Drift Away - OC Animatic
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- Опубликовано: 11 сен 2024
- I'm planning to do a Webtoon comic, but i need to think more about the story, so someone can read it without drinking a cup of bleach.
Characters:
Leslie
Elizabeth
Matthew
Song:
Steven Universe The Movie - Drift Away (feat.Sarah Stiles)
Cover by: Caleb Hyles
My Instagram: @denisem0ch
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This really is a sad OC story
He was happy,truly happy to be with the lady.
But shown that the lady found another man and must have forgotten the are boy over here.
Truly heartbreaking.
To be honest this just reminded me that no matter in the multi verse. Our world and many different worlds is that everyone been through shit that made them snap! And should be loved no matter what are flaws are...
Your right what do you think that guy is going to do to get revenge?
@@BigKoznolaCT hopefully nothing because you don't need revenge
If she doesn't want him I'll take him for myself--
He's so adorable and sweet, and he was happy but that girl--
>:V I'm angry--
I’m your..400th like ! :)
@@yee7529 revenge makes you feel free in the end
I would totally read a webtoon with this theme, specially if it had a dark atmosphere towards the boy of the video
Dreeeeeeeeeeeeft away
DREEEIIIIEEEEEFFFTT AWAYYY
Caleb
This poor lover-boy...You could tell he loved this lady...He deserves better then what he got...
That was outrageous! That was so cruel... and they even kissed on front of him, they even chose that spot.
It is worse because she says "hey wait over their and one day we'll go out" instead of saying she didn't like him
I feel like she should have said that instead of letting him wait for her for who knows how long.
@@sheltienightmare4616 exactly
To be honest, I'm hooked. Whats going on? why did she leave, is he some kind of tinkerer? I can't wait to see more, and the story looks so cool too!
I can't wait either
Hi yes I’d like to see where this goes because he went from sunshine to angst boi in like a couple of frames and I went “🥺 oh no babie”
Holy cow, this is intense!! *cries* The animation perfectly with the song and I really like your style, but JEEZ LOOK AT THOSE EXPRESSIONS THEY ARE STELLAR
I feel really bad for Leslie tho 😢
I'm so happy, that you like it. ❤
Excellent video! I felt each of the boy's emotions: his happiness, his hopes, his love for the girl ... all of that, and then I felt the sadness, the anger and the helplessness of seeing her with another man. It perfectly reflected the theme of "Drift away". I hope to see a continuation, Greetings!
I feel so bad, because while Spinel's mad by Rose being her boss, the dude was sad because he actually loved her like- I feel so freaking bad-
I mean rose was kinda spinels mom so uh this makes you more sad probs
This is the first OC story that caught my attention!.
I really like the storyline!, keep it up and it could be a success!
He really needs a hug
I almost cried at this
Oh my goodness.
This is such a beautiful and sad story!
It really is the best OC animatics of Drift Away I've ever seen.
Basically: This is underrated :)
Probably the most relatable version of this song for me, who also just had someone who had gone after someone else after having said yes to being in a relationship with me.
Poor boy deserves a true kinda love and that’s the truth.
I think we have similar character backgrounds
I too have an immortal lad who gets deserted by a maiden
but mine kinda dies of old age
See the thing is mine thought that the lass was immortal
@@raspberrycrowns9494 but She wasnt? Oh thats even more sad if She didnt mean to leave him
@@liseegeskov8769 yeah, don't worry tho he gets better and she lives a happy life before she dies
This wasn’t supposed to hit me that hard.
But here I am crying anyways-
Wow, this broke my heart and I'm usually not sensitive especially not to videos or animations. Great job👌keep up the great work
I hope you make a webtoon. You're gonna do great if it's anything like this animatic!!!
I love it ur so talented dont worry soon ull get alot of veiwers :3 just wait an while
This is so well-made. The expressions are lovely and convey the emotion so well.
Have more confidence in your self!
Story (please correct me on my mistakes)
It was a Sunny morning..Birds chirping in site.
She slowly walked up the mountain to the home where her and her lover lived..
As she opens her garden door, she see’s her Love!
But..Her intention is happy as you may see it to be. She tell’s him ‘you see this garden? Well.. I need you to wait for me. As long as it takes, I want you to wait.’
And just like that, he stood there. Hours on end, sleeping little through the night.
*he gave up*
*2 years later*
He see’s her..Finally Something new! About how this story ends..She is with a new man..Survived by her son, With all of our old friends..
The end.
(hi! Idk why I made this, it’s my first time writing something like this lol. Please help me out and correct me. Also, it’s short since it’s a summery of what happened lol, I hope this was ok! Have a good day or night :). )
I feel that he is the boy that was waiting is going to be the villain
This is amazing! Your style is so beautiful and well made, and the animatic have so much emotion! I loved it!
Me watching this like: feelings go brrrr
I’m in freaking love with this omg
Looks like a male version of himiko yuemeno. I love it.
This is pretty darn good, keep it up!! that boy 'bout to make my tear ducts act up 😔
oh my gosh I love this
OMG THIS IS BEAUTIFUL I LOVE IT YOU EARNED A NEW SUB I'M FANGIRLINGGGGG!
i know 1. i’m very late and 2. oc animatic but the second i saw the thumbnail my mind went “over exaggerated joxter” and now its stuck in my head as i watch
My heart hurts for him. He didn't deserve that. Oh my god poor baby.
Yo quiero ver cómo continúa esto 💔,me encantó
This made me cry, so sad😭
Aight,I’m just gonna go to the corner and cry
I want to hug that poor little men
Its so beautiful buddy :3
Hopefully this will get contiqued. I want to know what happens next.
She's fruckin' dead and he never even bothered to look to see if she was okay, having only a kind look and a "cya later" to go by in regards to her; so all he gets is some dude who claims or that he assumes that might or might not be a relation born to her wandering into the forest glen and leaving again, a supposed life full of friends imagined that nay likely to have even existed. Heck, she didn't even live long enough to see that "son" grow up. He's right that he was a fool to have happily listened and stayed as he might have left and kept her from dying in a ditch from a falling tree branch or some such.
I mean your not doing it right if your not standing still
LMFAO
You had to do it to 'em din't ya?
cool animatic bro
I literally just saw this and I’m amazed!! Were you ever able to make the webtoon?
I would like to, but i still have some plot holes, that i need to fill and think more about the characters and stuff. Until that, i will be doing oc animatics of what i have. xd
I’m sorry but *drrrrreeefffftttt*
Love this!!!
*Hugs Leslie* I like you *Gives him a handkerchief*
Aw poor baby
Wow he's so cute
He said dreeeeeeeeeft
crying in da club rn
I want to see other friends right now!
This boi is getting a cookie as well as a horse to take him to town so he can find a girl who cares!
so cool!!!
Man, this is amazing! Could you do other friends at this point?
0:24 got'em
deep
DREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEFT
awæ
Cops be like: this is a crime
Me: Dont cry dont cry *bursted to tears* NOOOoOoooo MAh PooR BAbY ChILd he dont deserve that 😭😭😭
So what is Leslie plan for revenge? And can you do other friends please
Хмм, очень даже не плохое видео, даже не понимаю почему так мало просмотров, я бы уже подзадолбался рисовать столько кадров, видно старание, продолжайте в том же духе \(owO)/.
(Хотя боже мой, кто из этих англичан поймёт мой комментарий, зачем я его вообще пишу... Наверно просто так)
That's rough buddy
It’s 2 am
and this is why I am crying? I thought it would be because my friends dog died . _ .
I'm crying so f*ck hard now...
Can we get part two
Part two has been up for 2 years ^^
Opps
l love this ls ls amazing
😢 Estuvo triste
While everyone has a good opinion this is for certain. Every guy version is the best version.
Omg that Is so sad 🥺🥺🥺
Ahhh where's part two
I'm already planning. 😅 But i'll most likely post it only on Vlare.
Can you do other friends please
Is he immortal?
0.24 ik you all saw it
OwO to úžasný ale smutný :
U see i tell u :D
Why does he say drift like that
😭😭😭😭😭😭
please......OTHER FRIEEEEEEEND
:"v pobre vato :v
The voice is much more weirder
The smiles are creeepy
Dreeeeeeift
Do others friend please
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Simp?
Yes, he is the simpiest simp of all simps.