I have to write my first descriptive essay for a college writing class, this video truly helped me understand how this type of essay works, thank you very much
Dr. Taylor: Thank you for the "real-world" examples. They will help my struggling high-schoolers understand that the truly do need to grasp this concept.
my teacher has asked me to write a descriptive essay on something i have experienced in the past but i am too afraid that the descriptive essay i'm trying to write will turn into a narrative one, how can i stay as descriptive as possible while not making it seem like a narrative? confusing...
+Git Gud Nub I understand your confusion. My best suggestion is for you to pick a place: a building, a beach, a monument, a painting. In other words, something specific and objective. Your goal is to paint a picture with words so that I can be there. Your goal is to give me the experience of being there.
Sir how can we divide descreptive essay paragraphs?can we do it according to the 5 sight techniques? 1st para on what we see. 2nd para on what we hear.
+PhantasmWolvez Huge difference. A narration tells a story--a series of events. A descriptive essay focuses on a single thing to build a dominant impression with words appealling to the six senses.
+PhantasmWolvez A narration can have moments of description in it--a description of a character, description of a setting, but they are inside the narration
Sure, you can describe anything. With Halloween, you need to choose something specific like children's costumes, the weather, candy or a haunted house.
That's great to hear, plane walker. Be sure to proofread carefully. The best way is to have someone else ready over your paper. Also use Microsoft Word's built-in proofreader--ruclips.net/video/IDdDSJ7kc9U/видео.html
Happy to help. The best way to proceed is for us to work on an actual assignment. Send me the assignment directions of an upcoming essay that you have to write. Let's spell two weeks getting it ready.
0:30 , that is the scariest thing ever XD
LOL. Agreed.
Hahhahahahahahahahaa
I have to write my first descriptive essay for a college writing class, this video truly helped me understand how this type of essay works, thank you very much
Dr. Taylor: Thank you for the "real-world" examples. They will help my struggling high-schoolers understand that the truly do need to grasp this concept.
Great to hear! Let me know anything else your students need!
I like that this video goes straight to the main point. I'll put into practice these pieces of advice you gave. Thanks for the video!
u are a awsome guy cause you reply to almost every coment
Even this one!
my teacher has asked me to write a descriptive essay on something i have experienced in the past but i am too afraid that the descriptive essay i'm trying to write will turn into a narrative one, how can i stay as descriptive as possible while not making it seem like a narrative?
confusing...
+Git Gud Nub I understand your confusion. My best suggestion is for you to pick a place: a building, a beach, a monument, a painting. In other words, something specific and objective. Your goal is to paint a picture with words so that I can be there. Your goal is to give me the experience of being there.
thanks you for the reply. that helped to clear things up a bit. credit goes to you if i ace this essay.
David Taylor
Git Gud Nub
Agreed
The way this video structures the essay on how its writen is very helpful dude! thanks for the video apreciate for the guide.
This is very helpful! Thank you!
Thank you sir! This video has rooted the concepts of a descriptive in me very firmly :D
ruclips.net/video/fWRuXw8fMCc/видео.html
It is very very soft! If you talk like that I understand it and if you could talk louder it would be awesome! I love the puppy example!
OK, thanks for the feedback.
Sir how can we divide descreptive essay paragraphs?can we do it according to the 5 sight techniques? 1st para on what we see. 2nd para on what we hear.
That's a good approach. You go also describe from top to bottom. Your goal is to create a dominant impression, not capture every little detail.
Thank you so much,this video is a help full.But the voice was low.
Thank you for your support, Muyenga. I'll check the volume.
What is the difference between Narrative & Descriptive?
+PhantasmWolvez Huge difference. A narration tells a story--a series of events. A descriptive essay focuses on a single thing to build a dominant impression with words appealling to the six senses.
+PhantasmWolvez A narration can have moments of description in it--a description of a character, description of a setting, but they are inside the narration
Do you have a lisp? I hear it sometimes, but then sometimes I don't
Yes, a slight lisp.
@@peakdavid i love it, it gives character to your voice
@@jacobwhit8914 Thanks, Large! Appreciate it.
2:31 straight up disgusting! 😂😂
Thanks for getting the point!
Same!
How to use imagery?
Whenever you describe a real-world object, you are using imagery.
TBH I CLICKED THE LINK MY SCHOOL SENT ONLINE AND SENT ME TO THIS VID HEHE :3
Glad you're here and that you're honest. I hope the video helped!
Me too :)
me three
it is possible to write descriptive essay on helloween?
Sure, you can describe anything. With Halloween, you need to choose something specific like children's costumes, the weather, candy or a haunted house.
thanks it helps alot
That's great to hear, plane walker. Be sure to proofread carefully. The best way is to have someone else ready over your paper. Also use Microsoft Word's built-in proofreader--ruclips.net/video/IDdDSJ7kc9U/видео.html
God loves you all have a good day and have fun writing your essay lol
ruclips.net/video/fWRuXw8fMCc/видео.html
please Sir,could you help me to improve my skills to write a good Essay/writing?how can i do this?
Happy to help. The best way to proceed is for us to work on an actual assignment. Send me the assignment directions of an upcoming essay that you have to write. Let's spell two weeks getting it ready.
I'm here beCause of my school
Beans--I hope the video helped. Let me know anything else you need.
It was really a good video but i want to meet you
I have office hours daily on Zoom, 9:00 - 5:00 Eastern Time (US). Choose an hour, please. Thank you!
your the perfect video im looking for thx
+VISCIOUS GAMING Great to hear, Viscious!
here from school.
we have to take notes 🙁
Good luck!
@@peakdavid Thanks! it went well!
ruclips.net/video/fWRuXw8fMCc/видео.html
Where do you stay??
Hi, I am in the United States. Where are you?
@@peakdavid I live in india
thank you very much for replying
@@adityapatel6084 You are welcome!
hi
Hi!
Hi
hello fellow blanks class
ruclips.net/video/fWRuXw8fMCc/видео.html