For those worried about the informality in this example .... Different fields have different conventions for what counts as "proper essay form". Some forbid the use of first-person ('I will argue that ..."), for example. But this is a matter of style and genre, there are plenty of literary genres where it's okay if used wisely (academic philosophy writing is full of first-person usages). Do what your teachers ask, but just know that there are very few "universal" laws of composition.
Tomorrow in my class my team has to present an argumentative essay thx a lot it helped me very much for writing the introduction in a different manner rather than just telling the audience which side we are going to argue about.👍
I am in AP English language and composition 1 and i was assigned an essay but i could never get the into paragraph good enough in my teachers eyes, so i watched your video and i see where i went wrong in my intros but i dont know if my intro paragraph is good enough yet or not. do you mind reading it and giving me some pointers?
@svue12 I'm not sure I understand the request. This video is just one of a much larger series of video tutorials on how to write an argumentative essay, which you can browse at the url link in the sidebar on the right. In the context of the other tutorials in the series it might make more sense.
i have an introduction due in about 2hrs so you know when he gave the example of the hockey fighting-when we tell them what they must expect in the rest of the essay just we actually say “in this essay i will....” must we actually say those words-pls help😂😭
This is where I always have trouble when writing a good essay. usually, teachers give a mediocre example. explains why it is mediocre, very briefly. but NEVER corrects the example. so I'm here with just an idea how to write a mediocre essay and my essay turns to shit. Just give us a really good example or not at all cause it does not help. overall the video was great.
This "really good" essay its very personal. Apart form some good tips the author uses pronouns like we, I etc.....folks my teacher will immediately fail you if you watch and apply to your essay this strategy. Avoid personal be more indirect and you'll be fine.
well I was about to like the video but I'm not going to bother myself from liking it. since you also don't bother to rewrite the introduction for a better example
For those worried about the informality in this example .... Different fields have different conventions for what counts as "proper essay form". Some forbid the use of first-person ('I will argue that ..."), for example. But this is a matter of style and genre, there are plenty of literary genres where it's okay if used wisely (academic philosophy writing is full of first-person usages). Do what your teachers ask, but just know that there are very few "universal" laws of composition.
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Why didn't you rewrite the essay so we could have a better understanding and better example to follow?
"I" should never be used in an argumentative essay.
Oh good...I got confused if "I" should(okay) actually be used in an argumentative essay... Thanks
My teacher told me to not use "I" when writtting an essay
or you
Correct. Your essay should not be in first person.
Or we
So what pronoun can we use lol
@@rainbowsalt1681 You generally do not use pronouns, you can refer to anyone as 'person/persons/people'. I would also avoid they/our/we/them/us
Tomorrow in my class my team has to present an argumentative essay thx a lot it helped me very much for writing the introduction in a different manner rather than just telling the audience which side we are going to argue about.👍
Gotta fsa tommorow and just now learning how to write and essay
thank you for helping me with my essay introduction!
This video helped me a lot thanks!
very helpful information........thank you Kevin
amazing video thank you
I am in AP English language and composition 1 and i was assigned an essay but i could never get the into paragraph good enough in my teachers eyes, so i watched your video and i see where i went wrong in my intros but i dont know if my intro paragraph is good enough yet or not. do you mind reading it and giving me some pointers?
Great teaching,. finally after looking thru tons of vids, I find a teacher with enough fore thought to include an example :)
Taking my hiset writing & this is very helpful
thank you you've helped me so much on my argumentative writing essay on competitive sports for kids +teenagers thank you sooooooooooooo much
very hepful with the example for international student like me. thank you and please do you have the same for the conclusion?
Thank you sir for explain this tomorrow is my exam this is good practice for my exam
Words to never use in an essay
I (or any pronouns)
I think, feel, believe
(It should not be in first person in general )
Thanks this really helped !
Does anyone have the answer to this I’m kinda struggling just a bit with this question
Deauntai Richard I know that you have to keep your introduction short
My teacher say's i should be "personal", use 'I' and 'I believe' so, is this correct?
No No No professional and academic writing should always written in third person
Joe Jones hey my teacher sort of says that to Joe so I guess we have something in common hu
Thank you, helped a lot
The fact that this vid was made a little bit after a month after I was born
you really helped thank you
I have GRE exam, should I use first person or third, which one is consider correct?11
Thanks a lot it helped me in my preperations for my arguemnt
at 3:16 I paused the video and clicked on another one...
So helpful indeed.
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@svue12 I'm not sure I understand the request. This video is just one of a much larger series of video tutorials on how to write an argumentative essay, which you can browse at the url link in the sidebar on the right. In the context of the other tutorials in the series it might make more sense.
My question is the introduction to an argumentative essay begins with ?
Normally the statement of the issue, or the reason for the issue.
@@terrispencer4913 can you use a question in the introduction? like saying "is this really the way to go"? and then stating the idea after that?
Thanks this really helped
how did you do it can you share with me , thank you
This is very helpful
Thank you sir!
thanks for the great video
i have an introduction due in about 2hrs so you know when he gave the example of the hockey fighting-when we tell them what they must expect in the rest of the essay just we actually say “in this essay i will....” must we actually say those words-pls help😂😭
Of course you can use I in a essay. Have your own judgement.
Are u talking about public speaking notes or essay??????.......
My teacher tells us to try not to say "This essay" why is that?
possibly sounds too informal.
I’m a German 9th grader and I have to write an argumentative text 😬😂
@PhilosophyFreak I think he meant 'give examples'.
delet whats it like 8 years later
thx it helped
my teacher told me to not use I while a essay
Highly recommended!
but personal pronouns not allowed!!
then its not an essay
@@jrrubioa Personal pronouns are almost never used in actual essays
the sample paragraph is something a 4th grader would write
its not supposed to be third person meaning u cant refer to urself
This is where I always have trouble when writing a good essay. usually, teachers give a mediocre example. explains why it is mediocre, very briefly. but NEVER corrects the example. so I'm here with just an idea how to write a mediocre essay and my essay turns to shit. Just give us a really good example or not at all cause it does not help. overall the video was great.
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This is the thing.
I wish you were my teacher :/
I found it useful ;however ,you're going too fast .
Agreed.
its called playback speed dumbass
My English regents is tomorrow I hope I pass
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i like it but it is to long
This "really good" essay its very personal. Apart form some good tips the author uses pronouns like we, I etc.....folks my teacher will immediately fail you if you watch and apply to your essay this strategy. Avoid personal be more indirect and you'll be fine.
well I was about to like the video but I'm not going to bother myself from liking it. since you also don't bother to rewrite the introduction for a better example
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