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I was enjoying the story until we got to the end where it just felt so rushed. There was no indication as to what happened between the protagonist and her meat after the fire then all of a sudden we were at Bill point of view. Everything else was so beautifully written my advice would be just to spend a bit more time on the ending because all the information was there just needed to be expanded on❤

Wonderful story❤

Wonderful story! Thanks for answering the question that was on my mind throughout the story on the relationship between Uncle Bill and Jane.

Its always funny to me when an unfair prince of alpha gets bullied! Like ppl... Even if his father is ashamed of him.. HES STILL AN ALPHA! YOUR STILL NOT! what dod redface expect exactly? Of course he was going to beat u up! 😂😂😂

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Who is the author

I need part 2 please

loved your book. keep up the good work

Thanks for sharing ❤😅

I NEED, and i mean i neeed a story with Adrien and Iris.

The story was well written and interesting as anything you write. I however wasn’t a fan of the characters. This is my last story as I have listened to all the rest. So sad. Until your the next post of your beautiful prose. ❤

Why does it cut in scenes. Before the narrative is complete another has already commenced..?

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THERE ARE TOO MANY STEPMOTHER SCENES!!!

Your voice encapsulates the characters of the story. I don't know if this is an original work or if your reading the story you have found, but I like it.

Oh good grief. I thought it was going to end a whole other way. Nice job.

This was a very good book! Thank you for sharing it!

So good!!!

You’re such a great writer what a great story was sad and haunting, and I did enjoy it it’s so easy to jump to conclusions.

Good story, bad ending

Really enjoyed this book, only it seemed to keep skipping in parts

This is my favorite story of yours! Thank you for keeping my interest with the plot twists and making me want to know more. I like how you build on characters from other stories. A wonderful touch. So good!

What did her mum do to her dad that she wanted to kill herself and daughter? Did i miss a bit?

I’ve enjoyed all of these

Emma quoting Taylor Swift is so iconic 😅💯

Loved it

I always seem to stumble my way back into the universe without noticing 😂 I simply love it! It’s a happy surprise every time Iris and Adrian show up 😂

I yelled “damn it!” -when the book ended- loud enough, that my husband ran into the kitchen thinking I hurt myself 😂😂 it ended too fast!!

Adrian and Iris's tension is increasing every story and I am so here for it 😂💛

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So glad you explored Vivian and Jake’s story. And Vivian’s family dynamic was insane and toxic. So glad Margo and Vivian were able to come together and deal with their mom. Of course they will need some therapy for sure. The loops and twists in this story made this a fantastic ride. So enjoyable!!! The cliff hanger with Phil and Rose is going to be so good. Can’t wait . Thank you for sharing your fabulous world you created.

Part2 please

Good job 😊

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Wonderful!❤❤❤

All is well that ends well❣️💟 i'm so intrigued with Adrian, the Magician. Thanks 4 keeping him in the loop🤩

You have out done yourself this time my girl. I really enjoyed this!! It was a bit more spicy then the others. I liked it 😍

I absolutely adore your books. You truly have a gift. The way you fluidly add all the characters in each story and how all the books connect with each other is absolutely brilliant. You really should try to become a professional writer.

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Would love part 2

Good story

Intetesting ghost/love story 👻 The children sounds adorable🤩

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Great srory of love & redemption 💖 Was delightfully surprised to meet up with Adrian, the Magician again🤩

A very beautiful story ❤

[Spoiler Alert!!!!!! So please don't read this comment until you have finished the video] . . . . . . . . . . what? so what happened to Ben when he woke up? he just forgot his feelings for Sage and just agrees to be the uncle for his child? Did I miss anything or what? after he was kidnapped or something he was supposed to wake up from the spell of having a fated mate right? so after that spell is lifted, he's supposed to go back to how he originally felt which was being in love with Sage right? Why was this not given emphasis? They should have at least talked after he got out of the spell. He just fell out of love just like that? And having a child with a person you've had relationship with for such a long time is a complicated matter and it doesn't sit right with me that he just went okay my brother will be the father of my child. I feel like it would've been better if the spell was about Sage and Noah spending a night together they couldn't remember and it's Noah's child and they find out later on. And then Phoebe (Iris) was really Ben's fated pair. I don't know I just feel like it was unfair for Ben's character. He seemed like a good guy and i feel like if he knew he had a child he wouldn't just let go of that child even if it's his brother. He will want to be the father of that child. Oh well, I did like the narration though so I subbed and will check out the other stories.

Thank you for using human narration

Great story