Editing My Query Letter & Sample Pages (AKA What Literary Agents Will Request) // Writing Experiment

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  • Опубликовано: 1 окт 2024

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  • @Dani_77709
    @Dani_77709 11 месяцев назад +16

    The longer the video goes, the more unhinged writer madness energy keeps building up and I never related so hard before.

  • @madisonthompson1
    @madisonthompson1 11 месяцев назад +13

    Good luck!! I've been in the query trenches twice now with two different manuscripts and just got signed by an agent a month ago for my YA fantasy! Just a heads up - don't worry too much about exactly where your sample pages end. I found out that it's not always exact if you're submitting on something like QueryTracker - there's actually a hidden word count so it will cut off at a point unbeknownst to you and the "10 pages" is just a rough estimate. Anyway thanks for posting, I love watching your videos!

  • @castle_novelist
    @castle_novelist 11 месяцев назад +7

    I rarely had a problem with naming characters, especially for minor ones since whatever name I think at the moment is what I write...I only take time with major characters' names.

  • @Dani_77709
    @Dani_77709 11 месяцев назад +8

    One thing I'm grateful for is that when it comes to character names I always know which letter I want it to start and how long it should be.
    It helps me narrow the process and if a name speaks to me I just go with it.
    Now for continent, town, city names this goes out of the window. It takes me hours to find the 'right' one (honestly this just means a name that doesn’t sound cringy).

    • @anthonyw2931
      @anthonyw2931 10 месяцев назад +1

      interesting. Does the character's personality and role matter in your naming? Coz to me that's where I blank out.

    • @Dani_77709
      @Dani_77709 10 месяцев назад +1

      @@anthonyw2931 The role never matters to me, but I do keep in mind their personality a little. Honestly when I look through names it's a gut feeling if the name is right or not. This is weird to admit but it's like the name itself brings out the personality the character has. If a name sounds right then I go with it.
      Also a guideline I have is that character names starting with letters K, R, Z, W, X, and sometimes even M, are either stoic, hot-headed, sassy/sarcastic, calculating ect. (Because the letter itself sounds like that, idk how to explain it. I saw a post about this very long time ago that explained it better, but I have no idea if I can ever find it)

    • @anthonyw2931
      @anthonyw2931 10 месяцев назад

      @@Dani_77709 hm. I'll have to try this. It makes sense. Thank you very much

  • @Cannibalable
    @Cannibalable 10 месяцев назад +3

    Your naming ordeal makes me wonder if DE stands for Didn't Entitle? 😉

  • @AdamFishkin
    @AdamFishkin 10 месяцев назад +2

    Knowing you've looked over a chapter at least 20 times and finding it difficult to reconcile with such big blind spots? That's a moment only a professional will feel. You're so far along that a facepalm isn't enough.

  • @TimRG
    @TimRG 10 месяцев назад +3

    I don't know how you wrote a full draft let alone multiple drafts without character names? I can't finish a draft without knowing all my character or location names. So cheer you got this far, but I'm still baffled.

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  10 месяцев назад +2

      😂 I don't know either

  • @TheAFriendlyGamer
    @TheAFriendlyGamer 10 месяцев назад +3

    How long did it take you to come up with a name for this video? lol But seriously, naming things is tough.

  • @lailapapas3111
    @lailapapas3111 10 месяцев назад +3

    As someone who names right away, I will say it is a power Lol! I tend to name everything before I start, but my problem is rarely being satisfied with names, so outlining takes a lot longer because of that. I also tend to write retellings and literary fiction often so that takes some burden off of naming, I can't imagine the stress of a high fantasy

  • @sarafreitas6988
    @sarafreitas6988 10 месяцев назад +1

    Next time you need to name characters, in less is something that needs to be meaningful, I usually just go to a name generator. I feel that even if it is a placeholder, and i will replace it later on, it takes away the mental load of having it on the back burner.

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  10 месяцев назад +2

      Oh that's a good idea!

  • @AngelT-zp5do
    @AngelT-zp5do 10 месяцев назад +1

    I thought I was bad at naming characters late

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  10 месяцев назад +1

      😂

    • @AngelT-zp5do
      @AngelT-zp5do 10 месяцев назад

      @@SaraLubratt how do you keep them straight without a name? I use asdfasdf_1 asdfasdf_2 ext, curious whst you use

  • @Ghostrob2023
    @Ghostrob2023 10 месяцев назад +1

    Good morning, Sara! 🌞This video was very interesting and inspiring to watch based on the info for writers who are just starting a Query letter. I'm sorry you had a hard time naming your characters and places within the story, but I'm glad that you had help with naming them from friends and your writing group. Have a lovely day and you look beautiful in the video. I had to say it! Anyway, good luck with sending out your Query letter and getting responses. ❤

  • @PeterMacansky
    @PeterMacansky 10 месяцев назад +1

  • @PeterMacansky
    @PeterMacansky 10 месяцев назад +1

  • @lajourdanne
    @lajourdanne 10 месяцев назад +1

    I always just borrow names from stories I like when writing then you can give them different names later. Saves a lot of time and anxiety in the end.

  • @fralou_sind_kreativ
    @fralou_sind_kreativ 10 месяцев назад +1

    Yeah, the names... I'm trying to make sure to have my characters name before I start writing as part of the planning process. Usually when figuring out the character arc names are popping up automatically. If not I'm trying to have them named right after I got the first draft done.
    When you're speaking about 50 pages, do you mean 50 pages in Microsoft Word? I always thought the page number is meant for standard book pages which would mean it's a lot less agents are actually going to read. Maybe I got that wrong?
    But, how great that you are so happy with where your books is standing right now!!! Wohooooo!
    Cheering you on for whatever you are doing next and sending you lots of love and creative vibes

  • @Pumpkinbeanlatte
    @Pumpkinbeanlatte 10 месяцев назад +1

    Naming characters and places is always the hardest thing for me!

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  10 месяцев назад

      Glad I’m not alone!

  • @alexis_askew
    @alexis_askew 8 месяцев назад

    The list getting longer and longer by the second had me crying XD. I rewrote my first chapter about a year ago and I had that same feeling, that it actually read like a book, and it's one of the best feelings ever.

  • @Dani_77709
    @Dani_77709 11 месяцев назад +1

    Ok I'm very curious how do you name your characters before their actual names. Is it Character A is running? Or do you have placeholder names?

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  11 месяцев назад +2

      Well, I needed to name a forest that has just been called "ancient forest" in the document, a kingdom that was in my document as "southern kingdom" and it's king "southern king" lol. For a while "OS" stood for older sister and "YS" was younger sister but those two got named in draft 2 or 3

  • @ananeu
    @ananeu 10 месяцев назад +2

    let the querying process begin! this gave me so much energy to edit my
    Novella! i wish you all the best with this project. 🤍

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  10 месяцев назад +1

      Not quite yet but it’s right around the corner! ❤️❤️❤️

  • @arzabael
    @arzabael 10 месяцев назад +1

    Someone said unhinged writer madness energy, in a good way, and all I can think is the world can miss me with it if it’s any other kind of energy 😊

    • @arzabael
      @arzabael 10 месяцев назад

      The red light 😂

  • @anthonyw2931
    @anthonyw2931 10 месяцев назад +1

    7:15: I got spun around so much that my head detached (gross, i know). And got hit with... "you did what?!?" moment; Ditching a concert (like it's no big deal) to go to a writing group to edit? Whoa... respect. Put that part on a poster (or t-shirt) with the word: Determination. Again, you go, girl!

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  10 месяцев назад +2

      Lol I should have rephrased that, I spent $40 on a ticket to a concert an hour away. I would have gone alone (which I’m totally fine with doing and have done before), but writing seemed more in line with my goals :)

    • @anthonyw2931
      @anthonyw2931 10 месяцев назад

      @@SaraLubratt still. Respect. Way to show and not tell. 🤪

  • @arzabael
    @arzabael 10 месяцев назад +1

    Oh… you didn’t… give too many characters names with the same ending did you? Everyone knows they all need to have different sounding names … 😂😂 jk. Ive never seen someone so stressed by names!

    • @SaraLubratt
      @SaraLubratt  10 месяцев назад +2

      No I didn’t but don’t do that to me! 😅

    • @arzabael
      @arzabael 10 месяцев назад

      @@SaraLubratt ahaha

  • @zodlord5669
    @zodlord5669 11 месяцев назад +1

    great job good luck