Spider-Man: Homecoming Pitch Meeting - Revisited!

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  • Опубликовано: 8 июн 2024
  • Step back into the pitch meeting and revisit the completely factual accurate conversation that led to Spider-Man: Homecoming Pitch Meeting - Revisited!! Complete with commentary from Ryan George who is now several years older!
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    00:00 Spider-Man: Homecoming Pitch Meeting
    04:50 Revisiting
    07:00 Rewriting
    09:52 Question Time!
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  • @MyBiPolarBearMax
    @MyBiPolarBearMax 23 дня назад +1929

    When Ryan does the voices during the re-writes i always think “man, he does such a good impression of those guys!”

    • @andrasbiro3007
      @andrasbiro3007 23 дня назад +145

      Yeah, he probably could do the whole thing alone.

    • @Marwolaeth01
      @Marwolaeth01 23 дня назад +82

      I legit found myself impressed at how well he performed as Producer guy. Then 10 seconds later I figured it out.

    • @GizmoFromPizmo
      @GizmoFromPizmo 23 дня назад +27

      Amen! I loved the "Yeah, yeah, yeah!" and the "So you have a movie for me?" It was great.

    • @GizmoFromPizmo
      @GizmoFromPizmo 23 дня назад +15

      Right! Redoing the voices is TIGHT!

    • @SchrijverMarcel
      @SchrijverMarcel 23 дня назад +4

      Same!

  • @saadrashid2754
    @saadrashid2754 23 дня назад +1240

    "If you make a mistake, people will point it out"
    Ryan George

  • @strawbarry7834
    @strawbarry7834 23 дня назад +433

    Every time I watch Ryan edit his google docs, it feels like watching a master wood-worker restore an old piece of furniture. It's fascinating to watch and see the growth that has occurred over the years.

    • @ConeJellos
      @ConeJellos 23 дня назад +3

      Calm down.

    • @Hexen_Wulf
      @Hexen_Wulf 23 дня назад +20

      ​@@ConeJellos Uh oh, it's the comment police.

    • @JonathanChase
      @JonathanChase 23 дня назад

      @@Hexen_Wulf ACAB includes the comment police.

    • @rompsteelwarofthering6490
      @rompsteelwarofthering6490 22 дня назад +1

      For real, I couldn't believe how good his new draft was, just on the spot like that.

    • @Paladin_HGWT57
      @Paladin_HGWT57 22 дня назад +2

      Oh, master woodworkers are tight!

  • @men3Z
    @men3Z 23 дня назад +104

    Doing the voices during the rewrite makes that section soooo much better. Makes it more like he’s adding new jokes to experience, not just typing in a Google Doc

  • @luisbollain6553
    @luisbollain6553 23 дня назад +928

    The "F**k you message" to Sony in the rewriting section caught me off guard 😂😂😂

    • @Kristjan_N
      @Kristjan_N 23 дня назад +17

      yeah, seems Ryan likes Helldivers. :D

    • @LuisSierra42
      @LuisSierra42 23 дня назад +7

      Very appropriate i'd say

    • @BCD10
      @BCD10 23 дня назад +8

      Ryan makes me laugh out loud in every video he does, that got me good

    • @RedGuy-wy2gg
      @RedGuy-wy2gg 23 дня назад +3

      Subverting expectations, making people laugh since 1998000 BC

    • @pz7510
      @pz7510 23 дня назад

      this, and it should have been followed up with a Bat Man joke somehow

  • @a.r.e.j.1693
    @a.r.e.j.1693 23 дня назад +851

    The Birdman joke was brilliant, you're right to be proud of it.

    • @tokageki
      @tokageki 23 дня назад +8

      I don't get it
      Edit: just got to the part where he explained it

    • @MaceDeMarco2010
      @MaceDeMarco2010 23 дня назад +17

      @@tokagekithey cast Michael Keaton (Batman) as a Birdman.
      Edit: never mind, got it wrong.

    • @FruitMonger360
      @FruitMonger360 23 дня назад +4

      At first I thought he was referring to Chris ´Birdman’ Andersen and I thought that was a really obscure reference.

    • @theotakux5959
      @theotakux5959 23 дня назад +12

      I'm still proud of the laughs I got at my local theater when, at the end of the movie, I stood up and proclaimed I enjoyed "Spider-Man vs Batman"...
      Also surprised how many people didn't get the Birdman reference. It won Best Picture!

    • @tokageki
      @tokageki 23 дня назад

      @@theotakux5959 I've actually never watched it, or even heard about it til til now.

  • @stallone8811
    @stallone8811 23 дня назад +149

    "if you make a mistake, people WILL point it out" - says a guy who points out mistakes and inconsistencies for a living
    -Regards, People

    • @lonesurvivor8828
      @lonesurvivor8828 20 дней назад +1

      😂

    • @necron4306
      @necron4306 16 дней назад +3

      So youre pointing out the mistake he did by saying that?

    • @cristonsloan
      @cristonsloan 15 дней назад +2

      @@necron4306 🤣🤣

    • @stallone8811
      @stallone8811 14 дней назад +2

      @@necron4306 pointing out the irony yes xD
      I love Ryan though!

    • @marcsequence
      @marcsequence 7 дней назад +2

      @@stallone8811oh pointing out the irony is TIGHT!

  • @SR-zp4je
    @SR-zp4je 23 дня назад +31

    Ryan’s like ‘nah nah nah sister, you ain’t getting me to no secondary location’

  • @reflactor
    @reflactor 23 дня назад +529

    Watching you edit your script in real time is like watching a great magic trick, seeing pure comedy come to life instantly. Please keep this segment in all your revisits!

    • @antoy384
      @antoy384 23 дня назад +8

      See, the filming, the image and editing aren’t necessary, just film yourself writing and we’re all laughing already.

    • @geraldhornsby
      @geraldhornsby 23 дня назад

      @@antoy384 Good to know!

    • @sarthakkhare9843
      @sarthakkhare9843 23 дня назад +5

      Ikr?? It also shows just how much better he's gotten at this and how naturally it comes to him

    • @burnacco
      @burnacco 18 дней назад

      FOR REAAAAAL

  • @Yattayatta
    @Yattayatta 23 дня назад +388

    google doc segment is brilliant, it provides an opportunity for jokes that didn't make it or that were thought of later, while giving an insight into the process and how you have improved at the same time.

    • @LuisSierra42
      @LuisSierra42 23 дня назад +17

      It is also a great resource for people who want to learn writing

    • @geraldhornsby
      @geraldhornsby 23 дня назад +13

      And one thing it does is show how much the writing, the acting and editing has improved. The Google Docs section is wonderful.

    • @burnacco
      @burnacco 18 дней назад

      ABSOLUTELY

  • @MatthewTheWanderer
    @MatthewTheWanderer 23 дня назад +36

    I find it totally awesome that Ryan does everything on this channel by himself. The acting, the writing, the editing, the filming. Really impressive! And he keeps getting better.

  • @22coinstar
    @22coinstar 23 дня назад +12

    Watching every pitch meeting and then watching every one again revisited is TIGHT

  • @Pseudowolf
    @Pseudowolf 23 дня назад +78

    I like watching these older ones and seeing how Producer Guy and Writer Guy got more and more unhinged over time. They’re generally calmer and more restrained in the earlier ones.

  • @arthurcoser
    @arthurcoser 23 дня назад +188

    Love the google docking, it's like an extra pitch meeting

    • @Szokynyovics
      @Szokynyovics 23 дня назад +5

      It is so good to witness how the magic happens.

    • @tomaszpiotrowski4569
      @tomaszpiotrowski4569 23 дня назад +1

      yeah yeah yeah

    • @ursidae97
      @ursidae97 23 дня назад +8

      I love docking with Ryan

    • @Secretgeek2012
      @Secretgeek2012 23 дня назад +3

      ​@@ursidae97Go take a cold shower! 😂

    • @Liennie
      @Liennie 23 дня назад +7

      Docking with Ryan is TIGHT!

  • @MrDLYouTube
    @MrDLYouTube 23 дня назад +11

    Who is this guy? His impressions of Writer Guy and Producer Guy is spot on! Good work!

    • @MijmerMopper
      @MijmerMopper 6 дней назад

      You don't know? Its Ryan from the thing you where watching at some point 2 weeks ago.

  • @rileymosman2808
    @rileymosman2808 23 дня назад +8

    Love the rewrites, we basically get 2 for one pitch meetings. A fresh and evolved take.

  • @jxchamb
    @jxchamb 23 дня назад +153

    I think you underestimate how much fun the Google docs editing scenes are. Really enjoy it.

  • @dietotaku
    @dietotaku 23 дня назад +207

    "Ryan, I am DYING--"
    *Oh no!*
    "--to know..."
    *Oh, okay.*
    😂😂😂

    • @davewhitmore1958
      @davewhitmore1958 23 дня назад +8

      Ryan is concerned about us, as we are concerned for him!

    • @jelita_
      @jelita_ 23 дня назад +8

      The comedic timing is really important 🤣

    • @matthewlang737
      @matthewlang737 22 дня назад +2

      God, that moment was gold 😂

  • @geraldhornsby
    @geraldhornsby 23 дня назад +6

    Showing how you would rewrite these old Pitch Meetings is TIGHT!

  • @christophereric4
    @christophereric4 23 дня назад +4

    omg this “live re-writing” format is sooo much more work for him than previous ‘Revisited’ videos.. but ITS SO 👏 GOOD 👏

  • @a_witcher94
    @a_witcher94 23 дня назад +80

    i love the google doc sections so much i am at the point where i wish you would re-do your older pitch meetings .. that obelisk joke is tight!

    • @ChristofferLund
      @ChristofferLund 23 дня назад +3

      He could have a patreon or paid tier here where he posts remakes

  • @conwarlock3537
    @conwarlock3537 23 дня назад +246

    "A bird man, I can work with that." Recently watched that movie, now I understand that reference. Or, to put it in other words: He said the thing!!!

  • @kingsleycy3450
    @kingsleycy3450 23 дня назад +10

    I think it reflects a lot of evolution if both you and the fans can see an old pitch meeting, and figure out how current you would make it snappier

  • @parsival
    @parsival 21 день назад +3

    What these revisits make me realise is that I think it would be really fun to watch if you did a "remastered" of old pitch meetings, where you go back and remake the old pitch meetings with everything you've learned since, just to see how different and similar things would be.

  • @jacksonanderson8203
    @jacksonanderson8203 23 дня назад +127

    After you've been doing these revisited pitch meetings for a while, you should revisit a revisited one

    • @johmyh14
      @johmyh14 23 дня назад +13

      That's super easy, barely an inconvenience.

    • @donrol93
      @donrol93 23 дня назад +7

      Revisiting a revisited is tight!

    • @Tfaonc
      @Tfaonc 23 дня назад +15

      It would need to be the pitch for Inception. Revisit the revisited Inception pitch meeting.

    • @PeamThePanda
      @PeamThePanda 23 дня назад +4

      Spider-Man: Homecoming REVISTED - Revisited again: Visited once more; we're doing another one PART 2

    • @cruz1ale
      @cruz1ale 23 дня назад +2

      live editing the live editing: "In this part of the video I wouldn't have scrolled all the way down to the third paragraph, I would've just skipped that"

  • @aaaro88
    @aaaro88 23 дня назад +57

    I like that you shifted from just you talking to over-exagering the character voices you use in later episodes. This made them a lot more interesting.

  • @WesleyWhiteside
    @WesleyWhiteside 23 дня назад +2

    Love these pitch meetings and revisits. It gives a satisfying conclusion to older videos that didn't have all the catch phrases and mannerisms mastered yet.
    Have you thought of doing more Pitch Meetings for TV shows? One of my favorites is Friends. It would be great to revisit classic shows, maybe even some old cartoons with ridiculous premises like Tale Spin or Johnny Bravo.

  • @codenamefulcrum3584
    @codenamefulcrum3584 23 дня назад +2

    Why did the camera keep moving back and forth? That was a bit distracting... Great video as always though!! The rewrite was amazing. I love that you added that section

  • @dietotaku
    @dietotaku 23 дня назад +32

    I LOVE the changes, especially Producer Guy shoehorning Iron Man in because "people like Iron Man," classic!

  • @Briansgate
    @Briansgate 23 дня назад +87

    seems like Producer Guy and Writer guy grew up and chilled out a little.

    • @xsanguine8
      @xsanguine8 23 дня назад +11

      I think it was due to that Dollar Sign stroke Producer Guy had, they both decided to take it a little easier after that.

  • @castlestar454
    @castlestar454 23 дня назад +1

    This is my favourite rewrite section you've done! I think it really showed how you think things through. Got an insight into your mind... In a non-creepy way

  • @Disturbed626
    @Disturbed626 22 дня назад +1

    You're completely right about the unexpected bleeping joke. Even hearing you talk about it made me laugh.

  • @lorelim
    @lorelim 23 дня назад +95

    7:17 You can't just suddenly say the movie came out 8 years ago, you're gonna hurt my feelings.

    • @hedganian
      @hedganian 23 дня назад +18

      Friends don't tell friends that the 1990s were more than a decade ago.

    • @EmperorSeth
      @EmperorSeth 23 дня назад +2

      If it makes you feel better, it was more like seven years ago!

    • @potato5813
      @potato5813 23 дня назад

      ​@@hedganian more than two decades ago*

    • @theonlyron
      @theonlyron 23 дня назад

      @potato5813 So, still more than a decade ago

    • @potato5813
      @potato5813 22 дня назад

      @@theonlyron yeah, but it's a lot more impactful to say two or even three decades than just one

  • @Resh1477
    @Resh1477 23 дня назад +40

    "Iron Man comes to save the day."
    "Is it smart for Spider-Man to always rely on Iron Man to do that?"
    "Why not? It's not like Iron Man is going away anytime soon. I mean, he's not going to die. That would be crazy."
    "Oh right, that WOULD be crazy."

  • @raydunakin
    @raydunakin 23 дня назад

    I enjoy the Google docs portion of the video, it's fascinating to see the thought process that goes into creating such great comedy.

  • @darwinism8181
    @darwinism8181 23 дня назад +1

    Thank you for taking charge with the doccing, I'm new to this so I appreciate having a confident, experienced person show me how it's done. Truly a gentleman.

  • @kyled.7748
    @kyled.7748 23 дня назад +29

    I love these google doc segments. Its far more educational than it has any right to be lol

  • @bramverhees755
    @bramverhees755 23 дня назад +20

    I’m really liking the Google Doc portion. It’s actually kind of educational for me as I want improve my writing. Accidental learning!

  • @TeamWestAnna
    @TeamWestAnna 22 дня назад +1

    Hey Ryan, I love the clean setup you're rocking now! Your lighting and new mic is *chef's kiss* 🤌

  • @Jeremy-lv8zc
    @Jeremy-lv8zc 22 дня назад

    My dude, you are absolutely my favorite RUclipsr. Thank you so very much for all the laughs…and more than a few poignant insights into flicks I love.

  • @moiseulpasmoi
    @moiseulpasmoi 23 дня назад +20

    Congrats on you being a dad and thank you for still banging out this videos

  • @shlemmon24
    @shlemmon24 23 дня назад +16

    Love the MJ drawing with the red hair 😂

  • @BlandoGaming
    @BlandoGaming 23 дня назад +1

    I love the insight into your though process the Google doc section gives us. Plus it's like an extra mini-pitch meeting as you're doing it! Thanks for all the laughs and I hope you and your family are well.

  • @timopper5488
    @timopper5488 23 дня назад

    Not only does this “revisit” transport me back seven years in time to when you made the original video, roughly 2-3 years before I discovered you on RUclips (yes, it was I who discovered you!), but it also gives me added value in the form of your self-critique. And I’m really glad that you pointed out your mispronunciation of the word “debris” so that I didn’t have to mock you mercilessly for it. Very kind of ya!

  • @emanuelgomez4891
    @emanuelgomez4891 23 дня назад +33

    "Coz i have seen movies" , hahahahaha GOLD right there. xD

  • @TherealGethmeister
    @TherealGethmeister 23 дня назад +23

    Please do a pitch meeting for a muppet Christmas carol (or any muppets movie)

  • @MenacingBanjo
    @MenacingBanjo 23 дня назад

    Watching your re-writing was an absolute joy. It was magical to see you bring new life to the script.

  • @SanjayStiltskin
    @SanjayStiltskin 22 дня назад +1

    "Yeah-yeah-yeah! 😁😁" It's great watching you switching back and forth between the two characters as you type out the script 😂😂

  • @hmmmm2824
    @hmmmm2824 23 дня назад +19

    I'm genuinely impressed by the drawings Ryan makes

    • @FightingCamel22
      @FightingCamel22 23 дня назад +2

      And the logical explanation as to what he drew

  • @rockdalianninja1056
    @rockdalianninja1056 23 дня назад +63

    Before I finish the video, “I’ll be so disappointed if you don’t draw Michael Jordan from the epic space jam”.
    After the video. “I was not disappointed, you are good at the comedy and I’m good at seeing the punchline.”

  • @k1ng5urfer
    @k1ng5urfer 22 дня назад +1

    i really do enjoy the revisions! thank you for making them a regular addition!

  • @EmperorFool
    @EmperorFool 21 день назад

    I unexpectedly enjoyed the rewriting segment, especially that you acted the rewrites out rather than just speaking them normally--an amazing view into the creative process. ♥

  • @KingRbyt
    @KingRbyt 23 дня назад +40

    Revisiting Pitch Meetings Are Tight
    And Clicking on this was super easy barely an inconvenience

  • @joels5150
    @joels5150 23 дня назад +61

    The mistake of having Peter’s love interest falling from a tower…not because it doesn’t happen (again), but because the Washington Monument is actually an Obelisk, not a tower. 😂
    Still my favorite bit from this Pitch Meeting.

  • @TEMINIX
    @TEMINIX 23 дня назад

    I love seeing how your writing has come so far. Seeing you write a Pitch Meeting is awesome.

  • @MissSagittarian
    @MissSagittarian 9 дней назад

    I really love these revisits. It's so interesting to see how your writing style has changed and developed.

  • @thomasauer9370
    @thomasauer9370 23 дня назад +37

    1:52 that birdman reference had me dying 🤣

  • @Kranitoko
    @Kranitoko 23 дня назад +22

    Spider-Man is the epitome of doing a backflip, snapping the bad guys neck and saving the day.

    • @realbadger
      @realbadger 23 дня назад

      Do you mean "snapping the bad guys' necks"...? My autocorrect loves surprising me with "corrections" that are actually typos that I don't notice until I've hit Send...

    • @Kranitoko
      @Kranitoko 23 дня назад +1

      @@realbadger fixed.

    • @jeromevaleska2014
      @jeromevaleska2014 23 дня назад +1

      @@realbadger No, he doesn’t. He means “…snapping the bad guy’s neck…” You misplaced the apostrophe and added a plural. Also, you mean “…surprising me…” not “…surprising my…” and you capitalised “…send…” but here it should remain uncapitalised.
      Grammar Police, I know, but hey, I’m thorough.

    • @realbadger
      @realbadger 23 дня назад +1

      @jeromevaleska2014 He corrected it. I'd thought it was bad guys plural (hence the correct placement of the apostrophe, as I suspected Next could sound like "necks" being misheard.

    • @jeromevaleska2014
      @jeromevaleska2014 23 дня назад +1

      @@realbadger Haha, fair enough. Now what of the rest of the flaws I called out in your reply?

  • @QBnoYouko
    @QBnoYouko 23 дня назад

    I'm enjoying the Google Doc rewrite segments. Even when you're editing it as you go, you still act it out and it's just as hilarious!

  • @Christopher-gv8yc
    @Christopher-gv8yc 23 дня назад

    I really enjoy your "Revisited" series. It is very interesting to hear your thought process in hindsight. Please keep doing what you do and I will keep watching!!!!

  • @Mohammed-dy6xb
    @Mohammed-dy6xb 23 дня назад +6

    No matter how many times you revisit a pitch meeting...... never fails to make me laugh !!
    But for Ryan(s) ...its barely an inconvenience !!
    Thank you for spreading so much joy ⭐

  • @justinn8541
    @justinn8541 23 дня назад +25

    Commenting on the previous content is tight.

    • @remylebeau34
      @remylebeau34 23 дня назад

      and its super easy, barely an inconvenience.

  • @Kraidismyspiritanimal
    @Kraidismyspiritanimal 21 день назад

    Comparing this to your newest Rebel Moon 2 pitch meeting, you've definitely got your formula on point. It's nice to see the evolution of your characters, voices and witty remarks. Great channel!

  • @cristonsloan
    @cristonsloan 16 дней назад

    I feel like your re-writes section is improving as you go along, the way you are leaning more into doing the voices and almost acting it out, so that we get a good idea of how it would go if it were the actual pitch meeting. Which is really Meta, since the section that currently is improving is dealing with how you would improve the past content. Absolutely love it! I can envision you taking it even further, so that it almost becomes a remake of the first Pitch Meeting. I mean, remakes are all the rage, right?

  • @JarethGT
    @JarethGT 23 дня назад +6

    Love that you started doing the editing thing in these, it's cool seeing your writing process

  • @rachelrasmussen1101
    @rachelrasmussen1101 23 дня назад +7

    That MJ is amazing

  • @VladZer0
    @VladZer0 23 дня назад

    These videos are great, I used to rewatch pitch meetings over and over and is kinda the same but with new content. I think these videos are getting better and better.

  • @sharky582
    @sharky582 23 дня назад +3

    I like the addition of Producer Guy forcing Iron Man into the script, studio notes are much more fitting for him and not for Writer Guy.

  • @dronix6624
    @dronix6624 23 дня назад +9

    OMG IS THAT RYAN FROM THE THING IM CURRENTLY WATCHING????

  • @Toto-95
    @Toto-95 23 дня назад +8

    Oof the difference in quality then and now on that one is HUGE !
    Honestly just even the tone and acting, the then video is awkward it's very "i just started". Now it's very "overacted" for comedy but in a good way and it works wayyyy better ! like the "Oh my God..." intonation you do now is way better !

    • @dietotaku
      @dietotaku 23 дня назад +2

      definitely, comedy needs a bit of melodrama to work and Ryan has got that down to an exact science!

  • @T05H18A1037
    @T05H18A1037 20 дней назад

    I just read your channel description and went, “Oh, new episodes released every Thursday is TIGHT!” 😁

  • @allyb3241
    @allyb3241 23 дня назад

    I just love these revisits soooo much!!! Keep up the great work!!

  • @aurora2670
    @aurora2670 23 дня назад +12

    Omg ive been trying to figure out where i knew you from! Your ryan george from the thing im currently watching!!!

  • @fernandesdamian
    @fernandesdamian 23 дня назад +6

    Love your videos! Still waiting patiently for a malignant pitch meeting

    • @aidanyelsma7762
      @aidanyelsma7762 23 дня назад +2

      I want a pitch meeting for The Room that ends with the producer guy kicking screenwriter guy out of his office because it sounds terrible and the screenwriter guy replying with “Screw you! I’ll just make it myself!”

  • @preston9189
    @preston9189 23 дня назад +1

    I love when you Google doc. Docking is tight!

  • @eduardolago7562
    @eduardolago7562 23 дня назад

    You’re the best, man! You always crack me up! Hope to continue seeing you in many years to come. Congrats on being a father, I wish your daughter all the best, beautiful things in life!!

  • @Syraks
    @Syraks 23 дня назад +6

    Screenwriter Guy: .......... **** you.
    😂😂😂

  • @Entertainment-Gaming-Grandad
    @Entertainment-Gaming-Grandad 23 дня назад +8

    Popped in my Head…you need to do a pitch meeting for the movie ARMAGEDDON!!

    • @Qmeister044
      @Qmeister044 23 дня назад +2

      Armageddon and Deep Impact and keep getting the two confused.

    • @Entertainment-Gaming-Grandad
      @Entertainment-Gaming-Grandad 23 дня назад +1

      @@Qmeister044 yes lol they would be great movies to pitch meeting because of how impossible they were haha

    • @planetofthegapes
      @planetofthegapes 22 дня назад +1

      @@Entertainment-Gaming-Grandad The same as The Core, which I don't think he's done... question mark?

  • @greylotus1
    @greylotus1 16 дней назад

    I really enjoy this new format of editing the old scripts. Awesome way to add even more depth to this series!

  • @lucideandre
    @lucideandre 23 дня назад +8

    The thing with Ned seems…odd to me.
    Like, him not having the best social awareness doesn’t clash with him being amazing at computer stuff. He’s more of a stereotype if anything, of a socially unaware nerd

  • @Marwolaeth01
    @Marwolaeth01 23 дня назад +6

    The tower joke definitely needed tightening up, hehehehe, but listening to it first time around my main criticism of it would be explaining the joke too much.
    "To make our film better than the old movies we'll have her fall from a different tower. It's a mistake. Is it? Yes it's an obelisk not a tower. Oh but you like the idea? Oh yeah I like the tower fall again thing."
    Without a full rework I think it should have simply been:
    "To make our film better than the old movies we'll have her fall from a different tower. It's a mistake. Is it? Yes it's an obelisk not a tower."
    I feel in your later Pitch Meeting's you have learned to trust the audience a bit more to get the joke.

  • @danieldavis7784
    @danieldavis7784 23 дня назад

    The "OH" in front of the really reply to the super easy barely an inconvenience is nice!

  • @cylondorado4582
    @cylondorado4582 23 дня назад +10

    Is it bad that I want him to do Schindler’s List just so I can hear him say, “[Anything that happened in the movie] is TIGHT!”?

    • @PompeySomerstown
      @PompeySomerstown 23 дня назад +2

      Yes. Especially if it's "little girls in red"

  • @3v1l73ddy
    @3v1l73ddy 23 дня назад +4

    I actually really liked the slower pace of the washington monument joke in the original. Sometimes newer pitch meetings can be painfully fast paced.

  • @Anduz001
    @Anduz001 23 дня назад

    Once you've done enough of these, I'd love a 2.0 or "Pitch Meeting: Redo" series, where you rerecord these with the updated scripts. Easy for you and it brings them up to date. Love your work Ryan!

  • @willbrashear
    @willbrashear 23 дня назад +1

    gives Ryan a hug

  • @4plus20isHappy
    @4plus20isHappy 23 дня назад +9

    “Game pitches would be TIGHT!”

    • @JoeyGBean
      @JoeyGBean 23 дня назад +4

      i agree! i just don't think he has time to play games with his new daughter

    • @sexydictator3241
      @sexydictator3241 23 дня назад

      ​@@JoeyGBeanhis wife could do them, maybe? 😄

    • @bestintheband5114
      @bestintheband5114 23 дня назад +3

      @JoeyGBean actually I feel like he could play the games without his daughter, she's probably not old enough to play yet
      (It's a joke, don't worship me)

    • @4plus20isHappy
      @4plus20isHappy 23 дня назад +1

      @@JoeyGBean All the more reason. “Isn’t it nearly impossible to afford a kid these days?”

    • @BFedie518
      @BFedie518 23 дня назад +2

      He's talked about the video game pitch meetings before. They would simply take too long to make. TV shows are already pushing it.
      They would be fun to see though.

  • @boyeatsworld-vr9ci
    @boyeatsworld-vr9ci 23 дня назад +7

    Accurately calling writing lazy is not a sin.

  • @coffeebot3000
    @coffeebot3000 23 дня назад

    I love the rewrite part. Your little readings of it is the icing on the cake.

  • @RGbcc
    @RGbcc 23 дня назад +1

    I like trying to guess the drawing. The Jordan part was obviously but mj’s hair got me. Well done man in box.

  • @graduator14
    @graduator14 23 дня назад +20

    Hi Ryan, please do a Pitch Meeting for The Room l! I've been asking for 4 years!
    I would say wow wow wow..........
    Wow!

    • @imomedvidek
      @imomedvidek 23 дня назад +3

      room is already a parody of itself, would be hard to make into pich meeting, imho.

    • @NickChad
      @NickChad 23 дня назад

      @@imomedvidekplus, since the guy who starred in it also paid for it, wrote it, and directed it the pitch meeting would just be one guy pitching the movie to himself. Can you imagine?

    • @imomedvidek
      @imomedvidek 23 дня назад

      @@NickChad I imagine that pitch for The Room, was just Tommy Wiseau jerking off while yelling random parts of the script.

    • @graduator14
      @graduator14 23 дня назад

      @@NickChad That would be quite meta!

  • @jimmypopjr
    @jimmypopjr 23 дня назад +15

    Ryan - would you ever consider doing Pitch Meetings for famous/popular songs? Could be a lot of great material there.

    • @usernametaken748
      @usernametaken748 23 дня назад

      Some of his sketches on his personal channel @RyanGeorge are basically that. ruclips.net/video/1QPdQ5TPCMo/видео.html

  • @BaseStation
    @BaseStation 23 дня назад

    Love the rewrite section! I mean… I love your whole video. But I especially love the rewrite portion.

  • @njalthemighty5378
    @njalthemighty5378 23 дня назад

    I luv these re-writes, it really shows off your talent and process.

  • @AllAxcess8427
    @AllAxcess8427 23 дня назад

    I love these so much! Something magical about seeing it done and hearing it at the same time ^^ Thank you Ryan for doing these you wonderful person you 😋

  • @xitaris5981
    @xitaris5981 23 дня назад +1

    RUclips is killing it with their notifications. They sent me a notification 11 hours after I'd _already watched it_

  • @danielwright3688
    @danielwright3688 23 дня назад

    Love your videos. I really enjoy the sincerity of the revisited stuff!

  • @pacorka9943
    @pacorka9943 23 дня назад

    The Google Docs section of these videos are the BEST! Literally a short comedy writing lesson and I get the euphoria of seeing your jokes come to life in front of my eyes/ears!

  • @Psychs_IVXX
    @Psychs_IVXX 20 дней назад

    its so cool watching your script writing process in this video

  • @ancapride
    @ancapride 23 дня назад

    Ryan is a master of google docking. He always seems to wrap the tip of the new changes over the shaft of the existing piece so neatly.