What NOT to do on your EXTENDED ESSAY | my EE mistakes and advice!

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  • Опубликовано: 28 дек 2024

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  • @cleohlee1420
    @cleohlee1420 4 года назад +439

    1. Don't pick a topic out of your wheelhouse
    - NO interdisciplinary research question!
    - You don't have to reinvent the wheel--just a bit of nuance, but there should be research available.
    2. Don't start before you know exactly what you'll write
    -Need a short, concise table of contents!
    -Ensure you know how exactly you'll answer your research question; take the rq as guidance for your essay.
    -You need to know how each of your paragraphs contributes to your overall argument.
    3. Don't start too early and don't start editing far after you started writing.
    -The day after you wrote out your first draft, take to someone else and walk them through your arguments without looking at that essay.
    -Don't put your first draft on the backburner--there's a chance you don't know what you meant.
    4. Don't overlook the importance of good grammar.
    -bad grammar doesn't equal a bad argument.
    -you'll feel better about your paper with good writing. you might be frustrated with the writing itself rather than the content.
    5. Don't overthink the EE!
    -It's just a stepping stone in getting your diploma.
    -Practice, yes, but it won't make or break you.

    • @EMMASAUDIOS
      @EMMASAUDIOS 4 года назад +6

      hi!! I'm just starting my EE and I'm really scared about it lol, I found this comment super helpful, but I've got one question... what do you mean when you say "take the rq as guidance for your essay"?

    • @cleohlee1420
      @cleohlee1420 4 года назад +3

      @@EMMASAUDIOS So sorry for the late reply! I took it as once you have a rq (aka research question), find information that answers it instead of finding information and then formulating a rq/changing the rq to fit your research. Also, all I did was copy down what she said in the video.

    • @daxtaylor9514
      @daxtaylor9514 3 года назад

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      I was stupid forgot the login password. I love any help you can offer me.

    • @louiscollin5773
      @louiscollin5773 3 года назад

      @Dax Taylor Instablaster :)

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      @daxtaylor9514 3 года назад

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      Seems to take quite some time so I will get back to you later with my results.

  • @aleksanderpyka6126
    @aleksanderpyka6126 4 года назад +215

    Whining time! I am writing an EE in psychology and turned in my draft in December. One week later my teacher told me that it was absolutely excellent and only minor changes needed to be made. I was over the moon. Cue a psychology class two weeks ago - my supervisor has just come back from a conference and said that she has bad news for all eight people who wrote a psych EE. She revealed that she did not know the subject specific criteria and only read them at the conference and therefore our essays were all shit. She advised that I write my essay again, completely from scratch. The deadline is two days from now and I’m still not finished even though I devote every bit of my time to writing. I really want to cry.

    • @sta5348
      @sta5348 4 года назад +41

      ohhh lord I hope it goes well! I haven't even started the essay due to health problems and I'm really worried. I changed my topic halfway because I didn't have enough to talk about to support the question. I'm worried. I'm sure you'll do fine however since you've done research and everything and at least started it.

    • @um9348
      @um9348 3 года назад +13

      Are you okay? Can I have an update?

    • @Kitten_Puff
      @Kitten_Puff 2 года назад +4

      Just wanted to ask, when do everyone start EEs? Cause I am starting it actually pretty late and seeing these really freak me out, also I am known for doing things in last minute....so ya my EE doesn't look good at all so far 🥲

    • @lenny3394
      @lenny3394 2 года назад

      @@Kitten_Puff I'm guessing your in ib2 rn?

    • @noonie-i2g
      @noonie-i2g 2 года назад +12

      That is your teachers fault

  • @elenas7158
    @elenas7158 6 лет назад +184

    Lol I'm writing my EE now and having someone else say "your first draft doesn't have to be perfect" makes the realization actually settle in. Love the video and thanks for the advice :)

  • @Bxkatoowavy
    @Bxkatoowavy 5 лет назад +325

    my final draft is due tomorrow and I haven't even finished my first draft :(

    • @RenaudAlly
      @RenaudAlly 5 лет назад +71

      how was it? why did you do this to yourself? i dont get it

    • @BigBoatSwim
      @BigBoatSwim 5 лет назад +70

      Then why are you watching this and not typing

    • @realobeeno
      @realobeeno 4 года назад +53

      he died

    • @m0narkh
      @m0narkh 4 года назад +25

      @@realobeeno he probably did

    • @almendraman
      @almendraman 4 года назад +43

      This comment is a gravesite.

  • @theglitterqueen6447
    @theglitterqueen6447 6 лет назад +329

    your intro is amazing!

  • @clairechan1355
    @clairechan1355 2 года назад +10

    Thank you so much😭I'm so frustrated about my future and I've been crying for so many nights, seeing someone that has gone through all of this and in a better place made me feel so much better

  • @heartoftarde
    @heartoftarde 6 лет назад +48

    you just described exactly where I am with my EE! I am way over word limit, started writing much too early (without an outline), and am still trying to fit my question to my essay! It sucks because I spent so much energy on it when I could have just gone for a straightforward question from the beginning :(

  • @berenice1097
    @berenice1097 6 лет назад +22

    This was super super super helpful! I'm currently having to complete my EE in less than 3 weeks and this video really helped me stress less about it :)

  • @faradaycool4058
    @faradaycool4058 2 года назад +5

    Thank you for being so honest and not being snob, unlike most IB YT advice

  • @j.p.caruso6660
    @j.p.caruso6660 5 лет назад +5

    Excellent advice! I hope ALL who watch this take your suggestions to heart. It will save them tremendous grief.

  • @alyr228
    @alyr228 5 лет назад +16

    ahh I've just started my EE - this has helped so much!!

  • @savedaccount5614
    @savedaccount5614 6 лет назад +15

    I'm in the final editing process and I really loved this!

  • @niki9086
    @niki9086 5 лет назад +48

    can you plz make a video about how you managed your time preparing for SAT and doing IB

  • @diegoavila3088
    @diegoavila3088 Год назад +6

    Lilia, I will begin doing IB here in Switzerland for the next two years.
    My subjects:
    -Physics SL
    -English A (Lit&Perf) SL
    -French B SL
    -Math AI HL
    -History HL
    -Geography HL
    I just expect to get this.
    I do care about all that, and I actually think it is good to get out of the comfort zone.
    I possibly do my EE on History.

    • @m.h2557
      @m.h2557 Год назад

      mein beileid

  • @nightcorelover9677
    @nightcorelover9677 6 лет назад +32

    You're so underrated! You're awesome

  • @engels_diary
    @engels_diary 6 лет назад +81

    i am 14 years old in my first IB year. This 3 first months of school have been hell for me. Tmr i have to give my EE topic and i haven't thought of it yet.
    I hate the amount of pressure i am feeling at this age.

  • @novoti43
    @novoti43 4 года назад +4

    I am going to write my Extended Essay. The truth is that I do not overthink about it, but it is impossible do not worry a little bit...
    I want to congratulate you for the video :-) It was funny and interesting.

  • @irlandamartinez8267
    @irlandamartinez8267 6 лет назад +28

    hehe, yea... my essay is due tomorrow, wish me luck!

  • @yukolin1824
    @yukolin1824 Год назад +1

    Thank you for being so nice and comforting , I'm entering grade 10 and transferring to a ib international school ( even though I studied in a Chinese school for 10 years) . I was really frustrated with my future in high School because I thing my English isn't good and I'm scared of ib . But your video really comfort me a lot. TY:)

  • @caroamatt
    @caroamatt 3 года назад +2

    im a pre-IB student and im just freaking out but you transmit such a peaceful vibe im not that afraid anymore lol

    • @selbbbb5837
      @selbbbb5837 3 года назад +1

      Don’t be so sure 😬 I’m in my 4th month of IB and well.. it feels like hell. Still don’t make this stop you from choosing IB cause it’s a fact that it’s challenging.

  • @nataszam3044
    @nataszam3044 4 года назад +1

    I'm so happy I watched this now and not a day later. Thank you for this video :)

  • @wizdum4247
    @wizdum4247 3 года назад +1

    I am dreading the essay right now. thanks for the help.

  • @zenahlarge788
    @zenahlarge788 5 лет назад +51

    But the EE does kinda make or break you diploma. If you get an E on it or on your TOK then you don’t get the diploma

    • @s.c.8383
      @s.c.8383 3 года назад +6

      i think she meant that all you need to get on the EE is a passing grade. turning in a perfect essay vs a mediocre one does not really change the fact that you are graduating.

  • @draco_explosionsinc9250
    @draco_explosionsinc9250 5 лет назад +12

    This helped me destress so much.

  • @May-bt7dw
    @May-bt7dw 6 лет назад +7

    Thank you so much for your tips!! I am a huge mess in this whole IB thing :c but you helped me

  • @tianyeG
    @tianyeG 4 года назад +4

    Thank you so much! I'm working on my first draft and your tips are very helpful. I even feel less overwhelmed just by watching ur video ahaha

  • @honganhnguyen2056
    @honganhnguyen2056 6 лет назад +6

    Thank you for all the helpful videos on the IB:D

  • @youtubefan6158
    @youtubefan6158 5 лет назад +4

    Im now on the "outline" stage and already have some worries if my topic is ok... gonna read the guide 😅 wish me good luck!
    GOOD LUCK GUYS!

  • @rozai6838
    @rozai6838 4 года назад +1

    i love your intro it's so creative and cool!

  • @AJD22
    @AJD22 5 лет назад +3

    UR THE BEST! thank you, I'm doing my IB now, and I think I'm over thinking about ee. As if IB as all about the ee!

  • @poe8770
    @poe8770 4 года назад +67

    is it me or does she have a phat piece of steak in the background

    • @wafabhayani7815
      @wafabhayani7815 4 года назад +8

      ah the classic steak in a bottle

    • @raxacorico
      @raxacorico 4 года назад +6

      Thats a salt light 😂😂😂

  • @pro.laps.gaming
    @pro.laps.gaming 5 лет назад +16

    Currently writing my paper that’s due tomorrow night :P wish me luck bros

    • @yigite
      @yigite 4 года назад +3

      how did it go

  • @pa_u_los
    @pa_u_los 5 лет назад +11

    It's funny bc i saw this video before sending my first draft to my supervisor. Guess what happens? I had to repeat it again entirely. I could stay with the topic. Now i'm finishing the second draft trying to know where i have to put the recommendations.
    PD: Do your EE in 1. Sth you like. 2. If you don't like any subject pick a Group 1 (bc is where most A's are) and know if your supervisor is going to be good.
    I'm doing it in a group 3 subject (._:) and with a supervisor that sucks. ;)

    • @et8387
      @et8387 5 лет назад

      What do you mean by Group 1 or 3 subjects?

    • @danielhu5139
      @danielhu5139 4 года назад +1

      @@et8387 Group 1 is a literature and language EE. Group 3 is a social science essay. Kinda like English Vs. Econ/History kinda thing

    • @et8387
      @et8387 4 года назад

      Well I‘m one year into the course now and should have known this because I‘m now doing my EE in a group 3 and kind of regret it (especially since I can’t actually carry out my experiments because of Covid 19)

    • @danielhu5139
      @danielhu5139 4 года назад

      @@et8387 ah ic ic, that's unfortunate. I'm also doing an EE in group 3, if u need any help, feel free to msg me

  • @s.s3906
    @s.s3906 5 лет назад +6

    I couldn't write my essay on my best-interest subject because of the limited amount of students per supervisor. I just can't get any motivation to start it. Half of my summer vacation is gone, but I have only written 1000 words. And the IAs, college applications... It's just a mess

    • @ee7692
      @ee7692 3 года назад +1

      dude sameeee school starts in two weeks for me and I haven't started my maths IA or wrote one single word on my EE... guess who's getting zero sleep

    • @r0saa13
      @r0saa13 3 года назад

      @@ee7692 im in the same exact position as you🥲 my first draft is due on the first and i only have written like 200 words

  • @kamom302
    @kamom302 5 лет назад +44

    Holyshit you just calmed me down.

    • @sandro574
      @sandro574 5 лет назад +1

      kam O. Bruh I’m currently panicking cause my EE is fully inspired from internet😂fuck me

  • @mustafakarakose1122
    @mustafakarakose1122 3 года назад +2

    Thanks Ivy. It is really useful. Nowadays, I am searching IB for my son, he is gonna start grade 9 if he gets acceptance from IB School. For sure, I will let you know if I need a support. 😊

  • @AP-se2zs
    @AP-se2zs 5 лет назад +9

    You have a really creative intro!

  • @micaeladelgadobriones7836
    @micaeladelgadobriones7836 5 лет назад +24

    How much did you get on your EE?

  • @FriendOfMara
    @FriendOfMara 4 года назад +1

    I wish I had watched this sooner. I have to submit my first draft of my cybersecurity World Studies EE using Global Politics and Computer Science in a couple days. I definitely picked a topic way to far out of my wheelhouse....

  • @sohamsali5473
    @sohamsali5473 4 года назад

    I am going to start ib this year loved your advice

  • @theo3400o1
    @theo3400o1 6 месяцев назад

    I am actually writting my EE intro, but i am so stressed because my teacher tell me that its not an intro. and I need to send my first draft in September.
    Thank you so much for yours advise !

  • @karinazhang8292
    @karinazhang8292 5 лет назад +1

    OMG This video is soooooo helpful!!! Thank you sooooo much!!!!

  • @minamigutierrezsato534
    @minamigutierrezsato534 4 года назад +2

    Haven’t decided my research questions and I’m in 2nd year ib.

  • @hujan5005
    @hujan5005 5 лет назад +6

    Just a quick question. How much does university look at you EE?
    I plan to major science (perhaps biochemistry), but our school is not well equipped and even teachers are recommending against it.

    • @Owandle
      @Owandle Год назад +1

      its been 3 years, in the end did you choose a science?

    • @laraasmr7996
      @laraasmr7996 Год назад

      @@Owandle i wanna know too!!

  • @weronikaryfka3088
    @weronikaryfka3088 3 года назад +1

    Great video! I'm starting in 3 weeks :0

  • @ivankas52
    @ivankas52 5 лет назад +2

    I feel you bro. 💕✨

  • @Nosoyyo7
    @Nosoyyo7 4 года назад +1

    Well, I guess I´ll just go on with my essay... English is not my mother tongue, but I decided to make my EE in this language. I don´t wanna die yet, but I´m really tired.

  • @carolinabeck6033
    @carolinabeck6033 3 года назад +1

    I don´t know how to make a detailed structure of the Extended essay in English category 2b

    • @gointoorbit
      @gointoorbit Год назад

      it's been 2 years, how did it go?

  • @mariaswiatek807
    @mariaswiatek807 6 лет назад +1

    Wow, this video was fab!

  • @danielgarciacalle475
    @danielgarciacalle475 3 года назад +1

    Your intro is awesome;!!

  • @Mc-fj2ev
    @Mc-fj2ev 5 лет назад +2

    I have to submit my ee in one month and just did my introoo :’)

  • @Marinameyers05
    @Marinameyers05 2 года назад +2

    only a week and something, and i barely have half an essay

  • @utopiasekei6859
    @utopiasekei6859 6 лет назад +5

    That ending never fails to make me laugh 😂 😂 😂 I even tried to imitate it 😝 And as always, love the video!! ✨

  • @stefanom.7939
    @stefanom.7939 5 лет назад

    Thanks so much for the video, extremely helpful!

  • @sta5348
    @sta5348 4 года назад +1

    My final draft is due tomorrow and I haven't even started the essay wtf idk how to tell my supervisor abt this (I was in the hospital for a month sooo) I don't think I can finish it on time tbh

  • @shadangbasedarteducationex190
    @shadangbasedarteducationex190 4 года назад +2

    How does ib curriculum test creativity?. Especially visual arts

    • @line9083
      @line9083 4 года назад

      I dont think you need to worry too much about being "creative"... sometimes you end up with a topic interesting but with no sources/evidence to back you up... try and look online for EE art exemplars for ideas (but don't copy!)... you can also be "creative" by picking a topic like architecture, dance, etc, instead of artists like Picasso... in terms of how IB tests creativity it might not entirely depend on your research question but also on your methodology: what sources you are using (eg. interviews) or how insightful your analysis is... in general I feel like usually an art EE is "creative" in itself so dw

  • @heathc148
    @heathc148 2 года назад

    Good vid, thanks for the help

  • @shihyonseo7314
    @shihyonseo7314 5 лет назад

    Such a nice video! Helped alot :D

  • @aashnashah3045
    @aashnashah3045 4 года назад +2

    Hi, I have a question, so I will be studying in an ib school this year and I am actually confused as to which laptop will be apt for the programme. It will be great if you could help me out in order to select a windows laptop or a Mac. My subjects are-- HL business, HL visual arts HL Hindi(I'm from india) SL English , SL math and SL computer science.

    • @aryankakru3335
      @aryankakru3335 4 года назад

      Whichever one you feel more comfortable working with, it doesnt really matter

  • @Hanin5002
    @Hanin5002 3 года назад

    Great , we had a week to write an outline and guess what I did instead ! I studied math Hl and now I'm here , hours before:)

  • @kofitelli
    @kofitelli 4 года назад

    What is your ideal EE outline. (In general)

  • @accretionescapee
    @accretionescapee 4 года назад

    I’m planning on doing Biology HL, Chemistry HL, English Language and Literature HL, Mathematics SL, German SL and Economics SL. Can you really do anything with Extended Essay, for example Mythology, or a particular part of the brain, or does it have to be History, Psychology or another school subject?

  • @enriquecarrera8404
    @enriquecarrera8404 6 лет назад +1

    dam video is fire,,, u was crying over an essay tho!!! man i am not ready for dis

  • @zainaaa9335
    @zainaaa9335 5 месяцев назад

    As someone who's starting my first year in IB in september, i'm really nervous. Can someone give me examples of research questions on anything art related or design related as that's going to be my main field of choice. perhaps i'll right an essay on that. it'd be helpful thank you ❤😭

  • @2222ben
    @2222ben 6 лет назад

    So helpful thank you!!

  • @thirishinnthant4660
    @thirishinnthant4660 3 года назад

    May I know what was the essay topic?

  • @ivna134
    @ivna134 5 лет назад +1

    do you have to come up with your own research question for the ee or are you given options that you can choose from?

    • @IvyLilia
      @IvyLilia  5 лет назад +1

      You have to come up with your own, but there are tons of examples out there to help guide you!

    • @ivna134
      @ivna134 5 лет назад

      Ivy Lilia thanks!

  • @sifsif2725
    @sifsif2725 4 года назад

    I picked a 2nd year college level topic for my Math AA HL EE...

  • @luchitaf4640
    @luchitaf4640 5 лет назад

    thanks for this!

  • @hajerraisi8380
    @hajerraisi8380 6 лет назад +1

    Thank you so much, this helped a lot!!!

  • @puffoffluffedair543
    @puffoffluffedair543 6 лет назад +2

    my propsal is due tmr I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT MY RQ IS.

  • @BiHWolf-lo6ts
    @BiHWolf-lo6ts 4 года назад

    I haven’t even started and it’s due in 20 days 😭😭😭

  • @theglitterqueen6447
    @theglitterqueen6447 6 лет назад +4

    your remind me of lili Reinhart!!

  • @youngmaster861
    @youngmaster861 2 года назад

    thank youuuuu😊😊😊

  • @scarletforce3142
    @scarletforce3142 2 месяца назад

    Economics EE advice pls im like 2 RQs away from jumping off my schools roof

  • @fraukevinetabulow4064
    @fraukevinetabulow4064 4 года назад

    Where ist TOK in times of Covid-19????

  • @alyaaj6438
    @alyaaj6438 3 года назад

    Ultimately

  • @Felix-zo1ui
    @Felix-zo1ui Год назад +1

    Thanks for that. And beautiful eyes x

  • @siarawong9552
    @siarawong9552 5 лет назад

    I love the intro

  • @Jaya-ru7ky
    @Jaya-ru7ky 3 года назад

    Our first 4 pages are due in a few days and idek how to structure it lmaooooo

  • @snaderiits
    @snaderiits 2 года назад

    THATS THE COOLEST INTRO EVER

  • @breeie9900
    @breeie9900 2 года назад

    Very positive :)

  • @ricardochevez1235
    @ricardochevez1235 6 лет назад +5

    this was helpful but i'm still scared :(

  • @Abdurrahman1-i4y
    @Abdurrahman1-i4y 3 года назад

    Thank you

  • @freeibear8923
    @freeibear8923 4 года назад +2

    My first draft is day after tomorrow, and I haven't started

  • @lorenzocavalleris2255
    @lorenzocavalleris2255 2 года назад

    what did you get in your ee out of curiousity (grade)?

  • @artloverrarts
    @artloverrarts 2 года назад

    tysmm

  • @Joy-lk9qd
    @Joy-lk9qd 5 лет назад

    thank u 🤍🤍

  • @slayygela
    @slayygela 5 лет назад +1

    my first draft is due tomorrow and i have only like 700 words SOMEBODY KILL ME PLS (anyway thanks for help Ivy Lilia!! 💓)

    • @elizabethkiryanova7920
      @elizabethkiryanova7920 4 года назад +1

      I hope everything turned out okay for you! I started with ~600 words at 10pm and by 6am the next day I had 3100, which was enough for my first draft :)

    • @slayygela
      @slayygela 4 года назад +1

      elizabeth baunok I managed to write everything and submitted it on time so I guess it didn’t end up as badly as I thought!! Also IB cancelled the exams so our written assignments are super important:((((

  • @johnbenedictdivinagracia4866
    @johnbenedictdivinagracia4866 5 лет назад +1

    stop at 4:11

  • @nicoleblackmon5239
    @nicoleblackmon5239 4 года назад

    great advice!

  • @fake9810
    @fake9810 3 года назад

    My ee supervisor gave no Feedback, RIP me

  • @isaacdestura7495
    @isaacdestura7495 4 года назад

    *writes essay in one sitting*
    me: NANI???

  • @AbdulrahmanAlidroos
    @AbdulrahmanAlidroos 4 года назад +1

    jesus if only my teacher was as good as you.

  • @Wcrqdrift
    @Wcrqdrift 8 месяцев назад

    Doing mine on a videogame🗿

  • @vstman1430
    @vstman1430 5 лет назад +2

    I've got an "A" :))

  • @pedrocampolina4980
    @pedrocampolina4980 4 года назад

    Please, let us see your EE as an inspiration! 🙏🏻🙏🏻

  • @joshie8696
    @joshie8696 6 лет назад

    i have 24 hours left and im only at a shitty 1100 words lol

  • @shaheenhayyat
    @shaheenhayyat 5 лет назад

    The intro 😂😂😂😂

  • @beckettofficial
    @beckettofficial 5 лет назад

    where do u live