Hello my friends, sorry for the delay, but these last few days have been very hectic... As for the extra fanfiction, that is, the first episode of Shinano, it will be available between the first and second week of next month, along with the poll of upcoming fanfictions. Sorry to delay that chapter, but the script is not finished yet. Due to visits to the doctor and stress caused by health problems, I have not been able to write my way. I'm sorry. Remember that you can support the Channel and help me with my medical savings from Patreon: www.patreon.com/RyuumaBrunestud If you can't collaborate in this way, don't worry, you are also helping here as I thank you for continuing to watch, share and comment on my videos. I really appreciate this support, since unfortunately this month was harder than the previous ones, I had several visits with different doctors for some problems and it was difficult to face it, or rather, it is being difficult to face it... :( I removed an event from this chapter because the video was going to exceed 55 minutes and unfortunately my internet was unable to upload that video. So I will try to adapt that event in the next one. I hope this chapter has been to your liking... n___n As always, let me thank you for being here and I hope to see you in the next fanfiction. Please do not forget to comment and leave your opinion! See you soon! n__n! - - - - - Special Credits: Easily Winded - Persocom01 Englishman - P L Λ V Ξ P - Chuco - Karsel Tang - Kenji Shimada - Kai Stasch Thanks For Your Support ! Admirals: Chuco32 - Ian Michaelson - KoP152 - Kai Stasch - Orpheus - Yama - Notte - Charlie517 - Kadeji - Predator3435 - EasilyWinded - Warmonger1941. Commanders : Seigo Nakano - Richard Gauthier III - Slietch - Carlos Ceja - Benjamin Steber - Bahamut - GrAdm Henri G. Lieutenants : AnirBanerj - Kiwi82245 - Chach - Bryce Ostrem - Dylan Boatner - Kuuhaku - LordTouchMe - Fritz Krammer - Len - Sikof - Khôi Lê Minh - Vi Nguyen - jerome292.
@@TWG_50 ryuma you are the best at making these azur lane fanfic I will always watch your videos, get well soon. Ps:is illustrious going to be in one of that polls?
I hope one day you can have a better health and no problem ^^ i can't spend money to you now but one day when can I'll do it. (sorry if my English is bad I am French)
Lieutenant: Commander, you're careless. You left the trail. Now the yandere ships are coming for you, so you have to lock your doors and windows if you want to survive at night.
Loved the video Ryuma! Sorry if I haven't seen much of you content lately, but unfortunately my grandfather passed away about four days prior to this chapter going up. It's great to have some "reading material" from you as I feel like I have a drama/ comedy hybrid to look at and take my mind off of things and just laugh at all the little situations the ship girls get themselves into. Before anyone even asks, no, it wasn't related to the current situation right now, my grandfather had a lot of fluid in his lungs as well as a bad heart and plenty of other health problems that I couldn't remember even if I tried. I even have the DPWT cap that he gave me when I was little still and had it with me at his funeral as well as being a pallbearer. Best to stop myself here before something else comes up since this might be deemed as "sensitive information". Really quick, I saw in the comments section that some guys are saying that the thumbnail makes you kinda sus as you are obviously a man of culture; please tell me that the thumbnail isn't related to something that starts with "Hen" and ends with "Tai" since I will most likely go more ballistic than a Regulus Missile in the Cold War. Zuikaku, I could understand; Belfast, I could understand; Prinz Eugen, I could understand; Wales, Atago, Kaga, Akagi, or just about any Ship girl other than the Starter Squad and their fellow destroyers or Enterprise I could understand. Why do this to Grey Ghost? *WHY?!?*
Dear Ryuma, After four days of reckaping the Enterprise Fanfiction so i could be up to date for this episode i finally watched it. This episode was truly something to take in and im still a little overwhelmed after the last scene. But ill try and take this from beginning to end. I found it a nice gimmick, for the lack of a better term, when you practically copied the dialogue of the first time the Commander fell asleep on Enterprise and just adapted it to the current situation. It was sort of a moment that you could not understand or appreciate more without seeing the episode that contains the first encounter. Then we come to Akagi. A charachter that you made me bound with glowing hot chains to my heart. Since the Yandere's Day Fanfiction, i hope that is correct, in which you really for the first time showed what a calm, friendly and indescribably wonderfull woman Akagi can truly be in your writing, that refures to the scene in which the Commander is locked in a room alone with Akagi while tied on a bed. That side of her has seen development in the Amagi Fanfiction, which was another scene between Akagi and the Commander, and now also in the Enterpise Fanfiction as demonstrated in the scene in which Akagi tries to seduce the Commander and then developing into an attention grabing and sort of a "Let Akagi enter your heart" scene. I truly hope you give her the attention she deserves in this and the Amagi Fanfiction to develop her charachter and give a satisfing end to her story, no matter how long from now that will be. Finally, i think, we come to Enterprise. When talkiing about Enterprise you made her, sort of, revel in her thought while being in absence from the Commander. During one of those scenes she had, presumably, another encounter with Orochi and im curious, as always with your antagonistic charachters, how you develop those "Villains". Then we ofcourse had our first "Onscreen" appearance of Hornet and she was in a acceptable position in an understandable scene. You put her to good use in developing her charachter and, this is a major presumably, made her make the decison on come to the decision herself to resign from the position of the secretary of the Commander. To me that last scene was a huge cliffhanger that made me short of breath and annoyed that i have to wait for the next Episode to understand how the charachters deal with that and how it may lead into conflict and development. But i truly hope that you know what you did there and are able to make a suitable sequel that will adress this one area. A nice add on ofcourse is that i found the dynamic between Amagi and Yorktown develop steadily and with good results that make each charachter expose certain features of them that are unique to them, as an example the scene in which Yorktown picks a lock and Amagi having a moral quiry with that. Thumbs up from me. Now the Commander had a complicated time in this episode. He had his "Deja vu" moment in the beginning, the beautiful time between Him and Akagi but ofcourse mainly the fact that he had to understand his feelings and thoughts that he carries for Enterprise. He literally mentioned her name in association with everything that did not immediatly confirm the charachter. Random knock on door? Could be Enterprise! Random letter in my office? Could be from Enterprise! Enterprise, Enterprise Enterprise... throughout this whole Episode. So for you to come and hit me with the resignation letter that Enterprise filled for her secretary position made my Heart and Head crack at the same time. I truly hope you can make that whole fiasco work and carry this story into a satisfing end, which i hope will take quite a lot longer to get to. As always keep your head up high. These fanfictions are truly magnificant content and i hope you continue and create an all fronts. I wish you a sustainable recovery from whatever you have. I will leave it here, thanks again for all of this Ryuma. Your Kamerad Lukas.
Very nice chapter. Does open up a lot of possibilities... Spoilers (possibly?): I predict Mikasa/Yorktown would talk her out of resigning and some more plot development would happen. Some incident/drama also occurs and Enterprise & the commander gotta sort it out. Oh yeah. And Akagi might cause that drama/incident to occur (again...). Then IDK what happens cause there are so many possibilities, but I'm just touching base on some of the major stuff. If you got any predictions, I would like to hear them too. :D
Enterprise and Bismarck had several things in common, or at least what I think in Ryuma's fanfics. Guess Yorktown dug herself into trouble for that little prank, though Akagi was mostly at fault for ruining Vestal's garden. No one's above the authority of Vestal huh, not even the commander or Akagi.....
This is -the lockpickinglawyer- Yorktown and what I have for you today is a locked door that was well..locked for a reason. the lock seems to be your standard issued -Chinese-made- Dragon Empery lock with a 6 pin dimple core. I'm going to use a wiper insert as a turning tool and a multi pick dimple flag. ...nothing on 1...a click on 2 and 3...nothing on 4 and 5 and another click on 6... [12:40-13:00]
Another great chapter for an already great fanfic! The wait for these will always be worth it! I think my favorite part has to be the small exchange between the Commander and Akagi. It shows that Akagi can be sweet and gentle when you touch her heart with kindness. Even though Enterprise is the main love interest, I still thought the conversation was adorable. Anyways, I wonder what the Shinano fanfic is gonna be like? I can't wait to see it!
sooo good!! You really have the characters' personalities down too. I am a girl and don't play the game but I watch all your videos and the animes and I love the ship girls sooo much!! Many of them are like my role models. Good health to you and ty for your work!
A resignation letter?!?! Is Enterprise feeling bad about what happened that she decided to resign as a secretary? I hope the Commander gets to the bottom of this and hopefully apologize to her for what happened...although I could say the same about her. It was a good chapter by the way.
@@RyumaBrunestud Ah I see sorry I literally discovered your channel today and I had no idea how to fully know whether the series was over or not. Anyway great job you have a lot of talent and you honestly became my current favorite youtuber. I wish the best of luck to you that you recover just fine.
Neither can I. Heck that ending kept me up the whole night without any sleep on the night I watched this. However the only thing we can do is just wait. If I had to guess based off of when the previous episodes were uploaded, the next one should be coming out either 1 to 2 months from when this video was uploaded. But you can never be certain because he has other fan fics he's working on and also the fact he currently has health issues.
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Hello my friends, sorry for the delay, but these last few days have been very hectic...
As for the extra fanfiction, that is, the first episode of Shinano, it will be available between the first and second week of next month, along with the poll of upcoming fanfictions.
Sorry to delay that chapter, but the script is not finished yet. Due to visits to the doctor and stress caused by health problems, I have not been able to write my way. I'm sorry.
Remember that you can support the Channel and help me with my medical savings from Patreon: www.patreon.com/RyuumaBrunestud
If you can't collaborate in this way, don't worry, you are also helping here as I thank you for continuing to watch, share and comment on my videos.
I really appreciate this support, since unfortunately this month was harder than the previous ones, I had several visits with different doctors for some problems and it was difficult to face it, or rather, it is being difficult to face it... :(
I removed an event from this chapter because the video was going to exceed 55 minutes and unfortunately my internet was unable to upload that video.
So I will try to adapt that event in the next one.
I hope this chapter has been to your liking... n___n
As always, let me thank you for being here and I hope to see you in the next fanfiction.
Please do not forget to comment and leave your opinion! See you soon! n__n!
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Special Credits:
Easily Winded - Persocom01
Englishman - P L Λ V Ξ P - Chuco - Karsel Tang - Kenji Shimada - Kai Stasch
Thanks For Your Support !
Admirals: Chuco32 - Ian Michaelson - KoP152 -
Kai Stasch - Orpheus - Yama - Notte - Charlie517 - Kadeji - Predator3435 -
EasilyWinded - Warmonger1941.
Commanders : Seigo Nakano - Richard Gauthier III - Slietch -
Carlos Ceja - Benjamin Steber - Bahamut
- GrAdm Henri G.
Lieutenants : AnirBanerj - Kiwi82245 - Chach
- Bryce Ostrem - Dylan Boatner - Kuuhaku -
LordTouchMe - Fritz Krammer - Len -
Sikof - Khôi Lê Minh - Vi Nguyen - jerome292.
It's okay Ryuma
Your health comes first
Don't give too much stress to yourself
Keep yourself well and fine!!!
@@TWG_50 ryuma you are the best at making these azur lane fanfic I will always watch your videos, get well soon.
Ps:is illustrious going to be in one of that polls?
I hope one day you can have a better health and no problem ^^ i can't spend money to you now but one day when can I'll do it. (sorry if my English is bad I am French)
Its ok as long you are healthty and better condition.
Just make sure you take your time, we are always patient
Episode fully released (available)
Status: Enterprise Fanfic
Popcorn: Active | Flavor: (Cheese)
Beverages: Active | Status: (Sprite)
Commence watching
...
The fact that you caught off guard for the first time, Compiler
Clock: You better sleep! You got church tomorrow!
Me: *I REFUSE*
DAGA KOTOWARU
Is that a jojo reference
[TF2] Dispenser every thing is a jojo reference!
@@Dispenser-san
a wise man once said:
*everything is a jojo reference*
Enterprise is so cute when she sleeps
5:56 The funniest and the l3wd part!!!
What is going through my mind right now: Both. Both is good.
OH YEAH, that’s are boy 😎
I'll save this for later on
I don't wanna lose my job :)
Lieutenant: Commander, you're careless. You left the trail. Now the yandere ships are coming for you, so you have to lock your doors and windows if you want to survive at night.
Commander: *Ah, shit. Here we go, again.*
It's five nights at freddy's all over again.
@@giulio7853 No, it's five nights at yandere's.
Night 10/100 (Call of Duty zombie mode reference)
Loved the video Ryuma! Sorry if I haven't seen much of you content lately, but unfortunately my grandfather passed away about four days prior to this chapter going up. It's great to have some "reading material" from you as I feel like I have a drama/ comedy hybrid to look at and take my mind off of things and just laugh at all the little situations the ship girls get themselves into. Before anyone even asks, no, it wasn't related to the current situation right now, my grandfather had a lot of fluid in his lungs as well as a bad heart and plenty of other health problems that I couldn't remember even if I tried. I even have the DPWT cap that he gave me when I was little still and had it with me at his funeral as well as being a pallbearer. Best to stop myself here before something else comes up since this might be deemed as "sensitive information".
Really quick, I saw in the comments section that some guys are saying that the thumbnail makes you kinda sus as you are obviously a man of culture; please tell me that the thumbnail isn't related to something that starts with "Hen" and ends with "Tai" since I will most likely go more ballistic than a Regulus Missile in the Cold War. Zuikaku, I could understand; Belfast, I could understand; Prinz Eugen, I could understand; Wales, Atago, Kaga, Akagi, or just about any Ship girl other than the Starter Squad and their fellow destroyers or Enterprise I could understand. Why do this to Grey Ghost? *WHY?!?*
Dear Ryuma,
After four days of reckaping the Enterprise Fanfiction so i could be up to date for this episode i finally watched it.
This episode was truly something to take in and im still a little overwhelmed after the last scene. But ill try and take this from beginning to end.
I found it a nice gimmick, for the lack of a better term, when you practically copied the dialogue of the first time the Commander fell asleep on Enterprise and just adapted it to the current situation. It was sort of a moment that you could not understand or appreciate more without seeing the episode that contains the first encounter.
Then we come to Akagi. A charachter that you made me bound with glowing hot chains to my heart. Since the Yandere's Day Fanfiction, i hope that is correct, in which you really for the first time showed what a calm, friendly and indescribably wonderfull woman Akagi can truly be in your writing, that refures to the scene in which the Commander is locked in a room alone with Akagi while tied on a bed. That side of her has seen development in the Amagi Fanfiction, which was another scene between Akagi and the Commander, and now also in the Enterpise Fanfiction as demonstrated in the scene in which Akagi tries to seduce the Commander and then developing into an attention grabing and sort of a "Let Akagi enter your heart" scene. I truly hope you give her the attention she deserves in this and the Amagi Fanfiction to develop her charachter and give a satisfing end to her story, no matter how long from now that will be.
Finally, i think, we come to Enterprise. When talkiing about Enterprise you made her, sort of, revel in her thought while being in absence from the Commander. During one of those scenes she had, presumably, another encounter with Orochi and im curious, as always with your antagonistic charachters, how you develop those "Villains". Then we ofcourse had our first "Onscreen" appearance of Hornet and she was in a acceptable position in an understandable scene. You put her to good use in developing her charachter and, this is a major presumably, made her make the decison on come to the decision herself to resign from the position of the secretary of the Commander. To me that last scene was a huge cliffhanger that made me short of breath and annoyed that i have to wait for the next Episode to understand how the charachters deal with that and how it may lead into conflict and development. But i truly hope that you know what you did there and are able to make a suitable sequel that will adress this one area.
A nice add on ofcourse is that i found the dynamic between Amagi and Yorktown develop steadily and with good results that make each charachter expose certain features of them that are unique to them, as an example the scene in which Yorktown picks a lock and Amagi having a moral quiry with that. Thumbs up from me.
Now the Commander had a complicated time in this episode. He had his "Deja vu" moment in the beginning, the beautiful time between Him and Akagi but ofcourse mainly the fact that he had to understand his feelings and thoughts that he carries for Enterprise. He literally mentioned her name in association with everything that did not immediatly confirm the charachter. Random knock on door? Could be Enterprise! Random letter in my office? Could be from Enterprise! Enterprise, Enterprise Enterprise... throughout this whole Episode. So for you to come and hit me with the resignation letter that Enterprise filled for her secretary position made my Heart and Head crack at the same time. I truly hope you can make that whole fiasco work and carry this story into a satisfing end, which i hope will take quite a lot longer to get to.
As always keep your head up high. These fanfictions are truly magnificant content and i hope you continue and create an all fronts. I wish you a sustainable recovery from whatever you have.
I will leave it here, thanks again for all of this Ryuma.
Your Kamerad Lukas.
For those people who live in Washington...
Can ya'll feel the pain?
Yes, but I'll still resist :3
it's currently 12:03 PM here
*MUST RESIST*
I do live in Washington
But it will be good to rest for a while it's for the best :)
Me before the start of the video: Yeeees!
Me after the end of the video: nooooo!
(I still enjoyed this chapter a lot, keep up the good work!)
Very nice chapter. Does open up a lot of possibilities...
Spoilers (possibly?): I predict Mikasa/Yorktown would talk her out of resigning and some more plot development would happen. Some incident/drama also occurs and Enterprise & the commander gotta sort it out. Oh yeah. And Akagi might cause that drama/incident to occur (again...). Then IDK what happens cause there are so many possibilities, but I'm just touching base on some of the major stuff. If you got any predictions, I would like to hear them too. :D
Nice seeing you her friend. Hope your doing well.
@@zewolfking8796 Hello. And yes. Im doing well.
Akagi: "what are you apologizing for?"
Me: For what i'm about to do, (nerve strikes her on the neck)
Enterprise and Bismarck had several things in common, or at least what I think in Ryuma's fanfics.
Guess Yorktown dug herself into trouble for that little prank, though Akagi was mostly at fault for ruining Vestal's garden.
No one's above the authority of Vestal huh, not even the commander or Akagi.....
Never disobey or anger the doctor/nurse of your base.
Ahh yes the commander gets the most torture (as always).
This is -the lockpickinglawyer- Yorktown and what I have for you today is a locked door that was well..locked for a reason. the lock seems to be your standard issued -Chinese-made- Dragon Empery lock with a 6 pin dimple core.
I'm going to use a wiper insert as a turning tool and a multi pick dimple flag.
...nothing on 1...a click on 2 and 3...nothing on 4 and 5 and another click on 6...
[12:40-13:00]
Sir, my bycle that equip with shtora Missile deflect got stolen again!
Ah, finally, something that fixes the mood
Thank you~❤
Auntieeeee :DDD
Something that fixes the mood for lady hood. 😏
Of course you would be here.
Also, pleasure seeing you again. :D
Aunt Hood why are you in every video I watch???
I click as fast as lightning when I saw the notification!
Zeus: *WRITE THAT DOWN* , *WRITE THAT DOWN*
Thunderclap and flash godspeed.
Another great chapter for an already great fanfic! The wait for these will always be worth it!
I think my favorite part has to be the small exchange between the Commander and Akagi. It shows that Akagi can be sweet and gentle when you touch her heart with kindness. Even though Enterprise is the main love interest, I still thought the conversation was adorable.
Anyways, I wonder what the Shinano fanfic is gonna be like? I can't wait to see it!
28:52 could it be Dark Enterprise?
Also, I got really shocked at the last part
Is she really going to get resigned????
Or ash ( aka alter/meta enterprise )
@@Arthur69xd Kind of possible
I want her and the commander to have an happy end, PLEASE! 🙏
@@piratevirus227 Yes this needs to happen.
@@zewolfking8796 let’s hope it’s a test, for him to show his true feelings.
Sayan and Ze Wolf King are the bro squad to protect enterprise!
Enterprise best waifu
Must protect!!!
Yes must protect. Also just woke up and this is the first video I clicked. Anyways how's yours guys day?
@@TWG_50 100%
@@zewolfking8796 protect the prized Waifu
Ryuma sus in his thumbnail and i see it before
@Austin Rooks yes my comrade its totally ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
The music reminds me of a 3DS game I used to play.
Oh no. What is that letter she left... I can only imagine what kind of surprise is in store for the Commander.
She probably resignated from being secretary
@@tangmengtit888 I can see that being more than likely.
YES, when I see Enterprise I click. Especially an fanfic.
I was really waiting for this chapter!!!
Same here dude
Hell yeah
Wonder how's chapter 5 is gonna be
@@ussenterprise5272 yeah I'm thinking, but I'm usually wrong when it comes to what's next.
Hey ryuma about the tumbnail, why do i feel like i saw the tumbnail source in a *CULTURED* site(people with cultured mind only knows)
ye i was gonna say the same thing lol
Sauce
Notification Squad! Assemble!
Lol I'm late for 2 hours but yeah, when I saw the notification I clicked as fast as I can
@@ConfusedAdmiral Same here
@@ConfusedAdmiral same
sooo good!! You really have the characters' personalities down too. I am a girl and don't play the game but I watch all your videos and the animes and I love the ship girls sooo much!! Many of them are like my role models. Good health to you and ty for your work!
nooo
pls i want enterprise to remain a secretary :,
hmmmmmmmmm with the amount of alters going here we might get an alter commander controlling every alter ships how about it? great vid as always
A resignation letter?!?! Is Enterprise feeling bad about what happened that she decided to resign as a secretary? I hope the Commander gets to the bottom of this and hopefully apologize to her for what happened...although I could say the same about her.
It was a good chapter by the way.
Ofc i never leave my ship behind :>
I promise
Rare ship in retire slot : of course
Belfast : is time for the punishment commander
Yessssss, thank you so much ryuma I have been waiting for so long for a new fanfic.
Holy Crap! Resignation letter?!
Yay the chapter we all been waiting for :D
YESH KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK RYUMA
WE WUV YOU^^ UwU
Yeeaaahhh enty again :)
Enterprise have PTSD or what with that ghosts?
F in the chat for Vestal's garden
F
F
the last 30 second is karma for the simp
Oh my god, that thumbnail. I have memorized that Artists' art style way too much to know where it came from 😂😂
Sauce?
@@edgardox.feliciano3127 It's from Ginhaha.
@@omniyeet8818 thanks, good sir
Is this the last episode? I can’t tell because it doesn’t say last episode but the ending seemed like the final nail in the coffin
No... o_O
Hmm... Let's see, if I'm not mistaken, there are 4~5 chapters left for the end of this story.
@@RyumaBrunestud Ah I see sorry I literally discovered your channel today and I had no idea how to fully know whether the series was over or not. Anyway great job you have a lot of talent and you honestly became my current favorite youtuber. I wish the best of luck to you that you recover just fine.
Can you give us St. Louis Spirits in the Snow skin update? I really like that skin and i'd love to see Lou's heart pupils with her lines
Vestal Face is Extremely Scary!
..Great story!! can't wait for the next one..
the return of the king
me after finishing this late at night: *I dont need sleep i need answers*
What a comedic start!
Guys how do I find thia thumbnail
You want to know its an cultured website m8
Is this some sort of mod for the AL? Im curious
Hello Akira, I apologize for not having responded.
This is created with a Visual Novel software called Ren'Py.
Umm...where can i read the next one?? I cant wait like this
Neither can I. Heck that ending kept me up the whole night without any sleep on the night I watched this. However the only thing we can do is just wait. If I had to guess based off of when the previous episodes were uploaded, the next one should be coming out either 1 to 2 months from when this video was uploaded. But you can never be certain because he has other fan fics he's working on and also the fact he currently has health issues.
3:05 Hipper?
Big E said yeet the shikikun
Im fast as light boii
Wuuuu NOICE
Omg, I recognize that thumbnail you use Ryuma
Sos?
@@pokaynapaled272 Sos? (Meaning please)
@@zwartayatsukimercury5047 he means the Source of the Image.
Resembled with Sauce.
@@pokaynapaled272 Read the Description Carefully
21:41
Yesss
USS enterprise Vs akagi in battle of midway
Waiting for part 5 because enterprise best shipfu
HalpMih gang anyone?
Is this.... OWARI DA ??
that thumbnail
Is this a fan made story?
yes
Thank you Ryuma
Hornet underrated af.
Subhanallah Masyaallah
Wait a.... I thought this series is over?
who dis like is not a weep...
That thumbnail looks.......familiar.
Wtf
Why a resignation letter Enterprise?
OwO
I gently opened the door
what game is this? and where can i get it
Interesting was just watching next generation
Also is that a ginhana art
So this is unofficial?
FINALLY IVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS
Which game is this?
NTRprice
Wtf why is this become a horror game
¿ateM esirpretnE
When will the fifth episode be posted?
Another great video to watch