A HFY Story : The Girl Next Door | 2174 ~Deathworld, War, Terran and Humans

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  • Опубликовано: 16 янв 2025

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  • @wngimageanddesign9546
    @wngimageanddesign9546 Год назад +28

    Oh she was a keeper when she could build a treehouse! Like finding a human girl who can overhaul a V8.

  • @zuzax1656
    @zuzax1656 Год назад +173

    A wonderful story, and a thought provoking one as well. If the book that Jeremy was reading was 'The Swiss Family Robinson', then the timeframe of this universe would be approximately our current one. Given that, and the usual nature of the HFY stories narrated here, when humanity finally reaches for the stars, we would have orcs and worgs beside us, as well as dogs and cats. I can imagine a whole new branch of stories from that.

    • @evilgasm5320
      @evilgasm5320 Год назад +11

      Excellent extrapolation!

    • @markfergerson2145
      @markfergerson2145 Год назад +5

      @@evilgasm5320Indeed. You reading this, author?

    • @BlackJack-qg3ws
      @BlackJack-qg3ws Год назад +14

      ​@@markfergerson2145I might dive further into this universe someday, but right now my "to be written" docket is a bit full. 😅
      Still, I'm glad you enjoyed it! 😁

    • @Sum-kj8jo
      @Sum-kj8jo Год назад +5

      ​@@BlackJack-qg3wskeep up the good stuff

    • @BlackJack-qg3ws
      @BlackJack-qg3ws Год назад +7

      ​@@Sum-kj8joWill do! I'm writing 4 chapters a week for my book, and 1 short story on Fridays more often than not. Got plenty of content to go! 😉

  • @beingsneaky
    @beingsneaky Год назад +142

    Every teenage boys dream 'Marry the girl next door'

    • @mbdzel
      @mbdzel Год назад +9

      It was 3 houses down..

    • @Kira_Laeloria
      @Kira_Laeloria Год назад +7

      and my dad actually did so

    • @maylabrown4584
      @maylabrown4584 Год назад +8

      I had that but it was the girl across the street to the right, I still remember her but never had the strength to tell her, but funnily enough not only did a girl across the street to the left of me apparently have a crush on me but so did a girl to my right that I also liked in return. It didn't go anywhere, her family was too different from mine and we just grew apart. I'll never forget that time though.

    • @KeithJones82
      @KeithJones82 Год назад +3

      Until she wound up pregnant at like 15 yeah.

    • @carlfranz6805
      @carlfranz6805 Год назад +1

      My girl next girl was a complete waistoid. Sigh.

  • @nooneofimportance2110
    @nooneofimportance2110 Год назад +75

    All jokes about orc waifus aside, I think this was a great story. Kinda hope the author expands on it a little bit more.

    • @BlackJack-qg3ws
      @BlackJack-qg3ws Год назад +13

      It's on my list of worlds to come back to, but that's a long list! I put out 4 chapters a week to my main series, right now "Of Men and Dragons" and save Fridays for one off stories. Right now I got about 20 to 30 one offs with the bare bones jotted down waiting to be written! 😅 too many ideas and not enough time, that's a first world problem for ya!

    • @nooneofimportance2110
      @nooneofimportance2110 Год назад +10

      @@BlackJack-qg3ws Oh Hell yes! Whenever you get the time and inspiration my dude. Quality can't be rushed, and I like what's on the page.
      I'm gonna have to check out that series.

    • @kitemaywilder1792
      @kitemaywilder1792 10 месяцев назад +1

      @@BlackJack-qg3wsholding my breath hoping for a follow up too ^^

    • @BlackJack-qg3ws
      @BlackJack-qg3ws 10 месяцев назад

      @@kitemaywilder1792 Well, I havent gotten back to this one YET. Atm I'm working on my new story, Of Men and Spiders, (lots of cute and wholsome moments with a few heavy and serious ones for spice) but a little while back I did write a two part "light horror" story about a man who suspected his girlfriend might be a wendigo that actualy ended in a pretty sweet and wholsome way. "My Girlfriend Never Eats" is part one if you wanna give it a gander.

  • @j.vincentlee9578
    @j.vincentlee9578 Год назад +48

    Those are the kind of stories I like… adaptability and proper moral values.. Thank You.

  • @MidnightSmoke
    @MidnightSmoke Год назад +91

    A romance story for today, well done. Here is a like and comment to help your channel grow and get you the recognition you deserve.

  • @MrTiberus1701
    @MrTiberus1701 Год назад +44

    I remember playing D&D as a young lad back in the early 80’s and wondering what Elven and Orcish girls would be like. This would be a cool world to live in.

    • @12gagebastis
      @12gagebastis Год назад +6

      elves would maybe like us and depends on the type of orc and which universe.

  • @jeffreyharris3440
    @jeffreyharris3440 Год назад +8

    Terriers were bred to hunt mice, rats and other vermin. The smaller size helps to hunt around the food storage and home rather than the fields.

  • @nickpossum3607
    @nickpossum3607 Год назад +7

    As sweet as shepherd's pie, body like the farmer's daughter and can Hit like a MACK Truck!
    Jeremy, you didn't hit the Jackpot, you got the Whole Dang Slot Machine thrown at you from a moving vehicle!
    Good on yah man!

  • @Nerdcoresteve1
    @Nerdcoresteve1 Год назад +34

    Loving the wholesome stories like this and skeleman.

    • @GyorBox
      @GyorBox Год назад +1

      Yes, I agree. This one and Skelleman both were a couple of good stories.

  • @crazycatboysolomon7006
    @crazycatboysolomon7006 Год назад +11

    16:05 I like to imagine that Naz wasn't actually at all concerned about the prospect of fighting in school, she just wanted to show off what she learned in human class

    • @geoshark12
      @geoshark12 Год назад

      The problem was the fact that she would have to be careful especially since the teachers didn’t seem too fond or orks

  • @timothyterrell1658
    @timothyterrell1658 Год назад +17

    That was significantly cuter and far better done then I anticipated. Thanks for that.😂

  • @Maeshalanadae
    @Maeshalanadae Год назад +40

    Only thing is, when you’re greeting new orc neighbors, I’d imagine they’d appreciate a nice pork roast or such more.

    • @randolphphillips3104
      @randolphphillips3104 Год назад +3

      Don't roast it. Walk it over alive.

    • @ShneekeyTheLost
      @ShneekeyTheLost Год назад +5

      Then I'll extend my southern hospitality by offering a smoked brisket, and introduce them to BBQ.

    • @Maeshalanadae
      @Maeshalanadae Год назад +1

      @@ShneekeyTheLost
      Now that’s the mark of true friendship. Nothing better than a good authentic barbecue.

  • @Danodan94
    @Danodan94 Год назад +3

    When I saw the name and thumbnail I thought to myself "Oh no. Agro's posting thirst..."
    Wonderful story by the way!!

  • @BlackJack-qg3ws
    @BlackJack-qg3ws Год назад +6

    Always good to hear another one of my stories from ago! For the algorithm!

  • @henrythered3139
    @henrythered3139 Год назад +11

    Just lovely

  • @christophercunningham3679
    @christophercunningham3679 Год назад +12

    For a story about ORC SMASH this was borderline terminally wholesome and sweet.
    Nearly had dirt in my eye.

  • @jeanannd
    @jeanannd Год назад +45

    Orcs as next door neighbors? As a kid I'd have loved playing with young orcs. We could go imagine great battles through out the neighborhood. Tug a rope would be great, or tie a rope to a tree and swing on it. Jeremy could put the book away for a while. It will still be there later. The orc girl - bike riding and fun is NOW!!!! How wonderful, childhood friends and sweethearts grow up and marry.

    • @alganhar1
      @alganhar1 Год назад +1

      I would not have, like the Jeremy in the story I was a book worm.... a book worm who ran marathons, but still a book worm. The point of this story is it was about MUTUAL respect. Jeremy had his interests, Naz had hers, they met in the middle....

  • @someoneawesome8717
    @someoneawesome8717 Год назад +4

    Dash being a Terrier means he would absolutely hunt, but his prey would be something like rabbits (or in my doggo's case possums and raccoons

  • @toraxmalu
    @toraxmalu Год назад +4

    🤣 - your face at 23:18 🤣👍it fits so perfectly to the "usually"! - thank you for reading it, was a relly nice story.

  • @Wotan874
    @Wotan874 Год назад +7

    For the Story, for the Author, for the Narrator for the Algorithm! A great story, I love it! I could write so much more, but others already were faster expressing all my thoughts.

  • @tarsinsigmundson2714
    @tarsinsigmundson2714 Год назад +3

    Amongst a range of good stories that one stands out .

  • @rafaelsanches501
    @rafaelsanches501 Год назад +4

    Finally, some orc appreciation, love this story.

  • @greanstreak04
    @greanstreak04 Год назад +33

    Your enthusiasm for narration is very entertaining. As I have said before, the new format with your expressive POV is perfectly rendered keep it up and you will succeed...

    • @widdershins5383
      @widdershins5383 Год назад +1

      I really wonder how many takes some of these are, it looks like he does it all, different voices included, in one go. Very impressive lol

  • @QuakeMidaro
    @QuakeMidaro Год назад +6

    Need more of these style of stories it's all around a good one and puts a smile in the face

  • @anticarrrot
    @anticarrrot Год назад +22

    "Ray, if a girl your own age asks 'Do you want to wrestle?', you say 'YES'!"

    • @blackg0076
      @blackg0076 Год назад +7

      well maybe after a few months of building up muscle mass.

    • @MidnightDStroyer
      @MidnightDStroyer 9 месяцев назад

      That's probably the kind of "trouble" Naz was thinking about, there at the end of the story but only *after* getting back home from Thom's dinner...
      😉

    • @samsignorelli
      @samsignorelli 8 месяцев назад

      I read that in Winston's voice!!

  • @maelglorious
    @maelglorious Год назад +30

    Well, this is an absolutely new take on marrying the tomboy nextdoor neighbor. Never expected to consider greenskins "cute".

    • @nightmarereaper5601
      @nightmarereaper5601 Год назад +4

      Never thought feet would look "cute" but apparently there is someone who likes that

    • @nooneofimportance2110
      @nooneofimportance2110 Год назад +8

      Maybe he's just into muscle chicks. Or more likely, he loves the girl for who she is.

    • @timothyterrell1658
      @timothyterrell1658 Год назад +7

      The color of ones skin is not nearly as important as the color of ones spirit.
      10 on the outside,2 on the inside,...Pass it by...
      Remember this.5 on the outside plus 8 on the inside is a 13..
      A 13 is very good...🤨

    • @markfergerson2145
      @markfergerson2145 Год назад +2

      @@timothyterrell1658This. If only today’s humans could manage it…

    • @ratzelbarreto2070
      @ratzelbarreto2070 Год назад +1

      Flashbacks to UP opening story, hitting me hard here. Please it late at night for me to cry.

  • @leonievanheerden7090
    @leonievanheerden7090 Год назад +11

    Another uplifting and sweet/funny story ❣️ For the author and narrator 💐⭐⭐💐

  • @NinaJnoland
    @NinaJnoland Год назад +16

    Truly an awesome story!!! Hit me in the feels!!! Good stuff!!!! ❤❤❤

  • @Kualinar
    @Kualinar Год назад +3

    That's a fun one. Had me laughing and giggling.

  • @Zael_Moonblade
    @Zael_Moonblade Год назад +2

    Ah! The Swiss Family Robinson! Such a good book especially in 'Classics' format!

  • @MyrdinAnnoth
    @MyrdinAnnoth Год назад +3

    Well written and executed. Also love the happy ending haha.
    In fact this was one of those stories that you just want to see more of. All the "in between" the beginning and the end in fact!
    Hope the author decides to write more on the adventures of these two from being kids to growing up, getting together and all that jazz.

  • @islemrebiai9188
    @islemrebiai9188 Год назад +4

    Yep, this right here the best romance story I've ever read in my whole life 😊😄💯

  • @walterroche8192
    @walterroche8192 Год назад +20

    The annoying problem with multiple races is that whole 'aging' issue! An elf who looks 20 could be 12-700 yo. A 10 to Oni girl could look 15-19! A dwarf guy could look 8 but be an 'adult' of 45! Lots of remembering how old who is and finding 'polite' ways to ask! 😆

    • @nvfury13
      @nvfury13 Год назад +8

      Thing is, you have to individually ask with humans too. I went to High School with a girl who was 15 and looked like a rough late 30s, while her mother was in her late 30s and looked about 16. Also had a teacher you’d swear was a student, but was in her 40s; and other teachers that looked like they were rounding 50 but were in their mid to late 20s.

    • @ShneekeyTheLost
      @ShneekeyTheLost Год назад +3

      I think there was an anime that took this on in an interesting manner. The viewpoint wasn't the 'hero', but one of his supporting cast, the elven mage. Who had a lifespan into the centuries, and a centuries long view on things. When the hero passed from old age, it prompted her to go on and finish other projects she'd put aside to help him out. The age gap and the different perspective in time flow is a central element.

    • @JacenHawk
      @JacenHawk Год назад

      @@ShneekeyTheLost that series does not yet have an anime adaptation, it is coming later this year.

    • @juliusnesakysiu4778
      @juliusnesakysiu4778 Год назад

      ​@@JacenHawkwhat is it called?

    • @JacenHawk
      @JacenHawk Год назад

      @@juliusnesakysiu4778 Sousou no Frieren, anike airs this Sep.

  • @rainynight02
    @rainynight02 Год назад +1

    That was way more adorable than I expected it to be!

  • @LegendStormcrow
    @LegendStormcrow Год назад +3

    Made me smile, friend.

  • @alganhar1
    @alganhar1 Год назад

    That was actually a rather sweet story.
    One thing I will say though, is Terriers were actually hunting dogs. Most Terrier breeds were bred as vermin hunters. Mostly rats, which is why many terriers are small, though not all of them.

  • @Xerdar36
    @Xerdar36 Год назад +9

    Human married, a female orc… he was a man of culture I see…

    • @BlackJack-qg3ws
      @BlackJack-qg3ws Год назад +3

      I seem to have a habit of writing stories with strong female characters... the original story link ageo posted has a link to my wiki if you wanna read more of them. (And maybe talk agro into reading more too. Of course, he's already read several, but there's still plenty to go!)

    • @appachaihoppachai1246
      @appachaihoppachai1246 Год назад +2

      Brother was living the dream.

  • @hammerspace8866
    @hammerspace8866 7 месяцев назад

    I just listened to this story again. I just feels good to come back to story like this once in awhile. I just like agro squirrel's reading of this story. It's a pity I can only give it 1 tumbs up.

  • @wasa1207
    @wasa1207 Год назад +2

    da red unz go fasta!

  • @13thBear
    @13thBear Год назад

    That’s a good one. I like it. It’s a nice twist on the usual characteristics of human/orc relations. And, yes, Virginia! That’s where half orcs come from!

  • @PanduPoluan
    @PanduPoluan Год назад

    Ahh, such a cute and wholesome story! A nice change of pace 😊
    Really like how we not only made peace with orcs but also actively integrating... in more ways than one 😄

  • @soubigo
    @soubigo Год назад +2

    this story warmed my heart X3

  • @reighniz4488
    @reighniz4488 Год назад +1

    Oddly enough despite my general distaste for fantasy style stories like this I really love everything about this one.

    • @geoshark12
      @geoshark12 Год назад

      Probably because its written quite well and seems to be more of an urban fantasy ( fantasy aspects in the modern day) well the ones that are not doing the hidden world trope anyways
      Might be something to look into

  • @johnmccarty5315
    @johnmccarty5315 Год назад +3

    That was a great story. I really enjoyed that.👍

  • @thelaughinghyenas8465
    @thelaughinghyenas8465 Год назад +2

    I really liked that story. Thank you!

  • @normiesalvador1854
    @normiesalvador1854 Год назад +1

    This was wholesome.

  • @draconusspiritus1037
    @draconusspiritus1037 Год назад +11

    You ain't never been hugged till you been hugged by an Orc Female.

    • @maelglorious
      @maelglorious Год назад +6

      You ain't never considered how important your ribcage is till you been hugged by an orc female.

    • @williamcastro3017
      @williamcastro3017 Год назад +2

      That will pop You’re ear drums! 😁👍🏽

    • @draconusspiritus1037
      @draconusspiritus1037 Год назад

      @@williamcastro3017 cheaper than a chiropractor

  • @pauldockins9635
    @pauldockins9635 Год назад +3

    That was excellent

  • @wrenchpony9735
    @wrenchpony9735 Год назад +2

    Well that was surprisingly cute.

  • @jfpalermo
    @jfpalermo Год назад +2

    Great story!!!!! Thoroughly enjoyed it!!!!!

  • @lunkystraydog6572
    @lunkystraydog6572 Год назад

    what a life to have lived............... my man is a God amongst men

  • @Obligate.Carnivore
    @Obligate.Carnivore Год назад

    What a fun and enjoyable story! Really loved it. I’ve always had a thing for Orcs just never had the guts to try!!

  • @GyorBox
    @GyorBox Год назад +2

    This was a pretty good story, actually.. 😅

    • @BlackJack-qg3ws
      @BlackJack-qg3ws Год назад

      You sounded like you doubted it would be... I find your lack of faith disturbing! 😉

  • @scotthinger6397
    @scotthinger6397 Год назад +2

    A very good story Sir. Well done!! I am so glad I found you on YT! Thank you so very much for what you do and how well you do it!!!

  • @nexrese1160
    @nexrese1160 Год назад +2

    Thanks fam! It's a cute n wholesome story I didn't know I needed. Stay awesome

  • @whimsicallychrissy
    @whimsicallychrissy Год назад

    Cute. The story would probably do good expanded into a book, I know I would read it.

  • @timfielder9893
    @timfielder9893 Год назад +2

    That was a wonderful, and unique, story! More please

  • @gearhead1807
    @gearhead1807 Год назад +2

    Quality content

  • @maitemarinseguer8558
    @maitemarinseguer8558 Год назад

    Wonderful story! I must say that I miss seing you painting or ordering cards and your tatoos, I'm still getting uded in seeing your face

  • @Keith_WB2VUO
    @Keith_WB2VUO Год назад

    Ah, probably not a series, but this would be a great one! One can hope, and when I send the link for this story to my son-in-law, he's just going to add to the "CrazyCrap Dad likes & does" list, heh...

  • @christopherandera2039
    @christopherandera2039 Год назад +1

    That seems like it would be a worth wild anime

  • @LDSG_A_Team
    @LDSG_A_Team Год назад +1

    That was so adorable. Kudos to the author, and thank you for sharing it with us :)

  • @barelyasurvivor1257
    @barelyasurvivor1257 Год назад +1

    A great story, and a great concept.

  • @wavegun
    @wavegun Год назад

    Charming and instructive. Exactly why i tune in! Thanks again, Agro!

  • @Psalmster023
    @Psalmster023 Год назад +1

    A very cute story!

  • @HavocPrime8989
    @HavocPrime8989 Год назад

    This was a cute story. I like these cross species romances, probably due to watching Gargoyles growing up...

  • @RealArcalian
    @RealArcalian Год назад

    Greetings, Mentlegent!
    For the Rhyhtm that is Algo
    Yeah, it was pretty clear Naz had decided which way their relationship would go.

  • @scottclark3761
    @scottclark3761 Год назад +3

    Yeah.....humans will bone anybody. We're that way. And we'll bond to anyone. Even things. Pretty much the way it would work. Good story! Boy meets Girl.....classic.

  • @renaissancepress247
    @renaissancepress247 Год назад +1

    Good one

  • @allenw794
    @allenw794 Год назад +1

    I rather like that one. I hope we get more slice of weird life stories.

  • @stupidclipsinc.2269
    @stupidclipsinc.2269 Год назад

    NOW THIS
    this a great story
    i hope this person gets all the attention he deserves for this, cause this is a great story
    such fluent storytelling
    great work on the steriotypes
    great ending
    this guy has so nuch potential
    i hope they will write more cause this work is addicting to say the least.

  • @norby511
    @norby511 Год назад +1

    that was a good one

  • @chrisreadwells
    @chrisreadwells Год назад +1

    Wholesome.

  • @MatthewScur
    @MatthewScur Год назад

    Good story, made my heart smile. Thanks for reading it for us.

  • @theblackswan2373
    @theblackswan2373 Год назад +1

    Delightful

  • @lettmien218
    @lettmien218 Год назад +1

    Adorable

  • @CaptainShield
    @CaptainShield Год назад

    Love is love.

  • @alanblack6500
    @alanblack6500 Год назад +1

    This was a very fun and sweet story, loved it, thank you.

  • @bananabreadguy7960
    @bananabreadguy7960 Год назад +2

    Anime alternative title : "That time when an orc girl moved into my neighborhood"

  • @t3h_m0nk3y
    @t3h_m0nk3y 5 месяцев назад

    Resistencia a 3rd time really enjoy this story

  • @SnowKing1823
    @SnowKing1823 Год назад

    Love your voice !! I listen to stories like these alot on the sides , but ur voice actually makes me pay attention aswell !
    It perfect for story telling !
    Big thumbs up , and keep up the amazing stuff!

  • @ArcangelOrtiz
    @ArcangelOrtiz Год назад

    Cool story. Thanks for sharing.

  • @chrstfer2452
    @chrstfer2452 Год назад +1

    Oh this is a fun one

  • @dragon1011dk
    @dragon1011dk Год назад

    Soo Sweet! Loved this story.

  • @Dragonbear13-k2r
    @Dragonbear13-k2r Год назад

    Delightful story!

  • @sinpathicenderson1198
    @sinpathicenderson1198 Год назад

    wow that was suprisingly good

  • @damienjeremytrotman84
    @damienjeremytrotman84 Год назад +1

    "Death by Snu Snu" is the best, most honorable death a human male can receive.

  • @phillipnorton2929
    @phillipnorton2929 2 месяца назад

    Really like this one

  • @bufordbaberiii2398
    @bufordbaberiii2398 Год назад

    That was a fantastic one!!

  • @robertbemis9800
    @robertbemis9800 Год назад +5

    Terriers we’re raised to be ratters

  • @jimmycoyote74
    @jimmycoyote74 Год назад

    Nice one. And for the algorithm

  • @allensheets9369
    @allensheets9369 Год назад

    what a great story

  • @allenmorgan1007
    @allenmorgan1007 Год назад +1

    For the Algorithm, for the Author(s), for the Holographic Voice!

  • @Sum-kj8jo
    @Sum-kj8jo Год назад

    Aaaahhhhhh, the good stuff.....

  • @mikecoatsworth6048
    @mikecoatsworth6048 Год назад +1

    I saw the worg as soon as they wrote vet.

  • @danachim5932
    @danachim5932 Год назад +1

    superb

  • @johnmac4769
    @johnmac4769 Год назад

    love this. third time watching.

  • @allanmonroe692
    @allanmonroe692 Год назад

    Good story!

  • @acefire4050
    @acefire4050 Год назад +1

    11 hours ago my house caught on fire destroyed it and it's all over the internet and I hear it was on some news. I'm nearly broke.