With the help of my friend eL, who is a native speaker, I made an English translation. My thoughts on the story and translation notes will be posted as a reply to this comment. 友人のeL様の助けを借りて、英訳を作成しました。僕がまだまだ勉強中ですが、eLは母語話者です。マムシ様が望むなら、間違いの削除に協力してくださること光栄です。それ以外の場合は、現在の状態で翻訳が完了なのです。 - Doppel - Abruptly born into this world, they fell victim to God's practical joke The two would live separately, Outside each other's view That was it, the sole reason we two were separated, but if so why is it this is "wrong"? You're crying, laughing, simply living as you feel Ahh, how despicable... I hate, hate, hate, hate it so. No matter what words I line together, you just laugh like you're at a loss. The same face, same voice as mine You look so much like the "me" I despise Like a copy plucked straight from the mirror, or the uncanny valley Keeping a low profile listening to the clamor, with your perfectly composed expression While maintaining that kind of behavior, has your heart frozen underneath? Be loud and rowdy and gather the minds Honor the frontline and shared cells of sisters Talents, dreams, destiny, lasting impressions, there's nothing you can just throw away You're laughing, cursing both the world and yourself Ahh, how pitiable... I hate, hate, hate, hate it so No matter what words I throw into a pile I'm left puzzling without understanding the meaning The same face, same voice as mine The "you" who I love looks so much like myself Like a copy plucked straight from the mirror, but I just don't understand... I hate, hate, hate, hate it so No matter what words I line together, they ring futile through an empty void The same face, same voice as mine You and I look so much like one another Like a copy plucked straight from the mirror, or the uncanny valley
Thank you to eL for helping me translate again! eL and I work together a lot; I'm native English learning Japanese and they're Japanese learning English, so by joining forces we increase our accuracy. I've helped translate some of the videos on their channel: ruclips.net/channel/UC2gdl2PMM8LyhdY0TVcv9Mg Story: Aoi seems to bottle up her emotions and constantly mask, whereas Akane lives as she pleases and is more open-hearted. Aoi resents Akane for this, seeing a version of herself that seems so much happier. Akane feels sorry for her and may have been hoping for a reunion with Aoi, who she says she loves. Aoi is the one who finds it creepy how similar the two are; even at the end when the video cuts out, it switches from a layered voice to a singular voice so it's probably still just Aoi. Translation notes: - In the first few lines, I think it's supposed to imply that since god's reason was stupid and petty, it shouldn't be wrong of Aoi to also be petty and hate Akane, but I'm not completely sure - I took a bit of liberty translating "gives me the creeps" to "uncanny valley". This was mostly to keep the same tone as the rest of the translation, but 気味悪い (directly "unpleasant sensation", meaning "gives me the creeps") is structurally similar to 不気味の谷 (directly "valley of bad sensation", meaning uncanny valley) to begin with. - The original lyric for "you just laugh like you're at a loss" is a little vague. Directly, this is "you laugh as though you're in [some kind of] trouble", but what kind of issue 「困った」 refers to is uncertain. Maybe you smile because you don't know what else to do, or maybe because you know there's nothing you CAN do. I chose "at a loss" since it could also have a few different meanings. - I figured that with how its typically used in English it was implied that "front line" is used in a military sense, but if it seems ambiguous it can be swapped for "war front"
周りを見て自分を潜める葵ちゃんはメロディーが存在して決まった歌詞を歌い上げる歌い方で感情直行な茜ちゃんはポエトリーリーディングとかラップみたいな浮かんだモノをぱっと外に出す歌い方なのいい～
お互いがお互いに憧れがあって、けどだからこそ劣った自分に似た容姿・声を持つ相手が嫌いな卑屈で理屈な葵ちゃんと、自分に似てるからこそ相手との違いが理解できない直球で鈍感な茜ちゃんなんだぁ。。。すき
双子の姉妹愛はある意味究極の自己愛で
その逆は究極の自己否定とも言えるのだろうか
歌詞 (自分用です)
パッとこの世に生を受けた時神様のいたずらで
ふたつにわかたれた命
ふたつにわかたれた視界
たったのそれだけが
2人をへだてた切っ掛けなのに
どうしてこうも違うのか
感じたままに泣いて笑って
生きてるあなたはあぁ憎らしい
嫌い嫌い嫌い嫌い嫌い嫌い
どれだけ言葉を並べてみても
困ったようにただ笑うだけ
同じ顔同じ声
私の嫌いな私に似てる
鏡写しね、気味が悪いわ
謙遜に耳済ます その上目立たないようにします
澄ました顔をして済ます
その態度かます
裏でまた心冷ます？
喧々で囂々か脳内の会合
戦線で恐々や兄弟の細胞
才能も大望も運命も感銘も何も無くせやしないのに
自分のことも世界も呪って
笑えるあなたがあぁ痛ましい
嫌い嫌い嫌い嫌い嫌い
どれだけ言葉を重ねてみても
意味もわからず惑うだけ
同じ顔同じ声愛するあなたは私に似ている
鏡写しね、
だけど分からない
嫌い嫌い嫌い嫌い嫌い
どれだけ言葉を並べてみても
虚しく虚空に響くだけ
同じ顔、同じ声
あなたと私は互いに似てる
鏡写しね
気味が悪いわ
*〈Doppel〉*
歌詞です
🔴茜
🔵葵
🟢両方
0:29
🔵
パッとこの世に生を受けた時、神様の悪戯で
ふたつに分かたれた 命
ふたつに分かたれた 視界
たったのそれだけが
二人を隔てた切欠なのに
どうしてこうも違うのか
0:51
感じたままに泣いて笑って
生きてるあなたは、あぁ 憎らしい
嫌い、嫌い、嫌い、嫌い
1:04
どれだけ言葉を並べてみても
困ったようにただ 笑うだけ
同じ顔、同じ声
私の嫌いな私に似てる
鏡写しね、気味が悪いわ
1:44
🔴
喧騒に耳澄ます
その上「目立たないようにします。」
澄ました顔して済ます
その態度噛ます
裏でまた心を冷ます？
1:54
喧々で 囂々か 脳内の会合
戦線で 恐々や 姉妹の細胞
才能も 大望も 運命も 感銘も
何も無くせやしないのに
自分の事も世界も呪って
笑えるあなたが、あぁ 痛ましい
嫌い、嫌い、嫌い、嫌い
2:18
どれだけ言葉を重ねてみても
意味もわからず 惑うだけ
同じ顔、同じ声
愛するあなたは私に似ている
鏡写しね、だけどわからない
2:37
［ピアノ ソロ］
2:59
🟢
嫌い、嫌い、嫌い、嫌い
どれだけ言葉を並べてみても
むなしく虚空に 響くだけ
3:09
同じ顔、同じ声
あなたと私は互いに似てる
鏡写しね、気味が悪いわ
茜ちゃんがラップから歌声に変わるところ最高💯 琴葉姉妹解釈も最高すぎて😇💯
うぁ…嫌いな自分に似た姉なのに、自分とは反対に心のままに生きる姉を羨んでいるのか嫌っているのかもう分からないような葵ちゃん…
自分に似ていて自分の愛する妹は自分自身も世の中も呪うように生きる…痛ましい、と心配しながらもよく分からない茜ちゃん……
う゛ぅ……(精神崩壊が近い)鏡映しの片割れは自分と逆……好き……でもいつか2人幸せになって欲しいな…←自分勝手
ちなみ最後の「気味が悪いわ」で私は死にました
最終更新二年前か…、新曲いつでも待ってる。
そうか、SynthVの琴葉は2人で1種類の歌声データベースだったな.
ガチでみんなに聞いてほしいなこの曲…
すごく好きです…
聴けば聴く程のめり込む曲だなぁ‥
考えさせられるし、歌詞や曲調も大好きです🥺
茜ちゃんの韻を踏むところもお気に入りです😊
とても良いバイブスで何度も何度もリピートしてます。
新しい世界との出会いに感謝。
めっちゃ神曲
おすすめに感謝
うわあああああああ神曲だああああああ
何ていうジャンルに分類されるんだろう、こういう曲
雨の日に聞きたくなる
久しぶりにちゃんと動画の方で聞きに来たけどめちゃくちゃ伸びてるね もっとのびろー！！！
良い曲を知れましたありがとう
Can't help but coming back for more ;)
Same
With the help of my friend eL, who is a native speaker, I made an English translation. My thoughts on the story and translation notes will be posted as a reply to this comment.
友人のeL様の助けを借りて、英訳を作成しました。僕がまだまだ勉強中ですが、eLは母語話者です。マムシ様が望むなら、間違いの削除に協力してくださること光栄です。それ以外の場合は、現在の状態で翻訳が完了なのです。
- Doppel -
Abruptly born into this world, they fell victim to God's practical joke
The two would live separately,
Outside each other's view
That was it, the sole reason
we two were separated, but if so
why is it this is "wrong"?
You're crying, laughing, simply living as you feel
Ahh, how despicable...
I hate, hate, hate, hate it so.
No matter what words I line together,
you just laugh like you're at a loss.
The same face, same voice as mine
You look so much like the "me" I despise
Like a copy plucked straight from the mirror,
or the uncanny valley
Keeping a low profile listening to the clamor,
with your perfectly composed expression
While maintaining that kind of behavior,
has your heart frozen underneath?
Be loud and rowdy and gather the minds
Honor the frontline and shared cells of sisters
Talents, dreams, destiny, lasting impressions, there's nothing you can just throw away
You're laughing, cursing both the world and yourself
Ahh, how pitiable...
I hate, hate, hate, hate it so
No matter what words I throw into a pile
I'm left puzzling without understanding the meaning
The same face, same voice as mine
The "you" who I love looks so much like myself
Like a copy plucked straight from the mirror,
but I just don't understand...
I hate, hate, hate, hate it so
No matter what words I line together,
they ring futile through an empty void
The same face, same voice as mine
You and I look so much like one another
Like a copy plucked straight from the mirror,
or the uncanny valley
Thank you to eL for helping me translate again! eL and I work together a lot; I'm native English learning Japanese and they're Japanese learning English, so by joining forces we increase our accuracy. I've helped translate some of the videos on their channel: ruclips.net/channel/UC2gdl2PMM8LyhdY0TVcv9Mg
Story: Aoi seems to bottle up her emotions and constantly mask, whereas Akane lives as she pleases and is more open-hearted. Aoi resents Akane for this, seeing a version of herself that seems so much happier. Akane feels sorry for her and may have been hoping for a reunion with Aoi, who she says she loves. Aoi is the one who finds it creepy how similar the two are; even at the end when the video cuts out, it switches from a layered voice to a singular voice so it's probably still just Aoi.
Translation notes:
- In the first few lines, I think it's supposed to imply that since god's reason was stupid and petty, it shouldn't be wrong of Aoi to also be petty and hate Akane, but I'm not completely sure
- I took a bit of liberty translating "gives me the creeps" to "uncanny valley". This was mostly to keep the same tone as the rest of the translation, but 気味悪い (directly "unpleasant sensation", meaning "gives me the creeps") is structurally similar to 不気味の谷 (directly "valley of bad sensation", meaning uncanny valley) to begin with.
- The original lyric for "you just laugh like you're at a loss" is a little vague. Directly, this is "you laugh as though you're in [some kind of] trouble", but what kind of issue 「困った」 refers to is uncertain. Maybe you smile because you don't know what else to do, or maybe because you know there's nothing you CAN do. I chose "at a loss" since it could also have a few different meanings.
- I figured that with how its typically used in English it was implied that "front line" is used in a military sense, but if it seems ambiguous it can be swapped for "war front"
うわああ、、、かっこいい
神曲
mamushiさん、、初めまして。ノリのよいビートポップな、切なく繊細で生き生き新鮮なラブソングです。
最高です
This is so good! ^^
awesome, love it!
ｺﾄﾉﾊｼﾏｲｶﾜｲｲﾔｯﾀｰ
Omg amazing!
すこ
Uwa!! So funky 💗💞
Amazing!
余程2人の事を考えてないと作れない歌
新作待ってます
初対面では失礼ですが、歌が大好きなので韓国語のコミュニティー字幕を追加したいです。 コミュニティ字幕提供を使用設定していただけますか？
ありがとうございます！字幕提供機能を設定してみました。
@@ma_mu_see 字幕を提出しました！ どうかご検討ください !
nice
カフェで流れてそう
AoiToAkaneKawaiiYatta-!
와 한국어 자막도 있네요 노래 좋아요 :)
ラップっぽいすね