I’m one of the picky readers who read the first line and go, “Nope, not for me” and shut the book. Now that I’m a writer. Oh, god, it’s so hard to write a good first line, so now I understand the pain of all you good writers out there.
Off topic but absolutely love that bubblegum pink lipstick Rebecca has on! Looks so good on you!! ❤️❤️ thank you both for taking the time to make these they’re very informative
17:20 about m dashes. the thing she said to do to make them only worked in scrivener for me. I tired word and google docs too, is there a setting I need to change? I mostly write in scrivener so no big deal but it would be nice if it worked elsewhere.
Rebecca is amazing! I was watching a similar video doing the same kind of sentence breakdown, fustrated the hosts weren't. They were reading first 250 words but i was getting caught within first few lines haha. No where near as masterfully as her.
Hi Sir Martin and Ma'am Rebecca...Big Fan here from the Philippines! 😊 Happy Holidays to both of you! 🥳 I'm working on a story project now and just wondering how I can submit my first line to you and what are the requirements please? Hoping to hear from you soon...Thanks a lot and more power to you both and your channel!😊
I thought that there was an event brite done for these. They not using that anymore? Didn’t get to sub a line 😢 (Iheard him say he sent out email tho, seems I don’t have it)
Hi I follow Rebecca on Instagram and she put out a story to advertise it. If you’re not a social media user that won’t help of course. But hope it does
I get the joke about AI,,,, just btw, I lost my job to AI last month - I worked in a white-collar sweatshop work -at-home job, reading essays for college entrance exams...
Wait a minute, if the sky was colors that had never existed before, how would we be able to see them? Maybe, "... colors I had never seen before." Or, "... he had never seen before. "
I'm obsessed with first line frenzy videos. Honest feedback from a professional is invaluable 🙌
I’m one of the picky readers who read the first line and go, “Nope, not for me” and shut the book.
Now that I’m a writer. Oh, god, it’s so hard to write a good first line, so now I understand the pain of all you good writers out there.
Thank you Rebecca and Martin, these videos are great!
Off topic but absolutely love that bubblegum pink lipstick Rebecca has on! Looks so good on you!! ❤️❤️ thank you both for taking the time to make these they’re very informative
Thank you!! 🖤
Hi Everyone! Delighted I haven't misses this!
Very insightful high-level advice. I'm learning a lot. Thank you!
How can I submit for first line critique please?
Great presentation! I'm rewriting my first line. ---Helen from Fort Walton Beach. FL
This is so helpful. Thank you!
17:20 about m dashes. the thing she said to do to make them only worked in scrivener for me. I tired word and google docs too, is there a setting I need to change? I mostly write in scrivener so no big deal but it would be nice if it worked elsewhere.
Rebecca is amazing! I was watching a similar video doing the same kind of sentence breakdown, fustrated the hosts weren't. They were reading first 250 words but i was getting caught within first few lines haha. No where near as masterfully as her.
Woah! Exact thought about the metal bars just before she said it. Yes absolutely it should just have been about someone tied up.
Thank you from Thailand - nice stuff!
I would've liked this sentence: "That night he followed her as far as the abandoned Olive Garden."
Oh this was fun!
Hi Sir Martin and Ma'am Rebecca...Big Fan here from the Philippines! 😊 Happy Holidays to both of you! 🥳
I'm working on a story project now and just wondering how I can submit my first line to you and what are the requirements please?
Hoping to hear from you soon...Thanks a lot and more power to you both and your channel!😊
Wish you expanded on when it’s not fine to start a sentence with a gerund.
I thought that there was an event brite done for these. They not using that anymore? Didn’t get to sub a line 😢 (Iheard him say he sent out email tho, seems I don’t have it)
Hi
I follow Rebecca on Instagram and she put out a story to advertise it. If you’re not a social media user that won’t help of course. But hope it does
@@achatwithalex474 cheers for the suggestion :)
Once upon a time Ely James against motive, brains and expectations gets the Pulitzer! ;(_+_); = my first line of 70
I get the joke about AI,,,, just btw, I lost my job to AI last month - I worked in a white-collar sweatshop work -at-home job, reading essays for college entrance exams...
Wait a minute, if the sky was colors that had never existed before, how would we be able to see them? Maybe, "... colors I had never seen before." Or, "... he had never seen before. "
Nella, Toronto, hello!