Story Editing: How to Assess and Fix Your First Draft

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  • Опубликовано: 13 сен 2024

Комментарии • 39

  • @jackiemorrison2706
    @jackiemorrison2706 4 года назад +13

    This was a fantastic, helpful session. I've very rarely come away with so many useable practical steps to take. I now have a plan! Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.

    • @KristinaStanleyMysteryAuthor
      @KristinaStanleyMysteryAuthor 4 года назад +1

      Jackie, I'm so please to hear this helped you and that you have a plan. I hope you love editing as much as I do!

  • @susannebeckerwrites
    @susannebeckerwrites 4 года назад +5

    Apologies I didn't make it at 5am here in Oz...but settling in to watch it now. Excellent feedback! Just watched it - great information. Thank you!

  • @catherineebunilo4915
    @catherineebunilo4915 4 года назад +2

    Not only did I learn so much, my confidence was built

  • @rachelmendell9086
    @rachelmendell9086 4 года назад +7

    This was an excellent tutorial! Thank you for sharing all the info! 💜

  • @AlisonWonderland999
    @AlisonWonderland999 4 года назад +2

    I'm particularly grateful for Kristina's very last words of encouragement. Thank you!

  • @barbararose2385
    @barbararose2385 4 года назад +5

    One of the BEST discussions about character I have heard. They managed to get right to the essence of creating characters, protagonist and antagonist. Excellent for a beginner or if you have been at this and need a jumpstart on developing new characters or rewriting existing ones. Well worth every minute and worth listening again. Thank you for giving this!

  • @vikkytube1
    @vikkytube1 3 года назад +2

    A fantastic session. Loved it all the way through

  • @1NewYorkBestseller
    @1NewYorkBestseller 4 года назад +2

    Thank you for a great session! From Australia

  • @victoriang567
    @victoriang567 4 года назад +4

    Thank you from Singapore

  • @gerarddunmoore7609
    @gerarddunmoore7609 2 года назад

    An unbelievable eye-opener - thank you so much for your half hour. 🙏🏻❤️

  • @Johann.vStaden
    @Johann.vStaden 4 года назад +1

    One of the best training videos I've seen yet on this very daunting subject. Thank you so much, highly informative! ❤👍

    • @Fictionary
      @Fictionary 4 года назад +1

      Thank you for letting me know. I'm glad you liked it.

  • @jimmygable569
    @jimmygable569 4 года назад +3

    Thank you!

  • @havvaalexander9520
    @havvaalexander9520 4 месяца назад

    This was great. Thank you!

  • @rawansaadeh5995
    @rawansaadeh5995 4 года назад +3

    Great content, thank you!!

  • @virginiamallo
    @virginiamallo 4 года назад +3

    Thank you! From Argentina

  • @terrypatterson1481
    @terrypatterson1481 3 года назад +1

    Thank you Kristina - I got so much out of that. It was very useful info. now considering signing up to fictionary.

  • @ydesireeg6455
    @ydesireeg6455 2 года назад

    Excellent, so much of useful information, thank you so much

  • @robinsprung207
    @robinsprung207 4 года назад +5

    Great stream!

  • @Legui1231
    @Legui1231 3 года назад +2

    Great interview

  • @davidjarvis4047
    @davidjarvis4047 2 года назад

    Creative types avoid technical stuff to their detriment. This video was insightful. I realize I need to add the technical tools to my creative side. I feel myself resisting though. Change is hard.

  • @vseme1572
    @vseme1572 2 года назад

    Great and to the point.

  • @debbierichardson8364
    @debbierichardson8364 4 года назад +1

    excellent. Thank you

  • @markgruner5823
    @markgruner5823 4 года назад +3

    Great video, very helpful and informative. I write a bit in both fiction and nonfiction but mostly nonfiction. This editing style will work great with fiction and some styles of nonfiction but what about certain nonfiction that do not have characters per see, what approach would you take? Great job!

    • @KristinaStanleyMysteryAuthor
      @KristinaStanleyMysteryAuthor 4 года назад

      Hi Mark, Thank you for you kind words. I'm hesitant to comment for non-fiction. I'm not an expert in that. My focus is fiction. Maybe someone at Reedsy has thoughts on this.

  • @kit888
    @kit888 4 года назад +3

    Starts at 6:00

  • @christopherbriscoe8665
    @christopherbriscoe8665 4 года назад +3

    Thank you, Martin. Sorry, I have a question, one of your questioners asked the question about pass - what does pass mean?

    • @Reedsy
      @Reedsy  4 года назад +2

      They mean a draft or a 'go' at the manuscript. You might take another pass at the manuscript, looking to work only on dialogue issues - and another pass where you're looking at pacing.

  • @johnparnham5945
    @johnparnham5945 4 года назад +2

    John Parnham from Nuneaton

  • @bernadettelongueira1714
    @bernadettelongueira1714 3 года назад +1

    Hi Bernadette from South Africa

  • @jameschristopher5601
    @jameschristopher5601 4 года назад +1

    I am sorry but I think this is wrong. I had a problem with scenes in my own book. The thing that should matters is the characters. The plot doesn't matter. I fingered how to write a scene by reedsy. Characters changes. The story is how the character changes or how other characters changes. I do the story circle for my scenes. How about fear? Characters should have a fear in their arc to grow in the story.

    • @KristinaStanleyMysteryAuthor
      @KristinaStanleyMysteryAuthor 4 года назад

      Hi John, You are correct. You're getting deeper into the topic than I was able to cover in such a short time. The characters must develop and change over the course of the story for most novels. There are of course exceptions that work well. Kinsey Millhone in the Sue Krafton series comes to mind. There needs to be a balance between the character development and the character arc to make a story powerful. Some stories are more character oriented and some plot oriented. I hope this helps.

    • @jameschristopher5601
      @jameschristopher5601 4 года назад

      @@KristinaStanleyMysteryAuthor No I am not going that deep. I am saying fear lets lets the reader feel for the character. It wouldn't be that hard to explain to authors trying to edit their books. Right? Characters drive the plot because of their fear. There are many books that does this well and some don't. I am not going that far into characters. Which is better Twilight or Song of Ice & Fire?

  • @sscalercourtney5486
    @sscalercourtney5486 3 года назад

    I'm really old and grumpy. I read the headline and skip the intro's going straight to the advice.

  • @ghostfacedude93
    @ghostfacedude93 Год назад

    quick answer: don't do that. first drafts aren't supposed to be fixed. You're supposed to write a second draft.