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  • Опубликовано: 7 сен 2024
  • Something bizarre has come to Los Angeles - men are dying and women are disappearing. Vulnerable and unprepared, Kat ventures out into the unknown.
    "It Came Nameless In Spring" by Brian Otting
    Starring Magen Mattox and Corey Rieger
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    Director: Brian Otting
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    Producers: Brian Otting | Bernie Stern
    Cinematographer: Adriaan Kirchner
    Editor: David Otting
    Production Designer: Anthony Pearce
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Комментарии • 480

  • @brianotting
    @brianotting Год назад +596

    Hey everyone! I'm Brian Otting, writer/director/producer of IT CAME NAMELESS IN SPRING. Thanks for watching! This was my first short film and I learned a lot. AMA.

    • @dhguswh0516
      @dhguswh0516 Год назад +2

      Thank you for making the great work:) from korea

    • @foxabilo
      @foxabilo Год назад +1

      The main fight sequence was excellent, not quite sure how she escaped in the end but it looked super realistic and I bet that took a while to get right.

    • @Mudhooks
      @Mudhooks Год назад +2

      Wow!!! It’s an amazing film! Great acting, great visuals…

    • @prettyboyzaneking
      @prettyboyzaneking Год назад

      There no way you made this film

    • @malcolmkogut
      @malcolmkogut Год назад +1

      Intriguing, I would like to see what happens next. One minor mistake? Around 5:03 from the shadows it looks like someone tosses the backpack from the left and she climbs over from the right.

  • @chriscooper654
    @chriscooper654 Год назад +49

    A lovely example of "show, don't tell". The horror is compounded by the impression that the entity is so detached from the suffering its inflicted, like a traveler picking berries by the roadside while stomping on an ant colony.

  • @TechBearSeattle
    @TechBearSeattle Год назад +94

    I do wish this had closed captions, it is very difficult for me to follow the dialog without it.

    • @mx_lei
      @mx_lei Год назад +13

      Yep. Me too.

    • @mysmirandam.6618
      @mysmirandam.6618 Год назад +12

      Same

    • @GunnWrights
      @GunnWrights Год назад +25

      I didn't want to be the 'bearer of bad news' - but I found this video to be almost unwatchable due to the loudness of the music vs the quietness and garbled sound of the dialogue. And I'm wearing headphones!! It was unwatchable, I couldn't understand what was being said!! 😥

    • @UpChuckLiberals
      @UpChuckLiberals Год назад +1

      I had no problem. On an iPad with AirPods.

    • @mysmirandam.6618
      @mysmirandam.6618 Год назад +1

      @@UpChuckLiberals that's y

  • @c.shannon3914
    @c.shannon3914 Год назад +39

    Great story. Lead actress was terrific, when she saw her husband when she gets home, you could see the heartbreak in her eyes.

  • @tomohawk52
    @tomohawk52 Год назад +3

    "You are the love of my life"
    "We look alot the tempests of chicken" -- whaa

  • @nihilnihil161
    @nihilnihil161 Год назад +6

    Only complaint is it needs subtitles, I had a hard time understanding what some of the actors were saying

  • @SynthoidSounds
    @SynthoidSounds Год назад +40

    Well done, a good example of what can be done with story and acting, without needing a lot of CGI to hold it together. If anything, it captures the essence of what people might actually go through in such an ET apocalypse scenario. This could definitely be extended much further into a feature film, or a series.

    • @brianotting
      @brianotting Год назад +3

      Thank you so much. Would be cool to revisit with more time to tell the story, for sure.

    • @brentkaufman1723
      @brentkaufman1723 Год назад +1

      What was the story? I didn't understand the ending because I couldn't hear it; even after replaying it many times.

    • @nottsnettv5554
      @nottsnettv5554 Год назад

      yh its called the Purge. A lot better than this rubbish

  • @mbcrandell8647
    @mbcrandell8647 Год назад +37

    Just watched your short video. As a lover of sci Fi for over 60 years I am impressed. It kept my attention and reeled me in. I liked the premise and the ending leaves an opening if it's something you choose to add to. I would love to see more.Thank you for sharing!

    • @brianotting
      @brianotting Год назад +1

      Thanks mb! I am also a sci-fi lover for many years. It's an incredible genre and I hope to make more in it.

    • @xenolambrose7261
      @xenolambrose7261 Год назад

      You have a TON of questions to be answered my friend! Great job

  • @davidmoore5925
    @davidmoore5925 Год назад +11

    The sound was awful, couldn't hear any voices over the background screeching violins.

  • @russward2612
    @russward2612 Год назад +102

    If that's your first film, you have a crazy good future ahead. I can't wait to see what you do next.

    • @brianotting
      @brianotting Год назад +6

      Thank you so much. My second short film is playing festivals now. You can watch the trailer for it on my channel.

    • @j1greene
      @j1greene Год назад +3

      I must agree with you Russ.

  • @werre2
    @werre2 Год назад +12

    you don't lower a lever action when reloading you just reload and keep it aimed

  • @KennyyChicago
    @KennyyChicago Год назад +18

    The title alone caught my attention. And the rest held my attention. Loved it.

    • @brianotting
      @brianotting Год назад +5

      OMG thank you -- took me FOREVER to think up a title! They're so hard for me, lol

    • @gargoyle38
      @gargoyle38 Год назад +2

      @@brianotting Very poetic actually

    • @brianotting
      @brianotting Год назад +1

      @@gargoyle38 Thank you!

  • @zethraelofteldrassil3149
    @zethraelofteldrassil3149 Год назад +8

    Excellent! She'll become the badass they never wished to come upon.

  • @Ghaladh
    @Ghaladh Год назад +9

    I loved it. Humanity succumbing to the urge of necessity, the good people repressing what makes them human in order to win the fight against destiny, against each other, and survive... I also liked the Lovecraftian monster in the sky. This is a concept that deserves a whole series.

    • @fishinfool3795
      @fishinfool3795 Год назад

      Except the one chick didn't shoot the other chick. I was kinda left unfulfilled personally. If they are really in an ultimate struggle for survival, this isn't even a question.

  • @bshinn4884
    @bshinn4884 Год назад +3

    My first question in that situation would be less "where'd you get the gun?", and more "where do you get a gun?"

  • @Trooper599
    @Trooper599 Год назад +6

    That's what happens when you break into the house of Holly Holm. You almost get choked out.

  • @bobalicious2696
    @bobalicious2696 3 месяца назад

    The guy probably died from drinking that pool water. Also, thanks for having CC enabled DUST. Made it so much easier to understand the dialogue.

  • @kitkat261
    @kitkat261 Год назад +2

    Confused about what's going on, I wanted to know more about the entity

  • @klikklik7499
    @klikklik7499 Год назад +2

    Now featuring "The World's Least Effective Choke!"

  • @MrManofvision
    @MrManofvision Год назад +6

    Good, except for the sound quality. Conversations are inaudible.

  • @Rouge_7
    @Rouge_7 Год назад +3

    Great realistic fighting. That is real world fighting for survival with what there is around you.

  • @paullenoue8173
    @paullenoue8173 Год назад +5

    Why are so many of these short sci-fi story so bleak and depressing? Not to disparage Brian Otting specifically, the filmmaking and storytelling were good and I hope he does more, but I've seen minor variations of this short video a few dozen times already. If you took all of the short sci-fi videos on youtube and randomly selected three, I bet two of them would have the same plot, pacing and mood as this one. Again, let me say that I think Brian Otting did a good job, just wish he put more effort into creating something not as similar to the multitude of others.

  • @JesUSking17
    @JesUSking17 Год назад +29

    I must say this score to this dust has to be the creepiest one I've heard yet I really enjoyed it

    • @brianotting
      @brianotting Год назад +3

      Thank you. My brother David did the sound design and we worked for a very long time putting the soundscape together. Appreciate it.

  • @DhanishtaDevi
    @DhanishtaDevi Год назад +5

    Even when the world is ending humans still cant get along.

  • @mysmirandam.6618
    @mysmirandam.6618 Год назад +3

    The way he was blue... that's real man

  • @hendrikrupp3985
    @hendrikrupp3985 Год назад +5

    Funny how even short films like this pick up what so many of those Netflix/Prime etc. productions do: Much too much of poorly lit conversation and just a few secs of the impressive CGI (which is ALWAYS the title pic or the thumbnail). So this will be a smash hit. Congrats.

  • @jsventer
    @jsventer Год назад +6

    Masterpiece. Camera work is astonishing. Mattox makes it perfect; I'm sure she'd be perfect in any major production. Main story is as sad as human history and back story is thrilling. Soundtrack matches every small movement at any second of the film. Directing can't be better.

  • @rc4688
    @rc4688 Год назад +1

    See? I told you there's really a flying spaghetti monster.

  • @ryanreinhart1834
    @ryanreinhart1834 Год назад +5

    its a damn spaghetti monster.

  • @ericchild8845
    @ericchild8845 Год назад +60

    Very well made short. I could easily watch a lot more of this story. Please? May I have another?

    • @tribulationprepper787
      @tribulationprepper787 Год назад +3

      Another what? This was a waste of time. What the hell did that cloud have to do with anything?

    • @yannikavadas1490
      @yannikavadas1490 Год назад

      A continuance would be welcomed , however , I suspect it's a one off as usual . No harm in exercising the imagination .

    • @tribulationprepper787
      @tribulationprepper787 Год назад +3

      @@yannikavadas1490 I guess I am just old fashioned where stories are concerned. I still believe that a story should have a beginning, a middle and an end but that's just me. Take care and Maranatha

    • @gabrielstark8256
      @gabrielstark8256 Год назад

      5u

    • @lilyfhonazhel2675
      @lilyfhonazhel2675 4 месяца назад

      ​@@tribulationprepper787I believe that's just the standard format. Everyone should exercise Creativity and think outside the box instead or relying on the standard format.
      Stories can be told while using a format that is different from the norm, having studied creative writing, they don't stick to the standard format.

  • @wong2b
    @wong2b Год назад +4

    This is an absolute lesson in how to build tension....well done...

    • @brianotting
      @brianotting Год назад +1

      Appreciate that. I studied quite a bit of Fincher's thrillers like ZODIAC when prepping for this :)

  • @unnamed_channel
    @unnamed_channel Год назад +5

    Blasphemy! Sacrilege! Outrageous! The Flying Spaghetti Monster is benevolent, not malevolent. If he should appear in the sky with his noodly appendages probing the city it would be to fulfill His just cause, not murder and kidnapping. Other than that, and the main character thinking that a bunch of random prescriptions is going to help her husband, I've no other complaints at this time.

  • @ObservantPiratePlus
    @ObservantPiratePlus Год назад +7

    OK. Dystopian future. People at odds for basic resources. I get that. Alien that only shows up at the very end, and doesn't really do...anything. Bored now.

  • @rontronimous
    @rontronimous Год назад

    At this point I'm convinced "short film" is short for "I can't come up with an ending for this"

  • @rudevalve
    @rudevalve Год назад +4

    Certified Gold!!!!!😁

  • @whitelabrat
    @whitelabrat Год назад +3

    the crayon candle was a very nice touch

    • @brianotting
      @brianotting Год назад

      Thank you. Saw it on a survivalist website, had to use it.

    • @MatheusOriginal
      @MatheusOriginal Год назад

      This kind of candle really exists/works?

  • @raphlvlogs271
    @raphlvlogs271 Год назад +4

    when a post apocalyptic theme meets a SHTF context

  • @rickhenkle7778
    @rickhenkle7778 Год назад +1

    Learned something here!! Crayons can be candles!! Like my Crisco Candles!!

  • @justinmas299
    @justinmas299 Год назад +1

    Twisted and cool.

  • @Runescope
    @Runescope Год назад +5

    You know what? I'm getting really sick and tired that all sci-fi seems to do nowadays is horror and/or dystopia. Authors are stuck in this rut and it's depressing. I wish they'd be original and try doing something uplifting. It's supposed to be escapism, not 'dump more horror on top of an already horrified audience'.

    • @0neIntangible
      @0neIntangible Год назад +2

      Lack of good writing and no imagination,

    • @bad_covfefe
      @bad_covfefe Год назад

      Being scary is much easier than being encouraging.

  • @rodgercastle7809
    @rodgercastle7809 9 месяцев назад

    Why do I keep watching these? I mean, they're well-made but in the end the only thing I get is "WTF was that?" and "Well, there's 15 minutes of my life I won't get back".

  • @kreed445
    @kreed445 Год назад +6

    Looks like Microsoft's Cloud has come alive and destroyed civilization - - - Bills Dream

    • @fishinfool3795
      @fishinfool3795 Год назад

      Indeed. His buddy K.S. would be gleeful.

  • @petemusgrove7422
    @petemusgrove7422 Месяц назад

    So much talent and care taken to craft this, can't wait to see more from you. Some complained that the music drowned out the dialogue, but considering the score as an indispensable character this was not an issue for me...those discordant tones were.more menacing than words. I loved it.

  • @sisisisi1111
    @sisisisi1111 Год назад +2

    Ok holy sht.. that fight choreography between the women is on the level of The Last Of Us.
    So organic, so raw, still fast paced, the sound design.. i really wasn't expecting that
    Then suddenly: Eldritch horror for a split second, promptly cutting to a single-scene performance that kind of blew my mind.. just her stare and the slow creep of the tears coming in.
    Please do more, please

    • @svglorious
      @svglorious Год назад +1

      Reminded me of Betty Gilpin and Hilary Swank fight in “The Hunt”

    • @brianotting
      @brianotting Год назад +2

      Thank you! I have more on the way, but very different. Glad this one resonated with you.

    • @sisisisi1111
      @sisisisi1111 Год назад

      @@brianotting gladly looking forward to it

  • @stuckp1stuckp122
    @stuckp1stuckp122 Год назад +3

    I like how the atmosphere is established and the trapped are turning against each other. I like how only at the end do you know what is trapping them all. What is moving is that on one hand the wife is deeply in love yet finds violent strength against another innocent. Also, the husband's illness does a nice job of countering the cliche of the strong-husband protecting wife, by subtly providing a rationale why the wife volunteers to go out. Well done!

  • @ezrastail9249
    @ezrastail9249 Год назад +1

    I like how she raised the rear sight as she fumbled with the rifle over the girl on the floor. She's unfamiliar with firearms and desperately trying to figure it out in a panic.
    I wonder if that was scripted or ad lib. Either way, it was brilliant!

  • @nick_john
    @nick_john Год назад +1

    It has a name - Flying Spaghetti Monster

  • @mierbeuker8148
    @mierbeuker8148 Год назад +9

    Omg, that background noise all the time!!! I was getting Vuvuzela flashbacks!!! Is there a more traumatizing noise than that in the history of man?!? It should be classified as a weapon of mass distraction!!! Why would you inflict that on your audience?!?

    • @Nell_Hell
      @Nell_Hell Год назад +2

      that sounds like a you problem...

    • @justincase4937
      @justincase4937 Год назад +3

      Totally agree, the background noise added nothing to the atmosphere but distraction.

  • @echospaw899
    @echospaw899 Год назад +1

    I sure wish it explained what the hell that cloud (nameless) was... alien, natural phenomena, whatever. But, I guess that's the point. The need for survival and what we do in order to achieve it is pointedly clear. Who are the 'real' monsters... in Spring(?).

  • @tablescissors
    @tablescissors Год назад +4

    That was an EXCELLENT fight scene!
    The acting, choreography, pacing, motivation, angles and believability.... haven't seen one that good on a while.

  • @mvonballmo
    @mvonballmo Год назад +1

    At 09:15, shouldn't there have been glass on the floor? You know, from the glass that she'd just broken over the other woman's head just seconds before?

  • @BatMan-oe2gh
    @BatMan-oe2gh Год назад +3

    Please Sir, can I have more. That was awesome. Make a great movie.

  • @insaneconqueror5421
    @insaneconqueror5421 Год назад +4

    Woww impressive fight scene too...this was great.

  • @priestgandhi1677
    @priestgandhi1677 Год назад +1

    Please sir may I have some more shorts? Also what was the function the crayons had when being burned other than to melt?😅😆😆

  • @GailFrancisco
    @GailFrancisco Год назад +3

    great teaser - I want to see more of this story.

  • @KIWIchix0r
    @KIWIchix0r Год назад +1

    Very cool. I think her arguing about her immunity to spores when they discussed who goes out would have clarified his condition in a useful way, but I loved the film even with that ambiguity.

  • @TheJacklwilliams
    @TheJacklwilliams Год назад +1

    Absolutely SPOT ON BRIAN! Great writing, acting, cinematography! The only “crtique” from my end, and I’m, not a film maker, is the sound effects. They did, follow the mood and the story line, I just found that pipe organ, bag pipe? tone, drove me insane…. Lol, if I were them, and those were alarms of some kind? I’d of died doing everything I could to silence them! LOL, NICE WORK! GREAT STUFF!

  • @donm5354
    @donm5354 Год назад +5

    Good beginning - why is she walking toward the giant brain cloud thing at the end? I guess its tentacles are grabbing women? Has similar feel to the film SKYLINE. Would love to find out what the THING in the sky is.

  • @MatthewHill
    @MatthewHill Год назад +2

    I don't get it. What is the tentacle-cloud thing? Why did the husband die? Why don't women get killed? Why are they trapped? Why did the other woman try to murder her?

  • @nickim6571
    @nickim6571 Год назад +3

    I find the background noise really distracting. Silence is much more scary.

  • @PhilipMurphyExtra
    @PhilipMurphyExtra Год назад +6

    Great to see a short film on RUclips for sure

    • @LoneGRoEnt
      @LoneGRoEnt Год назад +4

      Dust has the best sifi shorts.

  • @DeadEyeDave
    @DeadEyeDave Год назад +1

    A note for the director: She practiced with the shotgun right-handed, held it at the ready left-handed while moving in the hallway, then aimed it right-handed at her adversary. No one would switch like that.

    • @fishinfool3795
      @fishinfool3795 Год назад +1

      OMG, someone else noticed this. It's a non-starter for me. Ruined the short. So easy to get this right, and failed miserably.

  • @tamielynne7374
    @tamielynne7374 Год назад +1

    I'm not trying to be mean, just giving my honest opinion. While I didn't find it terrible, I don't get what everyone is so thrilled about. I even tried re-watching it, to see if maybe I missed something.

  • @BBQDad463
    @BBQDad463 Год назад +1

    This should be a full-length movie or a series. Kudos.

  • @NathanTeaches
    @NathanTeaches Год назад

    Thes sound design on this is epic.

  • @amadeusasimov1364
    @amadeusasimov1364 Год назад +2

    Good concept, mysterious, open ended cliff hanger.
    I will say the background music was a bit overpowering. Couldn't hear or get drawn into much of the scenes with the constant buzzing soundtrack tracking over the audio.
    As a first film, it is quite impressive though!

  • @MackMateCom
    @MackMateCom Год назад +1

    This could so easily be showing on Netflix well done and executed

  • @patrickselden5747
    @patrickselden5747 Год назад +5

    Very good, Brian: well done, you and everyone else involved in this project.
    ☝️😎

  • @Servinghimalwyz
    @Servinghimalwyz Год назад +1

    I agree with many of the positive comments here but would offer a couple criticisms if you're open to it. First, it looks almost as if the whole story took ten minutes "their time." His beard didn't grow, they didn't get dirtier, they weren't exhibiting signs of weight loss or dehydration. Please remember aging effects/time's passage.
    Second, while I do like the realistic pacing, choreography, and story of the fights, that headlock did not look real. Improvements could be made. For example, her face reddening. A tighter lock around her throat. Etc.
    Overall, however, I enjoyed the short ride.

  • @bradtorville5526
    @bradtorville5526 Год назад +6

    Drinking water from a swimming pool? Good way to get really sick.

    • @MorganaRavenheart
      @MorganaRavenheart Год назад

      I was thinking the same thing, like dude, where's your water filter kit? lol

    • @nyhamnplattan
      @nyhamnplattan Год назад +7

      Did you miss the scene with the filter in the jar?

    • @tomnps1671
      @tomnps1671 Год назад +2

      @@nyhamnplattan Looked like a life straw (copyright) to me.

    • @Nell_Hell
      @Nell_Hell Год назад

      i mean they conditions look pretty grim soo...

    • @sysfx
      @sysfx Год назад +1

      Our dogs say it is safe if correctly used, cleaned and treated 😂

  • @comfyactor
    @comfyactor Год назад +1

    Great female fight. Well-directed and well-executed.

  • @johncunningham4820
    @johncunningham4820 Год назад +8

    The Soundscape , I wont call it " Music " , certainly added a LOT to the ambience . Great , realistic Fight scene .

    • @brianotting
      @brianotting Год назад +1

      Thank you! The sound design was done by my brother David. We created much of that from piecing acoustic musical elements and various real world drone sounds together to create the "soundscape", so yeah -- not exactly music.

  • @LoneGRoEnt
    @LoneGRoEnt Год назад +2

    I LOVED IT... WATCHED TWICE

  • @tribulationprepper787
    @tribulationprepper787 Год назад +1

    There was a 60's cult movie named "THX1138". Same basic story line and very same ending where the guy being chased by a cop climbs a long ladder, opens the hatch at the top and discovers the Earth.

  • @realjoanna
    @realjoanna Год назад +4

    10 out of 10. Do more.

  • @thomasharter1593
    @thomasharter1593 Год назад +2

    Deep af

  • @toriwilliams500
    @toriwilliams500 Год назад

    That man filled his canister with pool water , poured it in a glass and drunk it😦😦

  • @eddieco
    @eddieco Год назад +4

    from a fellow filmmaker, well done.

  • @gimmiedashasha
    @gimmiedashasha Год назад +1

    Is that the huge Shitcloud that they talked about in the movie Kingpin? 🤣

  • @mrmidget612
    @mrmidget612 Год назад +6

    Another awesome short. Really nicely done.

  • @ARWest-bp4yb
    @ARWest-bp4yb Год назад +2

    More please!! 👍👍

  • @bryanfisher8377
    @bryanfisher8377 Год назад +1

    I wish it was a full movie, it's such a great concept. Great job.

  • @TJ-nd5cq
    @TJ-nd5cq Год назад +3

    Fantastic. Really enjoyed it. I wouldn't have thought it was your first film. Great work👏

    • @brianotting
      @brianotting Год назад +1

      Thanks, appreciate that. Maybe all those late nights watching countless films rubbed off a little. 🙃

  • @jaynewman6420
    @jaynewman6420 Год назад +4

    I really did like this. The atmosphere was wonderful. It had a very Mythos feel to it. The acting was excellent.
    The only complaint I had were the scenes that faded to black. I feel it's overdone and makes it difficult for me to follow the film. At least you didn't have long scenes that are unwatchable because the director wants to simulate night.
    I do hope that you finish the story as a movie or in any other medium.
    Thank you, Jay

    • @brianotting
      @brianotting Год назад +1

      Thanks Jay! I think often times when a film fades to black throughout the film, it's because the director didn't design their transitions correctly, or something was cut that made the transition shots no longer work... Both of these reasons resulted in me fading to black! 😂 Lesson learned.

  • @tanrose8645
    @tanrose8645 Год назад

    WOWEEEEEEEEEE! 👏🏻👏🏻🤸🏼‍♀️🤸🏼‍♀️🤸🏼‍♀️ THIS was unexpected and FANTASTIC❣️👏🏻👏🏻🙌🏻BRAVO!🌹
    Choreography was AWESOME & acting SUPERB❣️👏🏻👏🏻🌹🌹🌹
    Blessings to you and your viewers~
    Enjoy the rest of your day!
    Blessings~✨💫🌟
    🌛🌹🌜

  • @robertdiehl1281
    @robertdiehl1281 Год назад +8

    Great video. Excellent acting. Extremely compelling. Was ready for more.

    • @brianotting
      @brianotting Год назад +1

      Corey Rieger and Magen Mattox are incredible actors. I was lucky to have them.

  • @hughbarton5743
    @hughbarton5743 Год назад +7

    Great job, very compelling. Like any great short fiction, it leaves you wanting to know what happens next. And thanks also for your twist on the very tired " helpless women threatened " cliche.
    Good luck, and please keep up the good work.

  • @mishie618
    @mishie618 Год назад +1

    I've seen this on dust, abd it was always a favorite 😍

  • @ultraultra6726
    @ultraultra6726 Год назад +2

    ☆Trigger Warning☆ you will be subjected to sheer terror! Jump scared and screams may result, from viewing this material. If you are not conditioned to viewing heavily suspenseful material, and you have a heart condition, please, consult your physician before viewing. ☆
    Wow, the use of sound is very effective in creating a sense of terror and dread. Yikes. I don't usually peep things that are so intense, and this one had me screaming, to the point that my neighbors might call the cops... They live a quarter mile away!

  • @williamduffy1227
    @williamduffy1227 Год назад

    It's the Flying Spaghetti Monster!!!! 😄😄😄😄

    • @tablescissors
      @tablescissors Год назад

      It's a giant ball of floating femme flesh integrated into its bloated body via abducting tentacles that somehow kills men with its presence... turning us into monsters as we fight one another... interesting allegory for atheism.
      .

  • @MrMoonrise59
    @MrMoonrise59 Год назад +2

    A very Lovecraftian style. I for one found it to be a quite insightful and inspiring short film that is far greater in scope than anything created by the detestable and unimaginative Hollywood crowd. 👍👍👍👍👍🙂

  • @rcnelson
    @rcnelson Год назад +1

    Murky audio with sotto voce murmuring cries out for captions.

  • @asc_missions3080
    @asc_missions3080 Год назад +1

    Brilliant concept, destroyed by an astoundingly bad noise track.

  • @Taliesin-xd7ke
    @Taliesin-xd7ke Год назад

    That's outstanding for a first attempt, you will be a major success.👏

  • @jameskrych7767
    @jameskrych7767 Год назад +3

    Nicely done!

  • @danieldevito6380
    @danieldevito6380 Год назад +1

    Wow, this was REALLY good!

  • @RustyNeverSleepz
    @RustyNeverSleepz Год назад +2

    Impressive. I enjoyed it

  • @joekalista3615
    @joekalista3615 Год назад +1

    he wakes up to a strange noise, which is shown to be the lady practicing cranking the lever on the rifle, but why didnt they use the sounds a lever gun makes? dont know what god aweful shuffling noise they used, but that was not anything near what it was intended to be, which draws the question, you had the lever gun right there, why opt to not use the sound it makes?

    • @brianotting
      @brianotting Год назад

      That was the actual sound from the actual gun, recorded in that actual take 🤷‍♂

  • @sonovivo1247
    @sonovivo1247 Месяц назад

    Perfect example of what the average US-American want: fear, individualism, enough violence and a lot of drama. In short: for poor people, not knowing how to live naturally, let’s not even talk about enjoying life, based on love.

  • @TheSaintExile
    @TheSaintExile Год назад

    I have to admit, this is one I couldn't figure out.