Up and Ahead Comic Fandub - Part 1 (Pages 1-15)

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  • Опубликовано: 12 янв 2018
  • Here it is!! The first 15 pages of my dub of Skailla's excellent "Up and Ahead" comic. I need a lot more voice actors to go on - hence why I stopped here! Look for a casting call soon. I'll be casting Steban to someone else, and possibly other main characters as well, caussseeee I can't handle all these dang voices xD.
    ENJOY!!
    Credits:
    Comic by Skailla skailla.deviantart.com/
    Margaret (Barkeeper/Owner) voiced by Marshmalo N'Cocoa / @marshmaloncocoa4613
    Martin, Steban, and all other characters voiced by Myself
    Video by me (4K heyoooo)
    Soundtrack by me, with help from
    Soundsnap.com, Incompetech.com, Sony & BBC Sound FX libraries
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  • @JordanARomo
    @JordanARomo 6 лет назад +119

    This comic deserves to be a movie

  • @Syrexii.108
    @Syrexii.108 5 лет назад +11

    "did you called me country sided butt!?" 😂😂

  • @Mad_Jax
    @Mad_Jax 6 лет назад +71

    Your voice sounds so professional it makes me feel like I'm watching a movie, awesome dub for an amazing artist!

    • @infinityqueenofwolves1132
      @infinityqueenofwolves1132 5 лет назад +5

      The voices belong to dumpster...but the artist who make thes is Raquel Simoso [Skailla]

    • @myoung352
      @myoung352 24 дня назад +1

      Fredrick), Hi martin

  • @kyrotic1162
    @kyrotic1162 6 лет назад +19

    "WHAT IN THE CAT-CRAP HAPPENED HERE? I LEAVE FOR 3 MINUTES AND THIS PLACE IS TORN TO PIECES!"
    That's my favorite part.

  • @WintermothStudios
    @WintermothStudios 6 лет назад +203

    My goodness!! This is quite well done! And I do not say that often about fandubs.
    Your acting range is impressive to be sure, I didn't quite realize it was you doing everything until I checked the description. The audio quality was clear and crisp throughout (the exception being Margaret, but that was more to do with the actress's recording space and/or mic quality and there's not much you can do with that) though I would personally suggest adding something to distinguish narration from dialogue when it's the same voice -- a slight reverb is a common method for this, as well as establishing thoughts. Your enunciation was impeccable, even with all the different accents and twangs being thrown around - and kudos to you as well for the variation. Really gives the cast a diverse feel and the whole thing an atmosphere of a place that's full of travelers. Though, perhaps consider when voices ought to be muffled instead of clear, for example: 4:47 when Steban's hat is over his face, I personally would have made it a bit muffled (a simple high pass filter with the highest 2-3 frequency ranges lowered). If done correctly, it sounds more accurate and adds a touch of comedy in and of itself.
    The pacing of the dialogue is a touch slow but that's coming more from a film-based (I.e. realtime flow of conversation) standpoint. In the context of an audio book, however, it's practically perfect! If you were going for the latter, awesome job! x3
    I also enjoyed how you did the sound mix. You went with a more minimal approach to sfx (compared to realistic/film quality wherein everything that moves makes a sound) but that makes the sfx that were utilized more poignant. You did a great job combining the air swooshes with their subsequent collision sounds, in particular.
    Given the nature of this comic, I'd recommend looking to expand your collection of footsteps sfx - find some good footsteps on wood if you can, and some on dirt/grass/gravel as well so you can have plenty of variation. Scuffs/shuffling are good to have, too. Just make sure they sound like they're made with bare feet - if there was a shoe on while they were being recorded, it'll be obvious and it will *not* sound like pawsteps.
    Again, this was awesome and really well done! I look forward to seeing more! :3

    • @Riff88
      @Riff88  6 лет назад +11

      oooo thanks for all this feedback! It's not often I get such a detailed response, and when I do, I really REALLY appreciate it :). I've seen your OMFA dubs and they're awesome! I'm glad you took the time to watch mine!!
      Yeah, this comic was a blast to read through and the story is fast paced and strong, so it was easy to find voices for almost all the characters (with Steban being an exception... Differentiating him from Martin was too difficult for me.) It didn't cross my mind to high pass him with the hat on his face xD
      I don't think that I'd do reverb on the narration, but instead I try to read it differently than the lines. Totally understand on the thoughts though!
      In retrospect, I did in fact move it a bit slow! Pacing during a lot of narration is difficult for me, whereas during action scenes I try to make it SFX driven, which usually works well.
      For SFX I have an absolute TON at my disposal, so it's more of a balancing act of where and how to add it, vs how much time I want to spend lol. I think of these voice projects in layers... The base layer is the comic itself, then the quality of the voice acting, then music, then pacing, then sfx, then adding motion to the comic. The best comic dub projects nail ALL that stuff, but when I'm crunched on time, I forego some of the top layers ;)
      Again, thanks for watching and I'm glad you liked it! It was a blast to make! :)

    • @WintermothStudios
      @WintermothStudios 6 лет назад +4

      Oml OMFA is so old.... for both me and Skailla at this point, I think :') I've gotten so much better since then... film school helped. A lot. When I'm considering how to alter a line or an effect to fit the environment, I think of how it would sound in real life.
      Though I'm w/ you on the SFX thing. I hoard stock effects and music so even when I don't have active access to an online stock library, I've got my own personal one saved on three different drives :'D
      The more you do it, the faster you'll get, and the easier it'll be to get all of the layers done. My workflow is ordered differently than the one you described but I can bang out a 30-60sec dub in about 2 hours or less, just as good of quality as one of my larger ones that I spend days on. ...Don't ask how cos I have *noooooo* idea.

    • @lordmegatron2559
      @lordmegatron2559 5 лет назад +1

      Wow such paragraph! :D

    • @jenniferarbour8597
      @jenniferarbour8597 4 года назад +2

      So LoNg I couldn’t finish

    • @gailbaskett812
      @gailbaskett812 3 года назад

      @@Riff88 what a huge comment

  • @brain-r0tten
    @brain-r0tten 6 лет назад +46

    That's how I Imagined Martin's voice!

    • @star_artz5158
      @star_artz5158 6 лет назад

      xCaramelCookiex SAME DUDE!!!!!!

    • @batgh0ul
      @batgh0ul 4 года назад

      Same, something around that ;w;

  • @GameOver-bd3my
    @GameOver-bd3my 4 года назад +18

    Steban kind of looks like Charlie from All Dogs Go to Heaven.

  • @wolfbomb873
    @wolfbomb873 6 лет назад +11

    loved your dub i think martins voice matches his character to a tee.

  • @VideoMatoran
    @VideoMatoran 6 лет назад +9

    Margaret's voice is spot on! My favorite right away.

  • @eko_vr
    @eko_vr 5 лет назад +7

    I would love to one day voice a female character. It’s my dream to become an “actress”. Even just a voice actress. This is an awesome comic! Can’t wait for part 2!

  • @GNHR-rm3el
    @GNHR-rm3el 4 года назад +6

    4:00 the next mainstream meme

  • @marshmaloncocoa4613
    @marshmaloncocoa4613 6 лет назад +35

    Awww that turned out quite fun! Glad I could help you out with this fun project

    • @Skailla
      @Skailla 6 лет назад +6

      You were absolutely amazing!! Thank you so much for being a part of this!!

    • @tamNguyen-dq6yw
      @tamNguyen-dq6yw 6 лет назад +1

      XD It seems that a Marshmalo N'Cocoa Helped out! Nice bud!

    • @burwolf5746
      @burwolf5746 3 года назад

      @@Skailla omg. Skaila i am a big fan. !!!!! I love you so much ❤❤❤❤❤

    • @burwolf5746
      @burwolf5746 3 года назад

      @@tamNguyen-dq6yw your name XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

  • @twocreateandmore
    @twocreateandmore 6 лет назад +16

    That was great, love how you were able to express the characters.

  • @cozmicdoodles7167
    @cozmicdoodles7167 6 лет назад +14

    AHHHH that was GREAT! The voices and acting were splendid! And I really dug the sound effects you added in. Added a real nice touch to it.

  • @sian186
    @sian186 6 лет назад +11

    This is probably the best fandub I've seen, Excellent job!

  • @waasstudiosenertainment9153
    @waasstudiosenertainment9153 5 лет назад +2

    That was an amazing fandub. The characters are amazing. The animation is spot on. Can't wait for part 2

  • @uniqueness3516
    @uniqueness3516 6 лет назад +6

    Dude, this was dope, and I HATE using that word, so that IS saying something!
    As a huge fan of Skailla, her artwork, comics, and stories, this was a true dream come true!
    Thank you so much, and you've earned yourself a subscriber!

  • @colsoull5194
    @colsoull5194 6 лет назад +2

    this is great can't wait for the rest the voices are great

  • @michellefugitt8326
    @michellefugitt8326 Год назад +1

    FINALLY THE COMIC THAT DOES VOICE ACTING also i love this

  • @bloodstainedfur
    @bloodstainedfur 6 лет назад +9

    awesome Nate, you always do such a fantastic job with your dubs and I love hearing the passion you put into every line with your voice, really hope you continue with the rest of the comic! :)

    • @Riff88
      @Riff88  6 лет назад +1

      Thank you so much Drew!! I did indeed enjoy voicing these first 15 pages - 'twas terrific fun!! I'd love to keep going and I intend to do so, but I need more VAs... VAs like you ;)

    • @bloodstainedfur
      @bloodstainedfur 6 лет назад +2

      RiffDumpster88 Well partner, I'm a little dusty and washed up but still in the fold if your needing some help going forward *tips hat* ;)

  • @abbieevans4148
    @abbieevans4148 6 лет назад +3

    Nice work! Really well read- I was captivated! Cant wait till the next one!

  • @dezzythegpig7915
    @dezzythegpig7915 6 лет назад +1

    OMG THIS WAS INCREDIBLY WELL DONE! This is the best fandub I've see. Or heard, in awhile.

  • @foxdraws0
    @foxdraws0 6 лет назад +66

    This comic is amazing so far! When will part 2 be posted?

    • @Lombarsi
      @Lombarsi 6 лет назад +6

      Fox Plays it is already on Skailla's devisntart. How did you find this vid just wondering cause,views are coming like crazy now

    • @foxdraws0
      @foxdraws0 6 лет назад +5

      Oh okay. and how I found this vid was I was looking at other videos based on this comic and found this.

    • @Riff88
      @Riff88  6 лет назад +17

      Part 2 will be a while. I work 40+ hours a week and it takes a lot of time and energy to make a comic dub, so please hang in there ;)

    • @justchickennugz7679
      @justchickennugz7679 5 лет назад +5

      RiffDumpster88 it’s been a year but......I NEEDS ITSSSS

    • @gailbaskett812
      @gailbaskett812 3 года назад

      Ok

  • @CEOOfSeagulls
    @CEOOfSeagulls 6 лет назад +6

    Perfect voices

  • @dabbingraptor8815
    @dabbingraptor8815 6 лет назад +2

    I love it! The voice acting is spectacular!

  • @thornburntpaw
    @thornburntpaw 5 лет назад +1

    Brilliant voice acting. What I strive to do....at some point. I love your amazing range of voices! It might be a late comment but keep up the grate work!

  • @MorreskiBear
    @MorreskiBear 4 года назад

    Funny how it's a dog's world with things sized for humans. They couldn't have built much with dog paws! But it's just a story - a beautifully-drawn enjoyable little escape. Awesome!

  • @Burnt_Pancak3
    @Burnt_Pancak3 5 лет назад +3

    this was awesome, Great job!

  • @Neon-zq5of
    @Neon-zq5of 6 лет назад +11

    I found this cause there creator really liked it and posted a link.

  • @lombaxlover1234
    @lombaxlover1234 5 лет назад +2

    I cant wait for the part 2

  • @ajfire3263
    @ajfire3263 4 года назад

    Thank you for doing this! I was unable to buy the book, so I’m glad I got to read/listen to it anyways

  • @FfStar
    @FfStar 6 лет назад +4

    Nice! Glad it turned out so well!

  • @pirat1162
    @pirat1162 6 лет назад +6

    It's so awesome!

  • @onyx1329
    @onyx1329 5 лет назад +1

    Wow this was very well done! Bravo!

  • @xxalphawolfxx2875
    @xxalphawolfxx2875 6 лет назад +2

    Amazing can't wait for more☺🐺

  • @StefonTV1
    @StefonTV1 5 лет назад +1

    This was AMAZTASTIC😃! I loved all the voices and the acting was phenomenal. Would love to work with you one day. Keep up the fabulous work my dude😎.

  • @dlg.studios5649
    @dlg.studios5649 3 года назад +1

    Oh my! This is amazing! 😍

  • @bulldogermine4192
    @bulldogermine4192 5 лет назад

    i love the story set up so far!

  • @baltojackson9648
    @baltojackson9648 6 лет назад

    Yes I finally get to see up and ahead this is a miracle

  • @23gameoverlord
    @23gameoverlord 6 лет назад

    can't wait for the next one

  • @nopterachantanarungphak420
    @nopterachantanarungphak420 6 лет назад +1

    Welcome to no where son XD 2:36

  • @ponywhisp5787
    @ponywhisp5787 Год назад

    Please 🙏 doooooo mooooore TwT this is amazing

  • @partyzant1090
    @partyzant1090 2 года назад +1

    It's wanderfull this animation is wery well and the voice is perfect. Really honestly congratulates.

    • @karolinakuc4783
      @karolinakuc4783 2 года назад +1

      It is just a comics dubbing. I know Skailla did an animation clip for a song but this is not animation but comic book.

  • @stoddzart3899
    @stoddzart3899 5 лет назад +1

    I'd love to try and audition! This is really well done.

  • @CalebVA
    @CalebVA 4 года назад

    This is still great to watch :)

  • @swiss553R
    @swiss553R 5 лет назад

    Nice Comic, love the characters.

  • @aurorad6192
    @aurorad6192 3 года назад

    Thank you for this man

  • @filippopozzi6347
    @filippopozzi6347 6 лет назад +5

    Great! :)

  • @amberkeen5019
    @amberkeen5019 6 лет назад

    I love it the voice is amazing.

  • @roquiroquita
    @roquiroquita 6 лет назад +3

    Lol, it’s so good! 👏🏼

  • @batgh0ul
    @batgh0ul 4 года назад

    That's so greattt

  • @JCNUMBERand
    @JCNUMBERand 6 лет назад +17

    First omfa and now this!

    • @karolinakuc4783
      @karolinakuc4783 2 года назад +1

      Both cool though from what I know OMFA is unfinished

  • @Toucia
    @Toucia 6 лет назад +2

    Love it. :D

  • @Reofive
    @Reofive 5 лет назад

    Great work!!

  • @chisehatori4424
    @chisehatori4424 6 лет назад

    wow that was amazing

  • @Jarod-vg9wq
    @Jarod-vg9wq 6 лет назад +1

    I love your work dude p, I alway had a nice place for western style adventures in my heart and I hope to see a animated and computer editor like you someday.

  • @fannitrainedstars
    @fannitrainedstars 5 лет назад

    I love it!!!😍

  • @pietasofia5756
    @pietasofia5756 4 года назад +1

    Wow!! You are amazing!!😍🔥

  • @updog1785
    @updog1785 5 лет назад +2

    Stefan’s accent though XD

  • @bogikorpai
    @bogikorpai 5 лет назад +1

    So good voice!! 😍😩👌🏻❤️😂

  • @lilbrothermichael7777
    @lilbrothermichael7777 5 лет назад

    Cool good job on the voices plz keep going

  • @jessicapedley4082
    @jessicapedley4082 6 лет назад +2

    Awesome

  • @elishown4963
    @elishown4963 6 лет назад +1

    Omg best voice auditions I have seen for up and ahead! I was thinking on doing one but I’m not sure do you have any tips for me I could use some!!😇👍

  • @Krzeszny95
    @Krzeszny95 2 года назад

    Woah. If the time spent on making animated series was spent on making professionally-dubbed comics... we'd have so many!

  • @duckshoiii2578
    @duckshoiii2578 5 лет назад

    Omg I love it

  • @graceisokish
    @graceisokish 6 лет назад +7

    awesome awesome awesome

  • @justchickennugz7679
    @justchickennugz7679 5 лет назад +1

    Sniff, sniff
    I want moreeee

  • @aquiline-eagle9669
    @aquiline-eagle9669 5 лет назад +1

    The corgi’s voice actor is really good

  • @Lombarsi
    @Lombarsi 6 лет назад +3

    Finished advertising you across 70 amino. Haha. About 20 likes on average per amino. I dunno how many views that registered on RUclips probably a couple hundred but maybe it'll help the stats

  • @thehunter6105
    @thehunter6105 3 года назад +4

    Can you make a part 2 & 3 of this video please

  • @kingmarshallofthelightside8892
    @kingmarshallofthelightside8892 2 года назад

    Amazing

  • @seanbaskett5506
    @seanbaskett5506 3 года назад

    I love comics as well as normal books
    And. I love learning and social skills.

  • @johnthecyber-wolf3063
    @johnthecyber-wolf3063 4 года назад

    This seems very interesting to me

  • @karolinakuc4783
    @karolinakuc4783 Год назад

    Good comics and dubbing

  • @user-zg3ou2ie5s
    @user-zg3ou2ie5s 4 года назад +1

    Not bad, I like

  • @user-tc2lq1lb3i
    @user-tc2lq1lb3i 5 месяцев назад

    This would actually make a great movie

  • @WolffyTheWolf911
    @WolffyTheWolf911 6 лет назад

    IM IN LOVE YOU DID A GOOD

  • @karolinakuc4783
    @karolinakuc4783 2 года назад +1

    Awsome comics

  • @gilbertperea5853
    @gilbertperea5853 6 лет назад

    well I hope we have more of these and more comics

  • @lachlan_529
    @lachlan_529 6 лет назад

    Cool!

  • @deyagushee8829
    @deyagushee8829 5 лет назад

    Just asking but are you going to do the rest of the comic if it comes out? Or if it's already out. And good voice actors I think they fit the characters perfectly.

  • @anawolf1933
    @anawolf1933 6 лет назад +4

    Cool

  • @itsdandubs6789
    @itsdandubs6789 5 лет назад

    Wow this is my new disney favorite :v

  • @megan6003
    @megan6003 3 года назад +1

    Why cant this be a movieeeee😭

  • @beccabeanielovey3724
    @beccabeanielovey3724 3 года назад +2

    Riffdumpster88 plz make a part 2
    !

  • @cutegiflps3358
    @cutegiflps3358 5 лет назад

    Some studio needs to make a movie of this

    • @balto76bourque51
      @balto76bourque51 2 года назад

      My Adult Animation Studio Arctico Productions will be the place it's not established but it will be soon in 2026

  • @thunderwolf4584
    @thunderwolf4584 3 года назад

    This is so much better that reading

  • @warriorgaming6299
    @warriorgaming6299 4 года назад +1

    You need to make part 2

  • @jpndlr4342
    @jpndlr4342 4 года назад

    Waiting next part

  • @Oughuygjnm
    @Oughuygjnm 6 лет назад +1

    if raquel simoso do a animation movie, i think thesounds should be with these sounds

  • @silverstream1430
    @silverstream1430 6 лет назад

    this was posted on my birthday

  • @coltonbell3806
    @coltonbell3806 3 года назад +2

    IF YOU THINK HIS JOKES ARE THAT BAD YOUR FAMILY MUST BE GARBAGE!
    Chill, Shorty some people are jerks.

  • @lexxaranda9590
    @lexxaranda9590 5 лет назад +3

    Part 2 part 2 part 2... Please?

  • @mikerice2227
    @mikerice2227 6 лет назад +1

    COMIC WORK'S

  • @seanbaskett5506
    @seanbaskett5506 3 года назад

    Martin Bennet you were In gold marrow
    The whole time.

  • @peterrichard6635
    @peterrichard6635 4 года назад +1

    Can you please make a part 2 please

  • @Pommy4949
    @Pommy4949 3 года назад

    I love you Martin

  • @xpaulinex8159
    @xpaulinex8159 6 лет назад

    I was wondering if I could voice one of the other characters later after pages 16 but I don't even have a mic.......

  • @cathalmurphy5243
    @cathalmurphy5243 5 лет назад

    HEY WATCH THE LANGUAGE KIDS MIGHT BE WATCHING THIS! I still love it anyways

  • @coreysfoxart5154
    @coreysfoxart5154 6 лет назад +1

    I hated how Steban voice sounded I think they could have done better at choosing a better voice for him instead of that old western grandpa voice and instead would have chosen his voice to be like a real old western cowboy but out of everything in this video I got to say that it was pretty good but that I hope they change Stebans voice to a real cowboy voice and not the voice of a old cowboy