I'll Be Watching You [MLP Grimdark Reading]
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- Опубликовано: 4 окт 2024
- This is by far the most disturbing story I have ever wandered across on Fimfiction, so I hope you all experience the same feeling I felt while reading this in my mind lol! Bit of a warning to those who are heavily paranoid of being watched by strangers. The following content contains heavily disturbing wording, so proceed at your own risk!
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Plot
Tender Taps has an obsession with Apple Bloom, and he will NO LONGER be ignored by the one he loves.
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Holy cow I really need to check my Fimfiction more often. Thank you for reading my story!
Not a problem! It was a disturbing read lol
Disturbing is exactly what I was going for so woo hoo!
If I were to have done it again I'd have truncated it a bit. It goes on for a wee bit too long, especially now that I'm hearing someone read it. There is a reason for why I made it that way, however I don't think the Easter Egg is worth messing with the pacing of the fic. Still I'm glad you liked it enough to do one of these! Only other one I know that has read one of my spookier fics was Lost Narrator with This Little Piggy.
Damn. Poor Applebloom!
the music made it so much worse lol xoxoox pretty good oxoxo
This is a downright yandere story
VGBC P3rs0na yes HELL YES
Yus that’s what I was thinking
He takes Stalking to the next level
moral of the story is... *chewing popcorn*
dont help others
or they might fall in love with you in a crazy way And also she need help
*exorcist theme song and wearing holy outfit* time to help her
Listened to this in the dark...
*continues to sob in a dark corner*
Pixel the Sea Doggo listened to it in the dark alone at mid night
Oh my god he sounds like an incel, neckbeard, and nice guy rolled into one
I now have a fear of tender taps
gamemaster3.0 me too
@@scootaloocutiemarkcrusader5405 me too
Twilight Sparkles princess of friendship I think we all do fear tender tap now
Scootaloo cutie Mark Crusaders We all fear tender tap now
I wonder if Button Mash or Rumble have stories like this about their significant others. (0:15)
M .W. K o please no I love tender taps so for button or rumble is going to far but the only other love I saw was grogar and colts shouldn't kiss
Well, if there is, I say...let us see.
M .W. K of course I would defenately see it especially BM but man this still hurts but I would defenately see the other 2 if it did come out
@@Mistymorning614 wait, is this from tender taps?
Holy shit, this is intense, so intense... Applebloom must be shaking in her fur right now.
Nikita Heredia Hence the thumbnail 😂
I shouldn’t have decided to listen to spooky pony stories when I went out for the walk...didn’t account for how quickly the sun would set...
Wonderful job as always, Sparrow.
It is so sad that so many humans think this way
P.S. *shudder*
John Stuart Campbell That's why it disturbed me when I read it the first time. It's relevant to today's society, normally ending in murder or suicide.
Tender Taps went full incel. You never go full incel.
Ok now this is one sick and disturbing love story I ever heard I wonder how applebloom reacted to tender's note.
Not really much she could do, as she's cursed with a poltergeist lol
@@Sparrow9642 well Applebloom might get use to it
Applebloom is like oh god what did I got myself into that what i see in applebloom shock of fear on her face
*insert “No thank you” vine*
I heard that love makes you go crazy but not like this
Matthew Jimenez love make every creature go crazy but not like this
Oh my god, this is so creepy! The mere thought of someone even thinking they have the slightest right to own me makes me wanna scream, so this tale really freaks me out in an angry way.
The scariest part is that people like this exist. Well, not people who kills themselves to become ghosts when you did not love them back, but people who become so obsessed with a person they in the end think they own that poor soul. It is just disgusting.
Nice reading!! Love it.^^
OM MY GOOOSH TANK YOU!!! I Swear I have listened to almost every mlp grimdark or darkfic on youtube and have been looking out for new ones for ages
Errr wow. I thought this was going to be about some living hellbeast. I think I'd prefer a hellbeast. This is like that Sting song, Every Breath You Take, I never liked because it was so creepy and the song of a stalker. Time to get Luna, Cadance, Twilight and Celestia involved! They'd be able to do something, right?
Time to call Danny Phantom.
This yandere simulator updates sounds cool
Yandere Colt
Sparrow my tip for the best music types for grimdark.
-Silence(Feeling being alone, and the feeling some things watching from a distance. "Its quite...to quite"
-Cheerful corrupted music (for the feeling of rushing scary adrenaline)
-Repeating sounds (like clock sound but every time you get closer to the end of the video it gets faster)
Ok this is true crime territory, holy crap, here's a horror story for October.
Danny Phantom would send him to the ghost zone.
and he would be with randy stair
Plot twist.
She was either insanely obvious because she had a hard time believing anypony would truly want her, or was trying her hardest to believe that he wasn't really this psycho and give him the benefit of the doubt.
It was either that or she knew and was just doing all of this to see how far he'd go to be with or for her.
Either way this was dark and I absolutely loved every second of it!!!
dang this pony character is so crazy in love with applebloom I would rather talk things out with that pony to where things won't go completely insane if I were applebloom then everything will back to normal.
See, this is why incels should never get ahold of magic...
I'm glad I waited these past days cus this was worth it! Livestream one day, fanart another, and then finally a grimdark the next! WOO!
Awesome Sparrow.
Huh :(
So you ended up doing this ^^’
Well it turned out fine dispute my worries with the timing you first mentioned to me wanting to review this, and it works now :3
i am planning a top ten MLP fanfics and i think i found one of my entries
This should be a series
Tender Taps: You think I'm a joke?
Me: yes
gottem
Decent Freestyle yes he is a joke
Still a better love story than Twilight
Flash Photo Reads twilight the vampire love story or flash sentry
Bilkis Habid I now fearTender tap now
Well...this doesn’t scream Yandere at all.
Welp time to call ‘THE GHOST RIDER’ he knows a thing or two about obliterating/killing souls.
What's scary is that Apple Bloom had no idea and now she has to live with the fact that she has a ghost watching/stalking her.
First pls don't do a button mash or rumble version of this I love tender taps and this was already painful and man I I was like OMG when I saw this and man this is amazing
Bruh, all she has to do, is become the ghost, (im not sure how to spell it, and am too lazy to look it up), herself. If she cant haunt him, at least she'll be free
No she'll be together with him in the afterlife and that's what he wants~!😏
really well Done I love the opening. first few words had me hooked
Applebloom: (Finishes reading the letter, than sighs) Granny! Get the proton pack! We got another one!
Granny: (offscreen) Oh Celestia's sake! This is the third one this month!
YANDERE TAPS
30 views? WHERE IS DA 30 LIKES?!?!?!?!?
Love it hope you make a part two of this❤❤❤❤❤💖💖💖💖💖💕💕💕💕🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹😍😍😍😍😍😍
Good grief tender! Lay off the creep vibe lol. Yikes
While this dude's delusional, , ,he does forget that there are such things as exorcists , gods and powerful princesses. Sooo yeah pretty sure Apple Bloom will report this lunatic's letter
Awesome reading :)
Is it wrong to drool from my yandere impulses~? Because this is not disturbing not one bit, it's beautiful~💖
Nomi Bunni it is beautiful, most likely he would have either really loved her, or would have gone crazy and abused her. who knows lol
Bella Chan Twisted destiny aside and overall, I love it~💙
Yes. But its ok. We all have our sins. I also find it romantic in a scary way.
I find this romantic in an odd way, but yandere don't exist, you're just a creep.
When the Senpai is the Yandere:
⚠️ Yandere Alert! ⚠️ (Spooky as always Sparrow! ♥️)
A cool and creepy concept that started off great, but the last 15 minutes were complete filler that just repeated the same thing over and over and over again. Utterly killed the mood.
I agree. When I first read the story, the whole concept seemed to drag out too long, but it legit made me feel uncomfortable at the same time. While it drags, it still hits
The story starts to get a little repetitive for me
Same. The only reason I really did it was because it legitimately made me feel uncomfortable when I read it for the first time. Even at points, the voice acting got a little TOO realistic
Notice me Applebloom senpai X3
Every day incel doing what incels does.
he watched waay too much egs
this isn't as bad as peaple make it out to be
How is it not bad??
CandiWolffe how is it not bad?
@@scootaloocutiemarkcrusader5405 twightlight sparkle really and celestia and luna....perks of being the sister of the element of honesty
R/niceguy
Yikes 😱
Incel mlp fanfiction is not something I thought I'd see.