Suggestion, have you ever thought of doing the plot for a sonic and mario crossover adventure game? Because these Olympic Games games haven't been doing it justice.
I don't know if I said it but the people who were the writers for the the modern sonic games also worked on happy tree friends the infamously violent and disturbing show. Just let game apologist, Sega scourge, and garrulous be the writers for the sonic games. They'd do a better job then the current writers.
Damn, your Sonic dialogue, especially during that scene when he made Eggman apologize was amazing. He sounds much more like his heroic self than he did in Forces, it's awesome.
Thanks! I was having a hard time with that because Sonic isn't the best when it comes to these thins, but I hope it still felt like something he would say!
Garrulous64 well I just wanted you to know that Sonic and the secret rings, and Sonic and the Black Knight ARE canon the only proof is in Sonic generations when Sonic saves Tails
Honestly this is very entertaining and I love the interactions that feel so in character for them. Tails checking to see if he had grown a 3rd tail, Eggman's rant about Metal Sonic, Tails having his I told you so moment with Sonic when Classic ran after Metal and Robotnik. To answer the question I'd say a different Sonic 06 stage if you're not keeping Crisis City, since a Sonic 06 area would make for an interesting interaction and conversation between characters since Sonic 06's events were wiped from canon in the timeline. Possibly with a Mephiles or Iblis boss fight thrown in. Otherwise I'd say maybe a Sonic & The Secret Rings or Sonic & The Black Knight level. I can see a hilarious moment in the latter where Sonic remembers the events of Black Knight and tells Amy he really didn't forget their date.
Sand Oasis or Camelot Castle for either? Those seem to fit the 'popular zones' thingy Generations had been going for. -Would slice a dragon's horn to see Caliburn once more~-
The ones that actually understand the characters and their psychology and mannerisms, relationships, and understands their world (and the rules of the world) inside and out. Those well rounded fans, like Garr here, would be MOST well liked for this task.
Sega should’ve done that from the beginning. Sonic 4 and Streets of Rage 4 only became a reality because of the fans. If Sega let fans fix their games, this would be a financial boon for them.
3:00 honestly stuff like that where there's questions such as that makes me love the dialogue and interaction even more. Why didn't Classic swim through Labyrinth if he could swim through space though? Eh. Space probably. Answer to QOTD: Pretty much any zone from the handheld Sonic series mainly for the 3ds version like Egg Rocket from Advance or Bridge Zone from the Game Gear version of Sonic 1.
Man, I really hope this series comes back. Although, Garrulous, if you're stuck in writer's block or something, that is fine. I just wish there was a statement or something that said what happened to the SGRewritten.
It’s kinda sad that Robotnik is actually kinda an ok person. And eggman has almost NO REDEEMING TRAITS Also the fact that you voice acted Amy flirting with sonic, sonic crying for help, and tails responding, is hilarious
QotD: I would’ve loved to have seen a rendition of a level from the Storybook series in a different fashion. Outside of that, Flying Battery would’ve been amazing.
TNTom 13 I’m not too familiar with the Storybook series, but I’d say that Misty Lake is slightly more iconic imo (maybe because it’s the only one I’ve heard of 😂)
I kind of miss the sprite animation you used for the first part. This is still good, though - after all, the writing is what matters most, and you're nailing it.
Bro did i just hear Eggman state the bee law but with Metal Sonic! I better hear Modern Metal Sonic say "Ya like Jazz" in the next video. You brought this upon yourself.
I kinda wanna see a remake of a stage in a completely different formula, maybe something from 3D blast ...Did anyone notice that Eggman's unheard rambling at the end was the bee movie?
Why are you so good at this? I'm not saying that I've made my own rewritten to compare, but I'm a huge Sonic fan and a writer, and even I'm not sure I could come up with consistent story brilliance through character dynamics like you do.
I just write them the way I'd like to see them/how they're written in the comics (to an extent). As for the story, same thing. Writing what i'd love to see and obeying as many rules as possible going off the OG products. This one has a few more liberties here and there, but yeah.
My god, your humor is amazing! That bit where Sonic is talking about the “I told you so” is awesome! I also like that bit where Eggman talks about Tails with a third tail. (Sounds like a good OC idea. LOL) Your storytelling is also way better than SEGA’s. That bit in Sanctuary where Eggman and Sonic are arguing is so good! It’s akin to the seriousness you’d find in the comics! I love it! Good job!
When this eventually returns (or when I find the rest of it if it already exists) I hope Metal comes back and absorbs the Master Emerald to become Neo Metal Sonic
I love these rewrites. You, SegaScourge and Lord Danny are amazing with these concepts and rewrites for the Sonic games. I hope one day you guys do a collab.
“asccording to all known laws of aviation metal sonic should not be able to fly because he doesn't wings and that doesn't make any sense bleh bleh bleh blah blah” -eggman
12:53 You know, the Doctor has a point. Metal Sonic is a pretty cool character. Someone should write a game where you play as him *cough cough* Btw, love this episode. Always really excited to see what you cook up. Can't wait to see what's next. Keep it up!
I hope there's a scene where Metal Sonic and Classic Metal meet each other and see their predecessors like Robo Sonic, Silver Sonic, Mecha Sonic etc and perhaps they even find that unnamed sonic robot from adventure 1 and they ask why eggman built that. or maybe even encounter Eggman Nega and Metal 3.0
Fr. I use the terms Classic and modern to differentiate them, but that’s it. The point of Modern Sonic is to be a more mature version of Sonic, not a whole new dimension, that destroys all of Classic’s growth in the series
I feel that if we were to choose another level to add into Sonic Generations from the three eras, its would be Classic Sonic's Marble Zone, because I feel that the begining of the overground sections are decently speedy (first part of act 1), and the level would be based on that concept, with less waiting, or we could just have Starlight Zone. For a new dreamcast stage, even if I haven't played the dreamcast Sonic Games, having Metal Harbour would be a fun idea, or maybe Emerald Coast from the 3ds. I also have two suggestions for a "modern" zone, one where is should be, being Studiopolis BOIIIIIIII!!!! And as a "modern" stage, I would enjoy a "tutorial" level at the begining of the game being Sonic in White Space, as a level involving that would be very creative. I have no idea why I spent 7 minutes writing this.
I wonder if the Sonic Generations rewrite continues we meet the classic versions of Sonics friends who first showed up in the classic era (Amy, Tails, Knuckles, Vector, Charmy, Espio)
"And the next thing your going to say is that it's my fault that My younger self was still holding the portal device" Why does that reference sound familiar?
Wait, the boss that Classic Sonic faces after Sky Sanctuary is the Death Egg Robot, and Dr. Robotnik immediately gets captured after the battle, so will they just face an unpiloted Death Egg Robot that might possibly house a Chaos Emerald? Either way, I'm super stoked for the next episode in this arc.
To Answer the QoTD : I've recently played through Sonic Adventure 1 and I LOVED the Snowboarding section of Ice Peak. The music was bopping and I JAM to it all day. If they made an all out snowboard level in Generations, I would've LOVED that. Another thing I would've liked to see is a Sonic Riders reference where Sonic has to race against Jet at Metal City, the *first level* of the entire Sonic Riders trilogy. It also would be nice to see some Sonic 3D Blast references in the game as well. 3D Blast is underrated in a sense.
I heard eggman talking about the first line of the bee movie saying according to all laws of physics, bees should not been able to fly with their big bodies and tiny wings.
Suggestion, have you ever thought of doing the plot for a sonic and mario crossover adventure game?
Because these Olympic Games games haven't been doing it justice.
Oh my god I want to do that
Yes we need it
Yeth
@@Garrulous64 DO IT
@@Garrulous64 You could DEFINITELY do it, Garrulous.
I just realized we egg man is talking about metal he starts quoting the bee movie 13:00
I would pay to have Mike Pollok read that in the eggman voice
I was looking for a comment pointing this out
Rubicon Prime I agree
Omg he is!
I noticed that right away XD
"Tails help... personal space attack!"
Now THAT'S a meta line!
How so?
@@syweb2 Everyone needs to stay 6ft apart...
Yeah
"According to all known laws of aviation, Metal Sonic should not be able to fly-"
That one got me.
"(Inaudible) body and it doesn't have wings, and that doesn't make sense. Bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh, bleh bleh.."
I don't know if I said it but the people who were the writers for the the modern sonic games also worked on happy tree friends the infamously violent and disturbing show.
Just let game apologist, Sega scourge, and garrulous be the writers for the sonic games.
They'd do a better job then the current writers.
Yes those 3 are the star 3
You again
And the IDW sonic writers.
*THEY WROTE HAPPY F*CKING TREE FRIENDS!?*
ken pontac also wrote lazytown
Damn, your Sonic dialogue, especially during that scene when he made Eggman apologize was amazing. He sounds much more like his heroic self than he did in Forces, it's awesome.
"Tails, please help. Personal space under attack!" I love that line.
Me too and wish it was in the official game.
What about "now's not the time for an 'i told you so', especially for something i didn't even do!"
"Well, technically..."
"I DON'T WANNA HEAR IT!"
What about when Eggman started reciting the bee movie script
13:00
@@thedman1754 this made me chuckle while reading so I can't imagine how funny it'd be in a cutscene
Boy, Sonic knows how to be assertive to Eggman. I loved that speech!
Thanks! I was having a hard time with that because Sonic isn't the best when it comes to these thins, but I hope it still felt like something he would say!
Garrulous64 question: Do you speak Spanish?
No.
Garrulous64 well I just wanted you to know that Sonic and the secret rings, and Sonic and the Black Knight ARE canon the only proof is in Sonic generations when Sonic saves Tails
@@Garrulous64 Though he has no qualms with shoving all the "Friendship is Power" malarkey down Eggman's throat.
Honestly this is very entertaining and I love the interactions that feel so in character for them. Tails checking to see if he had grown a 3rd tail, Eggman's rant about Metal Sonic, Tails having his I told you so moment with Sonic when Classic ran after Metal and Robotnik.
To answer the question I'd say a different Sonic 06 stage if you're not keeping Crisis City, since a Sonic 06 area would make for an interesting interaction and conversation between characters since Sonic 06's events were wiped from canon in the timeline. Possibly with a Mephiles or Iblis boss fight thrown in.
Otherwise I'd say maybe a Sonic & The Secret Rings or Sonic & The Black Knight level. I can see a hilarious moment in the latter where Sonic remembers the events of Black Knight and tells Amy he really didn't forget their date.
Sand Oasis or Camelot Castle for either? Those seem to fit the 'popular zones' thingy Generations had been going for.
-Would slice a dragon's horn to see Caliburn once more~-
Every time Metal Sonic appears in something, I get 10% happier
Please, we need the fans to start writing the games’ story.
The ones that actually understand the characters and their psychology and mannerisms, relationships, and understands their world (and the rules of the world) inside and out. Those well rounded fans, like Garr here, would be MOST well liked for this task.
Let’s be honest for a sec
Everyone has a different perspective of Sonic characters
Sega should’ve done that from the beginning. Sonic 4 and Streets of Rage 4 only became a reality because of the fans. If Sega let fans fix their games, this would be a financial boon for them.
wait...
Why doesn’t Sonic Team hire...
oh wait
They make the games they make the story and the make they music
3:00 honestly stuff like that where there's questions such as that makes me love the dialogue and interaction even more. Why didn't Classic swim through Labyrinth if he could swim through space though? Eh. Space probably.
Answer to QOTD: Pretty much any zone from the handheld Sonic series mainly for the 3ds version like Egg Rocket from Advance or Bridge Zone from the Game Gear version of Sonic 1.
I think it's best answer is that he both didn't think about it and sonic is not the biggest fan of water,let alone water levels.
I caught onto that Bee Movie reference, you sly devil
Man, I really hope this series comes back. Although, Garrulous, if you're stuck in writer's block or something, that is fine. I just wish there was a statement or something that said what happened to the SGRewritten.
Agreed, this was amazing!
"According to all known laws of aviation, Metal Sonic should not be able to fly"
13:00 Is... *Is Eggman reading the Bee Movie script?!*
Into the Indie think you meant 13:00
@@m.candsprings5544 Oops yeah
It’s kinda sad that Robotnik is actually kinda an ok person. And eggman has almost NO REDEEMING TRAITS
Also the fact that you voice acted Amy flirting with sonic, sonic crying for help, and tails responding, is hilarious
He's a one-man acting troupe.
QotD: I would’ve loved to have seen a rendition of a level from the Storybook series in a different fashion. Outside of that, Flying Battery would’ve been amazing.
Dinosaur Jungle? Camelot Castle?
TNTom 13 I’m not too familiar with the Storybook series, but I’d say that Misty Lake is slightly more iconic imo (maybe because it’s the only one I’ve heard of 😂)
It wouldn't make sense, though. Eggman never set foot on none of the Storybook series' locations
"You'll see in just a second..."
*AD pops up*
Me: "You lied to me."
I kind of miss the sprite animation you used for the first part. This is still good, though - after all, the writing is what matters most, and you're nailing it.
For the question my answer is hidden palace I always wondered what it would look like in 3D
Hidden palace is already in the game, nobody has found it yet
@@siraccountless2195 then how would you know it exists
What is this, an interrogation? I don’t need to answer questions!
@@siraccountless2195 e
Which version?
Sonic 2 or 3?
Bro did i just hear Eggman state the bee law but with Metal Sonic! I better hear Modern Metal Sonic say "Ya like Jazz" in the next video. You brought this upon yourself.
It was just background noise, not totally canon lol
@@Garrulous64 But you have the power to make it cannon tho.¯\_(ツ)_/¯
I kinda wanna see a remake of a stage in a completely different formula, maybe something from 3D blast
...Did anyone notice that Eggman's unheard rambling at the end was the bee movie?
Why are you so good at this? I'm not saying that I've made my own rewritten to compare, but I'm a huge Sonic fan and a writer, and even I'm not sure I could come up with consistent story brilliance through character dynamics like you do.
I just write them the way I'd like to see them/how they're written in the comics (to an extent). As for the story, same thing. Writing what i'd love to see and obeying as many rules as possible going off the OG products. This one has a few more liberties here and there, but yeah.
@@Garrulous64 how about a Mecha Sonic boss fight for Sky Sanctuary?
13:02 Well, of course, I'd hear myself talk any day if I have Mike Pollock's raspy voice.
My god, your humor is amazing! That bit where Sonic is talking about the “I told you so” is awesome! I also like that bit where Eggman talks about Tails with a third tail. (Sounds like a good OC idea. LOL) Your storytelling is also way better than SEGA’s. That bit in Sanctuary where Eggman and Sonic are arguing is so good! It’s akin to the seriousness you’d find in the comics! I love it! Good job!
And we Never got a proper part 4, nor a conclusion to this rewrite... 😔
4:38, Sonic, chill, out, my dude. CHILL!
Chill..i dogs. *Ba dum tzzzzzz*
@@autistichades5552 OMG I didn't notice I made a pun.
@@martawashington6448 good job pal :)
@@autistichades5552 Thanks
When this eventually returns (or when I find the rest of it if it already exists) I hope Metal comes back and absorbs the Master Emerald to become Neo Metal Sonic
"TAILS PLEASE HELP. PERSONAL SPACE UNDER ATTACK."
2 years later, this line still slaps.
Oh God, Eggman gushing over metal sonic is both precious and hilarious 🤣🤣
Alternate title Sonic acts much more mature than smug and past eggman ponders his soon to occur life choices.
Me: * sees my boi Metal Sonic in thumbnail *
Me: *woke*
Hope this series continues for a while! It’s amazing!
i like the thought of sonic just becoming more and more mad at Eggman
I love these rewrites. You, SegaScourge and Lord Danny are amazing with these concepts and rewrites for the Sonic games. I hope one day you guys do a collab.
QOTD: I would love to see Toy Kingdom from Sonic Advance 3 as a stage in generations
Personally, I would've liked Hydrocity Zone added to Generations.
A stage I'd like to see made by the devs is the full Wave Ocean stage which includes the mach-speed
“asccording to all known laws of aviation metal sonic should not be able to fly because he doesn't wings and that doesn't make any sense bleh bleh bleh blah blah” -eggman
12:53 You know, the Doctor has a point. Metal Sonic is a pretty cool character. Someone should write a game where you play as him *cough cough*
Btw, love this episode. Always really excited to see what you cook up. Can't wait to see what's next. Keep it up!
Eggman of the present :says sorry
Every one:what?
Tails:looks for a third tail.
sonic has been a big joke for a few years.but if this was in the game you would have SAVED sonic!
Shit, they should hire YOU to write for the IDW comic. It'd actually have a competent writer for the first time ever.
Please continue this! It’s so good!
Assuming this is cancelled as it's been 2 years and there still is no part 4
Alternate ending:
Sonic and Eggman: *screaming at each other
Tails:
*THAT IS E N O U G H*
It’s nice that you were somewhat able to combine goofy sonic with serious sonic
My wishlist for the other 2 (or 1) bonus stages
-grand metropolis
-water palace
Can’t wait for the next part of this version of the story, this is really well done 👍
Sonic: I hate time travel!!
Me: *Sips coffee, glaring at Sonic '06* You and me both, buddy
6:51 YOOOO! So Here He Meets Amy While In Generations? Sweet.
yo ngl i hope water palace is in this and blaze makes an appearance for it and helps them and she's basically modern sonic for it, that'd be nuts
Legends say part 4 will one day grace our eyes
Can't wait for part 4...
*When ever it comes out.*
As much as I love this channel, I can't help but loathe how he usually leaves his fanfics unfinished
@@jamiegioca9448 exactly...
@@jamiegioca9448 if your not going to finish give it to someone else or let's the fans finish it for you.
@@jamiegioca9448 Sadly, he's stopped doing them ... I don't know what caused him to drop them entirely but yeah. Sucks, his rewrites are top-tier
@@wuba5456 Did they say that in a Twitter thread or is that just a hunch?
I hope there's a scene where Metal Sonic and Classic Metal meet each other and see their predecessors like Robo Sonic, Silver Sonic, Mecha Sonic etc and perhaps they even find that unnamed sonic robot from adventure 1 and they ask why eggman built that. or maybe even encounter Eggman Nega and Metal 3.0
QotD: Man, anything from Sonic CD would have been great. Maybe Quartz Quadrant or Collision Chaos?
AHHH! PERSON!
wait it's you. i've never seen you before. hey you have glasses.
like me.
respectacles.
The funny thing? I do have glasses
Glasses squad, RISE UP!!
@@sorashirogane7039 GLASSES SQUAD!
Glasses squad, roll out!
Glasses squad!
When you get to the 06 part of the story, no one will remember what happens. In the end of the game, the whole story gets retconned from existing.
Not in this story.
I still think the idea of a “classic” Sonic and a “modern” Sonic is extremely stupid but this rewrite is pretty alright.
Fr. I use the terms Classic and modern to differentiate them, but that’s it. The point of Modern Sonic is to be a more mature version of Sonic, not a whole new dimension, that destroys all of Classic’s growth in the series
Question Of The Day: I wish that stardust speedway (actual level) was in sonic generations.
Instead of crisis city, I was thinking that stage where you run along the water fall for that mach speed section.
Man, I wish Mecha sonic appeared in the story since they are in sky sanctuary
My personal wish would be spring yard zone. I just want to go bumping around listening to it’s gonna be me
I love the voiceover with eggman talking by himself
I love this series so far. The story isn't as basic as a piece of cake,now.
This while thing with Robotnik and Egg man is genuinely funny. I have no idea how this would be written in Japan, but I love it.
Just came back to watch the rewrites after a year. Are we getting a continuation? Sorry if I'm another stupid person to ask this question.
To answer the QOTD, I think it would have been nice if Wave Ocean was featured in Sonic Generations.
I would love to see any Sonic CD level and see it turned 3D
I really wanted Ice Cap Zone. The sound track is so good.
Garrulous: Classic Sonic shivers
The footage: *fucking breakdancing*
I feel that if we were to choose another level to add into Sonic Generations from the three eras, its would be Classic Sonic's Marble Zone, because I feel that the begining of the overground sections are decently speedy (first part of act 1), and the level would be based on that concept, with less waiting, or we could just have Starlight Zone. For a new dreamcast stage, even if I haven't played the dreamcast Sonic Games, having Metal Harbour would be a fun idea, or maybe Emerald Coast from the 3ds. I also have two suggestions for a "modern" zone, one where is should be, being Studiopolis BOIIIIIIII!!!! And as a "modern" stage, I would enjoy a "tutorial" level at the begining of the game being Sonic in White Space, as a level involving that would be very creative. I have no idea why I spent 7 minutes writing this.
I wonder if the Sonic Generations rewrite continues we meet the classic versions of Sonics friends who first showed up in the classic era (Amy, Tails, Knuckles, Vector, Charmy, Espio)
"And the next thing your going to say is that it's my fault that My younger self was still holding the portal device"
Why does that reference sound familiar?
Wait, the boss that Classic Sonic faces after Sky Sanctuary is the Death Egg Robot, and Dr. Robotnik immediately gets captured after the battle, so will they just face an unpiloted Death Egg Robot that might possibly house a Chaos Emerald? Either way, I'm super stoked for the next episode in this arc.
13:00 Love, how Eggman's speech about metal sonic smoothly transitioned into the Bee movie script. Great stuff!
I’d probably choose ANY stage from the storybook series. I really think that the gameplay from Generations could make those stages really fun.
11:19 - Best introvert line I have heard in a long time 🤣🤣🤣 (I know Sonic is more of an extravert, but you get the point)
I would love to see Angel Island and the Master Emerald come into the plot
Sega needs to hire you for their plots cuz this shit of good
Aww man, I just found these three vids and seeing that it's cancelled is gut wrenching. It was so fun watching these D:
Either apóstos or eggmanland from unleashed, I really like those levels
Whenever I see a new rewritten video, it brightens my day. Nice job with this one 👍🏽
QOTD: Wing Fortress. Would've loved seeing that in 3D.
5:37 so about 100 years from now?
Sonic 3 Special Stages. I don't know, it's just one of the dreams I've had as a kid.
The answer: I'd love to see emerald coast instead of Speed highway
I love these I just kinda wish that they were longer, like 25 minutes to 30.
Egg Fleet Zone would be an awesome stage!
To Answer the QoTD : I've recently played through Sonic Adventure 1 and I LOVED the Snowboarding section of Ice Peak. The music was bopping and I JAM to it all day. If they made an all out snowboard level in Generations, I would've LOVED that.
Another thing I would've liked to see is a Sonic Riders reference where Sonic has to race against Jet at Metal City, the *first level* of the entire Sonic Riders trilogy.
It also would be nice to see some Sonic 3D Blast references in the game as well. 3D Blast is underrated in a sense.
I got something for ya...Shadow the Hedgehog (his solo game) Rewritten
3:49 Cuz Metal Sonic fixes everything 🤣
My answer for the question of the day is laybrinth zone and it would look legit in 3d
I thought you were continuing this series. When's the next part coming out?
I want someone to make this a game once you're done.
I heard eggman talking about the first line of the bee movie saying according to all laws of physics, bees should not been able to fly with their big bodies and tiny wings.
I would want to see lava reef, emerald coast, angel island, star dust speedway, hydrocity and red mountain in sonic generations.
@Matt Child Emerald Coast IS in Sonic Generations tho
When is the next part happening or is it canceled?
I would love Star Light Zone, cos Sonic 1 never gets anything but Green Hill, plus you could add in bits from Starlight Carnival