How to write an effective THESIS STATEMENT for research paper

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  • Опубликовано: 11 дек 2024

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  • @Nat-nq9gi
    @Nat-nq9gi 3 года назад +64

    I so appreciate you for making these videos. I have no idea why I have such a hard time writing thesis statements, you made it look so easy!

    • @smartstudent_official
      @smartstudent_official  3 года назад +1

      You're welcome! Thank you for watching and supporting this channel. Best of luck to you! :)

    • @luftim
      @luftim 2 года назад

      if my topic is "byzantine innovations" would "how did the byzantine wall take inspirations from the events in rome 400 bc?" be a thesis statement?

    • @hcglamourcreationsaka-glo6580
      @hcglamourcreationsaka-glo6580 Год назад

      She did, I am struggling too. Critical thesis statement

  • @pdoffcanadian
    @pdoffcanadian 2 года назад +19

    I have been out of school for a long time, and your videos and guides are helping me tremendously. I just got 100% on a research paper that is worth 20% of my overall mark!! Wanted to thank you, as I couldn't have done it without you!

  • @stephanbotes5865
    @stephanbotes5865 2 года назад +6

    I'm Not saying the previous three videos were bad at explaining how to write a thesis statement... But I finally understand how to do this well after yours. Thank you.

  • @amandayaklin2690
    @amandayaklin2690 Год назад +1

    I'm in college right now, and I am so grateful for your video. Just figured out a tremendous amount for an essay I was dreading. Thank you.

  • @gregsoad5031
    @gregsoad5031 3 года назад +1

    Just started nursing school, my first time doing apa, and have been watching allllll of your videos, you are greatly appreciated!

  • @trinityw3964
    @trinityw3964 2 года назад +1

    I’ve watched heaps on vids on yt on thesis statements and this is by far the best one

  • @ByStephieNics
    @ByStephieNics 3 года назад +12

    This was an incredibly helpful video, THANK YOU!! I developed my thesis statement while watching and now I'm ready to get writing 😊

  • @tammywhitis2958
    @tammywhitis2958 Год назад

    I just started watching you, and you have been a lifesaver thank you so much.

  • @leem7794
    @leem7794 2 года назад +1

    Never wrote any thesis statement and you made it so clear for me to start and engage it tonight. Thank you

  • @tidaceesay3510
    @tidaceesay3510 3 года назад +4

    Thank you so much for the clear explanation. This really helped me out and now I understand almost everything about thesis statement. Now am ready for my thesis assignment.

  • @thestrugglingwriter5254
    @thestrugglingwriter5254 2 года назад +1

    Omg this helped so much. I kept on giving facts as my thesis statement.

  • @jackienuttall4107
    @jackienuttall4107 2 года назад +1

    This video was so helpful. I often struggle with my thesis statements. The helped me to break down my ideas and get concise with my thoughts. I recommend this to anyone! Thank you.

  • @Rachel-zj2ef
    @Rachel-zj2ef 3 года назад +10

    Thank you for this explanation! This was so clear and easy to understand.

    • @smartstudent_official
      @smartstudent_official  3 года назад

      You're welcome! Thank you for watching and supporting this channel. Best of luck to you! :)

  • @mariaemmnauelavcpisquesa4807
    @mariaemmnauelavcpisquesa4807 2 года назад +1

    Thank you this enlightens me I have something to work on to develop my thesis. The video pretty much help that I should not worry about if there some changes and editions after so many researches. Thanks a lot

  • @islandbear13
    @islandbear13 9 месяцев назад

    Her videos are the only ones I use, after watching one of her videos you will understand why I decided to watch her videos only. She presents her videos clearly, simply, and totally different from explanation from the others .

  • @tammywhitis2958
    @tammywhitis2958 Год назад

    Thanks!

  • @billiecremeens8129
    @billiecremeens8129 2 года назад +1

    I just wanted to say thank you for making your videos. I am working hard on improving my writing and your teaching is a huge help.

  • @yoongummy1585
    @yoongummy1585 3 года назад +16

    I have finals in a week and have been stressed. This makes me feel a lot better! Thank you sooo much!

  • @andybarrosa1275
    @andybarrosa1275 2 года назад +1

    Your a life saver. thank you very much

  • @Msthoro1
    @Msthoro1 2 года назад +1

    Thank you so much for this! I believe that a strong thesis topic would be about WHY desiccated thyroid replacement is superior to synthetic thyroid medication. I actually took this information to my Endocrinologist, and he changed the way that he practiced medicine.

  • @NessNess72Heeeey
    @NessNess72Heeeey 2 года назад

    Thank you so much I love your videos and want to watch nobody else. You are Smart

  • @JoseLopez-zu3ms
    @JoseLopez-zu3ms 2 года назад +2

    Your so beautiful 😍🌹💓Thank you for this video, it truly helped me out with my assignment.

  • @lorettakrausz
    @lorettakrausz 11 месяцев назад

    Hi Chesea you are wonderful and a so much help. I am 63 years old and studing English/ Creative Writing with Concentration of Fiction and Non-fiction, I am taking History this semester and I am writing a paper on Juvenile crime in Baltimore City Md. The crime rate and types of crimes by juveniles is off the charts. The whole Juvenile system needs to be completly changed. I won't bore you but I'm on Social Security and using grants and loans to get through school. I could use that monitor and some scholarships to helpme live. I just want you to know I LOVE not like your videos because you talk the language which makes me understand. 😇🤩🙏God Bless You Sweetie. Grams Loretta Krausz

  • @serhat551
    @serhat551 3 года назад +4

    Thanks a lot. I was really stuck before this video but now I know what to do :D

  • @marietoniedelmundo314
    @marietoniedelmundo314 3 года назад +2

    THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!! I'm subscribing

  • @ironwilled9471
    @ironwilled9471 3 года назад +3

    Simple and helpful. Thanks 🇩🇿

  • @SylviaDziuba
    @SylviaDziuba 3 года назад +3

    Thank you for sharing this incredibly helpful video, you've done an amazing job in clearly communicating how to write this evil, scary monster :) :)

  • @monthsbehind9730
    @monthsbehind9730 3 года назад +2

    I was just looking up more information on this and you do a great video to help me thank you.

    • @smartstudent_official
      @smartstudent_official  3 года назад +1

      Oh good! I'm glad you found it helpful. Again, thanks for watching and supporting this channel!

  • @azriazhar9159
    @azriazhar9159 3 года назад +9

    Please don't stop making video🥺

  • @allieoopiambumbo
    @allieoopiambumbo 3 года назад +3

    Great video and tips. It has helped me a lot I was becoming bogged down with so much info on the topic of my essay. Thank you for taking time to do this.

  • @jaimegonzalez3830
    @jaimegonzalez3830 2 года назад

    this video is a master piece. Thank you.

  • @smartstudent_official
    @smartstudent_official  3 года назад +2

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      @edencarlos2219 3 года назад

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    • @edencarlos2219
      @edencarlos2219 3 года назад

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  • @beatrizpacheco7832
    @beatrizpacheco7832 Год назад

    Thank you for sharing your knowledge with us. You have a unique way of explaining that is easy to understand and follow. Above and beyond! Gilbert

  • @GiveEarthAChance
    @GiveEarthAChance Год назад

    Hey Chelsea ! Did you possibly create a video on writing an academic research PROPOSAL?

  • @royaltymtrailers6345
    @royaltymtrailers6345 2 года назад

    You are a blessing

  • @writebetterwithteachermel
    @writebetterwithteachermel 3 года назад +2

    Well explained!

  • @dongacas
    @dongacas 3 года назад +1

    thank for the video. It will help me alot

  • @orengemino7200
    @orengemino7200 3 года назад +1

    Ms. Smart Student or anyone who reads this
    I have a few questions on how to make a Research Paper,
    First Question:
    you CAN put in graphs, diagrams and etc. right?
    IF so, which place/position is most suitable to put it in... near the beginning, in the middle, or near the end?
    If you are trying to prove a point based on the graph results you have researched/found.
    Second Question:
    In making a Research Paper, WHAT format of/HOW many sentences per paragraph do you use.... 3-5 sentences per paragraph, 5-10 sentences, or more?
    Third Question:
    In making a Thesis Statement, you said it has to be worth 1-2 sentences. So for example:
    Humans are intelligent animals........... and under go evolution. Humans can be bla bla bla.
    ( So here are 2 sentences, can this still be classifies as a Thesis Statement? OR do I need to merge them into 1 sentence, that looks like it has 2 sentences in it?
    I think- that's all the questions I wish to ask- I hope that someone can clarify and answer my questions

  • @scubagirl2857
    @scubagirl2857 2 года назад

    thank you! thank you! thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @anikacarrie
    @anikacarrie 2 года назад

    Thank you, this was so helpful!

  • @anyalow9855
    @anyalow9855 2 года назад

    you are amazing thank youuu!

  • @paulbrown9415
    @paulbrown9415 3 года назад +1

    Good morning Chels, talk to me girl. Love this one. I needed a nudge in this area. I usually come about a thesis and am not all together sure if I am happy with it Lol.

    • @smartstudent_official
      @smartstudent_official  3 года назад

      Yep! I feel like that's a common feeling among many people when writing their thesis statement.

  • @ccz479
    @ccz479 3 года назад

    VERY useful to know, thank you!!

  • @jnfrancoispierre3616
    @jnfrancoispierre3616 Год назад

    Thank you!

  • @josiet.2661
    @josiet.2661 3 года назад +1

    THANK YOU SO MUCH, your explanation was easy to understand 😊 my topic is "Natural Alternative"❗

  • @shadahampton2528
    @shadahampton2528 2 года назад

    Your so smart and beautiful!!! Thanks for the video

  • @isaacstrings910
    @isaacstrings910 8 месяцев назад

    You are amazing thank you

  • @cynthiayankauskas4
    @cynthiayankauskas4 3 года назад +2

    Helpful videos! Thank you for making these!
    Will there be one on writing better conclusion paragraphs?

    • @smartstudent_official
      @smartstudent_official  3 года назад +2

      Hi there! That's a great suggestion. I will add it to my list :)

    • @cynthiayankauskas4
      @cynthiayankauskas4 3 года назад

      Thank you! Many people will benefit from the addition of a conclusion video!
      As an older college student, I enjoy passing along RUclips links to fellow classmates in need of assistance writing their paper, they are easier to learn with than an explanation in an email.

  • @petafairbrother4787
    @petafairbrother4787 2 года назад

    I am finding your videos so useful, thank you! My statement: Risky play is perceived differently in the ECEC sector because of the variation in professional understanding of this topic.

  • @rabtechtutorialvideo
    @rabtechtutorialvideo 3 года назад +2

    *MY Due after 3 days For my summer English class* {2021}
    Who else?

  • @jorgesaito461
    @jorgesaito461 2 года назад

    Thank you very much.

  • @adlan_kacak
    @adlan_kacak 3 года назад

    seems to be much more complex than what i`v expected ... but yeah thank you for your explanation!

  • @aida087
    @aida087 Год назад

    Hello Chelsea thank you so much for sharing!! Unfortunately I still struggle with writing research papers after being in college for a few years because of bad short-term memory!!
    Currently, I have a "create an outline" assignment for my psych class for my research paper based on a "movie" about a mental illness topic and I've only created one outline in my entire time in college!! Do you have a video on "creating an outline for your psychology research paper based on a movie review I guess it's called?"

  • @Sheismeglowing
    @Sheismeglowing 2 года назад

    can you do a video on case study & journal analysis papers

  • @KwinalChaudhari
    @KwinalChaudhari 9 месяцев назад

    Please help in how to create thesis statement on effects of social media on mental health. Please try to help me

  • @scubagirl2857
    @scubagirl2857 2 года назад

    What is the difference between a Statement of the Problem, Research Question, and Thesis Statement? Any help would be highly appreciated.

  • @thatomofolo452
    @thatomofolo452 Год назад

    Great 👍👍😃

  • @tonyhall4837
    @tonyhall4837 3 года назад +2

    I knew Corgis were the dog for me!

  • @karambakanyi8438
    @karambakanyi8438 3 года назад

    Thanks 👍

  • @kathy6273
    @kathy6273 Год назад

    Do you put the problem statement In the Introduction or abstract?

  • @sunfirefire45
    @sunfirefire45 2 года назад +1

    I am in graduate school and every time I write a paper, I have to go over how to write a thesis statement.

  • @jamiej.barker9762
    @jamiej.barker9762 Год назад

    I play this for my students every semester. Thank you!

  • @faresshorts1729
    @faresshorts1729 3 года назад +1

    Thanks

  • @maninderkaur8195
    @maninderkaur8195 3 года назад +1

    good

  • @handletruth
    @handletruth 2 года назад

    Difference between intro and thesis statement?

  • @kevinhyr5879
    @kevinhyr5879 3 года назад +1

    Great video, highly offended by the video game opinion.... because ur probably right

  • @emilyryall1342
    @emilyryall1342 3 года назад +1

    this is exactly what scribbler say

  • @valeriacapriotti6437
    @valeriacapriotti6437 2 года назад

    Hi! I've got a question: should we or should we not use pronouns (I and we) when writing our essay? I cannot find a clear answer to this question. Some websites say we shouldn't and others say it is OK. Could you help me, please?

  • @Greatblakhoosh
    @Greatblakhoosh 3 года назад

    Your thumbnail game is fire

  • @samuelrodriguez4342
    @samuelrodriguez4342 Год назад

    Thanks for sharing, I am trying to understand this topic still. Hhehehh! (=.=)

  • @antwaunbrooks3174
    @antwaunbrooks3174 2 года назад +1

    Can you write mine lol

  • @missyanne8728
    @missyanne8728 2 года назад

    I disagree with the final thesis statement being acceptable at the college level. It is too short because it doesn't use specific language and lacks complexity. How does a herding mentality relate to being a good emotional support pet? The word "they" could be confusing; it can be referring to the dogs or the person needing the dog.

    • @smartstudent_official
      @smartstudent_official  2 года назад

      The purpose of this video is to demonstrate the 3 components of thesis statement in applicable manner. The complexity of papers will vary but these key components will not. Students should adjust according to their situation.
      Keep in mind that evidence to support a claim is relative to the research being done. It should reflective what is discussed in the paper. "Herding mentality" is simply an example of the support this student chose to explore.

  • @radaasadpourpiranfar6370
    @radaasadpourpiranfar6370 2 года назад

    🍀🍀🍀

  • @krystalA5379
    @krystalA5379 2 года назад

    Incredibly helpful video. My thesis statement is: Cryptocurrency provides a more consumer-friendly alternative to money because it is more convenient to use, and gives the user direct control over their finances.

  • @hamiltonsnow8232
    @hamiltonsnow8232 2 года назад

    still don't know what the fuck I'm doing

  • @jenhynes414
    @jenhynes414 2 года назад

    This is so helpful thank you!