I’m anticipating this to be a horribly written story, seeing as it’s a video game pasta. I love the narration though. Let’s see how this turns out… EDIT 1: This is actually super good what the heck? LIKE THE TWIST IN THE MIDDLE IS SO FREAKIN WEIRD AND A PUN BUT YIKES
You did a really good job reading this, and it was very easy to listen to. I also think your voice fit the story well. Thank you for posting this, it was very good!
I... Have listened to hundreds of creepypasta, gaming, non gaming, and everything in-between. I don't think I've ever heard a story like this. I really don't know what to say. It's amazing.
Dude, THIS STORY WAS CREATED IN 2 0 0 7????? WHAT IN THE ACTUAL, LIKE, PRETTY ACTUAL FUCKING FUCK????? How has this superb story grown so forgotten by everyone, being a better written, more interesting and actually GOOD tale than 99.999999999999999999999999999999% of all time videogame creepypastas??? Like, it's insulting that only after so many fucking years i've found this, rotting in an abandoned corner of youtube. Like, WHAT THE FUCK, how did stories so stupidly TERRIBLE like Sonic.exe or its abortions have been more popular and remember than this??? It was so ahead of its time, and still to this day, remains as better than almost every gaming creepypasta I know (better than ben drowned, godzilla nes and all that shit), dude like honestly, how????
@@Tiritiribobiri Hahahahah my bad bro, you did an amazing job editing and acting, don't mind what this john doe says. I enjoyed it a lot, I'm grateful you did this. And fucking yes, is absolutely unacceptable that this went under the radar the way it did. I think it has something to do with its title, it sounds like a cheap clickbait or something, not even close to be representative of the true value of the narrative. I guess knowledge is a privilege only a few can handle 🤣
The thing that really bugs me about this is the age that they made the main character. He's supposed to be 8 years old, but so much of what he says, how he thinks does not fit an 8 year old. If he was aged up even a few years, maybe 12 or 13...I feel that it would work so much better. But 8 just doesn't feel right.
In the epilogue it's revealed that the whole story is being told, by Billy, 20 years later. So although it's about an 8/9 year old kid, it's being told from the point of view of an adult in their late 20's after years of therapy and processing what happened. 8yo Billy probably wasn't thinking or speaking in that way but 28yo Billy does
I come back to this video time and time again because you do such a great job narrating. Setting up major plot points and twists (Tom Nook), giving each character in the story so much expressiveness, and overall a really engaging experience. I really wish this video had more love, it’s amazing and I want to thank you for all of the sleepless nights you’ve helped me overcome and all of the hours of focus you’ve given me while I’m doing homework and prep materials for my engineering major. Hope you have an amazing day, dude!!!!
Do you ever want to, like, print out a YT comment and hang it on your wall? No? Just me? Huh No but seriously, thank you so much. The love that I *have* gotten on this video just blows me away. I knew I'd done okay, don't get me wrong, but I never thought people would want to watch/listen to it more than once! I wish you the best of luck with your engineering major, and I hope it leads to a career you absolutely love.
Wow. This was... a trip, an emotional ride for sure. Your narration and editing are fantastic and compliment the great writing perfectly. I absolutely loved this. Thank you. This is a _real_ keeper. I'm sticking around, I think. Edit: holy shit you did the deltarune longplays too??? Haha! I had no idea! I loved those too. You're something alright! Surprising you haven't done any more creepypastas btw, you're a natural
This must be the best creepy pasta I've ever heard. The way it became a pessimistic interpretation of how the game plays out is very clever, and I did not expect those twists and turns. I'm shivering! What an amazing story. Also, such a good job on the narration and added images.
As much of a classic of legend this is, the idea this kid is 8 years old and in only the first two chapters is swearing like million times the sailor Gulliver is, knows what a furry is and knows what the word Orwellion means. Like i know it's supposed to be he's telling this story years later but like, still. To me it makes ten times more sense if he's like, a teenager. like 13-16. Cause again what the fuck kind of 8 year old swears like that and knows what those words mean.
I had an issue with the age as well, not because of the swearing because I've actually heard young kids swear a lot like that. But the thought processes and his vocabulary don't fit an 8 year old at all. That was bugging me throughout the story.
I came back to this after being nostalgic about it from when I was a teenager. It was really good up until the tunnel with Tom Nook. The ending was really goofy and relied on gore for scares, as well as being full of holes. It’s mostly a great story though, just don’t quite hit the landing.
2 things: 1) I downloaded this video and listened to repeatedly as I drove across the US, great work! It provided me lots of entertainment. 2) What recording do you use for that air raid siren where the sky lights up? I'm just curious.
1) Oh wow. I'm really glad you got so much entertainment out of this! Kinda honoured tbh; I hope you had a fun trip. 2) Went and hunted it down for ya! It's this one -- freesound.org/people/nooly/sounds/382611/ -- a recording of an air raid siren test in Prague. I fiddled with the volume levels here and there but it was otherwise perfect as is.
This is my first time stumbling upon a site such as this. I've been finding a lot of these "mini-level-horror games," but I can't focus too well as I used to and I don't want to disturb anyone - or anything.
I keep getting seriously invested and then remembering this is an 8 year old narrator and busting up laughing. Great experience Edit: I'm going to scream if the end means there was a reset. I'm going to say no it wasn't, because that doesn't make sense, and also for my own sanity.
i'll think about this advice if i do this sort of thing again; the secret is that i absolutely hate audio mixing and bgm especially lmao. im never really sure what im doing with background tracks, and these projects take so much effort and time even without them -- by the time i get to music im like ughhhh nooo. but you're absolutely right, music would add something more. i just gotta buckle down and face it. 💪
@@Tiritiribobiri yeah. I honestly think sound effects and fitting music from horror games and animal crossing games in general would make the story more engaging. Rather than slapping a generic creepy music like most creepypasta channels.
@@Tiritiribobiri unless… I can actually… add the music for you. I can always add more sound effects to make most of the dramatic moments from the story more impactful.
@@Polychi1998 i appreciate this offer!! that's really very cool of you. im not keen however on taking this video down to update it at this stage of its life; i think next time i do a thing like this i'll just keep music and sound more in mind through the initial process.
who ever wrote this story is so paraniod and doesent understand the logic of games , its just games and everything he says contradicts thing i know about the game
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I’m anticipating this to be a horribly written story, seeing as it’s a video game pasta. I love the narration though. Let’s see how this turns out…
EDIT 1: This is actually super good what the heck? LIKE THE TWIST IN THE MIDDLE IS SO FREAKIN WEIRD AND A PUN BUT YIKES
lol
I read this before I played the games. I was very dissapointed the games weren't actually like this.
I listened to this story in my mother tongue, and I'm kinda scared because I have been playing AC:WW since June of the past year haha
You did a really good job reading this, and it was very easy to listen to. I also think your voice fit the story well. Thank you for posting this, it was very good!
I... Have listened to hundreds of creepypasta, gaming, non gaming, and everything in-between. I don't think I've ever heard a story like this. I really don't know what to say. It's amazing.
Dude, THIS STORY WAS CREATED IN 2 0 0 7????? WHAT IN THE ACTUAL, LIKE, PRETTY ACTUAL FUCKING FUCK????? How has this superb story grown so forgotten by everyone, being a better written, more interesting and actually GOOD tale than 99.999999999999999999999999999999% of all time videogame creepypastas??? Like, it's insulting that only after so many fucking years i've found this, rotting in an abandoned corner of youtube. Like, WHAT THE FUCK, how did stories so stupidly TERRIBLE like Sonic.exe or its abortions have been more popular and remember than this??? It was so ahead of its time, and still to this day, remains as better than almost every gaming creepypasta I know (better than ben drowned, godzilla nes and all that shit), dude like honestly, how????
hahaha 'rotting' aw cmon that's not very nice :P
fr though, criminally underrated creepypasta; obviously i had to share it
@@Tiritiribobiri Hahahahah my bad bro, you did an amazing job editing and acting, don't mind what this john doe says. I enjoyed it a lot, I'm grateful you did this. And fucking yes, is absolutely unacceptable that this went under the radar the way it did. I think it has something to do with its title, it sounds like a cheap clickbait or something, not even close to be representative of the true value of the narrative. I guess knowledge is a privilege only a few can handle 🤣
The thing that really bugs me about this is the age that they made the main character. He's supposed to be 8 years old, but so much of what he says, how he thinks does not fit an 8 year old. If he was aged up even a few years, maybe 12 or 13...I feel that it would work so much better. But 8 just doesn't feel right.
It's being filtered through his adult mind.
In the epilogue it's revealed that the whole story is being told, by Billy, 20 years later. So although it's about an 8/9 year old kid, it's being told from the point of view of an adult in their late 20's after years of therapy and processing what happened. 8yo Billy probably wasn't thinking or speaking in that way but 28yo Billy does
i turned it into 17 in my brain
@@someguy1894That’s NOT how autism works 😭
The mail Southpark characters are like 8
I come back to this video time and time again because you do such a great job narrating. Setting up major plot points and twists (Tom Nook), giving each character in the story so much expressiveness, and overall a really engaging experience.
I really wish this video had more love, it’s amazing and I want to thank you for all of the sleepless nights you’ve helped me overcome and all of the hours of focus you’ve given me while I’m doing homework and prep materials for my engineering major.
Hope you have an amazing day, dude!!!!
Do you ever want to, like, print out a YT comment and hang it on your wall? No? Just me? Huh
No but seriously, thank you so much. The love that I *have* gotten on this video just blows me away. I knew I'd done okay, don't get me wrong, but I never thought people would want to watch/listen to it more than once!
I wish you the best of luck with your engineering major, and I hope it leads to a career you absolutely love.
I don't think I've ever been this scared by a creepypasta in a long time
Wow. This was... a trip, an emotional ride for sure. Your narration and editing are fantastic and compliment the great writing perfectly. I absolutely loved this.
Thank you. This is a _real_ keeper. I'm sticking around, I think.
Edit: holy shit you did the deltarune longplays too??? Haha! I had no idea! I loved those too. You're something alright! Surprising you haven't done any more creepypastas btw, you're a natural
Thank you so much for your kind words
@@Tiritiribobiri Hahah, glad to hear it!! And glad to hear there might be more in the future as well, I'd be hyped 👀
This must be the best creepy pasta I've ever heard. The way it became a pessimistic interpretation of how the game plays out is very clever, and I did not expect those twists and turns. I'm shivering! What an amazing story. Also, such a good job on the narration and added images.
As much of a classic of legend this is, the idea this kid is 8 years old and in only the first two chapters is swearing like million times the sailor Gulliver is, knows what a furry is and knows what the word Orwellion means. Like i know it's supposed to be he's telling this story years later but like, still. To me it makes ten times more sense if he's like, a teenager. like 13-16. Cause again what the fuck kind of 8 year old swears like that and knows what those words mean.
I had an issue with the age as well, not because of the swearing because I've actually heard young kids swear a lot like that. But the thought processes and his vocabulary don't fit an 8 year old at all. That was bugging me throughout the story.
Maybe he was telling the story as he lived many years to tell the tale and finally have peace.
I wish someone would do one for new horizons
Me too, that would be amazing
This is art
This is how middle schoolers talk about their school to their parents
i remember reading this before I gave billy a gruff man voice and marathon the box ending. it was halliourous
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This is honestly my favourite creepy pasta
I was enraptured by this story when i read it online as a kid. Immediately went to eBay to buy a copy of Wild World.
I love how the MC just straight up beats the villain to death with his bare hands
Great job narrating this. I'm listening to this while playing...get this... Animal Crossing New Horizons!!! 😂
Same
Entertained me over the course of a week. Thanks man.
This was really fantastic. Props to Chewbot for the original story and you for reading it so well.
Seconded. This was fantastic.
I came back to this after being nostalgic about it from when I was a teenager. It was really good up until the tunnel with Tom Nook. The ending was really goofy and relied on gore for scares, as well as being full of holes. It’s mostly a great story though, just don’t quite hit the landing.
This is the best thing ive ever heard
This deserves so much more views! I love it! 🖤
This is basically how I see my animal crossing games.
Awesome, thank you for this!
My eye itches now
2 things: 1) I downloaded this video and listened to repeatedly as I drove across the US, great work! It provided me lots of entertainment.
2) What recording do you use for that air raid siren where the sky lights up? I'm just curious.
1) Oh wow. I'm really glad you got so much entertainment out of this! Kinda honoured tbh; I hope you had a fun trip.
2) Went and hunted it down for ya! It's this one -- freesound.org/people/nooly/sounds/382611/ -- a recording of an air raid siren test in Prague. I fiddled with the volume levels here and there but it was otherwise perfect as is.
@@Tiritiribobiri You're welcome and thank you!
This story was so creative! Never have a felt genuine dread from a creepypasta before... and it was written in 2007?! Incredible!
This is my first time stumbling upon a site such as this. I've been finding a lot of these "mini-level-horror games," but I can't focus too well as I used to and I don't want to disturb anyone - or anything.
I keep getting seriously invested and then remembering this is an 8 year old narrator and busting up laughing. Great experience
Edit: I'm going to scream if the end means there was a reset. I'm going to say no it wasn't, because that doesn't make sense, and also for my own sanity.
it's not a reset, it's an alternate "bad" ending where he doesn't open the wrap in the box and doesn't get the key :D
@@tarekmoneimsaid Oh, that is a relief lmao
Man I heard this was a famous creepy pasta and always wanted to read it, but never got the chance
This story is so cool!
Brilliant reading. 👏
omg at the end he becomes the villager
It's an alternate ending.
@@siyahseekerwhat’s the other ending?
9:44 😭😭😭
Thats wild world ruined do new leaf next
Animal crossing got creepy
57:52 “hey pooh! how are you?”
cutlerine moment
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Watching this, I wish you can add music to add some tensions to some scenes. Makes the narration less boring.
i'll think about this advice if i do this sort of thing again; the secret is that i absolutely hate audio mixing and bgm especially lmao. im never really sure what im doing with background tracks, and these projects take so much effort and time even without them -- by the time i get to music im like ughhhh nooo.
but you're absolutely right, music would add something more. i just gotta buckle down and face it. 💪
@@Tiritiribobiri yeah. I honestly think sound effects and fitting music from horror games and animal crossing games in general would make the story more engaging. Rather than slapping a generic creepy music like most creepypasta channels.
@@Tiritiribobiri unless… I can actually… add the music for you. I can always add more sound effects to make most of the dramatic moments from the story more impactful.
@@Polychi1998 i appreciate this offer!! that's really very cool of you.
im not keen however on taking this video down to update it at this stage of its life; i think next time i do a thing like this i'll just keep music and sound more in mind through the initial process.
who ever wrote this story is so paraniod and doesent understand the logic of games , its just games and everything he says contradicts thing i know about the game
it's a creepypasta. 😐