I already listened to the story like 3 to 4 times. This is like my fifth time listen to the same story it tells in different ways. What is the same story? I’m gonna change the story but it’s a good story to anybody who never listen to it I wish they came up with part partbecause when I finished it and never finished.
18:15 in and a big jump some chapters missing il give this one a miss thanks anyhow bella keep up the hard work
Agree missing a big chuck... skip this story.
I already listened to the story like 3 to 4 times. This is like my fifth time listen to the same story it tells in different ways. What is the same story? I’m gonna change the story but it’s a good story to anybody who never listen to it I wish they came up with part partbecause when I finished it and never finished.
Story jumps around. Impossible to know what's going on
Next part 2
Mc only has plot amor and need serious character development.
Ok 👍