This is a beautiful story. I love how Superman is hopeful and helps Livewire at the end but he isn’t a pushover not taking Luthor’s crap. Superman doesn’t have an ego while Lex does. Superman doesn’t do what he does for people to like them he does it because he knows it’s the right thing to do. And he wants to. Many heroes get their responsibility thrust upon them. Spider-Man, Batman, Flash but Superman chooses to do what he does. He’s the ultimate symbol of good parenting. I love how you used Livewire because in fan made stories it’s always Metallo and I myself have never thought of using Livewire. She’s a victim of Lex which helps us see the empathy of Superman.
The start of something truly special. I love the passion you put into this pitch. I also really like the use of Livewire as one of the villains for the first installment since Livewire has always been an underrated villain to me and I love her being a former shock and jock podcaster who projects cynical, untrue and bitter viewpoints based on her own negative traits and life, which really juxtaposes against Clark and Lois as genuinely ethical and truthful reporters spreading the truth, which would really reflect today's generation of content creators selling out their own morals and spreading falsehoods and negativity. Looking forward to seeing the other DC Prime pitch videos. I hope to make my own pitch videos akin to this someday soon too
I love your characterization of Clark/Superman, Lois, and Lex and how it’s very faithful to the source material. Also, I’m really excited to see where this iteration of Superman goes next and how he interacts with the other characters like Batman and Wonder Woman. I’m especially interested in how he’ll react to meeting Kara Zor-El if he ever does, which I think he eventually will. There’s a lot of potential for this universe and where it can go and I’ve felt hope like this in the Tomorrowverse, but I know DC Prime will do better by the fans than the Tomorrowverse did. 9/10 I need more!
I get that your doing just scripts or pitches. But yall should actually do movies of them. Like you be the writer for this and all your friends and stuff can be actors and such.
making a superman fan film is a dream project of mine. i’d 100% be able to do it (i have experience working with actors from all around Michigan) but the budget is what’s stopping me. I very much so would be able to though
I loved this this Is What Makes Superman Hopeful he's a beacon a symbol This Was a Good Pitch A good Film Hope all the best for this Universe can't wait Post credit Probably tresses a film you didn't say in your announcement
Hey man,I was mysteriously removed from the fake happy films discord server and every time I try to click the link it says the link is unavailable can you help me with this?
Can you provide feedback for my Batman pitch? Act One: Batman and Nightwing race to a warehouse where Jason Todd, the current Robin, is being tortured by the Joker. In the warehouse, Joker beats Jason to a bloody pulp, before leaving the warehouse which is rigged to blow. Harley Quinn watches in the corner, begging Joker to stop, however she is ignored. Joker and Harley escape the warehouse as Batman and Nightwing arrive only for the warehouse to explode, killing Jason. Batman runs inside, holding Jason’s lifeless body in his arms… Batman chases the Joker and begins to beat him to death, however Nightwing is able to calm him down. Jason is buried at Wayne Manor, next to his parent’s graves while Joker is locked up in Arkham Asylum. 2 years later… District Attorney Harvey Dent is set to put Joker on trial within the next week. In his office, he talks with Commissioner Gordon about the trial as Gordon thanks him for all his work in fixing this city. From afar, Batman listens in on the conversation and realizes that maybe, just maybe, Gotham may have its new protector in Harvey Dent. Batman takes off and goes to the Batcave to talk with Alfred. Alfred tells Batman that this could be his chance to retire while Dent locks up criminals left and right. Batman agrees with this, though deep down, he doesn’t want to retire, believing he has no other purpose in life. Tim Drake sits in his bedroom with newspapers about Batman and Bruce Wayne. He begins to put all the pieces together about Bruce Wayne being Batman after all. He also learns that Dick Grayson was the former Robin after watching a video of him do a move that only a member of the Flying Graysons could do. Tim also sees that ever since Robin disappeared, Batman has been darker and more violent. Tim decides to make himself noticed by Batman and try his best to become Robin, knowing Batman needs a Robin to keep himself in check. Harvey is having a nightmare about his father and how every decision his father made was determined by his signature coin. Harvey wakes up in a chair with his therapist standing over him. She asks him about the nightmare and Harvey explains it all. In the background, the news plays reporting on a kidnapping of a child. Harvey flips his coin to decide whether or not to go, ultimately landing on the decision to cut his therapy session short. Harvey drives to the scene and sees that a boy is being held captive in a building. Harvey flips his coin once more, which decides that he should go in to save the boy himself. Gordon tries to stop him but it’s too late. Simultaneously, Batman appears on the scene and also goes in to save the boy. Harvey comes face to face with the criminals and threatens them if they don’t release the boy. Instead, they aim their guns at Harvey before Batman jumps in and knocks the criminals out. The boy, revealed to be Tim Drake, quickly escapes the building. Batman thanks Dent for his bravery and everything he has done for the city before taking off, as the boy secretly places a tracker on the BatMobile to track Batman to the Batcave. In the Batcave, Batman and Alfred talk about Harvey once more, and Alfred says that Harvey is another reason for him to stick around as Bruce Wayne. Batman tries to deny this, however they hear a crash from nearby. Bruce and Alfred go to check it out and see Tim Drake snuck into the Batcave by hacking the security systems. Bruce is not happy about this and tells Tim Drake to leave. Tim refuses and talks to Bruce about everything he discovered. Alfred applauds his detective skills, but Batman is unamused and kicks him out. As Bruce walks back into the house, he notices that Tim took Jason’s suit. In his office, Dent talks to Gordon about the upcoming trial in a few days. Gordon assures Dent that he’ll make the right decision and that if the Joker makes a move, he’ll regret it. Harvey goes back for another therapy session with Ms. Davis and she asks him to speak with “Big Bad Harv.” Harvey’s split personalities are very different and Big Bad Harv begins to get aggressive when asked deep questions. When she asks him about his father he snaps, grabbing her by the throat before Harvey calms himself. Ms. Davis recommends he gets out and socialize more, making him more comfortable outside which could potentially make Big Bad Harv taking over less common. Harvey agrees to this and decides to call up an old friend. The next day, Bruce and Harvey have lunch together and catch up on life. Harvey and Bruce were friends since the 3rd grade, however lost contact shortly after Dent became District Attorney. Harvey tells him about his split personality disorder’s current state but says it’s getting better. Bruce decides to throw a party at Wayne Manor for Harvey. Harvey insists him not to, however Bruce says “it’s for old times sake.” Just as Harvey and Bruce prepare to leave, Bruce spots Tim again. Bruce quickly excuses himself before chasing after him. Tim makes it back to his apartment, however Bruce follows him there. That night, Bruce breaks into Tim’s house and demands Tim give the Robin costume back. Tim just begs Bruce to let him be Robin, but Bruce isn’t changing his mind. Just before Bruce can take the costume back, Tim’s police radio reports the Riddler has left a Riddle for Batman. Batman traces the signal to an abandoned building. Tim suits up as Robin and follows Batman to the building. Batman and Robin go to the scene, where Harvey and the police force are surrounding the building. Batman gets the note left behind which has a riddle on it (any riddle would work here). Before Batman can solve it, Tim intervenes, answering the riddle himself. Harvey, Gordon and even Batman are shocked by Tim’s intelligence, but their thoughts get cut short by the ticking bomb planted inside the building. Harvey flips his coin, and ends up rushing in to clear the building. Batman and Robin track the bomb’s specific location in the building and begin to disable it. They solve a handful of riddles before the case to the bomb opens up. Batman tries to solve the last riddle which will disable the bomb, however it’s too late and the bomb explodes. Batman and Robin are okay, but instantly go to Harvey, making sure he’s alright. Harvey is okay and was able to successfully get everyone out the building. Batman then looks at Robin and tells him to come with him. .
Act Two: Batman takes Tim to the Batcave and tells him that he doesn’t appreciate him not following orders. Tim just tells Batman to let him become Robin, as Alfred steps into the conversation agreeing with Tim. Batman decides to give Tim a chance, but if he slips up once, he will be fired. Tim is ecstatic and thanks Bruce a thousand times over, with Alfred cracking a smile. The next day, 4 days up until the trial of the Joker, is Harvey’s party. Tim is in the Batcave the entire duration of the party, taking a look through all the information of the Bat Family. Bruce and Harvey hang out and talk about their opinions on Batman. Of course, Bruce pretends to be against Batman, however Harvey is very positive about him and has many good things to say. This secretly pleases Bruce which makes him really believe that Batman is making a difference. Bruce then runs into Gordon and his daughter, Barbara. Bruce starts to talk with them before Alfred calls him down to the Batcave. Alfred informs him that the Riddler has made another statement requesting Batman come and find him. Batman takes Tim out on their first official mission together to take down the Riddler. At the same time, Gordon and Dent also take off to the scene with the GCPD. Batman and Robin arrive where Riddler told them to go and take down all of his henchmen. They solve one final riddle, which opens up the room where Riddler was hiding in. Batman interrogates the Riddler and learns that Batman’s greatest foes have all teamed up and are working under one leading man. Batman knocks Riddler out and takes him to Gordon. He informs Gordon and Dent about what the Riddler told him, telling them to keep a lookout. As Harvey goes in to arrest the Riddler’s henchmen, one of them spits on him and begins to trash talk him. Harvey’s alternate personality comes out and he starts beating the man down. Everyone around him begins to record videos of him doing so just before Gordon stops him. The next day, the videos of Dent go viral, causing many to reconsider their faith in him. Bruce hears of this and starts worrying a lot about Harvey’s well being. Harvey and Ms. Davis talk once more as she tells him that he really needs to keep Big Bad Harv in check. Suddenly, Harvey’s sanity slips and Big Bad Harv takes over. After hearing what Ms. Davis said he gets enraged and attacks her, throwing her out of the window. The police investigate the scene and find an unconscious Harvey in the building. Harvey is clueless about what happened, however he is still the top suspect for the murder. Harvey and Gordon become distant due to his bad image at the moment. Harvey is then called by the Attorney General, who informs him that after the Joker’s trial, he’s being let off the hook due to the controversies surrounding him. Harvey screams out and throws a glass, cutting his cheek. Harvey swears to himself that in his last days as district attorney, he will lock up Gotham’s most wanted criminals alongside Batman. Harvey picks up on a sighting of Bane and lights the Bat Signal. Batman and Robin arrive at the GCPD where Harvey informs Batman about the sighting of Bane. Batman talks to Harvey about his mental state and asks about his status as district attorney being lost. Harvey refuses to talk about it and tells Batman the last sighting of Bane. Batman and Robin go to the location where Bane was spotted and finds him waiting for them. Bane attacks Batman and Robin, using the venom drug to his advantage. Batman is outmatched by Bane, however Robin is able to cut his tubes loose allowing Batman to knock him out. Bane is tied up to a chair as the dynamic duo leave. In the next 2 days, Batman, Robin and Dent take down Clayface, Scarecrow, Poison Ivy and Killer Croc, having them locked up in Arkham Asylum. As Batman turns in Killer Croc, he speaks with Dent one more time, thanking him for everything. Harvey returns the respect as Batman glides off the GCPD rooftop. Sunday, October 31st, 2:30 P.M. Harvey arrives in the courthouse, coming face to face with the Joker for the first time ever. As the trial proceeds, Bruce and Alfred watch the security cameras from the Batcave. Bruce runs a face scan on everyone in the room, however Joker’s lawyer matches the face of one, Harleen Quinnzel. Bruce alerts Alfred, and prepares the Batsuit. After Harvey comes to his conclusion, the jury have their conversation. While Harvey stands in place, the Joker begins to egg Harvey on, causing Big Bad Harv to take over, leading to a violent breakout in the courtroom. Joker suddenly pulls something out of his pocket and sprays Harvey in the face with it, as it turns out to be acid. Harvey falls to the ground as Batman breaks into the courthouse and stops the pandemonium. Joker is restrained by Gordon while Batman defeats Harley. Out of nowhere, the police attack Batman, revealed to be working under Joker. Together, Gordon and Batman take the corrupt cops down, however a number of them get away. Harvey gets rushed to the hospital as Batman delivers Harvey’s coin to him, apologizing for everything. Harvey wakes a day later to see Gordon sitting at his bedside. Gordon explains what happened, as Harvey is unable to remember. Harvey is enraged that Gordon had men on his squad that were corrupt. Gordon and Harvey get into an argument before Gordon is asked to leave by a nurse. Harvey asks the nurse to hand him a mirror, although she is hesitant, she gives him one. Harvey screams out in anger, shattering the small mirror. The nurse asks him if he's alright, however he pushes her and makes a run for it out of the hospital. The hospital staff chase after him, as he escapes into a sewer. Bruce sits in the Batcave with Alfred and Tim, feeling as if he has failed Dent, as he did Jason Todd. Tim and Alfred talk it out with Bruce, trying to assure the accident wasn’t his fault, though Bruce isn’t as convinced. In the sewer, he meets Solomon Grundy. Grundy hands Dent a recording of a nursery rhyme: “Christened on Tuesday, Married on Wednesday, Took ill on Thursday, Grew worse on Friday, Died on Saturday, Buried on Sunday, That was the end, Of Solomon Grundy.” Harvey laughs to himself, flipping his coin, now scarred on one side. He smiles at Grundy as they say, in unison, “Born on a Mondee.”
Act Three: After a few days, Harvey is deemed missing and Bruce feels as if it’s his obligation to find him. That night, Batman and Robin investigate the outside of the hospital where Harvey was last seen. This leads them into the sewer as they take a look around. At the same time, Harvey, now calling himself Two Face, and Solomon Grundy hit Carmine Falcone’s mob bank. Just as they escape the bank, Alfred alarms Batman and Robin about the robbery. The pair take off right before Grundy and Two Face return to their home in the sewer. Batman and Robin arrive at the crime scene too late, as he begins gathering clues about the robberies and Harvey’s disappearance. Over the next month, Harvey hits more banks, climbing the ranks of crime bosses in Gotham. The public still is unaware that Harvey has been committing the robberies, just believing he was killed. One day, when Grundy and Dent are robbing another mob bank before he notices a note left for him, leading him to Arkham Asylum. Harvey breaks into Arkham, leaving Grundy behind due to his sheer size and unstealthy nature. Harvey sees that the guards are seemingly under mind control, as they are all lined up on a wall. Harvey enters and sees Harley, Riddler, Killer Croc and every criminal he locked up with Batman. The Riddler explains that he created a device and used it to disable the guard’s ability to stop their plan. Harvey asks what they want just as Joker steps into the light, laughing maniacally. Harvey grabs Joker, preparing to kill him, though Croc holds him back. Riddler tells him to give them a chance to explain everything, as they sit Harvey down. Batman and Robin take a look at the pattern of Two Face’s attacks and notice the dates they are on and the locations. With help from Alfred, Robin points on the patterns and they find out where and when Harvey’s next attack will be. On the day of, Batman and Robin go to the location and wait for Two Face at the top of the bank. As Two-Face and his gang arrive, Batman and Robin jump down, stopping their robbery. It’s here that Batman and Two Face come face to face (s). When Batman sees it’s Harvey, he’s at a loss for words. He uses this to his advantage and shoots Batman, and runs off. He returns to Arkham the next day and tells Riddler that Batman has taken the bait, tomorrow the plan is to be executed. Robin gets Batman back to the cave and they decide to prepare for Harvey’s next attack. Bruce is still in shock and feels that Harvey’s turn is completely his fault. Tim tries to tell him that it isn’t, however Bruce doesn’t take it. Bruce sits outside, kneeling by his father’s grave. He apologizes for everything as Alfred talks to him. “I should’ve been there to stop it. I could’ve saved Dent,” Bruce Says. Alfred puts his hand on his shoulder, responding, “I understand your feelings master Wayne, though you can’t blame yourself for this. The Joker was unpredictable and there was nothing you could do.” “If I'd been there Alfred-” Bruce is cut off by Alfred, who just hugs him. “No matter what Master Wayne, Harvey’s downfall was inevitable. And I want you to know, I will always be proud of you, and so would your parents.” Alfred responds to Bruce. Bruce thanks Alfred for everything he said, just as Tim calls him in, explaining that he’s figured out where Harvey is attacking next. Bruce gets up and goes to the Batcave, telling Tim that if they’re going to Harvey, they will need some new gear. The next morning, Bruce stops by Lucius’ division at Wayne Enterprises and asks for a suit upgrade for himself, and Tim. Lucius shows Bruce the new suit he worked on for him, if the time ever came for it. Lucius gives Bruce and Tim the new suits he designed (They are designs based on the Arkham and Young Justice suits respectively). While there, Bruce and Tim meet Lucius’ son, Luke. That night, as Tim predicted, Two Face attacks [insert bank]. Batman and Robin use stealth to take down his men, leaving Harvey and Solomon Grundy. Batman pleads with Harvey, who refuses to listen, sending Grundy to attack him. Robin tries chasing after Two Face, though he is kidnapped. Grundy wipes the floor with Batman for a while, just long enough for Harvey to escape. Batman defeats Grundy by tricking him into a trap. Batman tracks Robin’s suit to Arkham Island. Batman sends the location to Gordon and the GCPD before going to Arkham. Batman slowly walks down Arkham’s hallway, seeing the guards lined up on the wall, under mind control. Batman then sees his entire rogues gallery in an empty room, designed to be a courtroom. All the other thugs locked up by Batman and Dent sit in the back, cheering the villains on. There, Robin is tied to a chair, before Batman is knocked out by Bane from behind. Bane ties Batman down as well, while Riddler explains what's going on. Batman is being put on trial. Robin is Batman’s lawyer, Dent is the prosecutor, the other rogues as the jury, and Joker as the judge. The trial goes on, as Gordon arrives on Arkham Island. Harvey and Robin go back and forth, with Robin pointing out that no matter if Batman existed or not, his enemies would be in the same place. The jury then begins making their decision, and comes to a verdict: Batman is not guilty. Two Face is enraged, throwing Joker to the ground, saying that he is the one who gets the final verdict. Harvey flips his coin, with Batman breaking free just in time, grabbing a handful of coins in his pockets and tossing them up. Harvey loses track of his coin, just as Batman throws a batarang at the mind control machine used by Riddler on the guards. Gordon gets into Arkham as he and the guards arrest all of the rogues. Batman requests that Dent is given special treatment for his personality disorder in Arkham. Bruce Wayne visits Dent a few months later, who is preparing to get surgery to fix his face. Dent is a changed man and is recovering back to his normal self. Bruce sits by his parent’s graves, as well as Jason’s. He mourns them just before Alfred alerts him that the Bat Signal was lit. Bruce suits up, driving off into the distance in the Batmobile.
you've got a LOT going on here. I suggest you write it all out into a script and keep making drafts of it. constant revisions that help focus everything and cut out what isn't necessary so you don't end up with a 4hr movie that feels like 6
My Perfect Superman Film Fan Casting: 1. David Corenswet As Clark Kent/Superman 2. Maya Hawke As Lois Lane 3. Jamie Campbell Bower As Lex Luthor 4. Tom Hanks As Jonathan Kent 5. Sally Field As Martha Kent 6. Tom Welling As Jor-El 7. Kristin Kreuk As Lara Lor-Van 8. Dakota Fanning As Chloe Sullivan 9. Jenna Dewan As Lana Lang 10. Carlon Jeffery As Pete Ross 11. Katherine Langford As Alicia Baker 12. Timothy V. Murphy As General Zod 13. Catherine Zeta-Jones As Ursa 14. Roselyn Sanchez As Faora-Ul 15. David Denman As Non 16. Noah Schnapp As Jimmy Olsen 17. Matthew Modine As General Lane 18. John Goodman As Perry White 19. Mackenzie Foy As Lucy Lane 20. Ethan Hawke As Lionel Luthor 21. Demi Moore As Lillian Luthor 22. Natalia Dyer As Lena Luthor (Lex's Little Sister) I would do a definitive origin film for the first Superman film & I would call it Man Of Tomorrow. I would make his power level Silver Age Superman.
Amazing! Amazing! I can’t wait to share Batman: Dying City with you all!
Proud to have been apart of this! Bring it on DC Prime 🔥
And so it begins.
The legend begins
This is a beautiful story. I love how Superman is hopeful and helps Livewire at the end but he isn’t a pushover not taking Luthor’s crap. Superman doesn’t have an ego while Lex does. Superman doesn’t do what he does for people to like them he does it because he knows it’s the right thing to do. And he wants to. Many heroes get their responsibility thrust upon them. Spider-Man, Batman, Flash but Superman chooses to do what he does. He’s the ultimate symbol of good parenting. I love how you used Livewire because in fan made stories it’s always Metallo and I myself have never thought of using Livewire. She’s a victim of Lex which helps us see the empathy of Superman.
exactly. this is my personally favorite video of mine
The start of something truly special. I love the passion you put into this pitch. I also really like the use of Livewire as one of the villains for the first installment since Livewire has always been an underrated villain to me and I love her being a former shock and jock podcaster who projects cynical, untrue and bitter viewpoints based on her own negative traits and life, which really juxtaposes against Clark and Lois as genuinely ethical and truthful reporters spreading the truth, which would really reflect today's generation of content creators selling out their own morals and spreading falsehoods and negativity. Looking forward to seeing the other DC Prime pitch videos. I hope to make my own pitch videos akin to this someday soon too
much love man. get those pitch videos out man 🙏
Your creation will gracefully emerge, illuminated by the light of day, to captivate the eyes of many.
This brought a tear to my eye
I love your characterization of Clark/Superman, Lois, and Lex and how it’s very faithful to the source material. Also, I’m really excited to see where this iteration of Superman goes next and how he interacts with the other characters like Batman and Wonder Woman. I’m especially interested in how he’ll react to meeting Kara Zor-El if he ever does, which I think he eventually will. There’s a lot of potential for this universe and where it can go and I’ve felt hope like this in the Tomorrowverse, but I know DC Prime will do better by the fans than the Tomorrowverse did. 9/10 I need more!
I can’t wait for the rest of them!❤
This whole project looks really promising
thanks dawg. i appreciate that
The start of something incredible right here
I hope one day to see Superman and Flash race.
yknow, with superman 2 being a political action flick, it wouldn’t be out of the realm of possibility to see them have a little fundraiser
Cinema is upon us
so hyped for Wonder Woman BOTG
That was beautiful
Is it 5 yet? I can’t wait.
Very talented! You are amazing!!!!
Soo good. I'm gonna be very direct, if the next superman film is half as charmfull as movie pitch we would be in a very good timeline.
Great stuff
big ups man. means a lot ✌️
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I get that your doing just scripts or pitches. But yall should actually do movies of them. Like you be the writer for this and all your friends and stuff can be actors and such.
making a superman fan film is a dream project of mine. i’d 100% be able to do it (i have experience working with actors from all around Michigan) but the budget is what’s stopping me. I very much so would be able to though
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I loved this this Is What Makes Superman Hopeful he's a beacon a symbol This Was a Good Pitch A good Film Hope all the best for this Universe can't wait Post credit Probably tresses a film you didn't say in your announcement
Can do a pitch video about dc Lobo with Jason momoa
mmmmmmmaybe 👀
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Can you provide feedback for my Batman pitch?
Act One:
Batman and Nightwing race to a warehouse where Jason Todd, the current Robin, is being tortured by the Joker. In the warehouse, Joker beats Jason to a bloody pulp, before leaving the warehouse which is rigged to blow. Harley Quinn watches in the corner, begging Joker to stop, however she is ignored. Joker and Harley escape the warehouse as Batman and Nightwing arrive only for the warehouse to explode, killing Jason. Batman runs inside, holding Jason’s lifeless body in his arms… Batman chases the Joker and begins to beat him to death, however Nightwing is able to calm him down. Jason is buried at Wayne Manor, next to his parent’s graves while Joker is locked up in Arkham Asylum. 2 years later… District Attorney Harvey Dent is set to put Joker on trial within the next week. In his office, he talks with Commissioner Gordon about the trial as Gordon thanks him for all his work in fixing this city. From afar, Batman listens in on the conversation and realizes that maybe, just maybe, Gotham may have its new protector in Harvey Dent. Batman takes off and goes to the Batcave to talk with Alfred. Alfred tells Batman that this could be his chance to retire while Dent locks up criminals left and right. Batman agrees with this, though deep down, he doesn’t want to retire, believing he has no other purpose in life. Tim Drake sits in his bedroom with newspapers about Batman and Bruce Wayne. He begins to put all the pieces together about Bruce Wayne being Batman after all. He also learns that Dick Grayson was the former Robin after watching a video of him do a move that only a member of the Flying Graysons could do. Tim also sees that ever since Robin disappeared, Batman has been darker and more violent. Tim decides to make himself noticed by Batman and try his best to become Robin, knowing Batman needs a Robin to keep himself in check. Harvey is having a nightmare about his father and how every decision his father made was determined by his signature coin. Harvey wakes up in a chair with his therapist standing over him. She asks him about the nightmare and Harvey explains it all. In the background, the news plays reporting on a kidnapping of a child. Harvey flips his coin to decide whether or not to go, ultimately landing on the decision to cut his therapy session short. Harvey drives to the scene and sees that a boy is being held captive in a building. Harvey flips his coin once more, which decides that he should go in to save the boy himself. Gordon tries to stop him but it’s too late. Simultaneously, Batman appears on the scene and also goes in to save the boy. Harvey comes face to face with the criminals and threatens them if they don’t release the boy. Instead, they aim their guns at Harvey before Batman jumps in and knocks the criminals out. The boy, revealed to be Tim Drake, quickly escapes the building. Batman thanks Dent for his bravery and everything he has done for the city before taking off, as the boy secretly places a tracker on the BatMobile to track Batman to the Batcave. In the Batcave, Batman and Alfred talk about Harvey once more, and Alfred says that Harvey is another reason for him to stick around as Bruce Wayne. Batman tries to deny this, however they hear a crash from nearby. Bruce and Alfred go to check it out and see Tim Drake snuck into the Batcave by hacking the security systems. Bruce is not happy about this and tells Tim Drake to leave. Tim refuses and talks to Bruce about everything he discovered. Alfred applauds his detective skills, but Batman is unamused and kicks him out. As Bruce walks back into the house, he notices that Tim took Jason’s suit. In his office, Dent talks to Gordon about the upcoming trial in a few days. Gordon assures Dent that he’ll make the right decision and that if the Joker makes a move, he’ll regret it. Harvey goes back for another therapy session with Ms. Davis and she asks him to speak with “Big Bad Harv.” Harvey’s split personalities are very different and Big Bad Harv begins to get aggressive when asked deep questions. When she asks him about his father he snaps, grabbing her by the throat before Harvey calms himself. Ms. Davis recommends he gets out and socialize more, making him more comfortable outside which could potentially make Big Bad Harv taking over less common. Harvey agrees to this and decides to call up an old friend. The next day, Bruce and Harvey have lunch together and catch up on life. Harvey and Bruce were friends since the 3rd grade, however lost contact shortly after Dent became District Attorney. Harvey tells him about his split personality disorder’s current state but says it’s getting better. Bruce decides to throw a party at Wayne Manor for Harvey. Harvey insists him not to, however Bruce says “it’s for old times sake.” Just as Harvey and Bruce prepare to leave, Bruce spots Tim again. Bruce quickly excuses himself before chasing after him. Tim makes it back to his apartment, however Bruce follows him there. That night, Bruce breaks into Tim’s house and demands Tim give the Robin costume back. Tim just begs Bruce to let him be Robin, but Bruce isn’t changing his mind. Just before Bruce can take the costume back, Tim’s police radio reports the Riddler has left a Riddle for Batman. Batman traces the signal to an abandoned building. Tim suits up as Robin and follows Batman to the building. Batman and Robin go to the scene, where Harvey and the police force are surrounding the building. Batman gets the note left behind which has a riddle on it (any riddle would work here). Before Batman can solve it, Tim intervenes, answering the riddle himself. Harvey, Gordon and even Batman are shocked by Tim’s intelligence, but their thoughts get cut short by the ticking bomb planted inside the building. Harvey flips his coin, and ends up rushing in to clear the building. Batman and Robin track the bomb’s specific location in the building and begin to disable it. They solve a handful of riddles before the case to the bomb opens up. Batman tries to solve the last riddle which will disable the bomb, however it’s too late and the bomb explodes. Batman and Robin are okay, but instantly go to Harvey, making sure he’s alright. Harvey is okay and was able to successfully get everyone out the building. Batman then looks at Robin and tells him to come with him. .
Act Two:
Batman takes Tim to the Batcave and tells him that he doesn’t appreciate him not following orders. Tim just tells Batman to let him become Robin, as Alfred steps into the conversation agreeing with Tim. Batman decides to give Tim a chance, but if he slips up once, he will be fired. Tim is ecstatic and thanks Bruce a thousand times over, with Alfred cracking a smile. The next day, 4 days up until the trial of the Joker, is Harvey’s party. Tim is in the Batcave the entire duration of the party, taking a look through all the information of the Bat Family. Bruce and Harvey hang out and talk about their opinions on Batman. Of course, Bruce pretends to be against Batman, however Harvey is very positive about him and has many good things to say. This secretly pleases Bruce which makes him really believe that Batman is making a difference. Bruce then runs into Gordon and his daughter, Barbara. Bruce starts to talk with them before Alfred calls him down to the Batcave. Alfred informs him that the Riddler has made another statement requesting Batman come and find him. Batman takes Tim out on their first official mission together to take down the Riddler. At the same time, Gordon and Dent also take off to the scene with the GCPD. Batman and Robin arrive where Riddler told them to go and take down all of his henchmen. They solve one final riddle, which opens up the room where Riddler was hiding in. Batman interrogates the Riddler and learns that Batman’s greatest foes have all teamed up and are working under one leading man. Batman knocks Riddler out and takes him to Gordon. He informs Gordon and Dent about what the Riddler told him, telling them to keep a lookout. As Harvey goes in to arrest the Riddler’s henchmen, one of them spits on him and begins to trash talk him. Harvey’s alternate personality comes out and he starts beating the man down. Everyone around him begins to record videos of him doing so just before Gordon stops him. The next day, the videos of Dent go viral, causing many to reconsider their faith in him. Bruce hears of this and starts worrying a lot about Harvey’s well being. Harvey and Ms. Davis talk once more as she tells him that he really needs to keep Big Bad Harv in check. Suddenly, Harvey’s sanity slips and Big Bad Harv takes over. After hearing what Ms. Davis said he gets enraged and attacks her, throwing her out of the window. The police investigate the scene and find an unconscious Harvey in the building. Harvey is clueless about what happened, however he is still the top suspect for the murder. Harvey and Gordon become distant due to his bad image at the moment. Harvey is then called by the Attorney General, who informs him that after the Joker’s trial, he’s being let off the hook due to the controversies surrounding him. Harvey screams out and throws a glass, cutting his cheek. Harvey swears to himself that in his last days as district attorney, he will lock up Gotham’s most wanted criminals alongside Batman. Harvey picks up on a sighting of Bane and lights the Bat Signal. Batman and Robin arrive at the GCPD where Harvey informs Batman about the sighting of Bane. Batman talks to Harvey about his mental state and asks about his status as district attorney being lost. Harvey refuses to talk about it and tells Batman the last sighting of Bane. Batman and Robin go to the location where Bane was spotted and finds him waiting for them. Bane attacks Batman and Robin, using the venom drug to his advantage. Batman is outmatched by Bane, however Robin is able to cut his tubes loose allowing Batman to knock him out. Bane is tied up to a chair as the dynamic duo leave. In the next 2 days, Batman, Robin and Dent take down Clayface, Scarecrow, Poison Ivy and Killer Croc, having them locked up in Arkham Asylum. As Batman turns in Killer Croc, he speaks with Dent one more time, thanking him for everything. Harvey returns the respect as Batman glides off the GCPD rooftop. Sunday, October 31st, 2:30 P.M. Harvey arrives in the courthouse, coming face to face with the Joker for the first time ever. As the trial proceeds, Bruce and Alfred watch the security cameras from the Batcave. Bruce runs a face scan on everyone in the room, however Joker’s lawyer matches the face of one, Harleen Quinnzel. Bruce alerts Alfred, and prepares the Batsuit. After Harvey comes to his conclusion, the jury have their conversation. While Harvey stands in place, the Joker begins to egg Harvey on, causing Big Bad Harv to take over, leading to a violent breakout in the courtroom. Joker suddenly pulls something out of his pocket and sprays Harvey in the face with it, as it turns out to be acid. Harvey falls to the ground as Batman breaks into the courthouse and stops the pandemonium. Joker is restrained by Gordon while Batman defeats Harley. Out of nowhere, the police attack Batman, revealed to be working under Joker. Together, Gordon and Batman take the corrupt cops down, however a number of them get away. Harvey gets rushed to the hospital as Batman delivers Harvey’s coin to him, apologizing for everything. Harvey wakes a day later to see Gordon sitting at his bedside. Gordon explains what happened, as Harvey is unable to remember. Harvey is enraged that Gordon had men on his squad that were corrupt. Gordon and Harvey get into an argument before Gordon is asked to leave by a nurse. Harvey asks the nurse to hand him a mirror, although she is hesitant, she gives him one. Harvey screams out in anger, shattering the small mirror. The nurse asks him if he's alright, however he pushes her and makes a run for it out of the hospital. The hospital staff chase after him, as he escapes into a sewer. Bruce sits in the Batcave with Alfred and Tim, feeling as if he has failed Dent, as he did Jason Todd. Tim and Alfred talk it out with Bruce, trying to assure the accident wasn’t his fault, though Bruce isn’t as convinced. In the sewer, he meets Solomon Grundy. Grundy hands Dent a recording of a nursery rhyme: “Christened on Tuesday, Married on Wednesday, Took ill on Thursday, Grew worse on Friday, Died on Saturday, Buried on Sunday, That was the end, Of Solomon Grundy.” Harvey laughs to himself, flipping his coin, now scarred on one side. He smiles at Grundy as they say, in unison, “Born on a Mondee.”
Act Three:
After a few days, Harvey is deemed missing and Bruce feels as if it’s his obligation to find him. That night, Batman and Robin investigate the outside of the hospital where Harvey was last seen. This leads them into the sewer as they take a look around. At the same time, Harvey, now calling himself Two Face, and Solomon Grundy hit Carmine Falcone’s mob bank. Just as they escape the bank, Alfred alarms Batman and Robin about the robbery. The pair take off right before Grundy and Two Face return to their home in the sewer. Batman and Robin arrive at the crime scene too late, as he begins gathering clues about the robberies and Harvey’s disappearance. Over the next month, Harvey hits more banks, climbing the ranks of crime bosses in Gotham. The public still is unaware that Harvey has been committing the robberies, just believing he was killed. One day, when Grundy and Dent are robbing another mob bank before he notices a note left for him, leading him to Arkham Asylum. Harvey breaks into Arkham, leaving Grundy behind due to his sheer size and unstealthy nature. Harvey sees that the guards are seemingly under mind control, as they are all lined up on a wall. Harvey enters and sees Harley, Riddler, Killer Croc and every criminal he locked up with Batman. The Riddler explains that he created a device and used it to disable the guard’s ability to stop their plan. Harvey asks what they want just as Joker steps into the light, laughing maniacally. Harvey grabs Joker, preparing to kill him, though Croc holds him back. Riddler tells him to give them a chance to explain everything, as they sit Harvey down. Batman and Robin take a look at the pattern of Two Face’s attacks and notice the dates they are on and the locations. With help from Alfred, Robin points on the patterns and they find out where and when Harvey’s next attack will be. On the day of, Batman and Robin go to the location and wait for Two Face at the top of the bank. As Two-Face and his gang arrive, Batman and Robin jump down, stopping their robbery. It’s here that Batman and Two Face come face to face (s). When Batman sees it’s Harvey, he’s at a loss for words. He uses this to his advantage and shoots Batman, and runs off. He returns to Arkham the next day and tells Riddler that Batman has taken the bait, tomorrow the plan is to be executed. Robin gets Batman back to the cave and they decide to prepare for Harvey’s next attack. Bruce is still in shock and feels that Harvey’s turn is completely his fault. Tim tries to tell him that it isn’t, however Bruce doesn’t take it. Bruce sits outside, kneeling by his father’s grave. He apologizes for everything as Alfred talks to him.
“I should’ve been there to stop it. I could’ve saved Dent,” Bruce Says.
Alfred puts his hand on his shoulder, responding, “I understand your feelings master Wayne, though you can’t blame yourself for this. The Joker was unpredictable and there was nothing you could do.”
“If I'd been there Alfred-” Bruce is cut off by Alfred, who just hugs him.
“No matter what Master Wayne, Harvey’s downfall was inevitable. And I want you to know, I will always be proud of you, and so would your parents.” Alfred responds to Bruce.
Bruce thanks Alfred for everything he said, just as Tim calls him in, explaining that he’s figured out where Harvey is attacking next. Bruce gets up and goes to the Batcave, telling Tim that if they’re going to Harvey, they will need some new gear. The next morning, Bruce stops by Lucius’ division at Wayne Enterprises and asks for a suit upgrade for himself, and Tim. Lucius shows Bruce the new suit he worked on for him, if the time ever came for it. Lucius gives Bruce and Tim the new suits he designed (They are designs based on the Arkham and Young Justice suits respectively). While there, Bruce and Tim meet Lucius’ son, Luke. That night, as Tim predicted, Two Face attacks [insert bank]. Batman and Robin use stealth to take down his men, leaving Harvey and Solomon Grundy. Batman pleads with Harvey, who refuses to listen, sending Grundy to attack him. Robin tries chasing after Two Face, though he is kidnapped. Grundy wipes the floor with Batman for a while, just long enough for Harvey to escape. Batman defeats Grundy by tricking him into a trap. Batman tracks Robin’s suit to Arkham Island. Batman sends the location to Gordon and the GCPD before going to Arkham. Batman slowly walks down Arkham’s hallway, seeing the guards lined up on the wall, under mind control. Batman then sees his entire rogues gallery in an empty room, designed to be a courtroom. All the other thugs locked up by Batman and Dent sit in the back, cheering the villains on. There, Robin is tied to a chair, before Batman is knocked out by Bane from behind. Bane ties Batman down as well, while Riddler explains what's going on. Batman is being put on trial. Robin is Batman’s lawyer, Dent is the prosecutor, the other rogues as the jury, and Joker as the judge. The trial goes on, as Gordon arrives on Arkham Island. Harvey and Robin go back and forth, with Robin pointing out that no matter if Batman existed or not, his enemies would be in the same place. The jury then begins making their decision, and comes to a verdict: Batman is not guilty. Two Face is enraged, throwing Joker to the ground, saying that he is the one who gets the final verdict. Harvey flips his coin, with Batman breaking free just in time, grabbing a handful of coins in his pockets and tossing them up. Harvey loses track of his coin, just as Batman throws a batarang at the mind control machine used by Riddler on the guards. Gordon gets into Arkham as he and the guards arrest all of the rogues. Batman requests that Dent is given special treatment for his personality disorder in Arkham. Bruce Wayne visits Dent a few months later, who is preparing to get surgery to fix his face. Dent is a changed man and is recovering back to his normal self. Bruce sits by his parent’s graves, as well as Jason’s. He mourns them just before Alfred alerts him that the Bat Signal was lit. Bruce suits up, driving off into the distance in the Batmobile.
you've got a LOT going on here. I suggest you write it all out into a script and keep making drafts of it. constant revisions that help focus everything and cut out what isn't necessary so you don't end up with a 4hr movie that feels like 6
@@fakehappyfilms Im working on the editing of my draft including dialogue now.
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My Perfect Superman Film Fan Casting:
1. David Corenswet As Clark Kent/Superman
2. Maya Hawke As Lois Lane
3. Jamie Campbell Bower As Lex Luthor
4. Tom Hanks As Jonathan Kent
5. Sally Field As Martha Kent
6. Tom Welling As Jor-El
7. Kristin Kreuk As Lara Lor-Van
8. Dakota Fanning As Chloe Sullivan
9. Jenna Dewan As Lana Lang
10. Carlon Jeffery As Pete Ross
11. Katherine Langford As Alicia Baker
12. Timothy V. Murphy As General Zod
13. Catherine Zeta-Jones As Ursa
14. Roselyn Sanchez As Faora-Ul
15. David Denman As Non
16. Noah Schnapp As Jimmy Olsen
17. Matthew Modine As General Lane
18. John Goodman As Perry White
19. Mackenzie Foy As Lucy Lane
20. Ethan Hawke As Lionel Luthor
21. Demi Moore As Lillian Luthor
22. Natalia Dyer As Lena Luthor (Lex's Little Sister)
I would do a definitive origin film for the first Superman film & I would call it Man Of Tomorrow. I would make his power level Silver Age Superman.
too many stranger things actors here and “man of tomorrow” is really overused. other than that, i like it. you’ve got something good here