You are my most recently found best author, I like that your stories link in a way together but they are still separated 😘🫂 just so forward in the future 👍 I am looking forward to listen more of your books 📚😂🎉❤
I love that your books actually have beginnings and endings. They don't leave us wondering with gaping holes between the chapters like so many of the audio series. You are a wonderful author.
It's 6am. I couldn't sleep and chucked this on thinking it would be a chill love story to try sleep to. Well I got too enthralled and now here we are haha. I loved the plot twist. I felt her devastation in my heart. I wanted to scream and cry on her behalf.
Omg!! ❤️ I absolutely love that you were absorbed by the story and I’m super happy you felt for Sage (most reviewers are annoyed by her 🤣)! But so sorry this kept you awake though !! I’m a big insomniac so I feel for you!! ❤️❤️
Good, different. Don't be a coward in life. Shutting down and hiding doesn't work. There has to be honesty in love. Thank you, waiting for the next one❤❤❤❤❤🎉🎉🎉🎉😊
[Spoiler Alert!!!!!! So please don't read this comment until you have finished the video] . . . . . . . . . . what? so what happened to Ben when he woke up? he just forgot his feelings for Sage and just agrees to be the uncle for his child? Did I miss anything or what? after he was kidnapped or something he was supposed to wake up from the spell of having a fated mate right? so after that spell is lifted, he's supposed to go back to how he originally felt which was being in love with Sage right? Why was this not given emphasis? They should have at least talked after he got out of the spell. He just fell out of love just like that? And having a child with a person you've had relationship with for such a long time is a complicated matter and it doesn't sit right with me that he just went okay my brother will be the father of my child. I feel like it would've been better if the spell was about Sage and Noah spending a night together they couldn't remember and it's Noah's child and they find out later on. And then Phoebe (Iris) was really Ben's fated pair. I don't know I just feel like it was unfair for Ben's character. He seemed like a good guy and i feel like if he knew he had a child he wouldn't just let go of that child even if it's his brother. He will want to be the father of that child. Oh well, I did like the narration though so I subbed and will check out the other stories.
Aaaw justice for my boy Ben ! Love that ! ❤️❤️ So what I had in mind for him was that while he loved (loves) Sage, he was more with her out of guilt because he knows she only has him + carries this big trauma ! Like Noah says to Sage she’s been using him as a crutch (unconsciously) and I think Ben knows/feels this. So honestly I think he’d be kind of relieved in the end. Though, even without this aspect in mind, just like sage was hurt but understood and supported Ben when he thought ‘Phoebe’ was his fated mate I think it’s the same for Ben. It hurts but I think for shifters they know it’s such a strong bound what can you do? And on top of that the fated mate is his brother. Who’s been killing himself keeping silent all these years. So honestly even if it stings in my mind Ben accepts and supports this. About the baby though I feel you! Honestly this could have been an entire sequel on how they find an arrangement for the situation. But ultimately his baby will be in his life and he’ll have a special place in it. He’s not giving it away to some random dude but to his brother. Perhaps maybe in the future the baby can know the truth ? Who knows! Ps: I really appreciate you for putting the spoiler warning thank you !! ❤️❤️
@@lilywritesstuffi mean .. is he the safe choice?! He was kinda a dick! He dropped her like she was nothing but had the nerve to feel some kind of way about her moving on regardless of with whom. Hes a bit selfish to me
Oh my! I loved this story more than your other one! FINALLY!! I was beginning to think my co-worker was just crazy over these werewolf stories, and I mean in the coo-coo way! Because I was having absolutely no luck at all finding one that I could listen to much less be drawn into like I have with your other story and most definitely this story because it was amazing I absolutely loved it and I am so glad the ending ended the way it did. Kudos! I'm definitely a romance werewolf shifter story fan for sure now! Thank you for sharing! **(Please don't ever stop!!)
As an elder millennial I can say she's gonna keep making those mistakes through the whole story. That's just based off of my life (not a werewolf) but I can't get my sh*t straight. lol. I'm like "Oh! Another bad decision! Let's take that route!"
Enjoyable as always and I have to tell you how how much I appreciate how PG you keep the romance... I work overnights at a homeless shelter and like to listen in my office, it would be awkward if it turned sketchy when someone came to ask for something. 🤣
Girl you also lied.both of you are liars. He lied by omission and you lied because you need him. For selfish reasons. How would you get away with it anyways? I though they can smell the guy on you when you slept together?
She doesn’t get away with it, literally everyone knows which is precisely why she’s worried about not finding a new mate at the beginning of the story 😉
Thank you for uploading this book. I like it, but administrator can you please enable automatic subtitles? I am not a native English speaker. It would help me a lot to understand everything.
I've already listened to/read "The Vampire's Bride"😃 and was already addicted to your books!❤️🔥The subtitles were already activated! I also plan to listen to and read all the other parts.
Thank you so much! Here's a playlist to all my stories from this same series if you'd like (they're standalone stories but with recurring character) : ruclips.net/p/PLBzQqoG09d9Ka0brtbPWm0Q4MM0JcxaMw&si=3mWiwLI7i-yeMYdV
Thanks for the feedback! ❤️It’s interesting because I did consider a dual pov for this story! But I chose to create some intrigue and frustration around why Noah acts the way he does. If we’d seen his pov, the story would have been very different because we would know everything about it his motivations from the start! Could have been good too but ultimately not how I wanted to tell this one! About the too much thinking from sage I get that, my characters tend to overthink like I do! I’ll work on that! 😊
@@lilywritesstuffso Sage and Noah stay together? Ben admits having a girlfriend there is a way it’s said that could kinda refer two different scenarios. I love this story! I wish there was a part 2.
@daniellecupit2233 this one was very neatly wrapped up actually no? Unless you mean for Adrian and iris but that’s cause they’re recurring characters so their story isn’t over.
I liked it. And I for one am not that frustrated with Sage. I felt for her. Why are we always so hard on the heroine and let everything slip and make excuses for the hero. Don't get me wrong I felt for him too. Just saying he made equally stupid decisions.
@@katerbi8018 indeed! I was also surprised at how people seem to dislike sage for making bad decisions but not Noah who is ALSO making bad decisions ! I find that often in romances the man is depicted as the ‘flawed one’ that needs to change and become better, while the woman is often the kind positive influence that gets him to make the change ! Nothing wrong with that but once in a while I personally want to try something different where the woman is flawed too! That said maybe I didn’t do it effectively enough and need to improve ! 🙂 glad you felt for her though!! thank you for saying so!! ❤️❤️❤️
You should make a POV, for the characters, and maybe a book two, i really like this, i lost my dad, so i understand the pain, the empty ness she feels, the numbness, the endless pang of loss, the grief barried for so long, please keep, making these stories, I relate to ur book so much, sage is my fav character ❤
Thank you so much, I’m glad Sage’s character resonated with you ! ❤️❤️ I’m really sorry to hear about your dad though 😞😞… Sending you warm thoughts ! ❤️
@@lilywritesstuff awwww thank you so much 😊 and it’s fine at least he isn’t hurting anymore, listening to ur books helps me cope, so really thank youuu ❤️❤️
Try this story if you enjoyed: ruclips.net/video/zjW-40rZJfI/видео.html
You are my most recently found best author, I like that your stories link in a way together but they are still separated 😘🫂 just so forward in the future 👍 I am looking forward to listen more of your books 📚😂🎉❤
@ thank you so much !! That is so kind ❤️! I’m glad you’ve been enjoying my stories ! 🥰
I love that your books actually have beginnings and endings. They don't leave us wondering with gaping holes between the chapters like so many of the audio series. You are a wonderful author.
Thank you so much that’s very kind of you to say ! ❤️❤️❤️
It's 6am. I couldn't sleep and chucked this on thinking it would be a chill love story to try sleep to. Well I got too enthralled and now here we are haha. I loved the plot twist. I felt her devastation in my heart. I wanted to scream and cry on her behalf.
Omg!! ❤️ I absolutely love that you were absorbed by the story and I’m super happy you felt for Sage (most reviewers are annoyed by her 🤣)! But so sorry this kept you awake though !! I’m a big insomniac so I feel for you!! ❤️❤️
Good, different.
Don't be a coward in life. Shutting down and hiding doesn't work.
There has to be honesty in love.
Thank you, waiting for the next one❤❤❤❤❤🎉🎉🎉🎉😊
Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed ❤️❤️❤️
Well remember the girl is what barely 20. I was not emotional stable at that age either.
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what? so what happened to Ben when he woke up? he just forgot his feelings for Sage and just agrees to be the uncle for his child? Did I miss anything or what? after he was kidnapped or something he was supposed to wake up from the spell of having a fated mate right? so after that spell is lifted, he's supposed to go back to how he originally felt which was being in love with Sage right? Why was this not given emphasis? They should have at least talked after he got out of the spell. He just fell out of love just like that? And having a child with a person you've had relationship with for such a long time is a complicated matter and it doesn't sit right with me that he just went okay my brother will be the father of my child. I feel like it would've been better if the spell was about Sage and Noah spending a night together they couldn't remember and it's Noah's child and they find out later on. And then Phoebe (Iris) was really Ben's fated pair. I don't know I just feel like it was unfair for Ben's character. He seemed like a good guy and i feel like if he knew he had a child he wouldn't just let go of that child even if it's his brother. He will want to be the father of that child. Oh well, I did like the narration though so I subbed and will check out the other stories.
Aaaw justice for my boy Ben ! Love that ! ❤️❤️
So what I had in mind for him was that while he loved (loves) Sage, he was more with her out of guilt because he knows she only has him + carries this big trauma ! Like Noah says to Sage she’s been using him as a crutch (unconsciously) and I think Ben knows/feels this. So honestly I think he’d be kind of relieved in the end. Though, even without this aspect in mind, just like sage was hurt but understood and supported Ben when he thought ‘Phoebe’ was his fated mate I think it’s the same for Ben. It hurts but I think for shifters they know it’s such a strong bound what can you do? And on top of that the fated mate is his brother. Who’s been killing himself keeping silent all these years. So honestly even if it stings in my mind Ben accepts and supports this.
About the baby though I feel you! Honestly this could have been an entire sequel on how they find an arrangement for the situation. But ultimately his baby will be in his life and he’ll have a special place in it. He’s not giving it away to some random dude but to his brother. Perhaps maybe in the future the baby can know the truth ? Who knows!
Ps: I really appreciate you for putting the spoiler warning thank you !! ❤️❤️
All is well that ends well❣️💟 i'm so intrigued with Adrian, the Magician. Thanks 4 keeping him in the loop🤩
Haha glad you’re intrigued with him ! ❤️❤️❤️
What a great story, nice twist. I couldn’t get enough! Thank you for writing.
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed !! ❤️
Sage has problems lol
Yes she does!!
❤loved the story
@@janetbecker4282 thank you ❤️❤️❤️
An enjoyable story! With twists I didn't expect! I enjoyed it all in one sitting too! I'll be looking at the other stories now too!
@@JamieLent84 thank you very much ❤️❤️
I have listened to three of your books so far, this one is my favourite absolutely loved it. Thank you😊
Glad you enjoyed thank you for listening ❤️❤️❤️
This was too good. I couldn't stop listening and it's now 3:00 in the morning.
Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed ❤️❤️though sorry for the lack of sleep!
This was so good. Thank you for sharing it
@@karlawhite4830 my pleasure thank you for listening !! ❤️❤️
Love love your stories. I can feel your passion and commitment to your listener. Your voice is so soothing.
Thank you so much !! 🥰❤️❤️
That beautiful ending made me cry!! 😭 Wonderful story!
Thank you so much!! Glad you liked it!! ❤️❤️❤️
This story kind of pisses me off. She subconsciously knew that Noah meant something to her, but chose Ben. She completely ignored everything.
Well Ben is the safe, already established option and she didn’t know Noah was interested though! 🙂 but yeah she doesn’t make the smartest choices !
@@lilywritesstuffi mean .. is he the safe choice?! He was kinda a dick! He dropped her like she was nothing but had the nerve to feel some kind of way about her moving on regardless of with whom. Hes a bit selfish to me
@@thehyenamakeupslayer3819 well he was, in her mind, prior to this event !
loved your book. keep up the good work
Thank you ❤️❤️
You're the Queen of plot twists and I LOVE IT
Haha love that!! Thank you!! ❤️❤️❤️
I agree with all of the previous comments. I like contained stories and d voice over in this one is an improvement for sure.
Thank you!! ❤️
Oh my goodness. I love this storyline, it's excellent female Narrator is perfect. Really love this storyline. Next chapter please. 😊❤❤❤❤
Thank you so much !! So kind of you to say ❤️❤️❤️
I loved it!!! Was absolutely enthralled. ❤
Glad to hear it thank you so much!! ❤️❤️
It's like he's the one rejected but is doing everything to change her mind. While she has a memory issue
Oh my! I loved this story more than your other one!
FINALLY!! I was beginning to think my co-worker was just crazy over these werewolf stories, and I mean in the coo-coo way! Because I was having absolutely no luck at all finding one that I could listen to much less be drawn into like I have with your other story and most definitely this story because it was amazing I absolutely loved it and I am so glad the ending ended the way it did.
Kudos!
I'm definitely a romance werewolf shifter story fan for sure now!
Thank you for sharing!
**(Please don't ever stop!!)
Thank you so much! ❤️❤️❤️ glad to hear you enjoyed this one as well !
I used to laugh at Phyllis from the Office. Now I’m acting like her listening to these
@@phillykiki7320 haha Phyllis ❤️🤣 she was my spirit animal!
Another fantastic story loved it ❤
Yaaaay thank you so much 🥰🥰🥰
So good!!!
Thank you so much!! ❤️❤️
this girl keeps making wrong decisions 😅
As an elder millennial I can say she's gonna keep making those mistakes through the whole story. That's just based off of my life (not a werewolf) but I can't get my sh*t straight. lol. I'm like "Oh! Another bad decision! Let's take that route!"
Don't tell me she doesn't end with the Alpha!?
Same! hahaha
❤ love your stories ❤
@@HannahZar-j7e thank you so much ❤️❤️❤️
Thank you. Good book Looking forward for more
Thank you so much! Glad to hear it! ❤️❤️
@@lilywritesstuff I love this book, can't wait to read more!
@ thank you so much!! ❤️❤️ glad you enjoyed !!
Wonderful books! Please continue writing. Love the narration.
Thank you so much!! ❤️❤️❤️
Thank you, I enjoy this story.
Thank you !! Glad to hear it ❤️
Enjoyable as always and I have to tell you how how much I appreciate how PG you keep the romance...
I work overnights at a homeless shelter and like to listen in my office, it would be awkward if it turned sketchy when someone came to ask for something. 🤣
Hahaha that makes sense ! My pleasure !!❤️❤️
Absolutely beautiful story!!
Thank you so much happy you enjoyed ! ❤️
Thank you for the story. I truly appreciate it.
Thank YOU for watching and commenting ❤️❤️❤️
I love this story!!! ❤️ Definitely going to listen to more of your stories! Thank you 🤩
@@Steffi.B thank you so much ! Glad you enjoyed ❤️❤️❤️
Good story! Will definitely listen to more. Thank you for having it in audiobook form. 🥰🥰
Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed ! ❤️❤️
Awesome I love it thank you ❤
Thank you so much!! ❤️❤️
I love your reading voice. It calms my PTSD. Thank you so much.❤
Glad to hear it helped !!❤️❤️
A very beautiful story ❤
I love your storytelling.
Thank you so much !! So kind of you to say ❤️❤️
Loved the story thank you
Thank you so much !! Glad to heart it!! ❤️❤️❤️
I’ve enjoyed all of these
Thank you glad to hear it! ❤️
This story has an an expecting twist😮
Most of my stories do I live for twists 🤣
Ahhh I love this already!!
Great story!
Thank you !! ♥♥
Girl you also lied.both of you are liars. He lied by omission and you lied because you need him. For selfish reasons. How would you get away with it anyways? I though they can smell the guy on you when you slept together?
She doesn’t get away with it, literally everyone knows which is precisely why she’s worried about not finding a new mate at the beginning of the story 😉
I know right? That moral outrage she has is crazy.
Love your voice hun!
I woke up to this playing and listened to this and enjoyed it…thank you❤
My pleasure glad you enjoyed ❤️
Nice twist!!
Thank you !! 🥰🥰🥰
Lovely story. I enjoyed it a lot!!! 🎉🎉🎉❤
Thank you so much ❤️❤️❤️
I loved it. Look forward to you stories ❤
Yaaaay glad you enjoyed !! Thank you so much ❤️❤️
@@lilywritesstuff you’re welcome! thank you for sharing your work with us 🩷
I really liked it. Thank you, more please!
I’m glad you enjoyed and want more !! ❤️❤️ coming soon! 😊
Loved it! ❤
Thank you!! ❤️❤️
😭😭😭 Your story telling is a thing of beauty. What a roller coaster.
Thank you so much!! That’s so kind of you to say ❤️❤️❤️
i love the story thank you for sharing😊😊
Thank you for watching and commenting ❤️❤️❤️
so enjoyed this
Thank you so much !! ❤️
I love this book you did a awesome job you're very talented!
Thank you so much ❤️❤️
❤ i love it!
Thank you very much ❤️❤️
Really enjoying this series and I love the link so far I'd love to hear more about Iris
Thank you so much! ❤️ I plan to write her story in the future !!
Half way through and I have no idea where this is going 😂
I’ll take that as the compliment it probably was not ! 😄❤️
@@lilywritesstuffmy bad it wasn't a criticism. I'm loving it!
Great story
Thank you so much!! ❤️
😮 ohhhhhhhh its lovely hearing it
I absolutely loved this whole series ❤️ ♥️ ❤
Thank you so much! Glad to hear it!! ❤️❤️
Thank you for uploading this book. I like it, but administrator can you please enable automatic subtitles? I am not a native English speaker. It would help me a lot to understand everything.
I added it (I think cause I thought RUclips did that automatically and it’s the first time I tried it!) let me know if it doesn’t work!
@@lilywritesstuffI’m Happy!!! So happy for the quick reply and yes activating the subtitles worked immediately ❤️🔥🫶
Awesome!! Well thanks to you I know how to do it now! 😁❤️
I've already listened to/read "The Vampire's Bride"😃 and was already addicted to your books!❤️🔥The subtitles were already activated! I also plan to listen to and read all the other parts.
Oh awesome!! Glad you enjoyed the vampire bride too!! ❤️❤️
Loved it
@@ashleybaird882 thank you ❤️
I have love your story thanks for righting them
Thank you so much ! ❤️❤️
I like this story and I want to hear more by this author.
Thank you so much! Here's a playlist to all my stories from this same series if you'd like (they're standalone stories but with recurring character) : ruclips.net/p/PLBzQqoG09d9Ka0brtbPWm0Q4MM0JcxaMw&si=3mWiwLI7i-yeMYdV
Good voice over . Better than a lot I’ve heard
This is a beautiful story
@@hannahwallen5313 thank you so much ❤️❤️
This voice is great, much better.
Comment and liked to boost the algorithms 😂 Cheers to the Storyteller!
Haha thank youuuu ❤️❤️
This story is too one sided. It's all from the pov of Sage. Not enough dialog between characters and too much thinking from Sage.
Thanks for the feedback! ❤️It’s interesting because I did consider a dual pov for this story! But I chose to create some intrigue and frustration around why Noah acts the way he does. If we’d seen his pov, the story would have been very different because we would know everything about it his motivations from the start! Could have been good too but ultimately not how I wanted to tell this one! About the too much thinking from sage I get that, my characters tend to overthink like I do! I’ll work on that! 😊
@@lilywritesstuffso Sage and Noah stay together? Ben admits having a girlfriend there is a way it’s said that could kinda refer two different scenarios. I love this story! I wish there was a part 2.
@@kaylatemple3907 no no they stay together ! 😊
That' is so cruel of Ben
Really enjoyed this book thank you 😊
Glad you enjoyed ❤️❤️😊
Loved it
Thank you so much! glad you enjoyed!! ❤️❤️
Umm is it rude to ask which voice did you use? Its sooo good!
It’s Eleven Labs! It’s the best I think! But more expensive than most !
Excited for a new book ☺️
Yaaay! Hope you enjoy it!! 🤗
I love the stories but the ending always have loses ends. It's kind of a bummer
@daniellecupit2233 this one was very neatly wrapped up actually no? Unless you mean for Adrian and iris but that’s cause they’re recurring characters so their story isn’t over.
Awesome book❤❤❤
@@kimberlygonzales1899 thank you ❤️❤️❤️
Very good twist.
Thank you so much ❤️❤️
Looooved the story ❤️ * commented to help u make rent * 😂❤️
Yaaaay Hahaha thank you very much!! ❤️❤️
Question: Those of you who've watched other stories from this series, what do you think of the new voice over? better? worse?
I honestly enjoyed this voice as well, it sounds real, no fake like AI voices.
I also find the voice very pleasant and clear. Every word is easy to understand and well emphasized
Really like the voice.
Better, I would still listen
This is the first story I've watched of yours and it totally was incredible. Love your voice.
Enjoyed the story very much.❤
Thank you glad you enjoyed !! ❤️❤️
I need more!!
@@kimberlydavis6838 there’s more from the same series (but each one stars different characters, with only the magician and iris as recurring )
❤thanks good story
@@luzvelazquez9985 thank you ❤️
I liked it. And I for one am not that frustrated with Sage. I felt for her. Why are we always so hard on the heroine and let everything slip and make excuses for the hero. Don't get me wrong I felt for him too. Just saying he made equally stupid decisions.
@@katerbi8018 indeed! I was also surprised at how people seem to dislike sage for making bad decisions but not Noah who is ALSO making bad decisions ! I find that often in romances the man is depicted as the ‘flawed one’ that needs to change and become better, while the woman is often the kind positive influence that gets him to make the change ! Nothing wrong with that but once in a while I personally want to try something different where the woman is flawed too! That said maybe I didn’t do it effectively enough and need to improve ! 🙂 glad you felt for her though!! thank you for saying so!! ❤️❤️❤️
love it
Thank you so much ❤️❤️
I almost cried while listening to the parts of sage and Noah in the storm 😢 kind of reminded me of the titanic
Oh no 💔! At least it ends better though! 😊
I loooove your books ❤
Thank you so much !! ❤️❤️❤️
Thanks!
Thank you so so much!! That’s so kind !! 🤩🤩🥰🥰
Love the story 🎉😢
Thank you!! ❤️❤️
Great story
@@marymattox7765 thank you! ❤️❤️
Nice
Love this story ❤
Glad to hear it thank you!! ❤️❤️
Quite entertaining
You should make a POV, for the characters, and maybe a book two, i really like this, i lost my dad, so i understand the pain, the empty ness she feels, the numbness, the endless pang of loss, the grief barried for so long, please keep, making these stories, I relate to ur book so much, sage is my fav character ❤
Thank you so much, I’m glad Sage’s character resonated with you ! ❤️❤️ I’m really sorry to hear about your dad though 😞😞… Sending you warm thoughts ! ❤️
@@lilywritesstuff awwww thank you so much 😊 and it’s fine at least he isn’t hurting anymore, listening to ur books helps me cope, so really thank youuu ❤️❤️
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Good book 🎉
Thank you ❤️
Really good book
Thank you very much glad you liked it!! ❤️
Thank you
Thank you
Thank you for watching and commenting ❤️❤️❤️
Satisfying! I wonder when Iris and the magician will have come together, their feelings for one another are always obvious.
Not for a while 🤣
@@lilywritesstuffPlease make them together
@@neelimasharma9729 They were the best unofficial pair.
Love the book
Thank you!! ❤️