this was a true dream come true! Thank you so much, and you've earned yourself a subscriber!
Brilliant voice acting. What I strive to do....at some point. I love your amazing range of voices! It might be a late comment but keep up the grate work!
awesome Nate, you always do such a fantastic job with your dubs and I love hearing the passion you put into every line with your voice, really hope you continue with the rest of the comic! :)
Thank you so much Drew!! I did indeed enjoy voicing these first 15 pages - 'twas terrific fun!! I'd love to keep going and I intend to do so, but I need more VAs... VAs like you ;)
I love your work dude p, I alway had a nice place for western style adventures in my heart and I hope to see a animated and computer editor like you someday.
Finished advertising you across 70 amino. Haha. About 20 likes on average per amino. I dunno how many views that registered on RUclips probably a couple hundred but maybe it'll help the stats
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This comic deserves to be a movie
Yes! And video game and book and EVERYTHING!
ikr
Oi amor 💓😘
It is already in the book .
@@davidlz830 it is in a book
Witch the book is a comic book OK.
Your voice sounds so professional it makes me feel like I'm watching a movie, awesome dub for an amazing artist!
The voices belong to dumpster...but the artist who make thes is Raquel Simoso [Skailla]
Fredrick), Hi martin
"WHAT IN THE CAT-CRAP HAPPENED HERE? I LEAVE FOR 3 MINUTES AND THIS PLACE IS TORN TO PIECES!"
That's my favorite part.
Haha, same!
Haha that's funny lol
"did you called me country sided butt!?" 😂😂
My goodness!! This is quite well done! And I do not say that often about fandubs.
Your acting range is impressive to be sure, I didn't quite realize it was you doing everything until I checked the description. The audio quality was clear and crisp throughout (the exception being Margaret, but that was more to do with the actress's recording space and/or mic quality and there's not much you can do with that) though I would personally suggest adding something to distinguish narration from dialogue when it's the same voice -- a slight reverb is a common method for this, as well as establishing thoughts. Your enunciation was impeccable, even with all the different accents and twangs being thrown around - and kudos to you as well for the variation. Really gives the cast a diverse feel and the whole thing an atmosphere of a place that's full of travelers. Though, perhaps consider when voices ought to be muffled instead of clear, for example: 4:47 when Steban's hat is over his face, I personally would have made it a bit muffled (a simple high pass filter with the highest 2-3 frequency ranges lowered). If done correctly, it sounds more accurate and adds a touch of comedy in and of itself.
The pacing of the dialogue is a touch slow but that's coming more from a film-based (I.e. realtime flow of conversation) standpoint. In the context of an audio book, however, it's practically perfect! If you were going for the latter, awesome job! x3
I also enjoyed how you did the sound mix. You went with a more minimal approach to sfx (compared to realistic/film quality wherein everything that moves makes a sound) but that makes the sfx that were utilized more poignant. You did a great job combining the air swooshes with their subsequent collision sounds, in particular.
Given the nature of this comic, I'd recommend looking to expand your collection of footsteps sfx - find some good footsteps on wood if you can, and some on dirt/grass/gravel as well so you can have plenty of variation. Scuffs/shuffling are good to have, too. Just make sure they sound like they're made with bare feet - if there was a shoe on while they were being recorded, it'll be obvious and it will *not* sound like pawsteps.
Again, this was awesome and really well done! I look forward to seeing more! :3
oooo thanks for all this feedback! It's not often I get such a detailed response, and when I do, I really REALLY appreciate it :). I've seen your OMFA dubs and they're awesome! I'm glad you took the time to watch mine!!
Yeah, this comic was a blast to read through and the story is fast paced and strong, so it was easy to find voices for almost all the characters (with Steban being an exception... Differentiating him from Martin was too difficult for me.) It didn't cross my mind to high pass him with the hat on his face xD
I don't think that I'd do reverb on the narration, but instead I try to read it differently than the lines. Totally understand on the thoughts though!
In retrospect, I did in fact move it a bit slow! Pacing during a lot of narration is difficult for me, whereas during action scenes I try to make it SFX driven, which usually works well.
For SFX I have an absolute TON at my disposal, so it's more of a balancing act of where and how to add it, vs how much time I want to spend lol. I think of these voice projects in layers... The base layer is the comic itself, then the quality of the voice acting, then music, then pacing, then sfx, then adding motion to the comic. The best comic dub projects nail ALL that stuff, but when I'm crunched on time, I forego some of the top layers ;)
Again, thanks for watching and I'm glad you liked it! It was a blast to make! :)
Oml OMFA is so old.... for both me and Skailla at this point, I think :') I've gotten so much better since then... film school helped. A lot. When I'm considering how to alter a line or an effect to fit the environment, I think of how it would sound in real life.
Though I'm w/ you on the SFX thing. I hoard stock effects and music so even when I don't have active access to an online stock library, I've got my own personal one saved on three different drives :'D
The more you do it, the faster you'll get, and the easier it'll be to get all of the layers done. My workflow is ordered differently than the one you described but I can bang out a 30-60sec dub in about 2 hours or less, just as good of quality as one of my larger ones that I spend days on. ...Don't ask how cos I have *noooooo* idea.
Wow such paragraph! :D
So LoNg I couldn’t finish
@@Riff88 what a huge comment
That's how I Imagined Martin's voice!
xCaramelCookiex SAME DUDE!!!!!!
Same, something around that ;w;
Margaret's voice is spot on! My favorite right away.
loved your dub i think martins voice matches his character to a tee.
FINALLY THE COMIC THAT DOES VOICE ACTING also i love this
I would love to one day voice a female character. It’s my dream to become an “actress”. Even just a voice actress. This is an awesome comic! Can’t wait for part 2!
AHHHH that was GREAT! The voices and acting were splendid! And I really dug the sound effects you added in. Added a real nice touch to it.
That was great, love how you were able to express the characters.
Funny how it's a dog's world with things sized for humans. They couldn't have built much with dog paws! But it's just a story - a beautifully-drawn enjoyable little escape. Awesome!
This is probably the best fandub I've seen, Excellent job!
Awww that turned out quite fun! Glad I could help you out with this fun project
You were absolutely amazing!! Thank you so much for being a part of this!!
XD It seems that a Marshmalo N'Cocoa Helped out! Nice bud!
@@Skailla omg. Skaila i am a big fan. !!!!! I love you so much ❤❤❤❤❤
@@tamNguyen-dq6yw your name XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
That was an amazing fandub. The characters are amazing. The animation is spot on. Can't wait for part 2
Dude, this was dope, and I HATE using that word, so that IS saying something!
As a huge fan of Skailla, her artwork, comics, and stories, this was a true dream come true!
Thank you so much, and you've earned yourself a subscriber!
Whats wrong with dope?-
Steban kind of looks like Charlie from All Dogs Go to Heaven.
He does!
OMG THIS WAS INCREDIBLY WELL DONE! This is the best fandub I've see. Or heard, in awhile.
this is great can't wait for the rest the voices are great
It's wanderfull this animation is wery well and the voice is perfect. Really honestly congratulates.
It is just a comics dubbing. I know Skailla did an animation clip for a song but this is not animation but comic book.
Nice work! Really well read- I was captivated! Cant wait till the next one!
Brilliant voice acting. What I strive to do....at some point. I love your amazing range of voices! It might be a late comment but keep up the grate work!
awesome Nate, you always do such a fantastic job with your dubs and I love hearing the passion you put into every line with your voice, really hope you continue with the rest of the comic! :)
Thank you so much Drew!! I did indeed enjoy voicing these first 15 pages - 'twas terrific fun!! I'd love to keep going and I intend to do so, but I need more VAs... VAs like you ;)
RiffDumpster88 Well partner, I'm a little dusty and washed up but still in the fold if your needing some help going forward *tips hat* ;)
Perfect voices
Thank you for doing this! I was unable to buy the book, so I’m glad I got to read/listen to it anyways
This was AMAZTASTIC😃! I loved all the voices and the acting was phenomenal. Would love to work with you one day. Keep up the fabulous work my dude😎.
Can you make a part 2 & 3 of this video please
Amazing can't wait for more☺🐺
I love it! The voice acting is spectacular!
Woah. If the time spent on making animated series was spent on making professionally-dubbed comics... we'd have so many!
this was awesome, Great job!
Yes I finally get to see up and ahead this is a miracle
I'd love to try and audition! This is really well done.
Wow this was very well done! Bravo!
It's so awesome!
I love your work dude p, I alway had a nice place for western style adventures in my heart and I hope to see a animated and computer editor like you someday.
Oh my! This is amazing! 😍
I cant wait for the part 2
This comic is amazing so far! When will part 2 be posted?
Fox Plays it is already on Skailla's devisntart. How did you find this vid just wondering cause,views are coming like crazy now
Oh okay. and how I found this vid was I was looking at other videos based on this comic and found this.
Part 2 will be a while. I work 40+ hours a week and it takes a lot of time and energy to make a comic dub, so please hang in there ;)
RiffDumpster88 it’s been a year but......I NEEDS ITSSSS
Ok
4:00 the next mainstream meme
i love the story set up so far!
First omfa and now this!
Both cool though from what I know OMFA is unfinished
I found this cause there creator really liked it and posted a link.
Why cant this be a movieeeee😭
IF YOU THINK HIS JOKES ARE THAT BAD YOUR FAMILY MUST BE GARBAGE!
Chill, Shorty some people are jerks.
His name is Martin-
Nice! Glad it turned out so well!
Please 🙏 doooooo mooooore TwT this is amazing
Thank you for this man
The corgi’s voice actor is really good
can't wait for the next one
This is still great to watch :)
awesome awesome awesome
Finished advertising you across 70 amino. Haha. About 20 likes on average per amino. I dunno how many views that registered on RUclips probably a couple hundred but maybe it'll help the stats
I love it the voice is amazing.
Nice Comic, love the characters.
That's so greattt
Wow!! You are amazing!!😍🔥
Great work!!
Cool good job on the voices plz keep going
Great! :)
Stefan’s accent though XD
Riffdumpster88 plz make a part 2
!
well I hope we have more of these and more comics
So good voice!! 😍😩👌🏻❤️😂
Omg best voice auditions I have seen for up and ahead! I was thinking on doing one but I’m not sure do you have any tips for me I could use some!!😇👍
Sniff, sniff
I want moreeee
Welcome to no where son XD 2:36
This would actually make a great movie
Awsome comics
And cool dubbing
Why can't you finish making this yet?
Lol, it’s so good! 👏🏼
I love comics as well as normal books
And. I love learning and social skills.
When will the next episode come out?
It will be a while - I work over 40 hours a week and it takes a lot of time & energy to make these ;)
Uhhhh
wow that was amazing
I love it!!!😍
Part 2 part 2 part 2... Please?
Love it. :D
This seems very interesting to me
Awesome
Some studio needs to make a movie of this
My Adult Animation Studio Arctico Productions will be the place it's not established but it will be soon in 2026
You need to make part 2
This is so much better that reading
When’s part 2 coming out?
Unfortunately there probably won't be a part 2 :'( sorry!
RiffDumpster88 awwww. It’s so good.
Omg I love it
Martin Bennet you were In gold marrow
The whole time.
I was wondering if I could voice one of the other characters later after pages 16 but I don't even have a mic.......
Can you please make a part 2 please
Cool
Good comics and dubbing
Guys, where can i read this? Is it even out?
Can you do a #2 Please
Wow this is my new disney favorite :v
Donde lo puedo encontrar en español?
Excuse Mr riffdumpster can you make a up and a head part 2 one day
Not bad, I like
Will you make a up and ahead part 2 please
Maybe one day I will, but it takes a lot of work ;)
What's part 2 out 😂?
IM IN LOVE YOU DID A GOOD
How do dogs build buildings.
Their specialty is ROOFing. Get it... Roofing :DDDDD