Well... Let's see... How do I start with this...? First of all, I apologize for the delay. Unfortunately, due to certain circumstances, there was nothing to do about it. But I want you to know that the people who were in charge of checking the text, did everything possible to dedicate time to the script. Still, I want to apologize, I really wish I had a faster pace to write, so it is also partly my fault. - Regarding this chapter, what do you think? There is a section that is intermediate between other related events, if anyone wants to ask about it, I can clarify that question. Please, even if it is just a supportive comment, do not forget to comment and share the video, either with your opinions or whatever you want, that really helps me. n___n - In case you want to support me in an external way for my medical expenses, here is my Patreon: www.patreon.com/RyuumaBrunestud If you can't collaborate in this way, don't worry, you are also helping here as I thank you for continuing to watch, share and comment on my videos. I really appreciate all the support you can give me... and... PLEASE* remember not to force yourself to support me financially if you cannot. I really don't want you to find yourself in a difficult situation because of me. - Regarding this month's fanfiction and FDG's... FDG's script is still in the works, so it could be out in the next 10 days maybe. Although the voting is active, it seems that we can already see a winner. (Amagi) - If anyone wants to know about my health. There have been no favorable changes on the vascular problem. Unfortunately I have seen myself use my savings for surgery to treat my other health problems. And although I have used a large part of them, I certainly see myself in red numbers. What does this mean? Unfortunately I don't have the money to pay for all that. In a way, it does not seem like a pleasant situation, but it is thanks to you that I can remain a little more stable these months, for that reason I am really grateful to you, I really appreciate it. I apologize for not being able to show you my appreciation in more than words. - I think this message has already reached the end. As always, let me thank you for being here and supporting me. I hope this chapter has been to your liking. I wish you a good day and we will see you in the next few days. n____n - - - - - Special Credits: Persocom - Easily Winded & Chuco. Thanks For Your Support ! Admirals : Chuco32 - Hetierremustdedu - Charlie517 - Corbin - EasilyWinded - Ian Michaelson - Kadeji - Kai Stasch - Notte - Orpheus - Titan Sparta - Warmonger1941 - Yama - Predator3435 - GrAdm Henri G - AzureKnight. Commanders: Seigo Nakano - Richard Gauthier III - Slietch Carlos Ceja - Benjamin Steber - Bahamut - Kiwi82245 - Kevin Van Erkel - Northenwolf. Lieutenants : Anir Banerj - Anthony D'Elia - Bankashi - Bryce Ostrem - Chach - Fed18 - Fritz Krammer - jerome292 - Kuuhaku - Len - Sikof - Vi Nguyen.
No need to apologize because we never bored of waiting "wish you happy and healthy don't forget to wearmask when go outside to dear Ryuma and his healthy Amagi Akami "
The last minute of this video spelled two possible endings; One is the tranquil day of the Cafe owner, and/or the Commander/Akagi Date Plan and Avrora's maid cosplay fun hour... And further adding to this is when Enty shows up at the scene...
Oh Ryuma, What a lovely edition to Enterprise' fanfiction. This chapter is hard to describe for me so i suppose i will just throw things out there. Yorktown, was treated nicely. She reacted to things the way i would suspect her to, she was in plausible situations and all i can really negatively say about her is that i wish she would have been their for the conversation the Commander was about to start about Akagi. Which brings me to, ofcourse, Akagi. She was very briefly in this episode but she was not a bad charachter in it. What i mean by that is that in her first of the two scenes she was in, in this episode she behaved like everyone would expect Akagi to behave and the brief scene she is in at the end of the epsiode was a beautifull cliffhanger and i cant wait for the buttload of conversations that will occur in that caffe. On a quick note, you really made me connect to Akagi, as mentioned in previous comments, in scenes like the bench scene between her and the Commander in this fanfiction and that side of Akagi is one i really hope to see more in the future. Avrora came in quick and immediatly became a likeable charachter to me and her dynamic with Enterprise and the Shop Owner war really good and i cant wait to get more from her given her situation in the last scene. Enterprise was developed understandably and you have definetly achieved the goal of making me care for her. About her dreams or hallucinations, i hope that that girlin blood is not Tirpitz because if so i hope you know what you are doing. Anf the other hallucination near the end was interesting and lets just say you should give yourself a pat on the back for great writing when your viewer can go "Is that referring to Bismarck" when the words "King of the Ocean" get said. Thats about it though, again i really hope you make it out of your financial and health situation as you are a great creator that i wish not to abandon this platforn. All the best Ryuma and up until the next one, Your Kamerad Lukas :)
@@RyumaBrunestud After a while i think i now finally grasp what you mean. All i can say is that i am confident in that you know what you are doing with your fanfictions. I am frankly heavily interested to see where the Amagi fanficition and all other fanfictions for that matter of yours will go :) You will hear from me soon Ryuma ;)
Very awesome work and I'm very excited to see the next episode. Once again you surprise with your great talents. As long as I can remember ever since the last episode came out I'd always imagine how the next episode would go down. I was thinking the story would play out that due to shock, depression, and guilt the commander would go into hiding away from people thinking that he's a horrible person for what he's done to Enterprise and that he's a dangerous person that shouldn't be around ship girls. The only person that knows where he is would be someone that could keep secret with something like this like Prinz Eugen so that someone could give him food, give him his paperwork he needs to do, make sure he stays alive, ect. Meanwhile weeks would go by with the commander disappeared with no one being able to find him and Enterprise would feel so much pain and guilt for what she has done with the letter and will do anything to find him to show how horrible/sorry she was and how much pain she was in from being lonely without the commander and that she will return to his side as secretary. But yeah again great work on this episode and I can't wait to see what happens next especially seeing that ending. Have a great day and I hope life gets better for you.
Certainly that part was not planned in the original script, it was added at the last moment, for some strange reason I started to imagine the story in a darker way, although I had to stop at that as it was getting scary....... o_O
For anyone who wants Ryuma to do a new fanfic/series,please don't since that there will be more fanfics to complete and due to Ryuma's health,I don't think its the best for now.
Ahaha.... That sounds scary. o_O Don't worry, no one is forcing or rushing me about this. To be honest, if I didn't do this, I'd actually be in trouble. xD But like I said, don't worry, they all mention something similar, for which I am grateful to you. n__n
I hate to eavesdrop, but "THE ITALIANS ARE COMING!!" -some American pilgrim (scrambles to welcome the new batch of Sardegnian shipfus) Navigatori-class DD Nicoloso da Recco and Brin-class SS Torricelli (not to be confused with the Archimede-class Evangelista Torricelli, later General Mola for the IRL Armada Española as of April 1937)
Hi Ryuma You must take care of your health and don't be hard on yourself Even if the video is delay, no problem because we're making an assumption of what happened late And if you see the comment, you will see that everyone is excited and will ask you what will happen next and nobody is bored of waiting I'm very excited to see the next Enterprise : Episode 6 About intermediate between other related events I like this idea and I have question about will we see Ark Royal META in futuer , Isee (FDG,Bismarck,Sovetskaya,Jean Bart,Saint Louis....) what exactly happened? Also I'm very excited to see Bismarck - After Enterprise disappeared-Prinz Eugen-Essex-Akagi (A sad story of love)..... Thank you very much and take care
If I had to talk about it, I could say that that part actually belongs to another story, but that it is related to certain fanfictions that I have written.
The more i watch this the more my day is brighten because it give me a feeling of escaping this cruel reality and i wish theres no end for this. I would spend my life on this
Yep some parts of these Azur Lane videos make me laugh for real especially the yandere one's they're always so aggressive to the Commander Sometimes but For Enterprise I know I See her as a reckless Carrier Sometimes you have to keep her from getting herself Kill
I was watching this when I was about to log in to AL and the character that was displayed on the page before the login page was Enterprise herself. Coincidence?, I think not!
I'm glad you uploaded. But I rather see you make a full recovery to work on it rather than upload while you're still in treatment. But that's my opinion. I do wish you a full and safe recovery. Till then, fair winds ad happy writing!
Unfortunately I do not know much about the story of Arknights, and I feel that I could not write about them without knowing the game in a deep way.. :(
Loved the video @Ryuma Brunestud! Can't wait for the next video man! Wasn't expecting to see the Azur Lane META-verse make it's way to the channel but it does give an interesting aspect to the Fanfics nonetheless! That Ending though, Oh My God!
Great work as always, Ryuma! The café scene with the owner, Enterprise, and Avrora was very sweet. I wonder what's gonna happen next now that the Commander and Akagi have entered the building? I'm always eager to find out! And please don't be hard on yourself for everything, Ryuma. We know you're going through a lot, and we don't want to rush you for our entertainment. Just take your time to rest and get things done. I hope everyone has a good day!
@@smallpp8891 Problem is, that café has been around a very long time according to the owner. So even if it gets repaired, the original nostalgic feeling would be gone now.
So nice fanfiction, all your fanfiction are really nice, you entertain me a lot, and also give me happiness when i needed, thanks you Ryuma, and get safe, hope your health improve fast
I will take her everywhere we go as long we always be happy and joy and i will make her the happiest girl that she never felt before and i will be her man that she never regret to choose as her own partner
Well... Let's see... How do I start with this...?
First of all, I apologize for the delay. Unfortunately, due to certain circumstances, there was nothing to do about it. But I want you to know that the people who were in charge of checking the text, did everything possible to dedicate time to the script. Still, I want to apologize, I really wish I had a faster pace to write, so it is also partly my fault.
-
Regarding this chapter, what do you think? There is a section that is intermediate between other related events, if anyone wants to ask about it, I can clarify that question.
Please, even if it is just a supportive comment, do not forget to comment and share the video, either with your opinions or whatever you want, that really helps me. n___n
-
In case you want to support me in an external way for my medical expenses, here is my Patreon:
www.patreon.com/RyuumaBrunestud
If you can't collaborate in this way, don't worry, you are also helping here as I thank you for continuing to watch, share and comment on my videos.
I really appreciate all the support you can give me... and... PLEASE* remember not to force yourself to support me financially if you cannot.
I really don't want you to find yourself in a difficult situation because of me.
-
Regarding this month's fanfiction and FDG's... FDG's script is still in the works, so it could be out in the next 10 days maybe.
Although the voting is active, it seems that we can already see a winner. (Amagi)
-
If anyone wants to know about my health. There have been no favorable changes on the vascular problem. Unfortunately I have seen myself use my savings for surgery to treat my other health problems. And although I have used a large part of them, I certainly see myself in red numbers. What does this mean? Unfortunately I don't have the money to pay for all that.
In a way, it does not seem like a pleasant situation, but it is thanks to you that I can remain a little more stable these months, for that reason I am really grateful to you, I really appreciate it.
I apologize for not being able to show you my appreciation in more than words.
-
I think this message has already reached the end. As always, let me thank you for being here and supporting me.
I hope this chapter has been to your liking. I wish you a good day and we will see you in the next few days. n____n
- - - - -
Special Credits:
Persocom - Easily Winded & Chuco.
Thanks For Your Support !
Admirals
: Chuco32 - Hetierremustdedu - Charlie517
- Corbin - EasilyWinded - Ian Michaelson - Kadeji
- Kai Stasch - Notte - Orpheus - Titan Sparta -
Warmonger1941 - Yama - Predator3435 -
GrAdm Henri G - AzureKnight.
Commanders:
Seigo Nakano - Richard Gauthier III - Slietch
Carlos Ceja - Benjamin Steber - Bahamut - Kiwi82245 -
Kevin Van Erkel - Northenwolf.
Lieutenants
: Anir Banerj - Anthony D'Elia - Bankashi
- Bryce Ostrem - Chach - Fed18 - Fritz Krammer -
jerome292 - Kuuhaku - Len - Sikof - Vi Nguyen.
Keep safe
May a miracle happen to you.
No need to apologize because we never bored of waiting
"wish you happy and healthy don't forget to wearmask when go outside to dear Ryuma and his healthy Amagi
Akami "
Don't worry, they can take care of you.
They:Vestal, Nicholas, Kongou, Hermoine
Be safe
Be safe
And get well soon, Ryuma
Enty: will you take me along?
Me: There is a way to take you with me!?
Umm maybe she needs you o_o
Me. *grabs her hand with no hesitation*
🥰
The last minute of this video spelled two possible endings; One is the tranquil day of the Cafe owner, and/or the Commander/Akagi Date Plan and Avrora's maid cosplay fun hour...
And further adding to this is when Enty shows up at the scene...
Oh Ryuma,
What a lovely edition to Enterprise' fanfiction.
This chapter is hard to describe for me so i suppose i will just throw things out there.
Yorktown, was treated nicely. She reacted to things the way i would suspect her to, she was in plausible situations and all i can really negatively say about her is that i wish she would have been their for the conversation the Commander was about to start about Akagi. Which brings me to, ofcourse, Akagi.
She was very briefly in this episode but she was not a bad charachter in it. What i mean by that is that in her first of the two scenes she was in, in this episode she behaved like everyone would expect Akagi to behave and the brief scene she is in at the end of the epsiode was a beautifull cliffhanger and i cant wait for the buttload of conversations that will occur in that caffe. On a quick note, you really made me connect to Akagi, as mentioned in previous comments, in scenes like the bench scene between her and the Commander in this fanfiction and that side of Akagi is one i really hope to see more in the future.
Avrora came in quick and immediatly became a likeable charachter to me and her dynamic with Enterprise and the Shop Owner war really good and i cant wait to get more from her given her situation in the last scene.
Enterprise was developed understandably and you have definetly achieved the goal of making me care for her. About her dreams or hallucinations, i hope that that girlin blood is not Tirpitz because if so i hope you know what you are doing. Anf the other hallucination near the end was interesting and lets just say you should give yourself a pat on the back for great writing when your viewer can go "Is that referring to Bismarck" when the words "King of the Ocean" get said.
Thats about it though, again i really hope you make it out of your financial and health situation as you are a great creator that i wish not to abandon this platforn.
All the best Ryuma and up until the next one,
Your Kamerad Lukas :)
One could say that hallucinations are externally connected, although it is a somewhat grim fate.
@@RyumaBrunestud After a while i think i now finally grasp what you mean. All i can say is that i am confident in that you know what you are doing with your fanfictions. I am frankly heavily interested to see where the Amagi fanficition and all other fanfictions for that matter of yours will go :) You will hear from me soon Ryuma ;)
Very awesome work and I'm very excited to see the next episode. Once again you surprise with your great talents. As long as I can remember ever since the last episode came out I'd always imagine how the next episode would go down. I was thinking the story would play out that due to shock, depression, and guilt the commander would go into hiding away from people thinking that he's a horrible person for what he's done to Enterprise and that he's a dangerous person that shouldn't be around ship girls. The only person that knows where he is would be someone that could keep secret with something like this like Prinz Eugen so that someone could give him food, give him his paperwork he needs to do, make sure he stays alive, ect. Meanwhile weeks would go by with the commander disappeared with no one being able to find him and Enterprise would feel so much pain and guilt for what she has done with the letter and will do anything to find him to show how horrible/sorry she was and how much pain she was in from being lonely without the commander and that she will return to his side as secretary. But yeah again great work on this episode and I can't wait to see what happens next especially seeing that ending. Have a great day and I hope life gets better for you.
22:00 Hippity Hoppity, this jumpscare made me spill my Coffee
Same as me but even worse, in dark room alone.
Yup, it was terrifying when I 1st saw that
Didnt expect to see you here mate
Certainly that part was not planned in the original script, it was added at the last moment, for some strange reason I started to imagine the story in a darker way, although I had to stop at that as it was getting scary....... o_O
Yeah, not the prettiest sight. Actually, this was probably the most disturbing thing I've seen in a while.
For anyone who wants Ryuma to do a new fanfic/series,please don't since that there will be more fanfics to complete and due to Ryuma's health,I don't think its the best for now.
Tell me who begs Ryuma to do new fanfics, and I'll shall surely make them beg for their last words
like who insists?
Agreed
Ahaha.... That sounds scary. o_O
Don't worry, no one is forcing or rushing me about this. To be honest, if I didn't do this, I'd actually be in trouble. xD
But like I said, don't worry, they all mention something similar, for which I am grateful to you. n__n
Yeah. It's harsh to demand him like that, even when they don't mean to.
I hate to eavesdrop, but
"THE ITALIANS ARE COMING!!" -some American pilgrim
(scrambles to welcome the new batch of Sardegnian shipfus)
Navigatori-class DD Nicoloso da Recco and Brin-class SS Torricelli (not to be confused with the Archimede-class Evangelista Torricelli, later General Mola for the IRL Armada Española as of April 1937)
Maestrale-class DD Libeccio
Hi Ryuma
You must take care of your health and don't be hard on yourself
Even if the video is delay, no problem because we're making an assumption of what happened late
And if you see the comment, you will see that everyone is excited and will ask you what will happen next and nobody is bored of waiting
I'm very excited to see the next Enterprise : Episode 6
About intermediate between other related events I like this idea
and I have question about will we see Ark Royal META in futuer , Isee (FDG,Bismarck,Sovetskaya,Jean Bart,Saint Louis....) what exactly happened?
Also I'm very excited to see Bismarck - After Enterprise disappeared-Prinz Eugen-Essex-Akagi (A sad story of love).....
Thank you very much and take care
If I had to talk about it, I could say that that part actually belongs to another story, but that it is related to certain fanfictions that I have written.
@@RyumaBrunestud Thank you very much for answering my question
I'll take everyone along in last moment of my life i will play prinz eugen theme on my last day on earth
German war thunder victory theme is better for death or the old hangar music
@@gunther7276 how did you know i play war thunder :/
@@FRFFW becase he sene it good old day huh arrr good old day
@@Necromancia36 then we are men of culture 🤔🤔🤔
34:18 Who is she holding the cube??
Code G
@@user-jd4tr5bx1v Orochi is right......
Orochi? ...............o_O
Oh no Orochi's back!!!
The more i watch this the more my day is brighten because it give me a feeling of escaping this cruel reality and i wish theres no end for this. I would spend my life on this
Now,i'm MOTIVATED.
I don't care about the delay i Will wait whatever how long it takes because I REALLY LIKE THIS👍
Same here dude
This was great, genuinely. Glad that it's back.
The last scene is really unexpected.
It's often everyone's reaction will go “Oh no, not Akagi... ”
Meanwhile me, will go “LET'S GOOO!”
Enterprise is the other room, I how this will play out.
Oh boy this will get ugly.
Hopefully Akagi doesn't end up burning down the café...
@@birb3706 I hope so and avrora must control her anger.😡
Yep some parts of these Azur Lane videos make me laugh for real especially the yandere one's they're always so aggressive to the Commander Sometimes but For Enterprise I know I See her as a reckless Carrier Sometimes you have to keep her from getting herself Kill
ok at 22:00 i choked on the water i was drinking and i had a chill in my spine O_O
Love this fanfiction too much, I somewhat wish you could focus solely on this fanfiction
23:21 confused in Spanish
Halsey is smiling upon this video
A man of quality I see
Im glad that episode 6 won the patreon poll
When I see Entry(fanfic), I go straight to vid. I’ll take Entry along with me in a heartbeat.
Please an happy ending. ❤️🙏
Great work there~ Also gave me the chill moment when the ghost figure suddenly stood up in the middle...
in the 36:44 to 39:55 why do the ship grils there have the keys to the last door and isnt enterprise a key?
Not exactly, those sections are based on a novel I wrote, so the existence of several keys is feasible.
I was watching this when I was about to log in to AL and the character that was displayed on the page before the login page was Enterprise herself.
Coincidence?, I think not!
I'm glad you uploaded. But I rather see you make a full recovery to work on it rather than upload while you're still in treatment. But that's my opinion. I do wish you a full and safe recovery. Till then, fair winds ad happy writing!
Glad to see you here in the comments friend.
@@zewolfking8796 U too my friend.
Finally some good fckin video
Ryuma i have one question: is the bismarck in this episode the same bismarck in her fanfic, the time she still in amnesia
Hey have you ever considered doing something like this for arknights?
It would be amazing
Unfortunately I do not know much about the story of Arknights, and I feel that I could not write about them without knowing the game in a deep way.. :(
WOHO! IT'S FINALLY HERE!
also, pls pls pls take ur time on ur health, sir.
Nobody is forcing u to do this
I've been waiting for a long time for this
My goodness, Enterprise what have you done?
now im a little motivated
Me: Enterprise you are our friend specially Yorktown who always look after you
Sora: Right Cloud
Riku: Yep
Axel: True
Always has been
@@TWG_50 that's Right Axel
Yeah! We've been through a lot, together. We won't ever give up on you, Enterprise!
@@TWG_50 And always will be.
@@birb3706 Right Sora
Loved the video @Ryuma Brunestud! Can't wait for the next video man! Wasn't expecting to see the Azur Lane META-verse make it's way to the channel but it does give an interesting aspect to the Fanfics nonetheless! That Ending though, Oh My God!
I want Episode 6 soon
Yeah
Finally it came!!!
I was waiting gor this one!!!
45 mins?!!! Anyway!!
Second, Whoa Dudette! Looks like it is a good time!
22:22
I just got a heart attack..
Great work as always, Ryuma!
The café scene with the owner, Enterprise, and Avrora was very sweet. I wonder what's gonna happen next now that the Commander and Akagi have entered the building? I'm always eager to find out!
And please don't be hard on yourself for everything, Ryuma. We know you're going through a lot, and we don't want to rush you for our entertainment. Just take your time to rest and get things done.
I hope everyone has a good day!
I hope the café doesn't go up in flames... o_O
@@RyumaBrunestud That's what I'm hoping for. The Commander and Avrora must not let that happen!
but if it burns down he can get the insurance money to modernize the place then more customers so it's a stonks moment
@@smallpp8891 Problem is, that café has been around a very long time according to the owner. So even if it gets repaired, the original nostalgic feeling would be gone now.
So nice fanfiction, all your fanfiction are really nice, you entertain me a lot, and also give me happiness when i needed, thanks you Ryuma, and get safe, hope your health improve fast
Finally i’ve been waiting for this!
Thank you Ryuma
Oh no what is this crazy fox gonna do to the poor man's cafe when she see Enty
Will ther be more fanfic wits enterpise?
31:43
Do not try it man.
Avrora REALLY likes vodka. 😂
Thanks for your hard work.
The return of the king
Best heroine
Oooohhhhhh myyyy eeeennnnnttttyyyyy
Big F to the cafe owner another victim of dwindling business due to covid
im laaaaaattteeee,
prepare the popcorn
Ah yes another 45 minutes worth of my time😌😌
Second!!!\
Let's go!!!
I've been waiting for this my wife enterprise😍😍
Oh man here it goes again.
Damn hungry yandere Akagi😱
Eagle unions strongest carrier our Queen.
@@LegionCasull Our Queen yes. But on the second though nope my Queen😈
Oh no this is very bad, a very bad situation is coming to enty
I love this
Aw sweet Avrora yes.
Great!!
Absolutely stunning 💜
love it
thx for the video as usual Ryuma
I will take her everywhere we go as long we always be happy and joy and i will make her the happiest girl that she never felt before and i will be her man that she never regret to choose as her own partner
Ohhh my heart din't expect the jumpscare scene, why i think watch this before sleep is a good idea AAAAAAAAAAAAA
Oi, what happen to Yorktown? Tell me!
What is this story about please explain
First!!!
Nice you are faster than me for six second
Nice video
thanks for these stories, i love them
23:08 uhhhhh enterprise are you ok. Because this is not like you. Dream state ok sorry my mined went off 😅