Vocal Melody Hack - Songwriting Tips // How To Write Better Songs

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  • Опубликовано: 25 ноя 2024

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  • @1BobbyK
    @1BobbyK 3 года назад +55

    4am and I can't get no sleep, searches for songwriting and melodic tips then finds this jewel 🙏🏾 thank you brudda!

    • @1BobbyK
      @1BobbyK 3 года назад

      Just followed Ur IG so I can see more content. powers bruh✊🏾

    • @e10nexthated54
      @e10nexthated54 Год назад

      Same is currently 04:20 in the uk😂😂

  • @Auxxy
    @Auxxy 3 года назад +119

    honestly ive trashed hundreds of songs bc when i try to think about myself and how i feel it discourages me. i can never put my feeling into words. i can write soke bs with a hook and verse for some views but i’ve been on break for 2 years trying to find myself really

    • @thebugguy6397
      @thebugguy6397 3 года назад +15

      i feel you bro ....you feel like what you are saying really dont have alot of emotional "meat" behind it.....i feel like people who can have like some secret sauce.

  • @babu9547
    @babu9547 3 года назад +286

    80% of my songs are unfinished. When the hook is done i vault it.

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад +54

      At least you’ll have hella hooks to pull from

    • @dapthekid4126
      @dapthekid4126 3 года назад +62

      Im opposite 🤣 i got verses out the ass but my hooks aint shit

    • @aw__ar3812
      @aw__ar3812 3 года назад

      Same😭

    • @AlexCat_Videos
      @AlexCat_Videos 3 года назад +3

      just combine them into a song

    • @iamRayel
      @iamRayel 3 года назад +7

      @@SKYJORDXN fax once the hook done it’s easy to me

  • @angelbatista310
    @angelbatista310 3 года назад +35

    6:53
    Ayee you was on beat “don’t force yourself, don’t rush”
    sounded lowkey fire

  • @danieltomas4551
    @danieltomas4551 3 года назад +25

    "If you don't know what metaphors are you better go back to school" ICY💎

  • @AnikallyMade
    @AnikallyMade 3 года назад +13

    For me it's flow. I'm a r&b singer and it's flow and how to sing the song...I'm aware that it should be in your range but that's my struggle. .good with lyrical content.

  • @kamarimillison8371
    @kamarimillison8371 2 года назад +11

    I make my own beats, mix my own vocals, and do my own covers. I think what stonewalls me is that I think too much about the finished product instead of enjoying the process of creating. I get hella anxious tryna make sure everything is polished, I end up getting burnt out really early

  • @sinndinero8260
    @sinndinero8260 3 года назад +30

    I find beats and then make a hook...then come back some time later and make a verse..then all of a sudden I don’t know else put in my next verse. So now most of my songs are unfinished

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад +19

      What you could do is throw like a bridge after the 2nd chorus and jump back Into the chorus. Most songs today don’t really need a 2nd verse. You can be creative and piece together something different

    • @mikeylowell4094
      @mikeylowell4094 3 года назад +3

      Try doing it all in one sitting I recommend

    • @youngcorthegamer871
      @youngcorthegamer871 3 года назад

      Same here

    • @Biggz317
      @Biggz317 Год назад

      It’s ok we all have just push your self to get just that one song done don’t start another until done

  • @riszetriple8697
    @riszetriple8697 4 года назад +49

    This was right on time
    Tips for being more melodic in my natural tone with out singing since i can sing its hard to make the autotune sound like i want it

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  4 года назад +8

      Risze Triple 8 when messing with the Autotune etc do you mess around with different octaves in your voice ?

    • @riszetriple8697
      @riszetriple8697 4 года назад +2

      @@SKYJORDXN its depends on the song but i dont really think about it that much i just do it but since yu ask that ima put more thought into voice control

    • @2G-Official
      @2G-Official 4 года назад +1

      Is it possible to transition to melodic rapping?

    • @riszetriple8697
      @riszetriple8697 4 года назад

      @@2G-Official anything is possible yu can do what ever yu set ya mind to just gotta put the work in

    • @2G-Official
      @2G-Official 4 года назад +4

      What i mean is i can't sing

  • @richardfreddy9144
    @richardfreddy9144 3 года назад +38

    Needed this, this was spot on and a good refresher. Learning from you everyday

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад +3

      Appreciate you, just trying to make content help ppl think about what can work for them

  • @christopherjohnson8345
    @christopherjohnson8345 3 года назад +17

    im glad you started this series your giving the advice that we cant find in the book and i like this

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад +3

      For sure just gonna be trying to research and bring ya’ll the best info I can find

  • @killzosia
    @killzosia 3 года назад +3

    ive just started making music and this guy is the best for improvement

  • @alde7631
    @alde7631 3 года назад +3

    Thank you for not being selfish with your knowledge

  • @SaugaSen
    @SaugaSen 3 года назад +3

    I’m think I’m pretty fye at song writing it’s more so the mix for me and making everything sounding cohesive

  • @babyjiren3426
    @babyjiren3426 3 года назад +1

    Bro u changed me.I used to think that I have to rush myself to right a verse but now I took my time and I’m good.

  • @trippyfuckintrent4171
    @trippyfuckintrent4171 3 года назад +61

    I always get tired of the beat after hearing it over and over again and the vibe never comes back

    • @Wearesobackbro
      @Wearesobackbro 3 года назад +8

      I had the same problem for a while. I usual write a lil bit on the first few listens then pause it and try and just keep the flow while writing. Then ill put the beat back on and see if it works.

    • @Wearesobackbro
      @Wearesobackbro 3 года назад +3

      Its hard to describe im sorry but i just want to help lol

    • @ZombieSushy
      @ZombieSushy 3 года назад +2

      write as much you can on that beat that you like . then when u feel stagnant. come back to it. you might see something new the next time

    • @sigstunna9595
      @sigstunna9595 3 года назад

      @@ZombieSushy this is true you might find another word that you wanna replace it with ive done this and it helps a lot

    • @Sumrztragic
      @Sumrztragic 3 года назад

      @@Wearesobackbro i freestyle and use the best parts

  • @simonafullinfaw9730
    @simonafullinfaw9730 3 года назад +39

    Oh this was really helpful. Thank you for opening my eyes.
    Often, I find myself just blank in terms of the melody or the lyrics. I've got good instrumentals but I feel like no melody is good enough for the track and so I keep discarding them. I once ended up with nearly 50 versions of a chorus and then I just ran out of steam and the song went back on the shelf. Most of my songs remain incomplete because I keep discarding ideas for not being good enough. It's like an insecurity growing to be a paranoia.
    I'd finish the day with something I like but when I listen to it the next day, I don't like it as much. Is that normal? And then I end up chasing the next melody. Where do you draw a line when it comes to the self-critic?

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад +6

      It’s normal to doubt yourself or think the songs aren’t good enough. From what I’ve read I’d suggest you stop worrying about it not being good enough and finish a song even if the song isn’t good because you don’t have to put everything you record out. The goal should be to get consistent with finishing a song because you can always improve the writing and melody. You’re always going to be hard on yourself but that’s natural but it’s okay to not be perfect. Sometimes it’s better to freewrite or just record top line to find hidden inspiration or lines that connect with a song. But the goal short term is to not be so hard on yourself and get into the habit of finishing songs

    • @simonafullinfaw9730
      @simonafullinfaw9730 3 года назад +1

      @@SKYJORDXN Got it. Priority is to finish the songs. Imma work on that.
      Will keep you updated on the progress👍
      Thank you for your reassuring comment and video🙂

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад +2

      No problem, I’m just here to help ppl find themselves n better themselves.

  • @yungemmyfly
    @yungemmyfly 3 года назад +4

    I appreciate you for this bruva and I already do this thats why my unreleased hits harder than I started but I’m having problems with creating melodies.. I don’t wanna repeat melodies

  • @zanefaithofficial6703
    @zanefaithofficial6703 3 года назад +1

    I'm just watching this video and I figured out too was a to fix my songs

  • @Teyloh
    @Teyloh 2 года назад

    Than k you for the advice about consistency. My old songs all were all over the place.

  • @247RIPPA
    @247RIPPA 3 года назад +3

    Thanks Bossssss ...Best advice I've gotten in a looooooooong time ... keep inspirin' !!!! Peace bro all the way from Switzerland

  • @rainbow2519
    @rainbow2519 3 года назад +8

    Mane i needed this shit ✅. When u said too many words can throw the vibe off . And don’t rush . 💯 and give your self time ✅

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад +3

      Glad you watched and enjoyed the video I appreciate you

    • @rainbow2519
      @rainbow2519 3 года назад

      @@SKYJORDXN no problem stay blessed 🤍

  • @shainsaw3698
    @shainsaw3698 4 года назад +1

    Maaan this channel is so golden, there is not much songwriting content on youtube especially hip hop type of stuff, bless!

  • @kekeandmeme9777
    @kekeandmeme9777 3 года назад +2

    Thankyou for this mane I watched this whole thing🔥🔥

  • @charliemmaddox
    @charliemmaddox 2 года назад +1

    i struggle finding like different melodies they sound really similar usually

  • @xxR4in
    @xxR4in 2 года назад

    Sky always drop gems

  • @itzdreofficial6913
    @itzdreofficial6913 3 года назад

    metaphors and staying on subject in my verses

  • @DaitonReed
    @DaitonReed 4 года назад +1

    your lessons are slept on

  • @mariannethompson8851
    @mariannethompson8851 3 года назад +2

    Sometimes the verse gets me...sometimes I can't get a hook...so i struggle on both ends...i find it hard to get inspired sometimes...

  • @everythingzchris
    @everythingzchris 2 года назад

    Ayy bro I I'm glad u made this video haha cause I needed new ideas for my next rap song

  • @totallykyle484
    @totallykyle484 3 года назад +3

    Good ass advice man! Needed to hear a lot of this.

  • @justcallmeneesh1102
    @justcallmeneesh1102 2 года назад

    My struggle is writing about emotions I’m not currently feeling at that moment. Thanks for the tips. Currently setting up a metaphor notebook

  • @KevinKillerIsKevinGlo
    @KevinKillerIsKevinGlo 2 года назад

    I’m also struggling with writing music as well

  • @Kaufman_zw
    @Kaufman_zw 3 года назад +1

    subscribed all the way from africa...... i needed this to improve my rap songs

  • @IAmFangz
    @IAmFangz 3 года назад +5

    U almost to 10k views keep up TheGreat work‼️💪🏽📈

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад +2

      Appreciate you fam frfr

  • @rickiemars
    @rickiemars 2 года назад

    You was preaching and speaking and being genuine with it hitting that subscribe button

  • @d5thekidd728
    @d5thekidd728 3 года назад +3

    You speaking facts bro 💯

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад +2

      just be trying to help fam

  • @rokuflex1808
    @rokuflex1808 4 года назад +4

    Really needed this bro thank you

  • @cometkazi2754
    @cometkazi2754 3 года назад +1

    Great tips bro. Spot on with all of it. Thanks homie

  • @xlarence728
    @xlarence728 3 года назад +4

    My man need a label ong 🔥

  • @lilvizee
    @lilvizee 3 года назад +7

    Bro, I give you 5 thumbs up for this,🔥🔥🔥🔥 nice talk,

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад +3

      Appreciate you for watching

  • @raheemcharles1030
    @raheemcharles1030 3 года назад

    Literally subscribed from the video title and comment section great tips will apply

  • @Xauusdollar
    @Xauusdollar 3 года назад +10

    You sound like lil durk😂imma subscribe for that and your channel is good bro, keep goin

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад +2

      Lol that’s a comment I get often

  • @drmlrd6438
    @drmlrd6438 3 года назад +1

    Please make more like this!🙏🏾

  • @astraii6406
    @astraii6406 4 года назад +7

    how is this guy not huge yet?

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  4 года назад +5

      The RUclips algorithm hasn’t shown me love yet

  • @headhuncho_dadon225
    @headhuncho_dadon225 2 года назад

    This is 100% accurate i been watching your videos hope to make a song witchu

  • @cap4303
    @cap4303 3 года назад

    Man it’s like I can’t ever seem to start the song off and it’s also mad hard to put my feelings into words, but starting the hook and the verse off is the hard part for me

  • @Kaizen-kyo
    @Kaizen-kyo 4 года назад +2

    This really inspired me, Thank you bro

  • @josequezada8326
    @josequezada8326 3 года назад +1

    these tips are gold

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад

      Appreciate you watching fr

  • @malikinxv2681
    @malikinxv2681 3 года назад +1

    Yo that sweater is crazyy 🔥🔥

  • @hylem6774
    @hylem6774 4 года назад +3

    fire video man thanks alot

  • @msalapa100
    @msalapa100 3 года назад +4

    The knowledge on your channel is crazy

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад +1

      Appreciate you , I try and give the best info I can for sure

  • @isaiahherron4466
    @isaiahherron4466 3 года назад

    Vruhh ty dis sum good advice ive been stuck on what I should be doing for the longest

  • @hellosaiah
    @hellosaiah 4 года назад +1

    Back with another 🔑 !!!

  • @iamTrippedouT
    @iamTrippedouT 2 года назад

    Bro I’m trying to sound more melodic with my rapping thank you bro!

  • @SticksFilmedIt
    @SticksFilmedIt 3 года назад +7

    It’s when to change topic ls for me

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад +3

      Your songs should always have a concept tho

    • @IAMGOD200
      @IAMGOD200 3 года назад +3

      Don’t change the topic. More like switch the melody of the next verse.

  • @vybzlorddaflowgad6539
    @vybzlorddaflowgad6539 3 года назад +2

    Wow i love this bruh thanks for your heads up 🙏🙏

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад

      Appreciate you watching fam

  • @SMMRRRR
    @SMMRRRR 3 года назад +2

    Young Mula we da new shit in new draws 😂😂 Wayne the goat fashooo 🔥💯

  • @allthingnwl4109
    @allthingnwl4109 3 года назад

    Sometimes I’ll write a verse and want to stick to a certain topic let’s say for the first 8 bars, but abt 6 bars in I’ll run out of word that allow me to stay on the topic as while rhyming at the same timeZ

  • @Goddess_Lilith
    @Goddess_Lilith 3 года назад +1

    Great tips thank you 💚

  • @Kinglooks7800
    @Kinglooks7800 2 года назад

    Excellent tips thank u

  • @vinobeans9542
    @vinobeans9542 3 года назад +1

    Thanks bro!

  • @TreyGold
    @TreyGold 3 года назад

    Been doing this 10yrs or so. I do enjoy ur vids tho keep it up

  • @t333zaz
    @t333zaz 3 года назад +1

    Love You Man!!, You gaved me Confidence ❤️

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад +1

      glad i could help, that's why I make the content i make

  • @samman6175
    @samman6175 3 года назад +2

    Thanks bro I actually needed this advice 💪🏾💪🏾

  • @Lilsteve1011
    @Lilsteve1011 3 года назад +1

    ona gang while fam givin game he gotta whole instumental playin ina backgroung practice

  • @JunyL
    @JunyL 4 года назад +1

    yoo this is golddd thanks for sharing

  • @DJMotion9
    @DJMotion9 4 года назад +1

    Dope info thanks

  • @jhopmusictv
    @jhopmusictv 3 года назад

    Great tips in this video!! Nice man!!💯💯

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад

      Thanks for watching bro I appreciate you

  • @uhgizmo429
    @uhgizmo429 4 года назад +1

    Thank u bro💫😁

  • @anthonydawn7654
    @anthonydawn7654 2 года назад

    Dope bro 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

  • @eduardobenitezjaimes9095
    @eduardobenitezjaimes9095 3 года назад

    I felt this no cap

  • @iamtammydenise
    @iamtammydenise 2 года назад

    Great advice.❤️♥️

  • @shavvanie
    @shavvanie 3 года назад +1

    Funny enough I know all these tips, I legit do write down lyrics, metaphors etc and add them whenever I’m writing a new song, I think my problem is time and confidence. I definitely feel less than when I can’t write a song in 10 mins, I feel worthless like why am I doing this? And then that’s where the lack of confidence follows through. Also trying to write less lyrics and sound less masculine in the way I form my words. I’m really trying I don’t want to give up …

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад

      You got iG? We can chop it up and figure out something on building up confidence & mapping out a plan on the music and building up consistency on dropping

    • @shavvanie
      @shavvanie 3 года назад

      @@SKYJORDXN na I don’t have IG atm, but I have iMessage, telegram, Snapchat and/or WhatsApp, anyone that works for you cause I’m down

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад

      Text your # I’ll delete the comment once I get it

  • @msalapa100
    @msalapa100 3 года назад +1

    Please keep making these videos

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад

      It’s a lot of these vocal Melody hacks , it’s something I created and trying make as many as possible

  • @charon_4356
    @charon_4356 3 года назад +1

    I be overthinking and starting or finishing it then I find myself dropping it

  • @stacyoliviawortham4350
    @stacyoliviawortham4350 Год назад

    I needed this so bad

  • @anthonyroberts8261
    @anthonyroberts8261 3 года назад +1

    He even talking on beat this fire 🔥💀

  • @YungCairo
    @YungCairo 4 года назад +2

    Can you make a video on punchlines.

  • @imsimpingforcurry9733
    @imsimpingforcurry9733 2 года назад

    I sing rnb and never written music b4. I struggle with lyrics and emotion

  • @SBZ9400
    @SBZ9400 3 года назад

    These tips are really dope an helpful

  • @gaven16
    @gaven16 2 года назад +1

    I need write lyrics just the way you are by bruno Mars

  • @nocurefordeath
    @nocurefordeath 3 года назад +1

    I just clicked through 5+ songwriting videos. Your's is refreshing by comparison. Thanks, man.

  • @EuroAudemar
    @EuroAudemar 3 года назад +2

    Gems for real

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  3 года назад +1

      Appreciate you fam

  • @OtrRalo
    @OtrRalo 4 года назад +6

    Hey man I’m using Logic Pro 10, I gotta a problem, I’ll be recording and the audio cuts out and back I making it impossible to record

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  4 года назад +3

      what sample rate/buffer size do you record with? do you have too many plugins? are you using any demo plugins?

  • @patriciababy7349
    @patriciababy7349 2 года назад

    Its hard for me to put everything together but being patient doe

  • @2ndperspective418
    @2ndperspective418 4 года назад +5

    whats your take on , writing on paper vs writing in phone? do you think there is any difference ?

    • @charlotte9207
      @charlotte9207 3 года назад +1

      Someone answer this question please

    • @badmanlawrence4093
      @badmanlawrence4093 3 года назад +1

      I think u just gotta know yourself and what works for you
      I used to be a notebook person buh I discovered I always write
      Like a flow can come when I’m on the bus or in the mall or something
      I’m not always with a notebook buh I’m always with my phone so....🤷🏾‍♂️

  • @gorkydattebayo471
    @gorkydattebayo471 4 года назад +1

    Damn what a nice vids
    Much love from france

  • @Mateo-xv8qd
    @Mateo-xv8qd 3 года назад +1

    I think I'm good at creating melodies, but when it comes to lyrics i lack.

  • @henryhybridbeats3334
    @henryhybridbeats3334 3 года назад +1

    Liked subbed and notifications on!

  • @GabrielCagle
    @GabrielCagle 8 месяцев назад

    Any type of advice for making hooks?

  • @Deron_mataz
    @Deron_mataz 3 года назад +5

    😂 Not me Rapping to the beat in the background 🔥🔥

  • @lcacrow
    @lcacrow 2 года назад

    ty vro

  • @lilarson732
    @lilarson732 4 года назад +1

    I need help with coming u with hooks and turning my self into a melodic rapper I got the trap part down I can spit for days idk how to just put a quick hook together like I wrote a few hooks by myself but I want to be able to think of one in like 30 mins before I go to my verse that is the legit only prob I have and what is stopping my career from taking off

  • @eseogh3ne
    @eseogh3ne 3 года назад +1

    haven't gone to school in a year and i forgot what hyperbole is

  • @duke7915
    @duke7915 3 года назад +1

    I say ok in almost all of my songs

  • @casheliteempire295
    @casheliteempire295 3 года назад

    Video 100!

  • @southernslowdahns9235
    @southernslowdahns9235 3 года назад +3

    The lyrics I tend to write usually take alot of words in every verse but fit good on beat and with good rhythm. In your opinion. Do you think Im wrong for that? Most songs these days are fairly simple lyrically but with a hardbeat. However Im from the southern border of Texas and lyrics Is a huge deal In Texas so Im stuck In Idea. Id appreciate your input

  • @MJ-vt7dr
    @MJ-vt7dr 3 года назад

    very helpful vid man, btw whats that beat in the background playin it goes so hard lol

  • @derrickwayne4627
    @derrickwayne4627 4 года назад +6

    i struggle with writing hooks, i can drop verses all day and i can sing really well but its hard to fit my singing into a song because i cant seem to match up the styles, and i struggle with writing to flows that i come up with in freestyles, my freestyle flow is immaculate but i cant seem to fit words into it without changing it

    • @SKYJORDXN
      @SKYJORDXN  4 года назад

      Do you know what type beats fit you the best ?

    • @derrickwayne4627
      @derrickwayne4627 4 года назад

      @@SKYJORDXN i like any type of beat that has a really good flowing melody and is bouncy, my favorite though are storytelling type beats, and emotional type beats, since they put me in a specific mood that i'm going for, but the melody is what inspires me so it has to be on point, but i am a producer so i can make the beat and lyrics together and manipulate them any way i want, just started dabbling with autotune unlimited too
      and thank you for replying! you are my favorite music youtuber