The FIRST Creepypasta? "Ted The Caver"

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  • Опубликовано: 20 сен 2024
  • Today we take a look back at what is (debatably) the first ever creepypasta, Ted the Caver!
    All music in this video is either from the soundtrack of Yume Nikki, Myuu, or Kevin Macleod
    Original Blog: www.angelfire....
    Man In Cave video: • Video
    Thanks for watching everyone!

Комментарии • 985

  • @2fortsmostwanted
    @2fortsmostwanted Год назад +4879

    This story has three things most modern creepypastas lack: realism, pacing, and restraint. I think that's what makes it legendary, beyond being "the first."

    • @scoutz0rs
      @scoutz0rs Год назад +218

      Imagine if creepypastas had restraint. So many good hooks have been wasted for lack of restraint.

    • @zeallust8542
      @zeallust8542 Год назад +69

      My favorite creepy pasta is one simply titled "Autopilot" written by Skarjo. That ones fairly modern (late 2013) and managed to avoid all the lame tropes other creepypastas were doing

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 Год назад +6

      ​@@zeallust8542
      Jeff the Killer was my first Creepypasta Character I read about and I love Creepypastas and Jeff

    • @zeallust8542
      @zeallust8542 Год назад +99

      @@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 Im sorry your first was such a bad one

    • @itssoldacc
      @itssoldacc Год назад +21

      Most just use basic monsters. I like this didn’t show a monster that if wasn’t perfect quality would ruin the illusion. My brain though makes about terrifying creatures it could be

  • @cleverusername6526
    @cleverusername6526 Год назад +1006

    I thought for sure the dog was gonna get killed for shock value, but no, this creepypasta doesn’t pull anything like that. This is actually a really good story, I love the way it slowly builds up horror and keeps it fairly realistic

    • @Chris_Cross
      @Chris_Cross Год назад +40

      I am so glad doggo is safe

    • @Cheesling
      @Cheesling Год назад +1

      Ikr

    • @jaymartin8273
      @jaymartin8273 Год назад +17

      Ditto. Even though she was fine it infuriated me that they even thought of using her like that!!

    • @cxsmic_axtro
      @cxsmic_axtro Год назад +15

      THANK YOU I HAVENT WATCHED THE FULL THING YET I CAME TO THE COMMENTS TO SEE IF THE DOG WOULD DIE

    • @megamew2129
      @megamew2129 Год назад

      same, im so relieved the dog survived @@cxsmic_axtro

  • @ripleyandweeds1288
    @ripleyandweeds1288 Год назад +7247

    The best part about this creepypasta is how it can blend realism and horror perfectly. It never shows the monster or even mentions one, which is what would be the case if this was just a normal caving blog. Its something you rarely see now with creepy internet stories.

    • @AaronJLong
      @AaronJLong Год назад +368

      The thing about this is it is like 90% a true story. Ted and Brad widening a passage in a dark cave, the photos, the physical sensation Ted felt going through that tight squeeze, it was all based on two real people (and one real dog) in a real cave. A year or so later, Ted adapted their exploration into a story, adding spooky elements and formatting it like a blog and tried to make it seem real, like what The Blair Witch Project had recently done in movie format.

    • @davidolvera1031
      @davidolvera1031 Год назад +79

      They actually DO mention a monster once, but that's all it was, a mention.

    • @kexard
      @kexard Год назад +72

      I feel like a lot of Creepypasta writers write with the sole intention of a monster in their mind, and much like a child’s drawing, they want to show people this monster. I’m not saying it’s a good or bad thing, but I do feel that may be the intent behind stories that describe monsters in-depth or extensively.

    • @quaelgeist3337
      @quaelgeist3337 Год назад

      @@meggnogg "potentially happen in real life" it is actually based on truth! The cave, floyd's tomb, b, the dog and ted are all real. Ted just added horror elements to the happenings

    • @thebreaddealer4942
      @thebreaddealer4942 Год назад +3

      Za waurdo

  • @MuertaNox
    @MuertaNox Год назад +1855

    The pictures of the guy entering Floyd's tomb, as if the cave itself were eating him... always, always, chills. No matter how many years have passed.

    • @darkmask5933
      @darkmask5933 Год назад +121

      Those are real pictures from the author too. Obviously the story is fake, Ted even admitted as such, but the photos were of him of the real spelunking trip that inspired the story.

    • @kiiboDaRobot
      @kiiboDaRobot Год назад +47

      I have claustrophobia… I hate crawling in small spaces especially, I now know that caving is a horrific nightmare I cannot escape… seeing people in such small spaces left me crying as soon as Ted started going in, I would’ve left but I was curious

    • @Midnightaperson
      @Midnightaperson Год назад +3

      Reminds me of coraline in a way with the long small tunnel

  • @AaronJLong
    @AaronJLong Год назад +2048

    There's actually an interesting history behind this. Before making the "Ted the caver" blog, the author Ted and his friend Brad (B) really did go caving together a year or two prior. They did find a small passage, and work on widening it, referring to it as Floyd's Tomb. They even brought the dog down into the cave at one point. And, of course, Ted shared his journal and some photos of the adventure with his family online.
    Then, in 2001, Ted has an idea that would leave a permanent impact on the internet. He writes a story in the format of an online journal about the experience he and Brad had, as he had done before to share with his family, but with some changes. It is formatted more for a general audience that may not know about caving, made more educational, and, of course, spoops were added. In the real events, there were no spooky sounds, the dog didn't get scared, and all that was beyond Floyd's Tomb was completely mundane, but in the fictional version, these bits of horror were sprinkled into the story, ultimately with fictional Ted making his final post as he headed back into the cave and an unknown fate. Ted then uploaded this fictionalized version of events as if it were a real blog, and then left it with that final post, occasionally checking the view counter as the story spread via word of mouth.
    Then, years later, Ted the Caver was accused of ripping off a short story supposedly written in 1987. The stories were very similar, though the 1987 version was a journal instead of a blog, and had a very different ending. However, internet detectives looked through old foreign copyrights, compared writing styles, and all that jazz and concluded that the 1987 version was a hoax that plagiarized Ted The Caver and backdated it.
    There was still some confusion when Ted himself spoke up on the subject, his caving trip with Brad, his inspiration to adapt it into a horror blog like a web1.0 version of The Blair Witch Project, and provided various bits of evidence to prove that he was the original author, as Ted, his friend Brad, and the cave were all based on their real life counterparts (minus the spooky bits).

    • @nikitagrishin7310
      @nikitagrishin7310 Год назад +54

      I like how brad morphed into brian half way through

    • @AaronJLong
      @AaronJLong Год назад +45

      @@nikitagrishin7310 Ah yeah, I'm bad with names. I double checked Ted's original post on the matter, and his friend's name was Brad. Guess a wire got crossed while typing that out, so I fixed it.

    • @theevildrblue1212
      @theevildrblue1212 Год назад +2

      not reading that...

    • @muckyboys6658
      @muckyboys6658 Год назад +56

      @@theevildrblue1212 you’re missing out on a lot of interesting stuff. don’t be lazy.

    • @theevildrblue1212
      @theevildrblue1212 Год назад +1

      @@muckyboys6658 but i dont *waaaannaaaaa!!!!*

  • @fisheyenomiko
    @fisheyenomiko Год назад +4089

    We know Ted the Caver isn't a true story; Ted himself has talked to people about it on line since then. He's not trying to hide to keep up the illusion or anything; he's very open about telling people that the monster/spooky stuff is just a story. However, the caving parts are all real, though the process took way longer than the story suggests. Floyd's Tomb is a real place, btw - Ted and B (Brad) came up with the name, and local spelunkers liked it enough that they kept it!
    Man, I read this story before "Creepypasta" was a thing, and I still think it's one of the best ones ever made. It's just vague enough about the threat to allow you to easily suspend your disbelief (one of my issues with the movie was that it did NOT do this. At all), which works, given the nature of the story.
    Thanks for making this video!

    • @FabricofTime
      @FabricofTime Год назад +157

      I didn't know it was based on a real cave, although it's fairly clear it was written by a real caver. Thank you for this bit of info!

    • @fisheyenomiko
      @fisheyenomiko Год назад +15

      @@FabricofTime You're welcome! 🙂

    • @TakumiLucius
      @TakumiLucius Год назад +21

      I think the story has some parts of the Nutty Putty cave incident too

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 Год назад +9

      ​@@TakumiLucius
      Interesting

    • @justcrowley1540
      @justcrowley1540 Год назад +85

      @@TakumiLucius the Nutty Putty incident happened in 2009. Ted's story was written in 2001. I doubt Nutty Putty inspired the story but thanks to you I have something to research

  • @PositiveVibes94
    @PositiveVibes94 Год назад +912

    Can you imagine if a follow up was made randomly at some point, with Ted being confused, posting as if it's only been a couple of days, not realizing that 22 years have passed

  • @belladonnaatropa6915
    @belladonnaatropa6915 Год назад +1022

    dude nothing NOTHING will ever be scarier to me than when i was listening to ted the caver for the first time, and my tv had this thing where it would automatically turn off if you hadn't interacted with it within a couple of hours, so it's night i'm listening to this, i'm claustrophobic so i'm squirming and the part where ted goes into the cave and the thing tries to get him is coming and my tv turns off, so i'm sitting in a completly dark room listening unable to move bc it was so creepy,, such an impactful creepypasta tho

    • @kabardino1337
      @kabardino1337 Год назад +27

      Hehehe! This reminds me of something I did xD
      One of these days the lights on my whole city block went down during the night. Everything was pitch black. I decided to call my sibling outside to watch the sky, and so we did.
      About 2 minutes in, I heard an middle aged man sounding laughter from a house in the distance. Right after that, I said to my sibling: "Shhh! Silence. I heard something"
      --"what is it?" My sibling said
      I said: "sounds like a man crying"
      And we remained in silence to try hearing more.
      "Ahhh... now I know why they turned off the lights in the whole town" I said
      --"why?"
      Then I said "An SCP must have escaped containment!"
      My sibling bolted towards the door so fast I didn't even hear them running.
      I laughed my ass off in the dark street xD

    • @Noone-hk1vf
      @Noone-hk1vf Год назад +10

      @@kabardino1337 haha. Your poor sibling

    • @kiiboDaRobot
      @kiiboDaRobot Год назад +1

      I’m also claustrophobic, I was sobbing the entire time but was to curious to leave

    • @Yes-iy4lc
      @Yes-iy4lc Год назад

      Lol

    • @abbcc5996
      @abbcc5996 Год назад +1

      whats up with everyone listening to creepastas? back in my day we read them

  • @Moofshire
    @Moofshire Год назад +541

    The part where Ted is alone with the creature in the cave is the most unsettling and terrifying things I've read in a while. This whole story is better than any newer creepypastas due to the sheer quality

  • @Peculiar3000
    @Peculiar3000 7 месяцев назад +15

    imagine exploring a cave and you suddenly get a strong sense of deja vu, and only after crawling through a tight entrance in the cave do you see a camera lying on the ground, and realize why the cave seemed so familiar. You used to read this story when you were younger. Rock grinds against rock behind you. Godamnit.

  • @JCuArts
    @JCuArts Год назад +382

    THESE are the Creepypastas I like, realism in a Creepypasta adds more immersion to it. And allows you to put yourself in the characters situation.

    • @Therespizzafam
      @Therespizzafam Год назад +1

      Heres a lil like for this good comment.

    • @JCuArts
      @JCuArts Год назад +1

      @@Therespizzafam Thank you, stranger

    • @John-mf1sz
      @John-mf1sz Год назад +11

      Literally the only one I ever found compelling.
      I cringe anytime someone mentions “Jeff The Killer” as being in any way, shape or form, “good”.
      It was the most unintentionally hilariously bad thing I’ve ever read in my life.

    • @blue-hawaii-mc4vf
      @blue-hawaii-mc4vf Год назад

      ​@John Jeff the Killer is cathartic in an angsty teen sort of way

    • @John-mf1sz
      @John-mf1sz Год назад

      @@blue-hawaii-mc4vf I just always think about the Internet Historians “Sundance Rejects”. It kills me every-time and really shows off how insanely silly and ridiculously bad that story is.

  • @soapiedoapie
    @soapiedoapie Год назад +564

    the most unbelievable part of this copy pasta is a 2000's era drill's battery life/power

    • @vxyrssVEVO
      @vxyrssVEVO Год назад +106

      besides the monster and shit this is a 100% real story, floyd's tomb is a real place in a real cave and whip is a real dog (dead now, unfortunately) and they did actual make the hole in real time, they seemed like experienced cavers so i definitely believe they invested in a high-end drill model to open a hole in floyd's tomb

    • @epg9274
      @epg9274 Месяц назад

      drills are used extensively in cave digging when rock/stalagmite needs breaking you bring usually a minimum of 4 drill battery's if your trips going to involve more than like an hours work with the drill usually however you dont just use drill and hammer to enlarge a passage normally you drill a hole a decent way back from the edge of the rock then use either plug and feathers, blasting caps/nail gun blanks ( capping very dangerous) or proper explosives to break away rock that is preventing you from passing or breaking boulders into smaller rocks that can be then moved/winched out this is much much faster than just drilling/hammering off small pieces in a location with very good air flow diesel drills can also be used but in small confined spaces they are not used as the fumes would build up and kill you

  • @helious5056
    @helious5056 Год назад +1140

    Ted the caver should have a sequel called Ted the bather where he just starts posting to his blog again as acting like nothing happened and like he's just gotten home from the cave expedition and that's been 5 hours to him and he needs to take a bath cuz he's dirty
    I'm very tired

    • @marseillejoh
      @marseillejoh Год назад +113

      So like time flows differently in the cave? And new Ted potentially being an impostor? Sounds kinda cool actually.

    • @kabardino1337
      @kabardino1337 Год назад +23

      ​@@marseillejohthat's kinda suspicious

    • @marseillejoh
      @marseillejoh Год назад +43

      @@kabardino1337 oh no...
      I've made the worst mistake of my life...

    • @oliverharston815
      @oliverharston815 Год назад +11

      @@marseillejoh sus

    • @marseillejoh
      @marseillejoh Год назад +21

      @@oliverharston815 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

  • @cricketboy0185
    @cricketboy0185 Год назад +73

    Someone climbing in a tunnel and getting stuck is a scary story in itself.

  • @entr0pix
    @entr0pix Год назад +144

    god im SO glad ted didnt reveal too much. its WAY scarier when u dont know what the horror actually is

    • @AgresiveSalt1
      @AgresiveSalt1 Год назад +3

      When Creepypastas let you imagine the horror to be whatever because your brain makes it scarier

    • @TrueBladeSoul
      @TrueBladeSoul 9 месяцев назад +1

      Yeah I mean I want to know what is in there and would feel cheated if the story wrapped up without an answer but the story never did wrap up it just ended with him telling us he was going to go back in

    • @Dubs22005
      @Dubs22005 6 месяцев назад

      laamee

  • @johnross5098
    @johnross5098 Год назад +734

    With how high quality this video is, it's criminal that you only have 344 subscribers

    • @jaybird160
      @jaybird160  Год назад +74

      Thanks I didn’t even think I’d make it this far haha!

    • @Azaketh
      @Azaketh Год назад +6

      @@jaybird160 1 of the road to 1000, I hope you nail it soon man, you deserve it.

    • @coltonnash9967
      @coltonnash9967 Год назад +2

      @@jaybird160 honestly I love your videos and I think it’s a shame u only have 1k at this point

    • @aledevi
      @aledevi Год назад +10

      2k more in 6 days! Congrats bro, your effort is really paying off

    • @chenthelegend3110
      @chenthelegend3110 Год назад +4

      @@jaybird160 congrats on 2.4K I love your videos

  • @rosec.2508
    @rosec.2508 Год назад +339

    Ted the caver could be such a good movie. Also it be so cool for you to do more creepy pasta stories 😭

    • @ky5743
      @ky5743 Год назад +46

      If you’ve never seen it, The Descent is very similar to the story, though I will warn you that the movie definitely doesn’t pull any punches

    • @rosec.2508
      @rosec.2508 Год назад +2

      @@ky5743 Ok! I’ll see if I can watch it!

    • @kabardino1337
      @kabardino1337 Год назад

      ​@@ky5743which cave horror movie is The Descent? I remember watching two... one had bat people living under a monastery cave system and it sucked, the other had girls going to a cave and finding mutant people and this is the good movie

    • @yuhmommu102
      @yuhmommu102 Год назад +16

      There’s a movie called living dark which is basically ted the caver but its pretty trash, it has a lot of cheap jump scares and not the best cinematic experience so i don’t recommend you watch it because it’s not nearly as scary as the creepy pasta, i’m actually planning on making a ted the caver film once i have the materials

    • @PGold3
      @PGold3 Год назад

      @@yuhmommu102 gonna be hard to get permission from the author. If you are rich enough to make a movie, wow. Because they take atlaest like 10mil for a decent one

  • @omnimonium
    @omnimonium Год назад +150

    i am not a fan of creepypastas due to how often they seem completely fake in a way that ruins my immersion. but holy shit, this was a mindblowingly tense story. thank you for telling it, you did it in a very succinct and entertaining way!

    • @DakotaofRaptors
      @DakotaofRaptors Год назад +3

      SomeOrdinaryGamers used to read creepypastas, even going as far as to review them in the end. His voice was the best in the field, I think - very relaxing.

  • @solstice_soda701
    @solstice_soda701 Год назад +430

    I love the emotion you put into reading the end of the creepypasta. You convey the panic and fear PERFECTLY! New sub immediately. Ted the Caver is a really good story and it just gets better with time since as time goes on the feeling of certain doom just gets confirmed over and over

  • @chrisoniceskates
    @chrisoniceskates Год назад +135

    Gotta say you’re presentation is really evocative of those early 2010s creepypasta youtubers. Telling the story in your room in front of posters with the incandescent lights. It’s very comfy and nostalgic.

    • @WitchKing-Of-Angmar
      @WitchKing-Of-Angmar Год назад +10

      Not to mention that wonderful "number 15" voice we all loath.

  • @Amoeba26
    @Amoeba26 Год назад +34

    This guy's a good storyteller, much like Wendigoon. how have I not discovered this guy sooner?

  • @Darksomnium
    @Darksomnium Год назад +77

    Awesome video! Ted the caver is one of my favorite stories. Lolking forward to more of your videos!

    • @jaybird160
      @jaybird160  Год назад +10

      Thanks so much I love your videos! I actually listened to your narration of this story while making this video and it was outstanding

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium Год назад +6

      @@jaybird160 oh wow thank you so much! :)

    • @inactiveguy03
      @inactiveguy03 Год назад +1

      I just listened to the narration

  • @oldfashionedboots2774
    @oldfashionedboots2774 Год назад +33

    Genuinely I think this is the best creepypasta that was ever made. It’s the only one that’s ever made my skin crawl

    • @WitchKing-Of-Angmar
      @WitchKing-Of-Angmar Год назад +2

      Its so unsettling in the atmosphere it provokes, the way it puts you into that scene, nearly imagining the rocks keeping you pinned, the smell, the darkness, and the alien horror nature of what was there with them the entire time. Horrifying, so horrifying. And furthermore, I like how its written not only like a travel journey catalogue, but also written realistically in a way where the character is trying to get away from the monster, not wait for it so the narrator can give there "it was 7 foot tall, blue eyes, one freckle, 71 teeth!" spiel which is so unrealistic for a real encounter. This one kept you on your toes certainly, until the end when they had to cut the rope after thinking they were free.

  • @davedussault8324
    @davedussault8324 Год назад +15

    I think the thing that makes this one of the best stories is that it makes effective use of the internet in how it tells the story, in a way that doesn't really translate to a print or film medium.

  • @NoName-r5f1v
    @NoName-r5f1v Год назад +132

    i have never heard this story before. the story itself is very scary and you are good at telling stories. i felt as if you were my friend telling a story of someone you know. excellent narration, thank you for the video.

    • @dennis2busy
      @dennis2busy Год назад

      screaming out fuck your homie dead

  • @sillyman2013
    @sillyman2013 Год назад +131

    I can relate to having zero caving experience, as I’ve only gone in like, stuff with trails and we had a tour guide.
    EDIT: I NOTICED SOMETHING, WHEN YOU SHOWED THAT PICTURE OF THE PROGRESS OF FLOYD’S TO B, I SAW THE TOP OF A HEAD AND TWO EYES

    • @cloudywisecat9385
      @cloudywisecat9385 Год назад +3

      time stamp?

    • @sillyman2013
      @sillyman2013 Год назад +1

      @@cloudywisecat9385 forgot, sorry

    • @steampunk-llama
      @steampunk-llama Год назад +20

      @@cloudywisecat9385 I believe they’re referring to 8:21 where the graininess of the camera + the rock formation looks like a face in the opening. Unless they’re referring to a different image, looking through each of them I couldn’t pinpoint a top of head + eyes part at any other point in the video

    • @Bagel_Bear
      @Bagel_Bear Год назад +17

      14:52 Look at the top right part of the wall!

    • @Lord_of_Rot
      @Lord_of_Rot Год назад

      @@Bagel_Bear looks like mummified big bird

  • @Calvi_70
    @Calvi_70 Год назад +15

    Ted the caver is the most beautiful scary and dark story I’ve ever read when I first read it two years ago he gave me chills down my spine still does. It’s an amazing story. Honestly, I think they should adapt it into a horror movie.

  • @percyorsomething2641
    @percyorsomething2641 Год назад +29

    The sheer fear I feel listening to you tell this story made me cry. I have this fear of caves that is nearly unmatched by any of my other fears.

  • @renoia3067
    @renoia3067 Год назад +61

    Such good, visceral horror. "Something has moved the rock and crawled out of the hole and is in the darkness with him."

  • @hellspawnmotel
    @hellspawnmotel Год назад +3

    this video inspired me to do my own abridged telling of ted the caver as if it was a spooky campfire story, to my friends one night. it was a lot of fun, and my friends were entranced. im still fantasizing about one day doing the same thing to my children and their friends around an actual campfire

  • @swagathon6967
    @swagathon6967 Год назад +31

    Beautifully told. Haven’t felt like this since 2012 with those creepy pasta videos as a child. Even felt that spine tingle of fear.

    • @John-mf1sz
      @John-mf1sz Год назад +1

      “As a child”.
      Man, why does everyone make me feel so damn old?

  • @Deathkeeperx
    @Deathkeeperx Год назад +49

    I had no idea this wasn't from a big channel, Your a natural! Keep up the good work!

  • @Kalekemo
    @Kalekemo Год назад +93

    I was surprised to see that you're seemingly just starting out on youtube with these videos. They're so well put together and thought out. Excited to see your future content!
    Also I absolutely adore Ted the Caver. It's super well done and something about caves just fits so well with horror.

  • @CleoHarperReturns
    @CleoHarperReturns Год назад +52

    Beautifully told, Jay! Today's creepypastas could learn from this -- hyperrealistic plot lines and natural pacing really help to sell the entire story. Also being aided by (again) an excellent narration. Thanks, man!

  • @Edgeperor
    @Edgeperor Год назад +20

    The scariest thing in this video was hearing that you only had 35 subscribers when it was made, I’m glad you got the attention you deserve

  • @Originalshy
    @Originalshy Год назад +3

    Plot twist: The monster was actually a person who was trapped in the cave

  • @dentxhead
    @dentxhead Год назад +28

    Ted still gives me the chills to this day! i'm claustrophobic and afraid of the dark, i had nightmares the first time i read through this one. it's such a well done story, the tension is perfectly built and that cliff hanger is such a punch to the gut.

  • @Plaprad
    @Plaprad Год назад +5

    I remember reading this back around 2002 in the desert. Everyone in my squadron was sharing it. Saw it gain popularity again around 2007 I think. Never thought it would have this much traction over the years. Every few years I remember it and realize it's probably long forgotten and not even online anymore. Then it pops up.
    The author did a wonderful job writing this.
    One thing I do remember from the original was the "Creature". He was talking about having his lights on all the time in his house. One night, he turned too fast as saw something standing in his hallway. He even uploaded a drawing of it. Another thing was the hole. When he saw the rock had moved and looked, he saw old, worn stone stairs leading into the darkness. He popped another glostick and tossed it down, where it disappeared around a corner down the stairs. I think he even mentioned something about he thought the air blowing through was only happening when the "door" was open.

  • @WanderinRound
    @WanderinRound Год назад +35

    As a long time caver myself who started going when I was around the age of 12, I am SO incredibly thankful that I am only now learning about this story. I already struggle with an overactive imagination (and was in an outdoor program where the leader decided to play movies like The Descent, The Cave, and Sanctum on caving weeks 🙃) so this would’ve stuck deep in my psyche. It’s really an underutilized scenario for horror stories. The activity itself already is a duel psychological and physical challenge, and the environment is steeped in the unknown, ancient, and alien. This story hits on everything I feel like other caving-based horror has lacked, particularly the lack of explanation, open-endedness, and actually accurate descriptions of caving lol. Love the video, thanks for sharing!

  • @LuminousCarrot
    @LuminousCarrot Год назад +8

    Just listening you read the story made me scared, and near the end where they were trying to escape made me cry out of fear.
    The story aged so well that even now, it makes you dread and fear what comes next.
    Overall 10/10 story love it.

  • @scoutz0rs
    @scoutz0rs Год назад +18

    I’ve reread it almost every year since I stumbled upon it in like 2004. I don’t even remember how I found it. But it never gets less creepy. Absolutely golden storytelling.

  • @Vontyak
    @Vontyak Год назад +11

    What I liked most about this creepypasta when I first listened to a reading of it was how "un-creepypasta-like" it was, which I guess for being the "first" creepypasta makes sense. It's not chock full of all the tropes and well trodden ground that so many modern creepypastas have--it actually reads like an earnest original horror as opposed to something setting out to "be a creepypasta" (however one would interpret that). I really liked your reading and analysis of it too!

  • @Hearthburn1
    @Hearthburn1 Год назад +121

    Was Ted the Caver first or was it Dionaea House? That one was very early too, and it was excellent. EDIT: On further investigation, Dionaea House was a couple years later. Still, something you might consider checking out, it really creeped me out at the time and it's very well written.

    • @marthapozo4881
      @marthapozo4881 Год назад +9

      I second this! I remember reading it before creepypastas as well. Love the perspectives it gives with relation to the house in the story. Definately a great read!

    • @RedSpade37
      @RedSpade37 Год назад +3

      I agree! Dionaea House would be a great video for this channel!

    • @xXisislovesacXx
      @xXisislovesacXx Год назад +1

      Dionaea House was the email thread one right??

    • @Hearthburn1
      @Hearthburn1 Год назад +8

      @@xXisislovesacXx There were emails, Livejournal threads, a couple of blogs elsewhere... it was pretty widespread IIRC.

    • @xXisislovesacXx
      @xXisislovesacXx Год назад +1

      @@Hearthburn1 yes! i remember reading it in high school, it was good

  • @MINTLEFLOWER
    @MINTLEFLOWER Год назад +36

    You are insanely underrated! Ted the caver has got to be one of my favorite horror stories of all time and you definitely did it justice. You should check out the Mystery Flesh Pit National Park! I'd love to watch a video about it from you!

  • @monke7914
    @monke7914 Год назад +10

    The best part of this story is that you never see what's hunting Ted. But you get enough information to know that its there and is lethal. It pulls on the rope to try to get Ted to fall back into the cave and it always feels like its one step away from catching you. Much better than the horror characters that have lost all their horror because of their almost mascot status

  • @wind_chives_
    @wind_chives_ Год назад +37

    Isn’t the word for cave exploration called spelunking? I love that word, it sounds so silly lol
    Edit: I watched the whole video and am no longer in a silly goofy mood 😰

    • @MushbrainVR
      @MushbrainVR Год назад +3

      I am no longer in a silly goofy mood either after watching this 😭 😟

  • @polypython
    @polypython Год назад +6

    This horror story takes advantage of humanities innate fear of the unknown, with the completely unexplored cave, the mysterious sounds and cave painting, and the unseen and undescribed entity seemingly chasing Ted and whatever terrified Joe. Fear of the unknown was something the modern day internet horror story of the backrooms had when it was first concieved, however I feel that fear was ruined a bit when people started creating multiple levels, defining and making multiple different entities and threats as well as the idea of multiple different backrooms survivor groups. This expansion of ideas kinda killed the horror the original idea had I feel. Don’t get me wrong things like that can still be scary but the fear caused by an unknown horror that is left up to your imagination is much scarier than a known horror.

    • @kindlingking
      @kindlingking Год назад +2

      I'm still annoyed by the fact internet turned liminal horror about loneliness and uncanniness into an SCP ripoff with haha funny jokes and generic monsters.

  • @Neit-1916
    @Neit-1916 Год назад +20

    This is the first video I've seen of you, and I can definitely say that I'll watch more! The way you describe everything, and almost try to portray what the characters might be feeling at the moment that you're describing is very entertaining, and you manage to keep the creepy feel of the story all throughout. It's very Wendigoon-esc, and I mean that as a compliment!
    Keep it up! :)

  • @redheadedanimations9368
    @redheadedanimations9368 Год назад +3

    Turns out this is actually a documentation of the most recent encounter with Gollum since the lord of the rings. I guess he survived mount doom somehow.

    • @redheadedanimations9368
      @redheadedanimations9368 Год назад +3

      After researching some more, I also found that Ted was wearing his wedding band at the time, and Gollum thought it was the one ring to rule them all. Well, that’s what ring-addiction will do to your Brian kids!

  • @RaspberyLemonade
    @RaspberyLemonade Год назад +3

    Ahh Ted the Caver, classic, still holds up today, no fangirlisim, no "The Killer" stuff, and your telling of the story was excellent as well! Caving is scary in general, and this story captures it perfectly.

  • @RanDumbledore
    @RanDumbledore Год назад +15

    i’ve never heard of ted the caver, but you’re amazing storytelling immersed me so much into the story, it was terrifying! that was so thrilling, immediately subscribed and looking forward to seeing more of your stuff! :)

  • @blanket_of_now
    @blanket_of_now Год назад +28

    Really enjoying your content so far. Keep up the great work!

  • @dystopianwitch
    @dystopianwitch Год назад +2

    the way u told this story genuinely scared me this video is so good

  • @swagz262
    @swagz262 Год назад +22

    You have a great narrator voice. Keep up the good work man.

  • @latamaquino
    @latamaquino Год назад +8

    this creepypasta is amazing and so is ur storytelling... certified masterpiece

  • @fathertaira
    @fathertaira Год назад +2

    im always thankful for the algorithm showing me new people like you. Nice to meet you new online guy! Can't wait to binge some of your stuff lmao

  • @alicantuncer4800
    @alicantuncer4800 Год назад +4

    I like your way of storytelling. Your voice, your toning, timing, mimics etc they work in harmony. Cheers!

  • @BlackFlagHeathen
    @BlackFlagHeathen Год назад +3

    I still remember the raw, visceral fear I felt the first time I read this story years ago. I was a seasoned creepypasta fan by that point, and yet this one scared the shit out of me. I literally left the lights on and couldn’t sleep the night I first read it because the darkness reminded me of a cave and terrified me. Maybe it’s that it’s just realistic enough that it’s not too out there, and that caves are already scary to me. This story is still super scary. I got goosebumps all over again listening to you summarize it. Well done with this video!

  • @moonofwands18
    @moonofwands18 2 месяца назад +3

    great vid, loved this! note though for everyone, man in cave by internet historian is plagiarised from a mental floss article, which is why it was taken down and the reupload is much less cohesive

  • @bunabambi
    @bunabambi Год назад +7

    Happy 1k jay! You deserve it your content is criminally underrated keep it up :)

  • @lonelystarslibrary9326
    @lonelystarslibrary9326 Год назад +14

    Give it a few months, maybe half a year, and i can see a Wendigoon colab coming

  • @cecilywallace6058
    @cecilywallace6058 Год назад +5

    I just want to say, that this more chill reading of a creepypasta is so relieving from the usuall trying to mystify it and make it more creepy than it is. Love it

    • @DakotaofRaptors
      @DakotaofRaptors Год назад +2

      Then you would love SomeOrdinaryGamers' creepypasta readings. Still the best out their, in my opinion

  • @AlisCorner
    @AlisCorner Год назад +4

    I was sooo surprised after this video to see you weren't a gigantic channel - the quality of the video and you're storytelling feels so professional and well done, honestly on par with folks like wendigoon! can't wait to see what else you make :)

  • @salty_marshmall0w938
    @salty_marshmall0w938 Год назад +2

    I love watching videos with like 300k views have the creator thank us for a couple thousand on the last video. Im glad this video blew up a bit and I hope you keep growing!

  • @WingItMan217
    @WingItMan217 Год назад +3

    Great job on this video. As someone who grew up with the creepypasta craze, this one got me feeling all kinds of nostalgic. Would love to see more videos from you. Keep up the good work

  • @CallMeTess
    @CallMeTess Год назад +4

    i love that the characters here act like real people and make genuinely smart decisions.

  • @1bingbongtingtong1
    @1bingbongtingtong1 Год назад +3

    MY GUY, YOU ONLY HAD 35 SUBS WHEN THIS CAME OUT?? you have a great storytelling voice and also great audio quality for just 35 subs

  • @scarecrowztoxin
    @scarecrowztoxin Год назад +2

    Dude, I'm so glad I found your channel. You talk about all the things I like and it's awesome to see you grow! Here's on your way to 10k!!

  • @qurplecat3860
    @qurplecat3860 Год назад +3

    You're amazing at telling stories. I was just listening and felt the tension.
    Probs to both you and the OP of the story!

  • @luciette8850
    @luciette8850 Год назад +2

    commenting on 10k- congrats! your channel's growing fast and you definitely deserve all the recognition

  • @agravemisunderstanding9668
    @agravemisunderstanding9668 Год назад +4

    Dark somnium did a great narration of this story, completely with original music and sound effects. I would definitely recommend it and his channel as a whole even if you've already read the story

  • @exodusqueen2834
    @exodusqueen2834 Год назад +7

    I was recommended this channel recently, I'm liking the quality and effort you've put into the work you're doing. Keep it up, you're doing great. Love the video topics and your voice is relaxing to listen to while I crochet. ^_^

  • @darthvader1783
    @darthvader1783 Год назад +3

    DIDE YOUR VIDEOS ARE SO HIGH QUALITY! I love it!! Keep it up man! You’re gonna be a big RUclipsr!

  • @crabington6036
    @crabington6036 Год назад +1

    Man in cave was a comfort video of mine. I would watch it all the time. The fact that it got taken down, reuploaded, re-edited, and taken down again is infuriating. Not to take away from your video but you mentioned it and it’s such a wonderful piece of media and the fact that it’s not allowed to be up drives me crazy

  • @DailyAsgardianNews
    @DailyAsgardianNews Год назад +4

    Excellent video! I see potential for this channel as you clearly can elaborate and speak clearly on a topic such as this creepypasta. Hope to see you grow!

  • @bdgackle
    @bdgackle 9 месяцев назад

    Stumbled on your channel recently, binged your stuff, and am binging it again with my wife. You are a gifted story teller, your editing and audio are excellent, and your choice of topics is great. Keep this up and this channel is going to absolutely explode.

  • @sotiredlol
    @sotiredlol Год назад +3

    I would argue this might fall into the category of unfiction!!! Like it’s able to suspend disbelief really well. Also when you said you had 40 likes on that video LOL so glad you’re doing well and blowing up. Much deserved

  • @ReeisCarol
    @ReeisCarol Год назад +2

    omg I didn't know this one and your narration is spotless!
    I was surprised by the end, I didn't realized you weren't a 1M subscribers channel, oh well I wish you success and will be coming back for more content for sure. :)

  • @hihiglug
    @hihiglug Год назад +12

    I read this creepypasta when I was twelve, and it definitely left an impact on my mind. I think the ominous tone is due to how realistically the story is told. It wasn't overdone like so many other creepypastas. It was nice to revisit it now that I understand it fully (english isn't my first language, so I struggled a bit before)

  • @purplehaze2358
    @purplehaze2358 Год назад +1

    I tried my hardest to focus on the telling of the story here, but I couldn't help but be distracted by focusing on how often this man blinks in this video.

  • @chelseahindle3645
    @chelseahindle3645 Год назад +3

    This is incredible storytelling! I was absolutely hooked all the way through

  • @WhiteBoy-nq4mn
    @WhiteBoy-nq4mn Год назад +1

    I thought this RUclips channel had a lot of videos! Stg I thought it was a big channel. But it’s a new channel and it has good production and quality videos. I love this. This video was👌

  • @mijiah
    @mijiah Год назад +6

    i’m obsessed with your channel! i can’t wait for more content ❤

  • @MrFusion
    @MrFusion 10 месяцев назад +1

    The segment of B and Ted escaping the cave is one of the most terrifying things I've read. I think I listened to Dark Somnium read it and it was horrifying, the rope being tugged on by an unseen monster is just so good in terms of visuals, especially when they think they're safe outside of the cave.

  • @thefiretailedweasel6206
    @thefiretailedweasel6206 Год назад +4

    You are an incredible narrator. I feel like I'm listening to a friend tell a ghost story!

  • @cervineBotanist
    @cervineBotanist Год назад +2

    Congrats on 5k dude!!! One of my favorite horror stories btw, I had completely forgot about it until this video, I remember having nightmares and being terrified of small dark places like closest for the longest time because of it.

  • @sylveryne-fyr
    @sylveryne-fyr Год назад +2

    As someone who used to love creepypasta, Ted the Caver is definitely on my top favourite now. The way you told the story as well was fantastic!

  • @spongeboymebob771
    @spongeboymebob771 11 месяцев назад +2

    Hearing about someone, anyone, talk about creepypasta as if its a relic of the past makes me feel so goddamn old. Like, i literally witnessed its entire lifespan.

  • @rochoa7408
    @rochoa7408 Год назад +8

    The fact that I know that this story isn’t real but it’s still got me so scared… I am scared to continue listening…

  • @Tooshortruth
    @Tooshortruth Год назад +1

    This is the type of video I enjoy watching before bed and I just have to say, in the least creepy way possible, that your voice is perfect for this genre. Keep going please and thank you!

  • @elementallobsterx
    @elementallobsterx Год назад +10

    The tension and true surrealism in this story is second to none. TRUE horror!

  • @Admmkh
    @Admmkh Год назад +2

    Hope you go the way of our dear Wendigoon, and have much success with this channel. Good work

  • @AnimaDweller
    @AnimaDweller Год назад +3

    It was a great story, I actually had never read it before. Its way better than I expected and still holds up quite well.
    It reminds me a lot of Lovecraft's short stories.
    Awesome video too! Will definitely be subscribing

  • @s0cialgoat
    @s0cialgoat Год назад +1

    your story telling skills are AMAZING. cant wait to watch your channel grow man, you’re awesome!!

  • @estarosengold3620
    @estarosengold3620 Год назад +3

    I just wanted to say that you absolutely deserve all the likes and followers you gained so quickly! I just discovered you a few days ago and it's so nice to see your channel growing. I hope you keep up the good work, i adore how you tell the stories, it's super immersive!

  • @AR500PlateSpallInYourChin
    @AR500PlateSpallInYourChin Год назад +3

    I love your storytelling man! Definitely earned a subscriber

  • @MochiJelly4877
    @MochiJelly4877 Год назад +3

    I just found your channel today and my god I love it. I usually have trouble watching, reading or playing horror my overactive imagination gets me going and I have trouble sleeping. But horror is still my favorite genre. So sum up content like this is very helpful for me in particular. 😅

  • @ashross5860
    @ashross5860 Год назад +1

    Shocked at the sub numbers you said at the end. With the audio quality and comprehensive content you covered, I'd have guessed you were sitting comfortable at a few 100k, if not more. So excited to see up and coming talent on the rise!

  • @trienk-or8zy
    @trienk-or8zy Год назад +3

    Love how interesting you kept the story! Love the videos keep it up!!!

  • @hadlierose
    @hadlierose Год назад +1

    I just discovered this channel and oh my gosh, this guy is SO good at telling stories.