'ROMEO AND JULIET' - GCSE GRADE 9 MODEL ESSAY: HOW TO WRITE A WINNING ESSAY FOR ENGLISH MOCK EXAMS!

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  • Опубликовано: 17 окт 2024

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  • @FirstRateTutors
    @FirstRateTutors  2 года назад

    Sign up for our GCSE AQA 'Ultimate English Language and English Literature' Revision Course: www.firstratetutors.com/gcse-course

  • @chl0beary
    @chl0beary 3 года назад +6

    So if they give me a certain part of the poem can i reference to other parts of the poem as long as the theme is the same ?

  • @tayy3035
    @tayy3035 4 года назад +94

    I just don’t understand how people think like this, like half those words I don’t understand😂

    • @studyaccount1449
      @studyaccount1449 3 года назад +2

      how do u not understand, I am only in year 8 and I understand more, smh

    • @nomustachemanhunter2605
      @nomustachemanhunter2605 3 года назад

      @@studyaccount1449 fr

    • @sandyvioletchowdhury
      @sandyvioletchowdhury 2 года назад

      Just practice using the peel structure and sentence starters and it will soon flow naturally :)

    • @auveus5036
      @auveus5036 2 года назад +3

      Me too. Some part of my comprehension is not able to process it. I guess you have to be really knowledgeable in the English language to understand this. For now I still seem to me a newie.

    • @imran3172
      @imran3172 2 года назад +2

      @@studyaccount1449 do u understand the whole of romeo and juliet? The language and what they mean?

  • @rolosilver3256
    @rolosilver3256 2 года назад +20

    Holy smokes. This is exactly what I need! I can never thank you enough.

  • @fryhyh
    @fryhyh 2 года назад +15

    why do ihave to analyse a 500 year old text :(

  • @coltonhedrick9365
    @coltonhedrick9365 3 года назад +15

    Okay so the way you just read that made my 700 point essay, worksheets, and mini essay due on Friday sorta worth it. Still probably won’t do the worksheets because I hate English class

  • @hnkk6214
    @hnkk6214 3 года назад +10

    could you put a pdf of this essay

  • @jssmmshee7178
    @jssmmshee7178 2 года назад +9

    No music plz it’s very distracting

  • @jaimetudor2440
    @jaimetudor2440 3 года назад +7

    i feel like there wasn’t enough context idk lol

  • @Gullivergullivergugugulliver
    @Gullivergullivergugugulliver 3 года назад

    I'm trying to write a jane Schaffer style essay about Romeo and Juliet. How should I start my introduction? Especially I don't know how to write a great hook.

  • @ManpreetKaur-kd4nf
    @ManpreetKaur-kd4nf 2 года назад +4

    Thank you sooo much! I have my exam tomorrow wish me luck lol

  • @imaanabdoune3204
    @imaanabdoune3204 2 года назад

    I literally have a english literature exam about how love is presented in romeo and juliet but i am struggling to find the right video. pls wish me good luck

  • @RealU178
    @RealU178 3 года назад +6

    what if the teacher made the prompt of the essay What factor is most responsible for the difficulties facing the two lovers and their families? can you give me an idea of what i could write because i’m going blank and it’s due in 1 day 😭🥺😂

    • @willhobson2772
      @willhobson2772 3 года назад

      How did it go?

    • @RealU178
      @RealU178 3 года назад

      @@willhobson2772 i didn’t turn it in yet lol

    • @willhobson2772
      @willhobson2772 3 года назад

      @@RealU178 loool bit late

  • @divinee4330
    @divinee4330 3 года назад +2

    Is this an AQA question?

  • @lovedworm
    @lovedworm 2 года назад

    wait i thought you need to put context in every paragraph though

    • @JessieArt
      @JessieArt Год назад +1

      Yes you’re supposed to. also maybe talk about how the characters aren’t real people.. shakespear constructs them in a certain way.

    • @lovedworm
      @lovedworm Год назад +1

      @@JessieArt yea i already did my gcses last year lmao thank u tho

  • @k.4942
    @k.4942 Год назад

    I'm done

  • @heesub64
    @heesub64 3 года назад +6

    This essay is repetitive garbage that is written to appear as if it is written by a student. It's very plotty and much of the analysis is garbage. I CALL BS.

  • @erickGarcia-cu1js
    @erickGarcia-cu1js 2 года назад

    Would it be plagiarism if I copied this essay

    • @pptom1295
      @pptom1295 2 года назад

      It's probably fine 🫁

    • @twilightfantasy9838
      @twilightfantasy9838 2 года назад

      It most likely would be

    • @polanski2399
      @polanski2399 2 года назад

      copying isn't gonna get you very far with your future studies. analyse, understand and apply will be what gets you grades