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@@skinnyj123”I hate you 3000. I. Am. Doom. Erm… that sounded a lot better in my head” then Chris Evans as a Hydra Captain America variant appears and gets his shit rocked and is like “i actually CAN’T do this all day.”
I think Dooms motive should be less selfish, maybe he views the multiverse as chaotic and wants to create a singular world for the sake of the wellbeing of others
Great pitch although I wouldn't have killed off Thor or American Chavez, maybe that scene have the Avengers all seriously injured virtually dead maybe one or two dead like Ant-Man or Captain Marvel, with Strange at the feet of Doom (kinda like Secret Wars in the comics teasing the upcoming movie) and idk how but maybe have a Loki arc
Yeah Loki gotta be in the arc somewhere and the most likely scenario is him, Hunter, and Ouroborous are the ones who build the Ark that saves as many as possible.
Nah save Loki for secret wars. When all the branches of the multiverse die and 616 is made as the singular timeline, we see a final shot at the end of the movie, camera moves closer forward through dead branches,, imitating the ending of Loki, then we see a dead corpse of a man with a double painted crown, Loki dies
Evil Black Widow: you can’t defeat me, I survived Vurmir😜 Hydra cap: I can’t do this all day Doctor doom: I hate you 3000 Maestro Hulk: THE SUNS GETTING REALLY HIGH RIGHT ABOUT NOW
Dr. Doom is a refugee from the dimension featured in the upcoming Fantastic Four movie. He is a native of that reality, while the Fantastic Four were stranded there but originally belong to the 616 universe. Doom blames Reed Richards and, by extension, the 616 universe for the destruction of his home reality. Galactus destroyed Doom's reality as it collapsed during an incursion. Galactus, tracking Franklin Richards' energy across dimensions, seeks to consume his celestial power. Meanwhile, Doom has been slowly building a base of power in the shadows for years. He arrived in the 616 universe chronologically earlier than the Fantastic Four. Operating behind the scenes, Doom has been the benefactor hinted at in Ant-Man and the Wasp. He is secretly funding Wilson Fisk's political campaign in New York City and manipulating events to his advantage. Doom inadvertently created Kang when he used his Time Platform to cross realities. He has also been stealing magical artifacts and powerful items, including spell books from Agatha's coven and Kamar-Taj, as well as all the MacGuffin items from phases 4 and 5 (such as the Ten Rings, Quantum Bands, Darkhold, Ebony Blade, and shards of the Necrosword). Doom steals adamantium to upgrade his armor, as it can absorb radiation, and Stark technology to enhance his weaponry. He also takes the designs for Vision and/or Ultron to create an army of Doombots to invade Wakanda and Atlantis, with the goal of stealing vibranium. By integrating both vibranium and adamantium into his armor, Doom can absorb any energy directed at him. He then escalates his power by stealing Wanda's abilities, kidnapping Franklin to drain his power, and abducting the Silver Surfer to harness his cosmic energy. As the heroes prepare to fend off Galactus, Doom intervenes, channeling Galactus' own power back against him and feeding on his cosmic energy. Now a universal threat, Doom seeks out and confronts the Council of Kangs and Loki.
This is a really great version for the movie, although like in the comics, I would make Doom less selfish and more focused on saving the Multiverse in his own way. Why ? Because I would include the Beyonders as what starts the implosion of the Multiverse and Doom's creation of the Battleworld an actual way of saving the Multiverse from them "New mask, same task" = Doom finds out about the Beyonders and the incursions they are causing and works with Strange and Clea (After MoM ending) to find a way to stop them. I would keep Doom's origins similar to the comics and make his quest for the Multiverse something good at the same time his huge ego not only stops the Avengers' way of saving the Multiverse but also makes Battleworld his own personal heaven where he makes himself God The 2015 Secret Wars show how the Avengers actually failed to save everything from the Beyonders, and for better or for worse, Doom was the one who saved them, and I feel this is absolutely vital for his character, since Doom seeks to conquer the world because he sees himself as fit for the role and the thing is, he's right The sensation of fighting someone who's right, who has proven to be a better protector for the Multiverse then the Avengers, is what would make this movie feel completely different, different from Thanos who was obviously wrong and easy to picture as the villain
Awesome, but one thing I think that you should include somehow is Loki, who seems pretty pivotal in this whole multiverse. Perhaps Doom wants to claim his power in order to bind the worlds, just like how he siphoned the Beyonder’s power in the comics to make Battleworld.
I think Loki should appear in a scene at the end showing a confrontation between him and doom. Doom manages to get Loki to let go of the timelines so he can merge them as but can’t kill him realizing that would cause every universe to die including battleworld. Loki says that doom won’t get away with it and observes the ensuing fight for secret wars
You managed to make a seemingly unsalvageable project and give me hope for it. Bravo. I’m sure Marvel will find a way to do nothing like this. That being said, the only thing I’d change is Spider-Man being on the team by the beginning. I’d imagine him having an introduction similar to Infinity War where he just shows up to help out and ends up being pulled along for the ride
I love this pitch. It's how I'd imagine the film to go, and I didn't even know what to expect. Although I'd have Spider Man be a prominent character alongside Sam and Reed since he's close to Stark. Perhaps before the incursions, Peter has to kill Doom, but he doesn't because his memories of Stark are too much. This causes the multiverse to collapse, and in the end, Sam, Reed, and Peter, even Doctor Strange, feel responsible for the creation of Battleworld and the end of their universes. Other than that, I love it👍
Bro how did I miss this this been out for 6 hours!!! My notifications buggin💀anyways you cooked with this pitch 🔥🔥 really like how you wrote the Avengers & FF ( especially Sam and Reed conflict) also the idea to make Doom not a variant of Toney was good ( hope they do the same in the actual movie because the last thing I want his them making a bunch of crony jokes about how he looks like toney )
@@fakehappyfilms yeah I agree you think you will make a pitch for Secret wars one day too if so you gotta add Loki god of story’s in there him and thor reunion is gonna be cool to see
@@AaidnShortFilms i’ll do secret wars video eventually. that’s a daunting task. i believe next up is spider-man 4. that was supposed to come out but the rdoomj news came out and i was like “damn”
3:00 hot take: she hulk should be the new brute of the team, this could be a way to make her better and actually adapt her in a way we want and just redeem her in general for audiences to wanna watch she hulk Edit: to everyone that disagrees, the creator agrees and that’s all I need
Great pitch. The only thing I would critique is when banner does finally become hulk, the hulk wins whatever fight he takes on. I don’t think it would mean that much if the the hulk comes back like everyone wants and then immediately loses.
My idea is to bring Wanda back in this movie and she and Doom have a big fight and he ends up stealing her powers to create battleworld just like he did the beyonder in the comics
This is really good some leaks that just got announced is that Doctor Strange and Spider Man will be the focus for Secret Wars so i would love to see a part 2 that uses a bunch of the new leaks
I was about to hate until you gave me two of the best moment of my life Hulk returning to get a w I literally cried happy tears as if I was watching the actual movie and also Sam feeling down about being cap because I want him to take the serum and and embody what Steve saw in him in the beginning or middle of secret wars and also o think secret wars should have a part 1 and Part 2
This is 🔥. Doom hunting the 4 through the multiverse would tie into the fact we’ve seen so many of them getting offed in gruesome ways. Doom could be pulling the strings so they they die indirectly or directly
@@fakehappyfilms like I imagine Wanda pulls up on the illuminati there’s an empty chair because maybe a variant Stark was supposed to be there (possibly superior iron man maybe even Tom Cruise or RDJ himself ) but he gets attacked and killed by Doom before he could get there to help . Or doom destroys an entire timeline forcing Evans Johnny the lone survivor into the Void . Or even Doom being involved in the x men of Deadpool and Wolverines deaths. Also I can’t remember her name but Charlize Theron when she appears to Strange to recruit him they could be possibly exploring this Doom threat . They already have a Doom in fortnite (they went as far as to make the Tony Stark skin who’s beneath Dooms mask ) who offed a bunch of heroes including the 4 and apparently due to Galactus being a nexus being Feige is considering it canon even showing the F4 cast fortnite Galactus . But hey You wrote it man and it could easily be incorporated into what they got going imo . 🔥 pitch felt like I was watching a movie listening .
@fakehappyfilms Well, that goes without saying. I'd just like to have more clarity on pocket dimensions and those who dwell within those pocket dimensions.
I enjoyed your take. I hope Sam and Reed are our leads based upon your script, I hold that was the problem with phases 4 and 5; No anchor characters. I don't care for the RDJ as Doom thing either but let's see what they do... I guess
One change I'd make, a minor one - instead of the Avengers Facility, Avengers Mansion. I don't care how you justify it or who you wanna say financed if, maybe Stark Industries, whatever, but the Avengers Facility being destroyed gives us an opportunity, perhaps the last opportunity, to FINALLY see their most iconic headquarters.
This pitch is good but I feel like it needs the involvement of the TVA and multiversal characters that are integral to the plot like Wolverine and Tobeys Spiderman
@@Gael-qk5gw wolverine and tobey’s spider-man are 100% a secret wars thing, not a doomsday thing. doomsday is probably just for like, another avengers movie. secret wars will be the insane one
@@JonathanVegaa chris hemsworth is just about done with thor and evangeline lily retired. wasp probably won’t be back because of this. thanks for watching tho. i appreciate that
@@fakehappyfilms I think she’d come back for this if it was offered or maybe have it as her and Scott to be the ones that die i would like if the ant man of post secret wars to be a young Hank pym and Janete van dyne and Chris Hemsworth said that’s he’s willing to keep coming back for Thor and there’s still plenty of good stories to tell with Thor
Awesome video: 1. Hemsworth actually said himself he’d want to play Thor as long as he can. 2. You did that Thor and New Asgard gave the best fight to doom but then say he dies and Antman too? Thought that was a bit off. 3. America Chavez (and Thor for that matter) is said to be key in Secret Wars. 4. So is what I’m getting at accurate with dooms motives? Reed failed to protect their world, leaving Doom’s face disfigured. Due to that, he now goes and to every universe killing every version of the fantastic four? Yeah you could say dooms doing it bc he thinks he could do it better than Reed but, idk.. what I’m hearing going around is Doom believes he is saving the multiverse by merging them all into one. Now where that initial motivation comes from? I don’t know. Maybe can do with his mom or getting her back. Not sure. 5. Doctor Strange was last seen in the multiverse with clea, so his movie works have to take place before doomsday. Otherwise it wouldn’t really make sense. 6. I also noticed you didn’t mention anchor beings in this video. Maybe you’ll save that for the Secret wars pitch but yeah just something I caught, and wonder he they’ll use that as part of the story 7. Loved a lot of this video. Especially the thunderbolts and sentry intro. Don’t see those as nitpicks. Very minute things. This was really good brother.
What about The Wasp? I know Evangeline Lilly said she was retiring, but im willing to bet she does come back and or we need a recast. We need The Wasp!
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Cool video but wanted to share some notes: 1. Doom's character and plan is a bit unclear. I'm pretty sure I understand him blaming Reed for the destruction of his people and wanting to kill the FF but where does the motivation for protecting the multiverse by merging it come from? Why does he bother exerting resources on different universes when they're not the FF hes looking for? Why is he choosing specific universes to bring into his incursion and not others? Wouldnt this condrict the idea of him proving he can protect life better than Reed if hes just willing to pick and choose what universes stay and go? Also, why does he want to specifically travel to 616 to make the incursion machine? If these are questions to be answered in a secret wars pitch then that'd be kind of a shame since I just think it would've been better structured to lay out his character in Doomsday first. 2. Obviously not your fault but this pitch kinda shows why Rdj doom is almost inherently flawed. Besides the awful Romani erasure, there's not much you can get from a narrative/emotional level besides one or two scenes of "I can't believe he looks like Tony" and even then it doesn't matter much since it's not him. Again, having to work with rdj doom is a nightmare that you didn't decide so it's fine. 3. 7:48 dont want to be mean but this is honestly a major flaw with this approach to the multiverse. It becomes meaningless and repetitive. You can't really comprehend the difference when going more than one universe being taken over since it just becomes numbers that we don't connect to. I can't help but compare this to Thanos. The reason why he worked so effectively is that he was actively hurting the characters we liked and killed half of the universe that we actually knew. This kinda just doesnt work when you have it so that Doom invaded hundreds of worlds instead of focusing on the ones that actually matter. The best parts of this is when Doom is interacting with the heroes we know and is in 616. 4. Small nitpick but why is Spider-Man part of the avengers after nwh? It's just seems a little weird considering how he left off in a place of isolation. Also I'd wonder if the other avengers are fine with having a member who doesn't show their identity. Not much of a problem though. 5. It's a little strange that the Thunderbolts were waiting around the whole time. Why did they choose to reveal themselves at the end of the 2nd act instead of working with them before that? Did they have another mission they were doing? Just pretty odd. 6. Doctor Strange seems to have been affected by the Darkhold after using it and kept its powers. I think it's a bit of a missed opportunity to not expand on that here, maybe even making comparisons to Doom's own dark sorcery. 7. The Avengers seem to have a large stretch where they aren't given much to do plotwise when they go from fighting some Doombots in the 1st act to fighting Doom near the end of the 2nd. 8. Wanted to end this positively by saying I still like stuff from this video. I especially think the general idea of the Thunderbolts serving as a turning point for the heroes is pretty cool. I also understand that this is just a ptich and not everything has to be in depth. None of these notes were meant as insults just wanted to share some feedback. I'm looking forward to more pitches from the channel and hope that you have good success. ✌️
Damn I loved this pitch. Nice work! My only complaint is that Thor died before being reunited with Loki and before paying off the joke in DP+W but other than that it was great. Can you do a follow up one for Secret Wars?
I still feel like this Doom should just be a variant or something like that. Having Doctor Doom simply just be evil Iron Man undermines his entire character, and there should be a main timeline Doom revealed. No matter how original RDJ is as Doom, it won’t distract from the fact that he is the face of Iron Man, and they’re bringing him back merely because of nostalgia bait. The main timeline Doom should be Cillian Murphy or something like that, no more 60+ year olds.
i agree with the casting choice being a mistake, but i dont think he'll be an evil iron man. he'll be doom, just played by RDJ. the example i used in the video was essentially if Willem Dafoe was cast in the MCU as someone who isn't norman osborn
I kind of like this idea, though, i don't think they're going this direction for the movie because I feel like The Avengers are going to basically assemble at the end of the movie as a last stand of similar to the first Avengers movie and then the incursions that make battle world happen or something.
@@fakehappyfilms, thanks. Oh, could you make a video pitching Tom Holland's Spider-Man 4 because I'd love to see your view on it for a street level version or a multiverse version, or both, please.
@@Mr.BrokenRecord that’s actually the video i’m writing as we speak. it’ll probably be more street level but i’m toying with the idea of doing a live action spider verse film as well
@@elviamartinez7628 just waiting on their email. i sent them one asking if i could make blade since they can’t get it together but they never got back to me :(
I'm one of those people who had no real issue with She-Hulk. I thought Tatiana Maslany was an amazing choice and I completely understood the direction the show was trying to go. I don't think it was bad at all but if I'm being fair, some writing in the show could've been better but beyond that, I think it was a good show. I hope she comes back.
@@fakehappyfilms I don't blame her either. Some criticisms of the show are justified but most of the complaints I hear have more to do with her leading a project. If we're being honest, women led projects get hate before the project is dropped. I don't know why that's the case.
@@fakehappyfilms That's fair to say and maybe Furiosa was Gassed but that doesn't change the fact that people pray that most women lead blockbusters bomb. And I'm not saying a majority of people say that but sometimes a movie bombs but the movie isn't bad.
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I agree with 'She-Hulk'. The writing on the show was terrible, but the actress was good in the role, and could work in a team, with better writers behind her.
This wouldn't have been my ideal roster, but this is probably not too far from what we're gonna get. Good pitch, all things considered. I'd leave Daredevil out of this, and put Joaquin's Falcon, Shuri, Wasp, Kamala and maybe Kate on the team. I'd have Scott and Hope die together, and leave Thor alive for Secret Wars.
@@maninthetrenchcoat5603 i’ve thought about this actually. i completely forgot about the new falcon, shuri im saving for secret wars, evangeline lily said she’s not acting anymore, then kamala and kate are saved for young avengers. i think killing thor here was the right move. it established doom’s power level right away. thanks for watching tho man!
@fakehappyfilms I'd have Wasp keep her helmet on the whole time, and get a voice impressionist, probably Alexandra Daddario after her work with other characters in What If, and just kill her off then. Hope's a nothing character, but the Wasp at least deserves a sendoff. And I'm doubtful we're even gonna get Young Avengers, so this at least gives Kamala and Kate something to do. As for Thor, using him as a power play makes sense, but Thor is such a well established character that he needs to have the absolute best death possible for his tenure in the MCU to be satisfying.
@@dimitrescu182 full honesty, i was kinda obligated to use them. they’ve been confirmed to be appearing in the movie. i guess you can assume the portals would be open for a bit longer than they were in DS:MOM
i love america chavez. but i think it would really show that doom will kill anyone who gets in his way. shes also the one taking the avengers through the multiverse, so doom tried to strand them
This is okay but you didn’t really storyboard it properly. What I mean is in comic movies think of certain scenes like a splash page that propel plot points forward. Like when the Thunderbolts arrive it would have been better for them to be losing, have the Thunderbolts arrive, Strange say something like we’re gonna need more them just super soldier to beat these guys, then have the Sentry appear and wipe out a bunch of Doom bots. When all seems clear, Sam ask Bucky how does he know he can trusts his new friends, at which point one last Doom bot attacks and an arrow pinpoints it with a bomb and blows it up, at which point Hawkeye reveals himself and says trust me you can trusts them I’ve already vetted them thoroughly. Ylana can have a joke about not knowing how her sister put up with how pedantic Barton is. Also killing Thor is a no go because he’s just too powerful and killing Scott is too predictable. You can kill She Hulk and have that be a catalysts to having Savage Hulk return. Also the film should start with Sam actually training a group of new Avengers for a rescue mission in coordination with Dr. Strange and America Chavez to rescue Monica from Earth 818 or whatever Earth that was since that plot point has to get tied up as well. And they also need to use the idea of a Rescue Ark from the comics at the end to get them to Battleworld because that is why when they arrive they will be able to remember the past whereas the rest of the people living there just always thought Battleworld existed.
@@Byronic19134 bro i was NOT about to make the beat sheet, write an entire 90-120 page screenplay, then make a storyboard. i do that enough with my day job as a screenwriter/director lmao. this is just for fun
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I'll make this quick. This video was copyright claimed for the music in it, so the audio is gonna sound muffled now. Nothing I can do about it. This just sucks.
Feels bad man you did goodjob
“I hate you 3000, Spider-Man😈😈👹👹”
Clearly you've made an omelette 😈
@@skinnyj123”I hate you 3000. I. Am. Doom. Erm… that sounded a lot better in my head” then Chris Evans as a Hydra Captain America variant appears and gets his shit rocked and is like “i actually CAN’T do this all day.”
The crowd would probably go wild if he said this and it would make 4 Avengillion dollars
War machine: Boom you looking for this? *opens portal to the fantastic 4*
Doom: another four? Fantastic...
Reed: Say that again...
Absolute cinema
RDJ being savage 💀
Okay this was epic , if the film we get is just as good as this , then we’re gonna be eating good and marvel will get back on its feet ( hopefully).
still waiting for their email
@@fakehappyfilms I know the feeling
it is a good story but I noticed one big problem that he didnt include the TVA.
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I think Dooms motive should be less selfish, maybe he views the multiverse as chaotic and wants to create a singular world for the sake of the wellbeing of others
@@Gumpified25 probably safe to assume he’s merging everything into one world because he believes he can’t protect it more than reed could
@@Gumpified25 only thing is that’s very similar to thanos
@@Gumpified25 leading into his creation of battleworld
Doom’s motivation is selfish though he just acts like he’s not. His whole character is driven by trauma and the inability to not be the one in charge.
Great pitch although I wouldn't have killed off Thor or American Chavez, maybe that scene have the Avengers all seriously injured virtually dead maybe one or two dead like Ant-Man or Captain Marvel, with Strange at the feet of Doom (kinda like Secret Wars in the comics teasing the upcoming movie) and idk how but maybe have a Loki arc
Yeah Loki gotta be in the arc somewhere and the most likely scenario is him, Hunter, and Ouroborous are the ones who build the Ark that saves as many as possible.
Nah save Loki for secret wars. When all the branches of the multiverse die and 616 is made as the singular timeline, we see a final shot at the end of the movie, camera moves closer forward through dead branches,, imitating the ending of Loki, then we see a dead corpse of a man with a double painted crown, Loki dies
I mean Thor can do a heroic sacrifice by now but America that’s just sad
Evil Black Widow: you can’t defeat me, I survived Vurmir😜
Hydra cap: I can’t do this all day
Doctor doom: I hate you 3000
Maestro Hulk: THE SUNS GETTING REALLY HIGH RIGHT ABOUT NOW
Dr. Doom is a refugee from the dimension featured in the upcoming Fantastic Four movie. He is a native of that reality, while the Fantastic Four were stranded there but originally belong to the 616 universe. Doom blames Reed Richards and, by extension, the 616 universe for the destruction of his home reality. Galactus destroyed Doom's reality as it collapsed during an incursion. Galactus, tracking Franklin Richards' energy across dimensions, seeks to consume his celestial power.
Meanwhile, Doom has been slowly building a base of power in the shadows for years. He arrived in the 616 universe chronologically earlier than the Fantastic Four. Operating behind the scenes, Doom has been the benefactor hinted at in Ant-Man and the Wasp. He is secretly funding Wilson Fisk's political campaign in New York City and manipulating events to his advantage.
Doom inadvertently created Kang when he used his Time Platform to cross realities. He has also been stealing magical artifacts and powerful items, including spell books from Agatha's coven and Kamar-Taj, as well as all the MacGuffin items from phases 4 and 5 (such as the Ten Rings, Quantum Bands, Darkhold, Ebony Blade, and shards of the Necrosword).
Doom steals adamantium to upgrade his armor, as it can absorb radiation, and Stark technology to enhance his weaponry. He also takes the designs for Vision and/or Ultron to create an army of Doombots to invade Wakanda and Atlantis, with the goal of stealing vibranium. By integrating both vibranium and adamantium into his armor, Doom can absorb any energy directed at him.
He then escalates his power by stealing Wanda's abilities, kidnapping Franklin to drain his power, and abducting the Silver Surfer to harness his cosmic energy. As the heroes prepare to fend off Galactus, Doom intervenes, channeling Galactus' own power back against him and feeding on his cosmic energy.
Now a universal threat, Doom seeks out and confronts the Council of Kangs and Loki.
Ngl my brother cooked here, umma need a pitch on Gunn’s Superman with set photos n everything we know that would be dope
@@litcomicsproductions5359 an updated version of the one i already made? could be interesting
This pitch is genius and might be close to what we get at least the idea of the Fantastic Four going to 616 after Galactus destroyed their planet.
This is a really great version for the movie, although like in the comics, I would make Doom less selfish and more focused on saving the Multiverse in his own way. Why ? Because I would include the Beyonders as what starts the implosion of the Multiverse and Doom's creation of the Battleworld an actual way of saving the Multiverse from them
"New mask, same task" = Doom finds out about the Beyonders and the incursions they are causing and works with Strange and Clea (After MoM ending) to find a way to stop them. I would keep Doom's origins similar to the comics and make his quest for the Multiverse something good at the same time his huge ego not only stops the Avengers' way of saving the Multiverse but also makes Battleworld his own personal heaven where he makes himself God
The 2015 Secret Wars show how the Avengers actually failed to save everything from the Beyonders, and for better or for worse, Doom was the one who saved them, and I feel this is absolutely vital for his character, since Doom seeks to conquer the world because he sees himself as fit for the role and the thing is, he's right
The sensation of fighting someone who's right, who has proven to be a better protector for the Multiverse then the Avengers, is what would make this movie feel completely different, different from Thanos who was obviously wrong and easy to picture as the villain
Do secret wars next please
ive been thinking of some ideas
@@fakehappyfilms do it we all want it
Bro I was just listening to some music then I saw that you posted this and immediately tapped on it
@@-Iwill thats what’s up! thanks man!
Amazing. Do Secret Wars next. And don’t forget about Loki & the TVA. They NEED to play an important role in this one & Doom NEEDS to be God Emperor
Damn bro, u deserve alot more subs. These are some quality videos
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Awesome, but one thing I think that you should include somehow is Loki, who seems pretty pivotal in this whole multiverse. Perhaps Doom wants to claim his power in order to bind the worlds, just like how he siphoned the Beyonder’s power in the comics to make Battleworld.
not a bad idea. could be a plot point for secret wars
I think Loki should appear in a scene at the end showing a confrontation between him and doom. Doom manages to get Loki to let go of the timelines so he can merge them as but can’t kill him realizing that would cause every universe to die including battleworld. Loki says that doom won’t get away with it and observes the ensuing fight for secret wars
@@jboy544 well i don’t see doom merging the timelines. just earths. but maybe you’ve got the right idea. make it BIGGER!
You managed to make a seemingly unsalvageable project and give me hope for it. Bravo. I’m sure Marvel will find a way to do nothing like this.
That being said, the only thing I’d change is Spider-Man being on the team by the beginning. I’d imagine him having an introduction similar to Infinity War where he just shows up to help out and ends up being pulled along for the ride
I love this pitch. It's how I'd imagine the film to go, and I didn't even know what to expect. Although I'd have Spider Man be a prominent character alongside Sam and Reed since he's close to Stark. Perhaps before the incursions, Peter has to kill Doom, but he doesn't because his memories of Stark are too much. This causes the multiverse to collapse, and in the end, Sam, Reed, and Peter, even Doctor Strange, feel responsible for the creation of Battleworld and the end of their universes. Other than that, I love it👍
This is honestly a great pitch given the holdbacks by the whole of phase 4 and 5’s movies and shows
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@@BevaToothTiger LMAO
Bro. You cooked. Imma need that Secret Wars Pitch like, yesterday please.
eventually. patience my friend
Bro how did I miss this this been out for 6 hours!!! My notifications buggin💀anyways you cooked with this pitch 🔥🔥 really like how you wrote the Avengers & FF ( especially Sam and Reed conflict) also the idea to make Doom not a variant of Toney was good ( hope they do the same in the actual movie because the last thing I want his them making a bunch of crony jokes about how he looks like toney )
Also 0:02 just realized you were looking at Wanda 💀it’s ok no need to be shamed we all guilty here
@@AaidnShortFilms i think having the dual POV characters would work well. similar to how tony and thor were for infinity war
@@AaidnShortFilms guilty as charged
@@fakehappyfilms yeah I agree you think you will make a pitch for Secret wars one day too if so you gotta add Loki god of story’s in there him and thor reunion is gonna be cool to see
@@AaidnShortFilms i’ll do secret wars video eventually. that’s a daunting task. i believe next up is spider-man 4. that was supposed to come out but the rdoomj news came out and i was like “damn”
Man this was awesome! Id love to see your idea for the secret wars film
@@JstnH i’m thinking in either november or december!
3:00 hot take: she hulk should be the new brute of the team, this could be a way to make her better and actually adapt her in a way we want and just redeem her in general for audiences to wanna watch she hulk
Edit: to everyone that disagrees, the creator agrees and that’s all I need
@@MalumBurro14 nah i agree. i’d be down for that
Nope, she should be scraped as soon as possible !! 🙄😒
@@Usee-os3no No
@@MalumBurro14 nooo, not at all !! 😖
10:00 “my team is strong enough, see we just started initial training a few hours ago” bruh 😂
goes to show how unready sam is at this point. bro’s got some character development to go through
Great pitch. The only thing I would critique is when banner does finally become hulk, the hulk wins whatever fight he takes on. I don’t think it would mean that much if the the hulk comes back like everyone wants and then immediately loses.
@@johnyoung1097 hulk beats doom, it’s just too late
(btw, peak profile pic. nacho libre is goated)
@@fakehappyfilms ohhh gotcha that totally works. And thanks.
This is actually insane and would love to see it. The moment thor was killed off like it was nothing…I knew the stakes were high…
Secret Wars pitch? This was pretty good thinking I'm pretty sure 30% of what you said will definitely happen in the film
@@tyrusquiroz8810 secret wars is definitely on my mind 👍
Please make a Secret Wars pitch which is a continuation to your Doomsday pitch because i think this was amazing.
@@SaB3r_God later this year i’d like to!
Wow! You don’t upload for a couple of months and then drop a video killing Avengers! Brutal! I love it!!
Next video will be nicer... I think
Nice pitch bro keep it up
Good stuff. I would really want to see this version of Doomsday. It would be so awesome.
This really shows what an asset America Chávez really is and they're not using her like they should.
@@tyrusquiroz8810 absolutely. she’s a great character with a TON of potential
My idea is to bring Wanda back in this movie and she and Doom have a big fight and he ends up stealing her powers to create battleworld just like he did the beyonder in the comics
@@The_LMS dude that would be sick! i like that idea!
i definitely think this film will be where the monica plotline gets solved
Amazing video bro. Keep it up.
@@Daniel-bj4lz thanks man 🙏
This is really good some leaks that just got announced is that Doctor Strange and Spider Man will be the focus for Secret Wars so i would love to see a part 2 that uses a bunch of the new leaks
i try not to go off of leaks because they can be proven wrong a the drop of a hat. I try to only go with things that are confirmed.
I was about to hate until you gave me two of the best moment of my life Hulk returning to get a w I literally cried happy tears as if I was watching the actual movie and also Sam feeling down about being cap because I want him to take the serum and and embody what Steve saw in him in the beginning or middle of secret wars and also o think secret wars should have a part 1 and Part 2
@@aunknownspecies4153 BRING BACK SAVAGE HULK 🗣️🔥
Bro this video is actually peak
@@dumi_chenu3730 thanks man! 🔥
That black hood armour look would be sick in the movie
@@TheCelticTiger32 low key tho, doctor doom in black would be HEAT
This is 🔥. Doom hunting the 4 through the multiverse would tie into the fact we’ve seen so many of them getting offed in gruesome ways. Doom could be pulling the strings so they they die indirectly or directly
@@Trelitty11 OH I DIDNT THINK OF THAT!! THATS SO SICK
@@fakehappyfilms like I imagine Wanda pulls up on the illuminati there’s an empty chair because maybe a variant Stark was supposed to be there (possibly superior iron man maybe even Tom Cruise or RDJ himself ) but he gets attacked and killed by Doom before he could get there to help . Or doom destroys an entire timeline forcing Evans Johnny the lone survivor into the Void . Or even Doom being involved in the x men of Deadpool and Wolverines deaths. Also I can’t remember her name but Charlize Theron when she appears to Strange to recruit him they could be possibly exploring this Doom threat . They already have a Doom in fortnite (they went as far as to make the Tony Stark skin who’s beneath Dooms mask ) who offed a bunch of heroes including the 4 and apparently due to Galactus being a nexus being Feige is considering it canon even showing the F4 cast fortnite Galactus . But hey You wrote it man and it could easily be incorporated into what they got going imo . 🔥 pitch felt like I was watching a movie listening .
I'm hoping the next "Thor" film introduces a lot of lore, so much that it would likely be involved in the plot of DD.
@@1handedtyper as long as the film doesn’t just become an exposition dump the whole time, i agree
@fakehappyfilms Well, that goes without saying. I'd just like to have more clarity on pocket dimensions and those who dwell within those pocket dimensions.
I enjoyed your take. I hope Sam and Reed are our leads based upon your script, I hold that was the problem with phases 4 and 5; No anchor characters. I don't care for the RDJ as Doom thing either but let's see what they do... I guess
I agree. There weren't any flagship heroes aside from Spider-Man, but even then, we only got ONE movie in the entire multiverse saga
This looks like a FilmSpeak thumbnail
imma take that as a compliment. that dude makes some great stuff
One change I'd make, a minor one - instead of the Avengers Facility, Avengers Mansion. I don't care how you justify it or who you wanna say financed if, maybe Stark Industries, whatever, but the Avengers Facility being destroyed gives us an opportunity, perhaps the last opportunity, to FINALLY see their most iconic headquarters.
@@mr.iiconic could be cool
Just use the same explanation that emh did, one of the warehouses owned by Maria Stark that Tony renovated and is now inherited by the Avengers
@@13kartiksurana9 I remember in one of the comics I read as a child it was Maria's childhood home, but that might have been the Marvel adventures uni
Ooooh, this was actually a good pitch!
@@shubz98 i have done what they deemed impossible 🤙
@@fakehappyfilms I bet you're version is better than whatever they'll come up with for the actual movie.....!
@@shubz98 nah they’ll do better than me. and if they don’t, then i’m just insane with it
This pitch is good but I feel like it needs the involvement of the TVA and multiversal characters that are integral to the plot like Wolverine and Tobeys Spiderman
@@Gael-qk5gw wolverine and tobey’s spider-man are 100% a secret wars thing, not a doomsday thing. doomsday is probably just for like, another avengers movie. secret wars will be the insane one
Holycrap. This was neat.
holycrap. thanks bro
Now you have to write Avengers secret wars
You should do Secret Wars (Pitch)
Dude nailed it
@@Andreabr77 i tried 🙏
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I hope Doomsday and Secret Wars are released during the Holiday Season so it will be like the No Way Home hype.
@@AndreK33 they’re releasing early summer
This would actually be an amazing movie I just wouldn’t want Thor to die I think Antman dying with wasp being present also would work
@@JonathanVegaa chris hemsworth is just about done with thor and evangeline lily retired. wasp probably won’t be back because of this.
thanks for watching tho. i appreciate that
@@fakehappyfilms I think she’d come back for this if it was offered or maybe have it as her and Scott to be the ones that die i would like if the ant man of post secret wars to be a young Hank pym and Janete van dyne and Chris Hemsworth said that’s he’s willing to keep coming back for Thor and there’s still plenty of good stories to tell with Thor
Genuinely love it sounds great. Sounds fun. I hate the Tony thing but honestly, I’d be excited if it wasn’t for that one little thing
@@sammysamiam5219 agreed. i did my best with what i could here. i see it as like what if willem dafoe was cast in the mcu but he wasn’t green goblin
Awesome video:
1. Hemsworth actually said himself he’d want to play Thor as long as he can.
2. You did that Thor and New Asgard gave the best fight to doom but then say he dies and Antman too? Thought that was a bit off.
3. America Chavez (and Thor for that matter) is said to be key in Secret Wars.
4. So is what I’m getting at accurate with dooms motives? Reed failed to protect their world, leaving Doom’s face disfigured. Due to that, he now goes and to every universe killing every version of the fantastic four? Yeah you could say dooms doing it bc he thinks he could do it better than Reed but, idk.. what I’m hearing going around is Doom believes he is saving the multiverse by merging them all into one. Now where that initial motivation comes from? I don’t know. Maybe can do with his mom or getting her back. Not sure.
5. Doctor Strange was last seen in the multiverse with clea, so his movie works have to take place before doomsday. Otherwise it wouldn’t really make sense.
6. I also noticed you didn’t mention anchor beings in this video. Maybe you’ll save that for the Secret wars pitch but yeah just something I caught, and wonder he they’ll use that as part of the story
7. Loved a lot of this video. Especially the thunderbolts and sentry intro. Don’t see those as nitpicks. Very minute things. This was really good brother.
@@SinkfieldHoops i appreciate the feedback! i’ll definitely be more weary of potential plot holes when i do secret wars in the future!
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You gitta do Secret Wars too
@@xenmartin9759 i’ve got some ideas
What about The Wasp? I know Evangeline Lilly said she was retiring, but im willing to bet she does come back and or we need a recast. We need The Wasp!
Oh it’s beautiful
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Cool video but wanted to share some notes:
1. Doom's character and plan is a bit unclear. I'm pretty sure I understand him blaming Reed for the destruction of his people and wanting to kill the FF but where does the motivation for protecting the multiverse by merging it come from? Why does he bother exerting resources on different universes when they're not the FF hes looking for? Why is he choosing specific universes to bring into his incursion and not others? Wouldnt this condrict the idea of him proving he can protect life better than Reed if hes just willing to pick and choose what universes stay and go? Also, why does he want to specifically travel to 616 to make the incursion machine? If these are questions to be answered in a secret wars pitch then that'd be kind of a shame since I just think it would've been better structured to lay out his character in Doomsday first.
2. Obviously not your fault but this pitch kinda shows why Rdj doom is almost inherently flawed. Besides the awful Romani erasure, there's not much you can get from a narrative/emotional level besides one or two scenes of "I can't believe he looks like Tony" and even then it doesn't matter much since it's not him. Again, having to work with rdj doom is a nightmare that you didn't decide so it's fine.
3. 7:48 dont want to be mean but this is honestly a major flaw with this approach to the multiverse. It becomes meaningless and repetitive. You can't really comprehend the difference when going more than one universe being taken over since it just becomes numbers that we don't connect to. I can't help but compare this to Thanos. The reason why he worked so effectively is that he was actively hurting the characters we liked and killed half of the universe that we actually knew. This kinda just doesnt work when you have it so that Doom invaded hundreds of worlds instead of focusing on the ones that actually matter. The best parts of this is when Doom is interacting with the heroes we know and is in 616.
4. Small nitpick but why is Spider-Man part of the avengers after nwh? It's just seems a little weird considering how he left off in a place of isolation. Also I'd wonder if the other avengers are fine with having a member who doesn't show their identity. Not much of a problem though.
5. It's a little strange that the Thunderbolts were waiting around the whole time. Why did they choose to reveal themselves at the end of the 2nd act instead of working with them before that? Did they have another mission they were doing? Just pretty odd.
6. Doctor Strange seems to have been affected by the Darkhold after using it and kept its powers. I think it's a bit of a missed opportunity to not expand on that here, maybe even making comparisons to Doom's own dark sorcery.
7. The Avengers seem to have a large stretch where they aren't given much to do plotwise when they go from fighting some Doombots in the 1st act to fighting Doom near the end of the 2nd.
8. Wanted to end this positively by saying I still like stuff from this video. I especially think the general idea of the Thunderbolts serving as a turning point for the heroes is pretty cool. I also understand that this is just a ptich and not everything has to be in depth. None of these notes were meant as insults just wanted to share some feedback. I'm looking forward to more pitches from the channel and hope that you have good success. ✌️
hey man i appreciate the feedback! thanks for watching 🙏
This is awesome...
Damn I loved this pitch. Nice work! My only complaint is that Thor died before being reunited with Loki and before paying off the joke in DP+W but other than that it was great. Can you do a follow up one for Secret Wars?
@@Goggles36195 they’d get reunited in secret wars if i make the video
@@fakehappyfilms please do I would really love to see the conclusion to this story and your take on how to book end the multiverse saga
Dude this was amazing
@@cooljoe6468 dude you’re amazing! 🫵
@@fakehappyfilms nah, i could never think up something like this
@@cooljoe6468 bull. sh*t. you easily could. trust me bro
@@fakehappyfilms nah, you should do a secret wars video next💯
@@cooljoe6468 just sayin, if you started droppin vids, i’d watch 🙏
Reed with a mustache FUCKS alright. Love it.
@@ashura9706 i still prefer reed with the beard, but there’s no denying a pedro mustache 👀
Bro doesn’t miss 🔥
damn right
I still feel like this Doom should just be a variant or something like that. Having Doctor Doom simply just be evil Iron Man undermines his entire character, and there should be a main timeline Doom revealed. No matter how original RDJ is as Doom, it won’t distract from the fact that he is the face of Iron Man, and they’re bringing him back merely because of nostalgia bait. The main timeline Doom should be Cillian Murphy or something like that, no more 60+ year olds.
i agree with the casting choice being a mistake, but i dont think he'll be an evil iron man. he'll be doom, just played by RDJ. the example i used in the video was essentially if Willem Dafoe was cast in the MCU as someone who isn't norman osborn
Only problem I have is we won't get the scene from Deadpool and Wolverine with Thor and Deadpool. Unless it's a variant I guess
@@WukisGGK or if he didn’t die…?
The russo’s could do a good job to rehabilitate She hulk’s character. With better CGI there’s no reason she can’t be more prominent.
This is so amazing🔥
I think thor is probably a final act or pt 2 movie hero, it seems like he’s done fighting and won’t fight unless his home is in danger
@@alexz8120 well, he died trying to save asgard in this video 🤷♂️
Earned the subscription for this one.
But… I did like She-Hulk…. Block me if you must.
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I kind of like this idea, though, i don't think they're going this direction for the movie because I feel like The Avengers are going to basically assemble at the end of the movie as a last stand of similar to the first Avengers movie and then the incursions that make battle world happen or something.
@@Mr.BrokenRecord i could see that
@@fakehappyfilms, thanks. Oh, could you make a video pitching Tom Holland's Spider-Man 4 because I'd love to see your view on it for a street level version or a multiverse version, or both, please.
@@Mr.BrokenRecord that’s actually the video i’m writing as we speak. it’ll probably be more street level but i’m toying with the idea of doing a live action spider verse film as well
@@fakehappyfilms, oh okay, that's cool. Have a good day, and I hope the video goes well👍
Battleworld etc
Etc as a firefighter I eat MREs bro yeh
Phases 1-3 Thanos
Phases 4-6 dr doom
Phases 7-9 Galactus
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Avengers Eternity War
Avengers Forever
You should be the writer
@@elviamartinez7628 just waiting on their email. i sent them one asking if i could make blade since they can’t get it together but they never got back to me :(
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Add war machine to the avengers and nick fury cameo and get star lord to join the team
I'm one of those people who had no real issue with She-Hulk. I thought Tatiana Maslany was an amazing choice and I completely understood the direction the show was trying to go. I don't think it was bad at all but if I'm being fair, some writing in the show could've been better but beyond that, I think it was a good show. I hope she comes back.
@@mylzmsomi5446 tatiana maslany is a great actress. she hasn’t handled the criticism very well but i don’t blame her honestly
@@fakehappyfilms I don't blame her either. Some criticisms of the show are justified but most of the complaints I hear have more to do with her leading a project. If we're being honest, women led projects get hate before the project is dropped. I don't know why that's the case.
@@mylzmsomi5446 i mean just look at furiosa. that movie was GAS and it bombed
@@fakehappyfilms That's fair to say and maybe Furiosa was Gassed but that doesn't change the fact that people pray that most women lead blockbusters bomb. And I'm not saying a majority of people say that but sometimes a movie bombs but the movie isn't bad.
awesome, lemme sit down and watch this
or stand, or lay down, or squat, or handstand, or really any viewing position that you'd like. my content can be enjoyed from all kinds of different angles
@@fakehappyfilms currently dangling from the roof, and so far, pretty good video
@@djaaronix pretty solid spot actually. you should try underwater next time
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@@matthewdelia2760 C I N E M A 🔥🔥
Where do you get your poster frames from?
@@L4rrs i just googled images. they aren’t hard to find 👍
I agree with 'She-Hulk'.
The writing on the show was terrible, but the actress was good in the role, and could work in a team, with better writers behind her.
Hmmmm I like this idea and imma copy it
oh god i gave a doombot an idea 😭😭😭
🎉real good
Not bad!
What do you think how many movies will the mutant Saga will have in the MCU
i could see well over 20. the mutants are MASSIVE
Are there plans of you creating a pitch for Avengers Secret Wars
@@fakehappyfilmswow frfr that’s alot
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yesss secret wars next
@@slightlyobeserat5781 secret wars won’t be next, but i’ll do secret wars eventually 🙏
@@fakehappyfilms remind me when cuz I will be seated
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This wouldn't have been my ideal roster, but this is probably not too far from what we're gonna get. Good pitch, all things considered.
I'd leave Daredevil out of this, and put Joaquin's Falcon, Shuri, Wasp, Kamala and maybe Kate on the team.
I'd have Scott and Hope die together, and leave Thor alive for Secret Wars.
@@maninthetrenchcoat5603 i’ve thought about this actually.
i completely forgot about the new falcon, shuri im saving for secret wars, evangeline lily said she’s not acting anymore, then kamala and kate are saved for young avengers.
i think killing thor here was the right move. it established doom’s power level right away.
thanks for watching tho man!
@fakehappyfilms I'd have Wasp keep her helmet on the whole time, and get a voice impressionist, probably Alexandra Daddario after her work with other characters in What If, and just kill her off then. Hope's a nothing character, but the Wasp at least deserves a sendoff.
And I'm doubtful we're even gonna get Young Avengers, so this at least gives Kamala and Kate something to do.
As for Thor, using him as a power play makes sense, but Thor is such a well established character that he needs to have the absolute best death possible for his tenure in the MCU to be satisfying.
Not a bad prewrite. Though I think its a bit much to have the FF's home world be destroyed by galactus
nah that’s definitely happening in first steps. i’m calling it now
Personally, I don’t think Daredevil belongs as an Avenger.
@@PhantomOverlord i can see where you’re coming from, but there’s like a 90% chance he’ll be here
Why
@@baconeggcheesepodcast9390 he’s a street level hero.
Also How would you explain kang disappearance?
loki season 2 already did that
What you mean
@@fakehappyfilmswhat they say
Please do secret wars next
ive got some ideas. i'd like to get a spider-man 4 video out next
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How did the Thunderbolts follow the Avengers going to other universes?
@@dimitrescu182 followed then through america’s portals
@@fakehappyfilms wouldn't the Avengers notice them unless the portal stayed open for minutes for some reason?
@@dimitrescu182 full honesty, i was kinda obligated to use them. they’ve been confirmed to be appearing in the movie. i guess you can assume the portals would be open for a bit longer than they were in DS:MOM
As one of the few people who actually likes America Chavez, I'm pissed she got killed like that, but other than that, this was great 👍
i love america chavez. but i think it would really show that doom will kill anyone who gets in his way. shes also the one taking the avengers through the multiverse, so doom tried to strand them
Greta pitch, hopefully the russos and Steven succeed on this film, also I think the tva might be part of this and Loki
i can definitely see loki and the tva being here
This is okay but you didn’t really storyboard it properly. What I mean is in comic movies think of certain scenes like a splash page that propel plot points forward. Like when the Thunderbolts arrive it would have been better for them to be losing, have the Thunderbolts arrive, Strange say something like we’re gonna need more them just super soldier to beat these guys, then have the Sentry appear and wipe out a bunch of Doom bots. When all seems clear, Sam ask Bucky how does he know he can trusts his new friends, at which point one last Doom bot attacks and an arrow pinpoints it with a bomb and blows it up, at which point Hawkeye reveals himself and says trust me you can trusts them I’ve already vetted them thoroughly. Ylana can have a joke about not knowing how her sister put up with how pedantic Barton is.
Also killing Thor is a no go because he’s just too powerful and killing Scott is too predictable.
You can kill She Hulk and have that be a catalysts to having Savage Hulk return.
Also the film should start with Sam actually training a group of new Avengers for a rescue mission in coordination with Dr. Strange and America Chavez to rescue Monica from Earth 818 or whatever Earth that was since that plot point has to get tied up as well.
And they also need to use the idea of a Rescue Ark from the comics at the end to get them to Battleworld because that is why when they arrive they will be able to remember the past whereas the rest of the people living there just always thought Battleworld existed.
@@Byronic19134 bro i was NOT about to make the beat sheet, write an entire 90-120 page screenplay, then make a storyboard. i do that enough with my day job as a screenwriter/director lmao. this is just for fun