Man, seriously, what an awesome script! I know as a beginner we will have some constraints and problems directing a short film like this, but you have the potential. Focus on the making, and the rest will follow , baki sab :)
Spoiler Alert🚫🚫🚫 Lying is a very bad habit. Don't be ashamed of it embrace it. From there the twist plot. Actually Ishaan was lying about his mother. Gabriella was his real mother. May be he might feel ashamed to say that he is the son of a sex worker. So he cooked up a story about his mother and childhood. And Simran's mother is also the same Gabriella but father is different( i like ur eyes. May be ishaan's father find similarity of her eyes with his wife's eyes) As father said lying is a very bad habit and Here just bcz of the lies of both of them, the siblings slept together without knowing each other. ( This is what i got from this film. Don't knw whether its right or wrong)
Wow its really a mystery and trilling ,i was on the edge of the seat.Its staggering.but i really not clear about the conclusion, is ishan and simran mother is same? Because ishan showing that lady photo to Anjali (Simran) and telling her that this is Gabriella. Then she ask is ishan miss his mother, after father and ishan conversation,ishan took a old dairy where is written Amma in middle Page of the dairy and a photo is also there, that the same photo that was shown to Simran which is Gabriella. If Gabriella is not his mother why ishan kept her photo in dairy were is written as Amma, why ishan is wearing Gabriella ring as chain locket.Is this is Ishan cooked up story,?Anyone pls clear me about the conculsion of the story i really want to know about it.
@@MadhavanMahadevan I want to but I can't, because it will ruin the story for people who likes to read comments while watching the short film. Pls watch it carefully, aa 'lying is a bad habit' papa's dialogue kazhinj varunna parts onnude shradhich kand nokku. And if you r more curious, then pause the video (high quality pixel) at the end, (when he reads the msg in his phone) and read that msg, u will understand it better. It's a good story
Her No love, no girlfriend I am till now pure single in my life. Because my situation. No one girl like or love with me."middle problem". Many boy facing this problem.
Broo..I have a doubt..well the story was nice..but did he slept with his sister??? I'm not being rude..but that question is fair..may be because I didn't understand the story.. But stilllll!!brooo...whattt??
Yeah...Both Ishan‘s and Simran’s (one who came as Anjali) mother is Gabriella.But they both didn't say that each other. Ishan cooked up a false story that his mother left him and all because he didn't want to say that he is the son of a sex worker. And even Simran didn't reveal that she is gabriella‘s daughter. So to conclude, both went into a physical intimacy without knowing the fact that they are siblings.
Good work. Strong script and dialogues. The cinematography and flow of shots could have been way better. Especially while giving how the subjects are distributed in the space. Its confusing. Goes almost the same with the cuts and sound. Making can be adapted. So please be working on it. Love to see such beautiful ideas come up with a bit more spark.
This short film is the voice of many people who have been denied justice 🔥👏
Greate script and dialogues. Within a short time nalla mystery and thrilling feeling undayrunnhu.. Hats of to the director 👏.
Man, seriously, what an awesome script! I know as a beginner we will have some constraints and problems directing a short film like this, but you have the potential. Focus on the making, and the rest will follow , baki sab :)
Ohh wow!!
Awesome script👏
Soo wonderful........ If I missed that'll be great loss
amazing script frrr. loved it. keep shining
Spoiler Alert🚫🚫🚫
Lying is a very bad habit. Don't be ashamed of it embrace it. From there the twist plot. Actually Ishaan was lying about his mother. Gabriella was his real mother. May be he might feel ashamed to say that he is the son of a sex worker. So he cooked up a story about his mother and childhood. And Simran's mother is also the same Gabriella but father is different( i like ur eyes. May be ishaan's father find similarity of her eyes with his wife's eyes)
As father said lying is a very bad habit and Here just bcz of the lies of both of them, the siblings slept together without knowing each other.
( This is what i got from this film. Don't knw whether its right or wrong)
An extra shock😮
Awesome script 👏👏
superbbbb....keep on going high❤❤
vow .seriously saying from heart..so heart touching script...expecting more ..🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Woahh..It's kinda different yet exciting🤩
all the stories end with truths left to be told...script, just awesme❤
Twist polichu❤
Nice Short film 👍
Awesome work 👍🏻
Wow nice concept 👌
Is there a second part?
Good work guys ,the script and the unexpected twist is awesome .Really enjoyed .
Different concept and the way of presentation is simply amazing! Loads of Love!
Great work🥳🥳🥳🥳
Wow its really a mystery and trilling ,i was on the edge of the seat.Its staggering.but i really not clear about the conclusion, is ishan and simran mother is same? Because ishan showing that lady photo to Anjali (Simran) and telling her that this is Gabriella. Then she ask is ishan miss his mother, after father and ishan conversation,ishan took a old dairy where is written Amma in middle Page of the dairy and a photo is also there, that the same photo that was shown to Simran which is Gabriella. If Gabriella is not his mother why ishan kept her photo in dairy were is written as Amma, why ishan is wearing Gabriella ring as chain locket.Is this is Ishan cooked up story,?Anyone pls clear me about the conculsion of the story i really want to know about it.
I too have the same doubt🧐🤔
The way they conveyed the story was awsome.
Very engaging, Congrats team👏
Superb👏
Awesome story ....smtg different ❤❤❤
Great❤️
@AlakhaJohnyneenu tnxx than share cheythonda kanan pattiyee😊
Superrbbb❤
Storytelling at its peak
making was average,but the script was awsome 💥
Can u pls explain the climax
@@MadhavanMahadevan I want to but I can't, because it will ruin the story for people who likes to read comments while watching the short film.
Pls watch it carefully, aa 'lying is a bad habit' papa's dialogue kazhinj varunna parts onnude shradhich kand nokku. And if you r more curious, then pause the video (high quality pixel) at the end, (when he reads the msg in his phone) and read that msg, u will understand it better. It's a good story
This is an amazing short film.... wow
damnnnn THE ENDING WAS SO GOOOD
Ooo just 🔥
Great work 👏
Just amazing
Really Awesome!
Great work 🔥👏
Worth watching 🔥
The script was so nice ❤
Nice.....❤
Good start... Keep going...
കണ്ട് മടുത്ത theme ആണെങ്കിലും കുഴപ്പില്ല 👍🏻👍🏻
Really a great work❤
Wow "!!
Nyz❤.....fst shot bore ayi thonni back adikn poyathanu but interest thonni full knd... script 💥
Good work Harinarayanan B
excellent script
16:17 ith anjam pathira BGM alle............
So they were siblings then?
The script was good
Nice work❤
Awesome story 😍
👌nice work team
excellent piece of work 🔥
Twist are very impressive
The script was very awesome 🔥.. But making....
അടിച്ചു കേറി വാ..... 😂😌
Her No love, no girlfriend I am till now pure single in my life. Because my situation. No one girl like or love with me."middle problem". Many boy facing this problem.
Acting seems mechanical....dialogue delivery
Nice work.. Script is excellent
Awesome story❤️
നന്നായിട്ടുണ്ട്, പുതുമയുണ്ട്.
ഒരു സംശയം: ഒന്ന് രണ്ട് തവണ amnesia എന്ന് പറഞ്ഞത് dementia എന്ന് ഉദ്ദേശിച്ചാണോ?
Yes
Good script!
Super❤️
Lastilek onum mansilayila
Great work👍🙏👌🌹
Woww....❤ script was awesome ❤
Oo woww story 😍
Nice Really Nice 👍🏻 Good Twist Good Luck 🤞
Who was with him. Can anyone explain?
Ambooo🔥🔥🔥
Awesome 🎉🎉🎉😮❤️❤️
Good one…
Intersting script 🔥 Superb
5 am apthira backgound score
Superb movie...❤❤❤
Making kurachukoodi nannaakkaamaayirunnu ennu thonni. But script was great!
Is Gabrielle is the mother of Ishaan?
Nice story ❤
Broo..I have a doubt..well the story was nice..but did he slept with his sister??? I'm not being rude..but that question is fair..may be because I didn't understand the story..
But stilllll!!brooo...whattt??
Same doubt
@@sreelakshmi1673 so we are on the same page..😅
Noo broo... She was gabriellas daughter and his mother was another one👍🏻
@@exxossss but his father says about him lying...what was he lying about then?
Yeah...Both Ishan‘s and Simran’s (one who came as Anjali) mother is Gabriella.But they both didn't say that each other. Ishan cooked up a false story that his mother left him and all because he didn't want to say that he is the son of a sex worker. And even Simran didn't reveal that she is gabriella‘s daughter.
So to conclude, both went into a physical intimacy without knowing the fact that they are siblings.
Super script❤️👏
Really nice❤
Good work 👍🤗.
Super 😍
Last phone ൽ വന്ന message എന്താണ്? ഒന്നും മനസ്സിലായില്ല..
@@dhe_aesthete_25 Thankyou
Awesome script
Its just 🔥
Super 👌
Great work❤
Nice script❤️
Super
Good work. Strong script and dialogues. The cinematography and flow of shots could have been way better. Especially while giving how the subjects are distributed in the space. Its confusing. Goes almost the same with the cuts and sound. Making can be adapted. So please be working on it. Love to see such beautiful ideas come up with a bit more spark.
Nice script..
Part 2&3 waiting
the script ❤
Good story 👍
Good, unexpected twist
Amazing movie♥️♥️♥️
Superb🔥
Woww❤️
നല്ല പരിപാടി. എന്തൊക്ക പ്രോത്സാഹിപ്പിക്കണം നമ്മൾ ഇനി.. ഇപ്പൊ നീയും ഒരു സെക്സ് വർക്കർ
Very interesting ❤
Nothing to say 🎉🎉🎉