I think it was a bit rushed, Like it was an amazing story but it kind of rushed it, Like You have a daughter whos about 5 after a month she wouldnt call Her dads friend Daddy, and Harry and Louis wouldnt be able to fall in love THAT fast. Like they hardly know eachother it took me and my girlfriend 7months of getting to know eachother before dating. Its a great story all im saying is dont rush it so much
Wait so who is darcy Harry's sis or his sister's child or adipted child or a friend's kid or what This is bloody confusing why did yoi do this yoi should do another part
im crying now this is adorable
aww this is so cute love it
Love it ... It's so cute it made me kick my table and hurt my foot for kicking ( u know how i feel )
aww how cuute i loved it :)
I LOVED it
Thanks for taking the time to make such good stories!
Awww this story is so cute!!!!!!!
I'm so goddamned confused right now
I think it was a bit rushed, Like it was an amazing story but it kind of rushed it, Like You have a daughter whos about 5 after a month she wouldnt call Her dads friend Daddy, and Harry and Louis wouldnt be able to fall in love THAT fast. Like they hardly know eachother it took me and my girlfriend 7months of getting to know eachother before dating. Its a great story all im saying is dont rush it so much
Well they fell in love on X factor when they frost saw each other so u never know love how I’m replying to ur comment 7 years after u write it pagaha
Ever heard of love at first sight
I also think it was a bit rushed but it can take people different amounts of time to fall in love. I did think that they got close quickly tho...
Wait so who is darcy Harry's sis or his sister's child or adipted child or a friend's kid or what
This is bloody confusing why did yoi do this yoi should do another part
OneDirection Lover One Direction Lover I think shes his child either adopted or single parent due to a mothers death or leaving but idk
omg this is so cute
Glad you like it! :)
i love it!!!1 so cute keep going
That was good!!
so sweet
This makes me feel weird
Aww I was like squealing towards the end
Thanks! :)
Wait did Harry think Louis was Darcy
sassy assley btw joshler is real*If he thought that was Darcy why'd he kiss them on the LIPS!!!!
Ur screwing with my feelings
Why not ZIAM? Why NIAM?😕
Jakima Marcano that’s what I think?!?
@Hudsyn Livingston I was✨Joking✨ and bruh that was 3 years ago 💀💀
awhhh lili im dying srry ill stop now
She know s what shits going down like lili's bf omfg I dident know what one was when I was that young
Amazing u have a gift
Guys if any of you have any requests on one shots i should do PLEASE tell me & i'll do them! :)
Bravo!👏
Larry’s babysitting story 😂
haha glad you like it! :)
Part 2 plz
Awww luved it a lot but u messed up my feelingsss
(Step dads account lolz)
you're fucking up my feelings
can you make more plzzzz
Hahaa! Glad you liked it! :)
What about boobear
Glad you did :)
I know where she gets the personality from
WAIT so liam and niall are dating??????? i am so confused right now
Good but its also uhh... I don't know
HAHA! Sorry! :) Love you! :D
Um .... Wired
Thank you! :)
Thank you :)