A thesis statement focuses your ideas into one or two sentences. It should present the topic of your paper and also make a comment about your position in relation to the topic. Your thesis statement should tell your reader what the paper is about and also help guide your writing and keep your argument focused. Are you a student? Inbox me at maryjoykimmy@gmail.com and I will help you with your coursework. Best wishes!
A thesis statement focuses your ideas into one or two sentences. It should present the topic of your paper and also make a comment about your position in relation to the topic. Your thesis statement should tell your reader what the paper is about and also help guide your writing and keep your argument focused. Are you a student? Inbox me at maryjoykimmy@gmail.com and I will help you with your coursework. Best wishes!
Examples, quotes. Then use multiple unnecessarily placed sentences concerning said examples and quotes building on them to make clearer to a reader what you meant in those examples and quotes. Its great filler for long essays and teachers enjoy seeing a student make a effort to make a novice reader understand what it is that they are writing about.
PlushPainter Official No, no and you guessed it NO. That is not how you write a thesis in college nor high school. Are you in middle school? If you would like I can demonstrate a proper thesis
nah yall r duuuuum its ur topic+the theme+ and the impact=thesis got it from my history teach and nhd national history day(yall r dum beside Emmanuel Mekasha
I love how teachers say things like “you can’t write a paper without reading the book” yet I’m out here get a 96 on 10 page papers of books I’ve never even picked up.
You have to read the book, or at least know something about the book. I wonder if you're even writing your own papers. You can get kick out of school for plagiarism.
L L - dude of course I’m writing my own papers and no I never plagiarize it’s all my own words. Don’t assume things abt me that you don’t know. I’m a good writer and I love to read but if I don’t enjoy the book whatsoever I’m not reading it. Sorry that I broke the system and know how to please teachers
A thesis statement focuses your ideas into one or two sentences. It should present the topic of your paper and also make a comment about your position in relation to the topic. Your thesis statement should tell your reader what the paper is about and also help guide your writing and keep your argument focused. Are you a student? Inbox me at maryjoykimmy@gmail.com and I will help you with your coursework. Best wishes!
Yea it is too long. And has too much info about the book. But not enough.. it Should be more simple and less wordy. Semicolons are looked down on by the teachers at my school. This thesis makes me think too much. When i read something. I like it to flow.
Bri Zm, there needs to be a period or semicolon after the word angel. I still think the video is an excellent learning tool, and she gave great examples.
Thank you for this!! It has helped me with ALL my assignments since I first listened to it. I've tried simply remembering what she said but it is not as good. I have to watch it every time I go to write an intro for a paper. It is magic. It is just better every time!!!
After banging my head into the wall for the past two days this little video saved my life. Thank you. You have a great way of clearly explaining things.
Thank you, this was very helpful! Also, if it's not too much to ask, can you make a video about the body paragraph in the same step-by-step method that you did for the thesis statement? I checked out the video for body paragraphs but I needed more. It would be helpful if you did the method where you gave a question and then you showed an exemplar of how you answered the question in the body paragraph. Thanks again for this video, it is awesome! BTW, is it possible for you to do a video on how to succeed in reading comprehension because I swear that is like the main adversity in my life. Once again, thank you very, very much!
your instructional video is still a relevant and helpful resource. The examples you gave were spot on for the novel of choice. Thanks for keeping it up.
thank you for sharing this great video, I found it very useful. I was helping my youngest daughter with an assignment and I was confused on the Thesis Statement. I hope you make more videos.
Hey, I know that online classes are back and there are assignments that can be hectic to handle. This video is great as it provides good tips on how to manage the assignments. I could also assist you in your online classes and assignments and guarantee you a smooth sail and good grades. Incase you need assistance kindly reach out to me here or through my email address: haileypiper95@gmail.com
My thesis of the video: I started to learn about thesis statements but was distracted when I saw how cute the speaker is, the large number of hand movements, and the book holders in the background. After learning very little, I concluded that she has a ring on the right hand and is not yet married, thus leaving an opportunity. Grade me.
This video was useful for me when I decided to write my first academic essay. But I also know that on nerdymates you can find help. IELTS is very important if you want to travel abroad or prove that you have a high level of English. I managed to pass it recently so I know what are you talking about. Just try to look for online advices and it will help you in your academic future
This video is awesome thank you so much, my teacher is trying to help us get better by letting us write the thesis down on a paper and it’s a 0 whenever you wrote a bad thesis, and she’s counting it as a grade!!!!
you are awesome :).. even though i didn't understand everything and actually have no idea how to do it. i wish you were my teacher you are way to beautiful *u*
Dear Ms. Jenny (Or any English writing professor/teacher): Kindly answer these questions: Q1: Most, if not all, Op-Ed columnists or essayists are merely summarizing and paraphrasing everything that they have read without citation. Is not that considered plagiarism? Q2: What is NOT considered plagiarism? Thanks!
Thank you so much, I was only getting 2's and 3's on my papers and never that holy number 4 because of my sucky thesis statements. I never even went past revise on my TS's or pushed myself, but these steps are so easy that I could do it in my head in case my teacher decides to call on me lol. Thanks from Texas!
Can you use the examples that you use in step 3 in the body paragraph(s) as a reason to support your idea?or can you also find another example that relates to the examples you used in step 3?
her: “really, how are you going to write an essay without having read the book” me, at midnight with an essay due in 11 hours about the comparison of characters in 2 books that i didn’t read: 🥺
I must say this was the clearest example I have ever seen. It was so helpful to me. I'm working toward my Bachelor's degree and I'm going to keep my notes on your fine video. Great job!
sitting here crying bc idk how to write a research paper on censorship (specifically internet censorship in iran) and all i have is a quote in the attention grabber and nothing else 😭😭 i was sick for two days and my teacher won’t even help me. can’t wait to fail sophomore english 1st semester
I feel like everyone (in my last class) always talked about agency. What are some other key topics that we can write an essay on? I know some being... power struggles, gender roles, revenge (or coping)....
*love how teachers say things like “you can’t write a paper without reading the book” yet I’m out here get a 96 on 10 page papers of books I’ve never even picked up*
*stares at screen for five minutes
*tears start coming down face
+enteresvirse the feels
ikr 😂😂
its ok buddy we will make it together
lolol exactly me
Hello darkness , my old friend.
Dropping out doesnt seem so bad now
Ima agree lmfaoo
lol
lol
A thesis statement focuses your ideas into one or two sentences. It should present the topic of your paper and also make a comment about your position in relation to the topic. Your thesis statement should tell your reader what the paper is about and also help guide your writing and keep your argument focused.
Are you a student? Inbox me at maryjoykimmy@gmail.com and I will help you with your coursework. Best wishes!
Fr bruh I’m only watching this video cuz my English teacher don’t explain shit to us
"You cant write an essay without reading the book"
Oh we'll see about that
Tiny Thing 🤣🤣🤣
A thesis statement focuses your ideas into one or two sentences. It should present the topic of your paper and also make a comment about your position in relation to the topic. Your thesis statement should tell your reader what the paper is about and also help guide your writing and keep your argument focused.
Are you a student? Inbox me at maryjoykimmy@gmail.com and I will help you with your coursework. Best wishes!
lol
Hahahahahahaha
HAHAHAHA DEAD
Who's here rn in quarantine trying to figure out how to write a thesis and hv watched 20 videos on it because you still don't understand
I’m same as u but this is the first video and it’s rlly helpful
I am✋✋
this is so me
Hahahaha wtf
that pretty much me
OK, now how do I write 25 pages about this 1 question?
Hert Niks LMFAO
Right! #TheRealStruggle
Right
😭😭😭😭😭 SAMEEEE
Examples, quotes. Then use multiple unnecessarily placed sentences concerning said examples and quotes building on them to make clearer to a reader what you meant in those examples and quotes. Its great filler for long essays and teachers enjoy seeing a student make a effort to make a novice reader understand what it is that they are writing about.
Thesis statement: Restate the prompt + because, +idea 1, + idea 2, + idea 3.
OMG! THANK YOU! I feel like I owe you something!
+King Libra I'm just glad that I help
More helpful than the video XD
PlushPainter Official No, no and you guessed it NO. That is not how you write a thesis in college nor high school. Are you in middle school? If you would like I can demonstrate a proper thesis
nah yall r duuuuum its ur topic+the theme+ and the impact=thesis got it from my history teach and nhd national history day(yall r dum beside Emmanuel Mekasha
"60 second recap"
*video is 4 min and 30 sec***
this is why I have trust issues
😬😂😂
ya... like seriosly
I love how teachers say things like “you can’t write a paper without reading the book” yet I’m out here get a 96 on 10 page papers of books I’ve never even picked up.
watch out guys, we have a badass over here
Are your papers correct?
Sad
You have to read the book, or at least know something about the book. I wonder if you're even writing your own papers. You can get kick out of school for plagiarism.
L L - dude of course I’m writing my own papers and no I never plagiarize it’s all my own words. Don’t assume things abt me that you don’t know. I’m a good writer and I love to read but if I don’t enjoy the book whatsoever I’m not reading it. Sorry that I broke the system and know how to please teachers
"You can't write an essay without reading the book."
How do you think I passed high school?
95 likes, kachow
3:40 am i the only one that heard that sound
i heard OHH
I heard a moan
That was my brain dying
me too
No lol
0:32 lol fight me
RIght! We got Sparknotes
watch the movie preview, gets A+
fax
I'm doing a paper on the jungle. I'm not even gonna bother to read it, and I got my thesis statement down. they can't hold us brother
A thesis statement focuses your ideas into one or two sentences. It should present the topic of your paper and also make a comment about your position in relation to the topic. Your thesis statement should tell your reader what the paper is about and also help guide your writing and keep your argument focused.
Are you a student? Inbox me at maryjoykimmy@gmail.com and I will help you with your coursework. Best wishes!
Thank you for this video. I was confused on how to start my thesis statement.
+Mat Wells Good to hear! Thanks for letting me know!
You are always confused!
60second Recap® i need this for the I think it's called SBAC test or he test with a lot of writing
I'm a sophomore in college who hasn't written a paper for almost two years. This was great. Thank you!
Is it me or does her Thesis Statement seem like a long run on sentence?
Bri Zm It's not. Because she wrote a list with the right punctuation. Like semi-colon,( ; ), and as well as commas.( , )
Yea it is too long. And has too much info about the book. But not enough.. it Should be more simple and less wordy. Semicolons are looked down on by the teachers at my school. This thesis makes me think too much. When i read something. I like it to flow.
Bri Zm, there needs to be a period or semicolon after the word angel. I still think the video is an excellent learning tool, and she gave great examples.
no there doesn't because "as Hester moves... 'angel'" is actually a clause and without what comes after it it wouldn't be a sentece.
Yeah it is there’s literally like five independent clauses in one sentence 😆
"You can't write a paper without reading the book"
Me, who has Spark Note'd the sh-t out of my paper: "Oh you can, and I'll do it again"
She is sooo helpful! God bless her soul!!!!
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This video was very helpful! I think you’re a good English teacher!
Wow, this is spot on. I was going to create my own for my class, but yours is already perfect. I plan to use this video with my students.
Lazy ass teacher bruh
At first, I thought you were talking about her thesis and how you were going to use her thesis for your paper while admitting it publicly.
Anthony Carrick your probably the reason why kids drop out
@@LukeoXx aayyyee same
You are the reason kids hate school
Thank you for this!! It has helped me with ALL my assignments since I first listened to it. I've tried simply remembering what she said but it is not as good. I have to watch it every time I go to write an intro for a paper. It is magic. It is just better every time!!!
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This what I’m grateful for on RUclips things like this explain more than my teacher does
You secured an A on my exam by making this video. Thanks!
This helped! Thank you for breaking it down in an understandable way.
I hope you know how helpful your youtube channel is for students (and teachers) like me! This video absolutely saved my life!
After banging my head into the wall for the past two days this little video saved my life. Thank you. You have a great way of clearly explaining things.
This is still a great video to watch in 2017. Thanks very much, 60second Recap. :)
Wow this actually helped it helped me get 80 percent on my English film essay because of the thesis.
This is the best video I have seen so far for a proper college level thesis. Great Video!!!!
Your video was very helpful when I was stuck in my essay
This is by far one the best videos Ive seen. Great JOB.
Thank you, this was very helpful! Also, if it's not too much to ask, can you make a video about the body paragraph in the same step-by-step method that you did for the thesis statement? I checked out the video for body paragraphs but I needed more. It would be helpful if you did the method where you gave a question and then you showed an exemplar of how you answered the question in the body paragraph. Thanks again for this video, it is awesome!
BTW, is it possible for you to do a video on how to succeed in reading comprehension because I swear that is like the main adversity in my life. Once again, thank you very, very much!
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Omg! This is amazing!!! Thank you for the break down of this!
thank you ,this information was fantastic for my last minute essay
your instructional video is still a relevant and helpful resource. The examples you gave were spot on for the novel of choice. Thanks for keeping it up.
You are the prettiest writing teacher
thank you for sharing this great video, I found it very useful. I was helping my youngest daughter with an assignment and I was confused on the Thesis Statement. I hope you make more videos.
This video is super helpful!
I'm doing a persuasive essay and this is the best video I've seen so far. Keep doing good vids! There good even after *mathing* 6 years!
Hey, I know that online classes are back and there are assignments that can be hectic to handle. This video is great as it provides good tips on how to manage the assignments. I could also assist you in your online classes and assignments and guarantee you a smooth sail and good grades. Incase you need assistance kindly reach out to me here or through my email address: haileypiper95@gmail.com
This is brilliant and the best explanation I've ever seen!
the problem is my assignment does not have a question they want me to compare 2 things to each other
EXACTLY!!!!!!!!!!!
LightTheDrago yes me too 🙄
SAME!!!!!
same
60seconds ?
Akasuki lol ikr?!!
I love that this video is short and sweet 😊
Great video! Helped me revise and simplify my thesis statement!
Love the video. It is very helpful and insightful, great stuff.
Great video! well explained in Short time.
This helps alot especially because I just recently finished reading the scarlet letter so it's helps me better understand with her thesis
My thesis of the video: I started to learn about thesis statements but was distracted when I saw how cute the speaker is, the large number of hand movements, and the book holders in the background. After learning very little, I concluded that she has a ring on the right hand and is not yet married, thus leaving an opportunity. Grade me.
Thank you for this helpful video!
To the point .Thank you.
This video was useful for me when I decided to write my first academic essay. But I also know that on nerdymates you can find help. IELTS is very important if you want to travel abroad or prove that you have a high level of English. I managed to pass it recently so I know what are you talking about. Just try to look for online advices and it will help you in your academic future
I absolutely love this vídeo. Thanks so much!
Thank you! Your video was helpful!!
3:38 UGH, you just brought me back to college and the CLICHES! HOWEVER, this was a great video--nicely done!
This video is awesome thank you so much, my teacher is trying to help us get better by letting us write the thesis down on a paper and it’s a 0 whenever you wrote a bad thesis, and she’s counting it as a grade!!!!
way better explanation than my teacher, thanks!
Very helpful. Thank you!
OMG thank you I got a Class where i'm doing a thesis just found out on Blackboard
you are awesome :).. even though i didn't understand everything and actually have no idea how to do it. i wish you were my teacher you are way to beautiful *u*
Brayan Vazquez Aw, shucks. But what don't you understand? Just ask!
+60second Recap u really r awesome but i understood u like 1+1=2 and i also wish u were my teacher to id really like that
60second Recap® ur breathtaking!!! 😂
Too*
10 less seconds... We were this close to greatness.
Added tons of resources, thanks
You are gorgeous for making thesis statements clear to me
it was very helpful. i appreciate you effort to help us in this way.
Thank you, great insight!
Thank you for the video. It's helpful for those of us who like to listen more than read😁
Dear Ms. Jenny
(Or any English writing professor/teacher):
Kindly answer these questions:
Q1: Most, if not all, Op-Ed columnists or
essayists are merely summarizing
and paraphrasing everything that they have read
without citation. Is not that considered
plagiarism?
Q2: What is NOT considered plagiarism?
Thanks!
you helped me so much and i finally understand what a thesis statement is i got 100 on my thesis
This video was great you saved my life
How many hair flips in this vid
+Ryan Chang Probably thousands but they're pointless
XD
There were 26 hair flips
Counted them me self
+Aqua i subbed to ur channel
You should mention both but giving your opinion strongy but not equally to both sides of argument.. I can help you in this regard
very useful programme on research writing
Good video
Thank you so much, I was only getting 2's and 3's on my papers and never that holy number 4 because of my sucky thesis statements. I never even went past revise on my TS's or pushed myself, but these steps are so easy that I could do it in my head in case my teacher decides to call on me lol. Thanks from Texas!
So grateful for this good video
Thanks for the video Jenny
I could write about 2 million stories about the times since I last saw you! nice Video:)
can you please make specific topics like an argumentative essay or a Literary Analysis essay?
Thank you very much. Very helpful
Can you use the examples that you use in step 3 in the body paragraph(s) as a reason to support your idea?or can you also find another example that relates to the examples you used in step 3?
her: “really, how are you going to write an essay without having read the book”
me, at midnight with an essay due in 11 hours about the comparison of characters in 2 books that i didn’t read: 🥺
how did you do?
this honestly helped me sooo much ! thanksss❤️
I must say this was the clearest example I have ever seen. It was so helpful to me. I'm working toward my Bachelor's degree and I'm going to keep my notes on your fine video. Great job!
sitting here crying bc idk how to write a research paper on censorship (specifically internet censorship in iran) and all i have is a quote in the attention grabber and nothing else 😭😭 i was sick for two days and my teacher won’t even help me. can’t wait to fail sophomore english 1st semester
what number must i press to repeat that awesome sound effect at 3:41
lol
Thank you very much, it help me a lot, god bless you.
How to do write the introduction after you state your thesis? Like how do you lead into establishing your main body paragraph ideas?
Really well done, great teaching. [virtual apple]
I feel like everyone (in my last class) always talked about agency. What are some other key topics that we can write an essay on?
I know some being... power struggles, gender roles, revenge (or coping)....
*love how teachers say things like “you can’t write a paper without reading the book” yet I’m out here get a 96 on 10 page papers of books I’ve never even picked up*
thank you this video helped me so much you explained it good!!!! :-)
HaHaHa, 3:41. The noise of her breathing back in after the long Thesis Statement.
"Squeakkk". It just made me laugh.
I know this sounds corny or whatever but this helped me more than a whole term in class
Mam,should I start with a question?And should I write down the question in thesis statement?
Great vid! Thanks!
Thanx alot u made it easy 4 me
Thanks for the tips
Is there any way I can contact you? Also the links to your website don't seem to work
I'm struggling. I need to write a thesis sentence from the question is Education the way to break out of generational poverty?
Your voice catched my attention since I heard you! :D
3:41 I thought that was me wheezing 😂😅 #asthmastruggles lol
Great tutorial.
Great job
You purposefully used "scarlet", dear.❣️