Three minutes in, I went straight comments. Get to the point and make that point. I have a life to live. I’m sure he knows his shit, but I need to hear all the other BS.
I lost interest after you took the first two minutes (critical to maintaining viewer interest) telling us what you don’t like about other videos. No one cares. Then you spent the next two minutes telling us about how many tool heads you have and even helped us count to 25. Jeez man - get to the point. Im sure you know your stuff but you take too long - way too long to deliver.
For a first video, it's not bad. But as others have pointed out, you could do a better job of getting to the point (and making it clear what your point is). The whole bit about making sure people know how much money you've spent was unnecessary. If you want to spend $1,000 on heads and dies for 9mm, that's your business, but not particularly useful information to your audience. Practicing with the camera seems like a logical step prior to making and publishing videos. Best of luck on future videos.
I appreciate the information. I ordered several of these upgrades as I watched!
Have you added anything else?
almost fell asleep. You talk about other vids, being BLABLABLA, well check yours out.
brevity
Your not doing 3k in a day .
Three minutes in, I went straight comments. Get to the point and make that point. I have a life to live. I’m sure he knows his shit, but I need to hear all the other BS.
I lost interest after you took the first two minutes (critical to maintaining viewer interest) telling us what you don’t like about other videos. No one cares. Then you spent the next two minutes telling us about how many tool heads you have and even helped us count to 25. Jeez man - get to the point. Im sure you know your stuff but you take too long - way too long to deliver.
For a first video, it's not bad. But as others have pointed out, you could do a better job of getting to the point (and making it clear what your point is). The whole bit about making sure people know how much money you've spent was unnecessary. If you want to spend $1,000 on heads and dies for 9mm, that's your business, but not particularly useful information to your audience. Practicing with the camera seems like a logical step prior to making and publishing videos. Best of luck on future videos.
You talk and brag too much. Just get to it, sheesh