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  • Опубликовано: 10 мар 2024
  • ‘The roar of a head-splitting klaxon filled my ears, one that I knew only I could hear. I let out a reflexive, mildly embarrassing yelp before a dark pop-up box appeared on my computer screen...’
    Tonight’s terrifying tale of dystopian insanity is ‘A Room with a View’, by Cornconic, kindly shared with me via the Creepypasta Wiki and read here under the conditions of the CC-BY-SA license.
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    Background music by me (freely available for use by other Creepypasta / No Sleep narrators):
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    Other music used is credited to the wonderful The Dark Somnium (intro) and the fantastic Tanner Stokes (end credits). The music is used here with their express permission.
    Video footage was made by me with whatever Go Pro Camera it is that I own... I hope you found it to be a relaxing backdrop for today’s story!
    Thumbnail image created using Adobe Spark, under the conditions of the Creative Commons CC0 license:
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  • @liamhatt8456
    @liamhatt8456 2 месяца назад +25

    I have no idea what I just listened to but you delivered it wonderfully.

    • @sasquatchsoldrboi8052
      @sasquatchsoldrboi8052 Месяц назад +5

      I share your sentiment 100%. If it were anyone else but the good Dr. I probably would have hit skip.

    • @trnphantom2586
      @trnphantom2586 Месяц назад +2

      Feels like a fever dream the way it has continuity but makes absolutely no sense

    • @terrigabriel582
      @terrigabriel582 Месяц назад +1

      🤣

    • @kentworch
      @kentworch Месяц назад +3

      I think it's about some futuristic or alien based slavery based work force. It makes sense to me.

    • @user-yd6yu5fl3b
      @user-yd6yu5fl3b 21 день назад

      LL LL l

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 Месяц назад +9

    26:21 this is reminding me of a “Dark Mirror” episode where the lived in the building where they would all ride stationary bikes all day to earn money (or credits?) and it was just like this. Only they didn’t have implants in their minds, but were heavily monitored and it was as crazy as this is so far! Such a strange show, I’d not be surprised if this was inspired by that show.

    • @n0one555
      @n0one555 Месяц назад

      Exactly what I thought!

    • @jackdurden466
      @jackdurden466 Месяц назад +1

      @@n0one555 aha! So nice to know I’m not alone with that one!

  • @annettew5740
    @annettew5740 2 месяца назад +10

    Hi Doc! I wanted to say after listening to your talk at the end of last nights story, please don't burn yourself out and feel that you have to record when your not up to it. We would totally understand if you need a break and would definitely wait for you to feel better! I thoroughly enjoy your content and dedication, but understand burn out and hope you don't push yourself to that point. Illness took a lot out of you recently and you still managed to entertain us. I am very grateful to be able to listen to you so often! You've helped me on many a sleepless night, but your mental and physical health are priority so you do what's best for you and your family. Ok... Done rambling. I'm snuggled in and ready to listen. Thank you Doc for keeping me entertained and company tonight! Have a fabulous day (when you read this tomorrow?)!!! 🤗💜🕷

  • @kirajenmystic9955
    @kirajenmystic9955 2 месяца назад +22

    I'm voting "yes" for the poetic introductions - they really set the mood. Another great reading, Doc!

  • @briangreen1781
    @briangreen1781 2 месяца назад +10

    I don't know if I'm thinking of Hitchcock's "Rearview" or something from the Twilight Zone, but there definitely is an old-school vibe in the name alone. I'm going to be late to the party (work/life/work),but I'm looking forward to the reveal.
    Thank you in advance.

  • @roedgroed12
    @roedgroed12 Месяц назад +4

    Your channel is your way of expanding your craft which I love to witness. Your voice is well suited for deeper and poetic intros to your stories. I am on the "Yes" team on this one.

  • @JordanMayjor3p7
    @JordanMayjor3p7 2 месяца назад +9

    Yes, on the introductions. Most creators I would not want one, but doc? I have been here since 20k subs. He has something my.other favorite narrators don't and it is an elegance that can't be taught.

  • @zay-lias
    @zay-lias 2 месяца назад +3

    I love stories like this every once in a while. Trying to figure out wtf is going on with the MC….

  • @debra333
    @debra333 2 месяца назад +7

    Hi, my dear Doctor! I love your intros. However they come, I like them!❤

  • @jentinkers1316
    @jentinkers1316 2 месяца назад +2

    I personally love the introductions you say before each story!! I think they’re a great lead in!!

  • @simonjdeangelo
    @simonjdeangelo 2 месяца назад +4

    Amazon really needs to cool it with their production metrics

  • @leebu531
    @leebu531 2 месяца назад +10

    Time to relax with a bottle of absinthe then 😮

    • @scrappydoo7887
      @scrappydoo7887 2 месяца назад +2

      Sounds like a banger of a night

  • @jasonroberts4470
    @jasonroberts4470 2 месяца назад +2

    Thank you as always 😊

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  2 месяца назад +1

      You’re welcome 😊

  • @ashley-dn2el
    @ashley-dn2el 2 месяца назад +3

    Love how you tell these stories !Thanks for sharing

  • @LoitersWithIntent
    @LoitersWithIntent 2 месяца назад +4

    It was very well done and spoken, thank you good doctor.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  2 месяца назад +1

      You are very welcome

  • @Charlie.a
    @Charlie.a 2 месяца назад +5

    Thank you

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  2 месяца назад +1

      You're welcome

  • @Loubear23
    @Loubear23 2 месяца назад +1

    Intro is appreciated, you always bring the best! Thanks 😊 ❤

  • @Photobunce
    @Photobunce 2 месяца назад +2

    Oh! Road trip footage! Wonderful narration as always, Doc
    I like the poetic bits a great deal.😊

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  2 месяца назад +2

      Glad you like them!

  • @marycollins2163
    @marycollins2163 2 месяца назад +2

    My name is Mary. I love it when you say that name! Know idea whats going on with your health. Please take care & wishing you get better. You're the best narrator ever! Get lots of rest and please take care. Do what you need to do. Your audience loves you and we will wait for you. ❤❤❤❤❤❤

  • @leeedwards9275
    @leeedwards9275 2 месяца назад +2

    Absolutely wild ride. Surreal treat

  • @marksun3389
    @marksun3389 2 месяца назад +2

    Thanks Doctor. Looking forward to this tonight 👍 😴

  • @cadillacdeville5828
    @cadillacdeville5828 2 месяца назад +4

    What a view 🪟 it is Dr. Creepen

  • @saragog
    @saragog 2 месяца назад +1

    Hi Doc, I vote yes for the poetic introductions, I find them interesting and quite beautiful. I loved this story too. Another great narration as always. x🖤x

  • @matthewstockdale9801
    @matthewstockdale9801 2 месяца назад +2

    Nicely done, mate!

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  2 месяца назад +1

      Thank you! Cheers!

  • @kaldrake2167
    @kaldrake2167 2 месяца назад +1

    Personally I love the philosophical intros. Would love to hear more.

  • @annhemmings1323
    @annhemmings1323 2 месяца назад +4

    My main man hope you are well ❤❤🎉🎉

  • @trnphantom2586
    @trnphantom2586 Месяц назад

    Absolutely love the poetic intros, keep them coming Doc!

  • @sandymiller2121
    @sandymiller2121 23 дня назад

    I love the way you do your shows give you a personal touch. Ashbury relaxing

  • @MsPiinkFllamingo
    @MsPiinkFllamingo Месяц назад

    I love your videos!!!! 🙌🏼
    Narration and story are wonderful 🤗

  • @harrygrimley4352
    @harrygrimley4352 Месяц назад

    Trippy. Thanks for sharing this with us

  • @travisgrider8770
    @travisgrider8770 Месяц назад

    I love the poetic beginnings, please keep them up.

  • @amandasimpson525
    @amandasimpson525 Месяц назад

    The best narrator on here!

  • @patpatsthis-n-that2721
    @patpatsthis-n-that2721 2 месяца назад +1

    I did enjoy the new intro ❤❤

  • @kellyholmes4554
    @kellyholmes4554 Месяц назад

    That was fantastic n believe in whatever you choose to do, you have many many people who follow happily and are over the moon with what you put out to us! Thankyou so much for your dedication and amazing talent! You are truly appreciated ❤❤❤❤❤

  • @BenSS3
    @BenSS3 Месяц назад

    Yes, definitely enjoy the introductions. I think that you should keep doing them.

  • @ichigonarutoj739
    @ichigonarutoj739 2 месяца назад

    Thanks Doc!

  • @Screwball70
    @Screwball70 Месяц назад

    Excellent reading once again, i doff my cap to the author, you realy pulled me into this one.

  • @jackieadkins340
    @jackieadkins340 9 дней назад

    Loved the poetry my grandmother grew up that was the way they entertained themselves as children and she told me stories since I was old enough to remember the poetry took me back to when story telling was a true art and that's what you are doing thats what the best do and that's what you have done because you are a true artist in the story telling world

  • @Untouchablemkwo
    @Untouchablemkwo Месяц назад

    I really do enjoy your poetic beginnings, makes me more interested in the story. I would sat maube add a time stemp for those that don't wanna listen and wanna just get to the story

  • @jackieadkins340
    @jackieadkins340 9 дней назад

    My grandmother loved to tell scary stories my bedtime stories were never like Cinderella fairytale and some were told like poems its an art and you are an artist keep up with the poetry

  • @charlieghostwolf6161
    @charlieghostwolf6161 Месяц назад

    An interesting tale dear Dr, very Outer Limits-esque so quite enjoyable
    As to the poetic introductions I enjoy them and would not be at all disappointed should you choose to continue them, which ultimately is your decision, if You enjoy doing them then by all means keep on

  • @alicia250
    @alicia250 2 месяца назад +1

    I thought the poems were cute, but I'd prefer them as a pithy couplet or two. I will happily continue listening no matter what you do, though, so follow your heart!

  • @user-cj1gx5qs9m
    @user-cj1gx5qs9m 2 месяца назад +1

    I’m voting yes also, love the way you tell any story.

  • @SleepyLeeeee
    @SleepyLeeeee 2 месяца назад +2

    I personally loved the poetry that you've been reading before the stories. I just kept forgetting to say so by the end of the video. Did you write them yourself? Poetry is a more concise form of short stories. I can get lost in reading them all day and thinking about them longer. Also, I just realized, I am writing this comment from a red room within my house.....like actual painted red walls, nothing creepy. Please keep reading the poetry..pretty please with sugar on top and a cherry too!

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  2 месяца назад

      Glad you enjoyed it!

  • @katethomas7329
    @katethomas7329 Месяц назад

    Love the openings 💜✌️

  • @talesbyscreenlight
    @talesbyscreenlight Месяц назад

    A true to life horror. When everything is automated, except for the actual labor.

  • @sasquatchsoldrboi8052
    @sasquatchsoldrboi8052 Месяц назад

    Only and ONLY the good Dr. Could have pulled this story off.

  • @lornahill7123
    @lornahill7123 Месяц назад

    Keep the poetic intro ❤😂🎉

  • @kentworch
    @kentworch Месяц назад

    My thoughts on this story sounds like some kind of futuristic and or slave based work force. Nice story Dr Creepen. 🖤🖤🖤🖤

  • @DSWL_
    @DSWL_ 2 месяца назад +2

    🍷 thanks doc

  • @jendubay3782
    @jendubay3782 Месяц назад

    Damn, I'm really enjoyed this story.❤🎉❤🎉
    I absolutely love dystopia probably because it distracts me from my office job 😂

  • @gerf1023
    @gerf1023 2 месяца назад

    Enjoyed the story, though I'm not sure if I totally understood the ending? As for the poetry, have you ever listened to the Moody Blues albums of the 60's and 70's? They often started out with poetry and ended with poetry. Added something special to the story the album told. 😃

  • @cyndytower1263
    @cyndytower1263 Месяц назад

    The last story about Jerry at shamrocks was so sad. No one should have to die that way. Our laws against criminals are too lax. We need stiffer laws to deter crime. Plus kids who start young need to be put somewhere and trained that crime doesn't pay and it's wrong. God bless this man's family and loved ones.

  • @KRK2317
    @KRK2317 2 месяца назад

    ❤Yes.❤Poetic intro.❤

  • @ruffadamsthegreat.2662
    @ruffadamsthegreat.2662 Месяц назад

    "He wiped the back of his mouth with his hand."🤣😂😅

  • @margaretgilbert2901
    @margaretgilbert2901 Месяц назад

    Yes to the poetry.

  • @rebeccamiller3248
    @rebeccamiller3248 2 месяца назад +1

    Poem yes i like.

  • @baldwiniv5339
    @baldwiniv5339 10 дней назад

    Humans will collectively agree this is terrible but then make it a reality anyway.

  • @cirkleobserver3217
    @cirkleobserver3217 Месяц назад +1

    I vote against intros, and it has nothing to do with the quality of your delivery, I just like to get into the story right away. There’s something magical about starting the video and immediately getting swept up.

  • @alonelyweed6099
    @alonelyweed6099 2 месяца назад

    good story!

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  2 месяца назад +1

      Glad you liked it :)

  • @wendyhill3942
    @wendyhill3942 Месяц назад

    Basically, the Doc could read the dictionary, and a great number of us would be pleased... but to be serious...it depends on how well the poetry fits with the featured story.

  • @reneeaitken2292
    @reneeaitken2292 Месяц назад

    Very nice story

  • @darthjesus7959
    @darthjesus7959 24 дня назад

    This road that's being driven in the video backdrop- Where is this?

  • @mk-ur4cq
    @mk-ur4cq Месяц назад

    This reminds me of the spoilsbury toast boy videos.

  • @mk-ur4cq
    @mk-ur4cq Месяц назад

    The poems are cool. If your feeling it, go for it. Maybe it depends on the video.

  • @jppotgieter3600
    @jppotgieter3600 2 месяца назад

    Hi Doc, yr intros make you what ir who yr channel are. If you like it keep it. I also like them. This story was really something else. Dont know what to think about it, felt like i wasted my time listening to it. If it was not you narrating, i would have not seen it trough. Maybe its just me. But i dont know what that was about. We surely aint living that way.

  • @bobbiesworldentertainment
    @bobbiesworldentertainment 2 месяца назад

    Dear Dr,
    You asked a question about your introductions and here is my opinion. Follow your heart and soul with what you want to read. And us, your followers, will be grateful to hear your voice as you lead us to the realm of the Sandman....

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  2 месяца назад +1

      Wow, thank you!

  • @debrapoirier4435
    @debrapoirier4435 2 месяца назад +2

    🖤🖤🖤

  • @crystalm4324
    @crystalm4324 Месяц назад

    Had to rewind this 4 times because I kept falling asleep…. But I had to find out wth was happening!!! 😂😂😂

    • @crystalm4324
      @crystalm4324 Месяц назад

      Finally finished…. Still have no idea what kind of existential crisis the guy is having.
      I first thought maybe they were cells.
      Then computer algorithms.
      Finally 🤯

  • @mtaylor7171
    @mtaylor7171 Месяц назад

    Poems as separate videos, i just wasn't in the mood when it came up

  • @paulking6572
    @paulking6572 2 месяца назад

    Can I please ask you a question? Are you actor Ben Daniels?

  • @tonyespelage9712
    @tonyespelage9712 2 месяца назад +2

    Chinese factory, neurolink, AI, 1984 type of job.

  • @stevenpaige2005
    @stevenpaige2005 Месяц назад

    I liked the start. it put me unti the story quicker if you know what I mean

  • @JMlyles
    @JMlyles Месяц назад

    Hey do they work at Amazon lol?

  • @johannageisel5390
    @johannageisel5390 2 месяца назад

    He escaped an even worse version of the Matrix.

  • @christiaangrobler6080
    @christiaangrobler6080 Месяц назад

    5 out of 10 story. Heavy Rain is about 7 out of 10.

  • @TheWorpler
    @TheWorpler Месяц назад

    looks like a good'un!

  • @KRK2317
    @KRK2317 2 месяца назад

    🖤🩶💙✍🏻🗣️🫶🏻 yes!

  • @brutusb1858
    @brutusb1858 Месяц назад

    i vote yes

  • @sabieleclipse5799
    @sabieleclipse5799 2 месяца назад +1

    All for poetic introductions 😁 They're just part of the reason I've come to love DusklightRadio so much, but tbh you do you. Your content is great regardless, so I doubt something like that would actually make or break your channel, tho it may help with drawing in new viewers

  • @reroman1892
    @reroman1892 Месяц назад

    You sound like a disco elysium character

  • @richardlynch5632
    @richardlynch5632 2 месяца назад

    😎👍

  • @khtauhidislam7505
    @khtauhidislam7505 9 дней назад

    25:00

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 Месяц назад

    Ok, is there going to be a point to all of this? I honestly don’t know what the heck is going on? What’s this building up to?
    1:05:32 Well, apparently it led up to nothing at all. Just an entire story that could just as easily been a dream of total nonsense. This writer swung for the fences and struck out. However, this is also a huge part of what makes the Dr so great. He takes all kinds of stories and gives us a wide variety of works to explore. Of course they’re all not going to be winners, and of course they’re not all going to be losers. We have to take the good with the bad. And I am completely OK with that. I don’t ever feel like I wasted any time, and I don’t think that the Dr does either. It’s just a wide variety of different types for a crowd of vast variety. So my opinion is that it wasn’t up to my personal tastes. Had potential in the beginning, but somewhere between the 1/4-1/3rd part it started to become nonsense. But as always I thank you good Dr Creepen for putting so much effort and energy into these for our entertainment. Especially when you’ve been feeling so crappy! I sincerely hope that you start to feel better and it’s a quick recovery. As I cannot imagine what it would be like without your notifications! I’d be forced to listen to second and third tier works. And as for the poems, I am on the side that feels like they aren’t really necessary and if the school of thought that says if it ain’t broke then don’t fix it. And I feel like it wasn’t even close to broken! So that’s my 2c. I hope you get that, as you specifically requested it. Have a wonderful day Dr! 👏👏👏👏👏👏

  • @SaneTXJane
    @SaneTXJane 2 месяца назад +1

    Hey Doc, are you feeling ok? Took me a minute to recognize your voice in tonite’s story. I realize I’m the only one who has noticed (or who has commented) on this difference so maybe it’s just me - but I’d guess you might be suffering from a type of respiratory ailment as your usual medium baritone is now a deep bass & sounds almost painful to talk. I hope I’m wrong & I really hope you’re okay ! My granny would say to ‘go gargle with warm salt water or else get yourself to the doctor’ 😊!

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  2 месяца назад

      I'm OK... just tried recording early in the morning without having drunk any black coffee.

  • @scrappydoo7887
    @scrappydoo7887 2 месяца назад +1

    Wassup doc 🥕 🐇

  • @UncleDon226
    @UncleDon226 Месяц назад

    Since you asked, I'm not a fan of the poetic intros. No disrespect, It's just not my thing.

  • @JMlyles
    @JMlyles Месяц назад

    😊 don't Elon Musk want to put chips in people 's brains , this sounds a little too close for comfort.

  • @happymonkey420
    @happymonkey420 2 месяца назад

    Whoop Whoop homies
    Smokem if you got them
    ✌🏻🐵✌🏻

  • @Big_Spoop
    @Big_Spoop 2 месяца назад +5

    Bed bound and sick at the moment, so this story came at the perfect time to help pass the time and take my mind off it.
    Thank you for another awesome story, mate. I hope you're doing well and life is treating you kindly. ❤

  • @user-kh1vm6gt4b
    @user-kh1vm6gt4b 2 месяца назад +2

    Thank you