What a happy ending for Maria and Tori. The father return and tell his story what happened to him. Lucky Miguel has a nice friend that help his wife and daughter.
This teaser is intriguing and effectively sets up suspense, leaving the reader eager to discover the unexpected turn of events following the girl's letter to her father. The ellipsis at the end masterfully invites readers into the narrative, prompting curiosity about the dramatic developments that lie ahead. Excellent job in crafting a compelling introduction that hooks the audience right away!
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing. I really did have a similar experience, but it was not my twin brother, Marty, who tried to get rid of me. The person who tried to get rid of me, who also left me for dead, was my ex-boyfriend. I never told anyone this story with the exception of my best girlfriend, who recently went to join our Lord. Lots of my memories of that nughtmare are blurred, but someone called an ambulance, and I was taken to the hospital not breathing, and intubated immediately, About 5 days later, our heavenly Father saved my life and brought me back to consciousness. It was a miracle as I believe your encounter in the woods was also divine intervention. God saved our lives and had bigger plans for both of us here on earth, brother Miguel. May God bless you and keep you and your family in His loving arms always. ❤️ Sally Stone
This Story Was So Neat,How Something Bad Was Turned Into Something Good,Thank You For Showing That Some Time Good Can Come Out of Bad Always keep Trusting Jesus He Has Everything In His Hand. Amen
That was a fairy tale? Only the sad part was they were identical twins one with a good heart the other one was just hardened with his life. But in the end Miguel was back with his family and the fairy tale goes on 🙏🏻♥️ and I love daisies too!!
I lost my father 43 year I think it’s wonderful the child got a second chance to have her father back do anything to see my father again love fairytale I am 54 year old their better then reality
That was a good story guess there are bothers that are good and bad every family has someone like that they think they deserve more and don't do nothing to get it why work and you will have it I'm glad he came back to his family❤ I'm glad we have good friends when we need them
Oh what a beautiful story. From a life of a silver lining suddenly the dark cloud appeared . McGill, his wife Maria and their daughter Tori lived a happy, loving life until tragedy struck and McGill was involved in an accident or so they thought. It was quite a surprise for everyone when it was discovered that it was not McGill who they buried but his twin brother Martin who brutally wounded him and left him for dead in the forest. It is Martin who ended up dead. However, a kind family who lived in the forest, nursed Martin back to good health. He was then able to reconnect with his wife and child after his memory was restored. I was however disappointed that I was unable to hear about the meeting between their friend Leo and he young lady who lived in he forest and whether they did eventually get married. This is a story filled with intrigue
I love fairytales even now. I'm 69,I do believe in the fairy creatures n their world! Strange! All the same, I just loved this story. Somehow daises were connected to my life since I was very young. They were printed on my mom's light blue glass nylon e saree😅she had this saree for a very long time!!
I'm a year younger and I love fairy stories as well😂😂😂 It must be a generation deffect 😂😂😂 but I like it. A have a collection of some old fairy stories. By the way you should change your familly name in Flower, just joking but you have the same letters in your name 😂. Wish you all the best💞 🤗
Happens regularly in large metropolitan cities here in the US, although this scenario may have been in another country.Metropolitan police in large cities often call the family notifying them they need to identify the body. It is probably not so for small towns. The military sends a representative to the home if they have to relay news about a fallen soldier, giving support where applicable to the situation and notifying them of cause of the soldier’s demise
Wonderful story even though left hanging, would have wished to see the celebration in the forest and Leo's meeting with the 'granddaughter' of the fairy woman 😅.
Extremely poor writing. Took a 10- or 15-minute story and padded it to 47 minutes with a bunch of unnecessary verbiage. And then stopped before reaching the end.
@williamwallace9826 How about you trying another channel, something that resonates with you. Or write a story and deliver one as you create your own channel. You’ll need to become aware of sentence construction, a protagonist to carry the story, etc. Perhaps you already have acquired those skills. Just a thought as criticisms come rather easily.
Lovely story..good ending..thank you author and narrator..well done ❤❤❤❤❤
What a happy ending for Maria and Tori. The father return and tell his story what happened to him. Lucky Miguel has a nice friend that help his wife and daughter.
Loved, beautiful ur narrated story,and finally everyone found each other's loving family.
Very good story . kudos to the author
Thank you very nice story..
Something very different, enjoyed it very much. Thank you.
Beautiful and interesting story. Thank you!!!
What a story can't get enough of this story very great.
The story was great thanks looking forward too the next one soon
Cool story, thank you!
Loved the story. Loved the happy ending.
What a lovely story. Thank you.❤
Love this story 🎉
This was a really really good story. Thank you🌷
Yes I loved this story ,! Thank I so much sir😊
Wonderful story enjoyed. It till the end ❤
Wonderful story. I don't know whether they are true, but they are inspiring. The always vring smiles or tears to my face.
What an amazing story. Loved the ending. I hope Leo falls in love with Lilliana.❤
This teaser is intriguing and effectively sets up suspense, leaving the reader eager to discover the unexpected turn of events following the girl's letter to her father. The ellipsis at the end masterfully invites readers into the narrative, prompting curiosity about the dramatic developments that lie ahead. Excellent job in crafting a compelling introduction that hooks the audience right away!
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing. I really did have a similar experience, but it was not my twin brother, Marty, who tried to get rid of me. The person who tried to get rid of me, who also left me for dead, was my ex-boyfriend. I never told anyone this story with the exception of my best girlfriend, who recently went to join our Lord. Lots of my memories of that nughtmare are blurred, but someone called an ambulance, and I was taken to the hospital not breathing, and intubated immediately, About 5 days later, our heavenly Father saved my life and brought me back to consciousness. It was a miracle as I believe your encounter in the woods was also divine intervention. God saved our lives and had bigger plans for both of us here on earth, brother Miguel.
May God bless you and keep you and your family in His loving arms always. ❤️ Sally Stone
An incredible story. Twins are never of the same characters no matter the gene. Lucky to have been nursed back to life through God's intervention.
Great story, the best one yet.
I love the story. Thank you
Beautiful story ❤
Beautiful. Story .happy ending ❤
Good story, I want to hear the story about Leo.
Lovely Story filled with suspense and a happy ending.❤️
Enjoyed it very much especially the daisies my dear sister name is Daisy she departed this life two years ago i am hoping for my miracle 🎉
Loved it, and I’m 79.
Loved the story especially the surprised happy ending
More stories like above
It’s a beautiful story, love it. Thank you
Finished reading from start very entertaining no drowsiness love it
This story was really heartwarming❤
i loved this wonderful story .please more stories like this.
Thank you.
More Power
I loved this story it got me emotional..well done
This Story Was So Neat,How Something Bad Was Turned Into Something Good,Thank You For Showing That Some Time Good Can Come Out of Bad Always keep Trusting Jesus He Has Everything In His Hand. Amen
That was a fairy tale? Only the sad part was they were identical twins one with a good heart the other one was just hardened with his life. But in the end Miguel was back with his family and the fairy tale goes on 🙏🏻♥️ and I love daisies too!!
I love 💕 the stories so much keep them going
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤Awesome so beautiful story
I lost my father 43 year I think it’s wonderful the child got a second chance to have her father back do anything to see my father again love fairytale I am 54 year old their better then reality
That was a good story guess there are bothers that are good and bad every family has someone like that they think they deserve more and don't do nothing to get it why work and you will have it I'm glad he came back to his family❤ I'm glad we have good friends when we need them
Wonderful 😅😅😅😂😂 I love the story.
That's a good story faith and Love
Nice story
I love fairy tale too❤.
Beautifully story. I enjoy it. ❤❤❤❤❤❤
Loved the storysad with happy ending
Oh what a beautiful story. From a life of a silver lining suddenly the dark cloud appeared . McGill, his wife Maria and their daughter Tori lived a happy, loving life until tragedy struck and McGill was involved in an accident or so they thought. It was quite a surprise for everyone when it was discovered that it was not McGill who they buried but his twin brother Martin who brutally wounded him and left him for dead in the forest. It is Martin who ended up dead. However, a kind family who lived in the forest, nursed Martin back to good health. He was then able to reconnect with his wife and child after his memory was restored. I was however disappointed that I was unable to hear about the meeting between their friend Leo and he young lady who lived in he forest and whether they did eventually get married. This is a story filled with intrigue
Thank you so much. I enjoyed it very much.
I love fairytales even now. I'm 69,I do believe in the fairy creatures n their world! Strange! All the same, I just loved this story. Somehow daises were connected to my life since I was very young. They were printed on my mom's light blue glass nylon e saree😅she had this saree for a very long time!!
I'm a year younger and I love fairy stories as well😂😂😂 It must be a generation deffect 😂😂😂 but I like it. A have a collection of some old fairy stories.
By the way you should change your familly name in Flower, just joking but you have the same letters in your name 😂.
Wish you all the best💞 🤗
Me too.
There should be more fairies in this world
I still fantasize & I will be 90 this coming August.😅😊❤ Young at heart. 😊😊😊😊
@@user-tj5ew6vj8i the best😂😂😂, keep going this way. This make you live. Lot of love💞💞
Quite a story! I enjoyed it very much ! Thanks
Nice story. I liked it.
Lovely story thanks 🎉
Wonderful story❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Lovely very lovely that they are back togher
I love your story's thay are great
Police informing a family of the death of a beloved family member OVER A TELEPHONE? Really? Which country is this???
Happens regularly in large metropolitan cities here in the US, although this scenario may have been in another country.Metropolitan police in large cities often call the family notifying them they need to identify the body. It is probably not so for small towns. The military sends a representative to the home if they have to relay news about a fallen soldier, giving support where applicable to the situation and notifying them of cause of the soldier’s demise
I love the story I don't want it to end !
Very interesting. Love it.
Delightful story
I have really enjoyed this story. But I would love to have more to it, as it’s finished in an uncertain way. So is there a next chapter to this ?
Good story
I liked the story it's good
Lovely story
What a touching story may you be blessed
Love, love, love it❤.
😊😊😊😊🎉
Wished the story could go further so that the forest fairy and fairy king's story could be added😊
A story full of suspense.
Interesting story
That police was crazy to just call like that she could have an heart attack and then leave her precious daughter.
Incredible Story your brother was a wicked soul hanks to those who had save youc❤❤❤❤❤
What's a happy ending story I wish that Leo would get the faithful wife too😅
Liked this story
Beautiful ❤️
A sad story with a happy ending
Lovely story 1
Very Beautiful. Bloemfontein.
Beautiful stroy
I love 💘 this story ❤gn
Great story, but you didn't include how Martin died as it was Martin that was buried.
❤ loved it😊
Should have ended with Leo meeting the granddaughter
Martain is exactly like my twin, all the way.
Leo's wife? He has no wife!!!
Wonderful story even though left hanging, would have wished to see the celebration in the forest and Leo's meeting with the 'granddaughter' of the fairy woman 😅.
Loved it
Verg inthralling story
I like the recipe
Ruined by so many adverts
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a very beautiful end to the sadness.
Extremely poor writing. Took a 10- or 15-minute story and padded it to 47 minutes with a bunch of unnecessary verbiage. And then stopped before reaching the end.
@williamwallace9826 How about you trying another channel, something that resonates with you. Or write a story and deliver one as you create your own channel. You’ll need to become aware of sentence construction, a protagonist to carry the story, etc. Perhaps you already have acquired those skills. Just a thought as criticisms come rather easily.
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