Underfell: Captain papyrus Progress (2)

Official Version: gamejolt.com/g...
(if yall have any problems with me making my own take, please let me know in the comments!)
Credits:
Toby fox - Creator of undertale
(Captain!Papyrus team)
TRIDOMINIUMOK - Owner of the AU, spriter, artist.
JAG123 - Co-owner, writer.
vorti69 - uhh, something idk
Abra-Kadabra - Musician.
DaFabled- - Artist, spriter.
BloodSky - Spriter.
Dark_Haos - Artist.
Sayki - Spriter.
Just the intro, updated it and added a few more effects and sounds. Might work on the full game soon, probably after my other underfell papyrus project.
Thank you SO MUCH for all the support! 2K views on my original upload of this is INSANE! keep it up!

[@Jintysarecool]

"His spaghetti was burnt and on fire.. it tasted like charcoal"

[@Biscuit_gamer34]

LETS GOOOOOOOO.
Give fell paps all the recognition AND WEAPONS.
BRING THE TANKS.
WE SHALL CONQUER HUMANITY!

[@FieryPadawan]

Sorry but I've already had a cult in my comments before I don't want another one 🤣

[@dignatius4444]

Listing all the grammar/spelling mistakes so that they can be fixed:
1. In the first line, it should be "HUMANS and MONSTERS," not "HUMANS, and MONSTERS"
2. Captain is spelled "captain," not "captian"
3. While "PREPARE TO HAVE A FUNERAL, HUMAN!" is technically grammatically correct, it would sound better if he said something more like "PREPARE FOR YOUR FUNERAL, HUMAN!" (this is more of a personal thing tho)
4. Papyrus would probably say "BECAUSE" rather than "CAUSE." If you want to keep it how it is, though, you should put an apostrophe before "CAUSE," making it " 'CAUSE," showing that it's a shortened version of the word "because" rather than the word "cause."
This looks really cool, though, and I'm excited to see it completed.

[@undeniablycrusty]

papyrus doesn’t use normal grammar anyway

[@FieryPadawan]

Lol, just fixed that all in like 20 seconds.

[@dignatius4444]

@@FieryPadawan I'm glad I was able to help!

[@Biscuit_gamer34]

It’s leviOsa.
NOT levioSA
For anyone who gets the reference your cool.
If not you’re still cool.

[@Goose-Team]

It'll be extremely funny if this take will take much less than official version...
Oh, and yeah. Go ahead with your take, but if you want to use official music, sprites, etc. you must credit its author.
If you can speak russian, you can answer on this language because all the team is russian.

[@keniponezhh]

cool partickle.mfa

[@FieryPadawan]

Oh My God, I didn't actually expect you guys to comment!
Thank you guys for the approval by the way
(О Боже мой, я даже не ожидал, что вы прокомментируете!
Спасибо, ребята, за одобрение, кстати)

[@Goose-Team]

@@FieryPadawan Видимо, другие ребята прям ищут какой-то фан-контент по нашей вселенной, по-другому я описать не могу, почему мы постоянно находим что-то. (Говорит JAG, если что)

[@vorti69]

@@FieryPadawan меня указать забыл

[@sirfrog3579]

You promised a man GOOGLY EYES yet i don't see any GOOGLY EYES!!!!

[@FieryPadawan]

I uploaded this before i replied to the googly eyes comment, sorry! And recently my pc was wiped so I can't work on any of the previous stuff, including this. 😢

[@sirfrog3579]

@FieryPadawan it's fine.. just remember it next ok? OK.
👍 👌

[@Scammerton]

SO COOL , I think I steal this idea😋(Nyeh Nyeh Nyeh)

[@FieryPadawan]

Sure, it's not even mine! It's by goose team, whom actually commented on this video!

[@haloboi3803]

bowser papyrus

[@FieryPadawan]

The perfect comment.

[@sodiumized]

omg TraxSus undertale engine?

[@FieryPadawan]

Yep.

[@Maestrotat]

Омагад☕

[@FieryPadawan]

Спасибо!