Can't Stand to be Apart [MLP Grimdark Reading]

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  • Опубликовано: 4 окт 2024
  • Finally, a story I could read for you guys! Hopefully you enjoy! There's no credits, because I voice the characters, but I'll link the author in the description! We're almost to 1K guys! Come on, we can do it!
    Written by: www.fimfiction...
    Characters all voiced by me.
    I DO NOT OWN MLP OR ANY OF ITS PROPERTIES! MLP BELONGS TO HASBRO AND DHX STUDIOS, I ONLY OWN MY VOICE! NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT IS INTENDED & IS TO BE USED ONLY UNDER THE CONDITIONS OF FAIR USE HERE AND HERE FORWARD!
    COPYRIGHTS: FAIR USE, Title 17, US Code (Sections 107-118 of the copyright law) All media in the following video is used for purpose of review and entertainment under terms of fair use. All footage, music, and visuals used belong to their respectful companies and users.

Комментарии • 96

  • @leilanivaughan-williams3038
    @leilanivaughan-williams3038 6 лет назад +46

    "And found Applejack pissing outside the door" Sorry, the pronunciation was too funny XD

    • @Sparrow9642
      @Sparrow9642  6 лет назад +13

      Leilani Vaughan-Williams XD! After listening to it, dear God it does sound like pissing rather than pacing

    • @farahismail13
      @farahismail13 6 лет назад +9

      "Do you still have that feeling?" "what? the pain?" I heard paint, and I was thinking "Yeah, a nice bright shade of yellow." XD

  • @0hvist
    @0hvist 3 года назад +9

    SPOILER ALERT: Their Cutie Marks were actually trying to combine the CMC to become a new Alicorn through Fusion.

  • @Flowerbarrel
    @Flowerbarrel 5 лет назад +10

    Uh....Starlight’s village suddenly ain’t looking too bad.

  • @amyalday8329
    @amyalday8329 6 лет назад +5

    this shows that once your
    friends, your supposed to
    stick together and be friends forever! like there is
    no point of new friends in life.

  • @AJponyAPschannel
    @AJponyAPschannel 7 лет назад +40

    well o/o
    this takes the definition of, can't live without, to new levels

  • @Thedragonlover95
    @Thedragonlover95 5 лет назад +4

    Ok who gave the fillies a knife?!

  • @QueenMeowTigeress
    @QueenMeowTigeress 7 лет назад +29

    *eating popcorn*
    wow Great job reading this!

  • @dawnelizabethy
    @dawnelizabethy 6 лет назад +7

    you're a great reader! i loved listening, you've got a captivating voice.

  • @erikandlueshapeshifter4602
    @erikandlueshapeshifter4602 7 лет назад +10

    Why am I still watching these at night?!

  • @KairiMorin
    @KairiMorin 7 лет назад +14

    Oh that's dark.

  • @joshuagarcia5804
    @joshuagarcia5804 7 лет назад +11

    It's been a while since I've heard an MLP Grimdark. This is great!

  • @bemorefrooti5839
    @bemorefrooti5839 7 лет назад +23

    If there's ever a time you're short on little to no voice actors, notify me. I'd be more than happy to help.

    • @Sparrow9642
      @Sparrow9642  7 лет назад +2

      I'm very low right now, send me a voice reel in a sound file to my email, and I'll look it over

    • @bemorefrooti5839
      @bemorefrooti5839 7 лет назад +2

      Sparrow 9642 Alright. Would you mind letting me know what your email is? I'll record it in a moment.

    • @Sparrow9642
      @Sparrow9642  7 лет назад +1

      I'll PM it

    • @bemorefrooti5839
      @bemorefrooti5839 7 лет назад +1

      Sparrow 9642 Understood.

    • @bemorefrooti5839
      @bemorefrooti5839 7 лет назад +1

      Sparrow 9642 It'd be best to delete your response now. It'd suck to have random people emailing you XD

  • @bluejaymtj4308
    @bluejaymtj4308 7 лет назад +11

    Yay!! Glad to hear it completed after the editing live yesterday!!!!! This sounds amazing!!!!😄

  • @jsanto210
    @jsanto210 7 лет назад +15

    you have such a soothing voice

  • @redclover8387
    @redclover8387 7 лет назад +12

    Holy crap this is creepy! and really well told, nice job^^

  • @joseescobedo7899
    @joseescobedo7899 6 лет назад +4

    This story is like the anime parasite

  • @loveacorn
    @loveacorn 7 лет назад +5

    Rip..... crustarder

    • @katelynbodiford5680
      @katelynbodiford5680 6 лет назад +4

      Mai See Thao At least they're free from their pain from their Cutie Marks.

  • @scatcat8371
    @scatcat8371 7 лет назад +10

    I have a grimdark! So it goes like this:
    Me and my friend were playing an RPG game, on a website. But in the middle of playing, we saw a pony join us. Because of the pony's presence our game said ErrOr_PonyNotFound. I freaked out when my computer turned off. I tried turning it on 6 times, and finally, it worked. It said shut down because removing virus. Then when I logged in to my account, it said in red letters: "Your Next." I checked my window because I felt like I was being watched, and there was the pony, her dead, lifeless eyes staring into mine. She said as she broke in through my window: "Your Next!" And then she started laughing like a Maniac.
    End! Could you read this for me, some pony? Please, because I am a family friendly channel. Thank you!

    • @Sparrow9642
      @Sparrow9642  7 лет назад +2

      Scat Cat I've already done a grimdark like that, it's a story called "The Survey"

    • @zapcraftihoof8318
      @zapcraftihoof8318 5 лет назад +1

      @@Sparrow9642 can you give me a link? I would like to see that story

  • @jamese9812
    @jamese9812 7 лет назад +1

    Wow, this is incredible. Way to go on the reading and I can't wait for the sequel I heard mentioned. The concept of their destinies being strung together like this is creepy and quite intriguing. Keep up the awesome work!!!

  • @zapcraftihoof8318
    @zapcraftihoof8318 5 лет назад +4

    Huh, I suppose these events happening can make sense in a way. After all, ever since they found out about each others existence, they've been searching for their cutie marks, always searching and spending most of their time together. When they got their cutie marks, I'm sure I wasn't the only 1 who watched the episode and saw them floating and being surrounded by an electric ring as they got their cutie marks. That electric ring could symbolize how they are all interconnected with each other, their destinys perfectly tied. I'm just glad they aren't tied together like this in the show

  • @twistednemi8176
    @twistednemi8176 6 лет назад +2

    I thought they were gonna sew themselves together...

  • @aniawypych230
    @aniawypych230 7 лет назад +2

    As soon as you mentioned the blood spilling from every opening I was like
    "You bitches got Ebola😂👐"

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 Год назад

    This is really good.
    Poor them.

  • @littlepip4014
    @littlepip4014 6 лет назад +3

    Think you'll ever be at brony con? Id love to meet you!

    • @Sparrow9642
      @Sparrow9642  6 лет назад +1

      Bella Chan More than likely not, as I live on the west coast, and the finances would be ridiculous. Plus, I'm not keen on travelling out of state, especially alone. I might make it to my local con CMPC maybe next year, but all depends

  • @loveacorn
    @loveacorn 7 лет назад +2

    I'm having chill's on my back because I'm drinking icy

  • @creationx6337
    @creationx6337 6 лет назад +1

    I give you props for your good narration, the... well, the narration was good and superb, and there are usually some grimdark and creepypasta I like, but this one was just morbid, twisted, fucked up, horrific and just dread and not in a good way. For others, it might have been all that in a good and bad way for them, but this story have actually scared me for life! 😰
    Or at least... for a week or so, or a few months until I almost half way forget and move on completely from this. This have gotten me a little emotionally damaged🤕😥... that’s what I get for letting my curiosity win... It was tragic and a soul crushing, tragic nightmare on their hard work, goals, life, hopes, dreams and destinies. Once again, I give the narrator and writer props, but this just rubs me the wrong way and is not my cup of tea.
    I’m going to have to listen to a lot of upbeat music, watch a lot of comedy, remove this “what if” thought out of my mind, scrub my brain clear with steel wool, and R&R. 😥

    • @Sparrow9642
      @Sparrow9642  6 лет назад +1

      Siman Markson That's what grimdark is, and it's intention. Trust me, stories like Cupcakes and Butterflies have me scarred, but that's what inspires me to keep going. This story is indeed messed up, and that's why I chose to read it. It's invigorating and disturbing, giving it potential to be a great grimdark

    • @creationx6337
      @creationx6337 6 лет назад +1

      Sparrow 9642 Still, I give you and the writer a lot of props, and I hear/read what you’re saying, but we all have custom, specific preferences, and this one did well at what you told me, but I still have my preferences. Grimdark like Cupcakes, Experiments of Twilight Sparkle, Cheerilee’s Garden, Rainbow Factory, the Muffin Universe with Minkie Pie, Sweet Apple Massacre didn’t really affect me like this one because those were just kind of like AU’s residing in the Creepypasta universe for me. I haven’t read Butterflies or Little Miss Rarity yet, but I heard maybe enough bits and pieces about it to get the gist of it, and I might have to brace myself for Butterflies “IF” I decide to read it. But you pick good though. 👍🏽😅
      And the story did keep my attention on it after my curiosity won, but I still stand by my personal and polite opinion, so don’t get me wrong you did great, but the story... eh.

  • @dariustucker1690
    @dariustucker1690 2 года назад +1

    It feel like I can watch this Awesome SHOW!!! And going sleep with it

  • @katiemorris2126
    @katiemorris2126 Год назад +2

    They should have asked etheir twilight or zicira for help

  • @fatecosmic923
    @fatecosmic923 7 лет назад +6

    wait... did nopony notice all the blood?

  • @kyraakato4569
    @kyraakato4569 7 лет назад +6

    This was sooo Creepy and Cooool

  • @CommanderSilverShield
    @CommanderSilverShield 7 лет назад +5

    This is bucked up OK
    i will not swear

    • @Sparrow9642
      @Sparrow9642  7 лет назад +2

      Kevin Frisbie I don't disagree. This fic is dark and twisted, which is why I luv it!

    • @CommanderSilverShield
      @CommanderSilverShield 7 лет назад +2

      Agreed this is bucked up but interesting in a weird twisted way

  • @revaslatts8011
    @revaslatts8011 5 лет назад

    You need more artwork! Also, this one gives me Goosebumps vibes.

  • @snonyabeeswax
    @snonyabeeswax 7 лет назад +1

    Im glad this isnt canon

  • @ellathecat4775
    @ellathecat4775 6 лет назад +3

    So the cutie mark is curse or not?

  • @switchtale6432
    @switchtale6432 4 года назад

    Kitsune 1994
    They could make up a story to hide the removal of their marks, and get treated for their injuries at the hospital, until their wounds would heal up.
    Think about would you want a Cutie Mark that put you through a great deal of pain until you died? Because I would not :(

  • @michaelcruz1422
    @michaelcruz1422 6 лет назад +3

    IM ONLY 11 YEARS OLD!

  • @CommanderSilverShield
    @CommanderSilverShield 7 лет назад +2

    Oh my celesta this is bucking creepy buck this I need to read the comments

  • @tamstar370
    @tamstar370 5 лет назад +1

    They should've went to Twilight for help

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 Год назад +1

      TamStar
      Maybe they were in too much pain to do that Twilight at least appears in the sequel story.

  • @Mistymorning614
    @Mistymorning614 6 лет назад +2

    Well are 3 died and now what happens to raroty rainbow and apple jack sigh

  • @blueiceshards3106
    @blueiceshards3106 7 лет назад +1

    very good reading!

  • @DarksCorner
    @DarksCorner 2 года назад

    Wheres starlight when you need her xD

  • @Spyro757
    @Spyro757 6 лет назад +1

    Must have more

  • @phantomtail2270
    @phantomtail2270 6 лет назад

    Take a shot every time they say Blood

  • @honeybee4144
    @honeybee4144 6 лет назад +1

    How.. How have they not bleed out?

    • @TheSpectator7
      @TheSpectator7 4 года назад

      That what I thought too, all those times apart or ill they're bodies wouldn't be able to replenish blood fast enough?

  • @Fireprincess_10
    @Fireprincess_10 6 лет назад +1

    I'm never having friends again.😨

  • @virginianotis1588
    @virginianotis1588 6 лет назад +1

    are all 3 with a ilnes

  • @jerryorange9104
    @jerryorange9104 6 лет назад +2

    If the were smart the would of cut there mains or tails off

  • @flaminginferno6641
    @flaminginferno6641 6 лет назад +1

    Is it me or the more we watch the closer we get to vomiting

  • @kyraakato4569
    @kyraakato4569 7 лет назад +4

    BUT was Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

  • @M.W.K6996
    @M.W.K6996 7 лет назад +15

    I'm the kind of person who prefers the female characters to be voiced by actual females.

    • @Sparrow9642
      @Sparrow9642  7 лет назад +3

      M .W. K I'm low on VAs right now, so I had no choice

    • @M.W.K6996
      @M.W.K6996 7 лет назад +1

      I hate when that happens.

    • @Sparrow9642
      @Sparrow9642  7 лет назад +2

      M .W. K Right now, I'm very limited as far as voice actors, so plz enjoy what I can provide

    • @thesatanicgemsgroup5873
      @thesatanicgemsgroup5873 7 лет назад +1

      +Sparrow 9642 I can help voice act

    • @Sparrow9642
      @Sparrow9642  7 лет назад +2

      The Satanic Gems Group Send a sound file of the voices to my email.

  • @creaidanthehedgehog4560
    @creaidanthehedgehog4560 3 года назад

    How do you guys think this would end up turning out if COVID-19 was ever even involved exactly?...

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 Год назад

      Creaidan the Hedgehog
      That be terrible and hey babe I been worried about you. I'll even make you a Christmas Gift drawing for you too
      You been busy?

  • @marijanmarijan8332
    @marijanmarijan8332 6 лет назад +1

    that's disturbing

  • @kyraakato4569
    @kyraakato4569 7 лет назад +4

    It was Pawesome!!! The voices are strange cause` its not boy voic`d and girl voic`d I don`t like that like that Fanfic or Comic.Scootaloo is a boy and Rainbow Dash too, because they speak like boys they`r hairs like boy`s yea, that why

    • @fatecosmic923
      @fatecosmic923 7 лет назад +2

      LPS Kathleen Art
      wha?
      English please?

    • @ViolarulesGaming
      @ViolarulesGaming 6 лет назад +3

      Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash are mares. They're tomcolts.

    • @chocolatethewaffle9997
      @chocolatethewaffle9997 6 лет назад +2

      LPS Kathleen Art scootaloo and rainbow dash are not boys

    • @AuroraRoseWinters1995
      @AuroraRoseWinters1995 6 лет назад +2

      LPS Kathleen Art Rainbow and Scootaloo are girls. Just cause they have more masculine sounding voices doesn't make them boys. I can make my voice go really deep but that doesn't make me a boy. There are girls who have low range voices. There are also boys who have high pitched voices. Are the boys who have high pitched voices girls? No. No they're not. Looks do not = gender. I could be a girl and dress in all men's clothes and cut my hair like a guy but that doesn't make me one. It just what I want for my appearance. Remember looks don't = gender.

  • @joseescobedo7899
    @joseescobedo7899 6 лет назад

    STOP CUTTING YOUR LEGS MY LEGS FEEL WERID

  • @Fireprincess_10
    @Fireprincess_10 6 лет назад

    Jk

  • @myrtlejones28
    @myrtlejones28 6 лет назад

    What the Fuck is going on here?!

  • @jacobblackard2574
    @jacobblackard2574 4 года назад

    This is the most messed up I listened to