Well friends, this is the first chapter of Amagi, I hope you like it. After considering the story, her fanfiction will consist of about 5 or 6 chapters. Remember that you can support the Channel and help me with my medical savings from Patreon: www.patreon.com/RyuumaBrunestud If you can't collaborate in this way, don't worry, you are also helping here as I thank you for continuing to watch, share and comment on my videos. n__n What do you think about the first chapter? Would you add something to the story? Do you have any suggestions? o_O By the way, I would like to ask you, how did you imagine the first chapter would be? We'll have another poll next week, sorry I can't speed up these stories, but I'm really trying to put in as much time as I can. It has been several months since I started all this and I am glad to see that you are still here supporting me, thank you, I know there are not enough words to express, but I think I can express myself more with stories than with words, so let me tell you again thank you for following here supporting me. Then we'll see you in a next fanfiction, meanwhile, I wish you good health and fortune. See you later ~ n___n . PS: Do not forget to comment that you have found this chapter and if you have suggestions for the future, do not hesitate, comment o_O! - Special Credits: Persocom - Englishman - P L Λ V Ξ P - Easily Winded - Kai Stasch - Chuco32. Thanks For Your Support ! Chuco32 - Wolfs_Den_2 - GrAdm Henri G - Carlos Ceja - Benjamin Steber - Bahamut - Kai Stasch - Ian Michaelson - Charlie517 - Orpheus - EasilyWinded - Kadeji - Richard Gauthier III - Slietch - Fritz Krammer - Dylan Boatner - Vi Nguyen - Kuuhaku - Jerome292 - Seigo Nakano - LordTouchMe - Kagrenac - Khôi Lê Minh - Len - Sikof - Faint Smile - Hans Krebs. A little extra space for those people who have been here more than a year, thank you. Jerome292 - Slietch - Kadeji - EasilyWinded - Richard Gauthier III - Kagrenac.
Honestly.. every single one of the fanfiction you made is just too good to be true.. like soo good. The storyline, character line's, the expression, background, the music. Like everything is just superb. Truth to be told sometime's it would even tug at my heartstring like the Bismarck and Tirpitz (one of my favorite). Anyways.. thanks for the amazing fanfiction!! just wanted to say that hehe
Ok, so i almost became emotional that I thought she died at the end of this story. And good thing she is not being possessive and manipulative like in Azur Lane Anime (where Orochi takes over her body, and taking control of Akagi).
@@nikolaschelucci8388 i meant this story. Well shes alive as long as we have her in this game. But if Ryuma makes this sad story like this, I would be devastated emotionally. Also i realized this is only Chapter 1, this is not over yet as I generally thought.
Glad to see such a nice fanfic done Amagi... especially the music, they really does play the correct atmosphere... keep up the good work! Though if i am to really scrutinize on small stuff, theres a few place where it perhaps, could be worded better? Also, perhaps leaving bit more time between scenes could be a good idea, as i found myself backtracking quite often throughout this video to read the texts.
They are certainly good suggestions, but I think it will be difficult. Regarding the sentences, unfortunately English is my third language and I don't get along very well, I even get help from other people to check the text, so we are doing everything possible. Also considering that much of what I wrote is not here, because I don't know how to actually transcribe it.
Regarding the time between the scenes, I can do that, although at the moment it is impossible due to the poor Internet connection that reaches my house, it is a very poor area and there is no fiber optic internet service, that is, upload this video took almost 11 hours ... If the time lengthens even more, there could be errors, it has happened to me several times... I could shorten the duration of the video and upload it in parts, that way I could create a little more time between scenes, I think it would be the only alternative for now for that.... o_O!
@@RyumaBrunestud if ya dont mind, perhaps i can help with the english by proofreading. Regarding the 2nd suggestion, personally i wouldnt mind ya breaking one episode into several smaller videos, especially if it means i dont have to do much, if any backtracking for the reading (since it does kinda disrupts the overall flow).
@@karseltang8624 It certainly could be considered... 2nd By the way, which part would be an example of that? It is to give me an idea of how much more time is needed.
@@RyumaBrunestud as these time stamps comes from re-watching, they dont reflect my first experience Longer wait time 8:03 12:22 13:38 These are places where i think the pause between scenes can be shorter, either to save time, or might give that part some needed abruptness Shorter wait time 3:40 8:19 17:55 22:07 22:18 (stretched possibly due to the scene name change)
There was a single braincell in my head that expected Tosa to tell Amagi that she has a domestic terrorist/rock guitarist in her head who died 50 years ago, and she has 2 weeks to live or find a cure to get the keanu reeves out of her mind.
It depends, although in a way those that are published are in different universes, except for "Enterprise's Past" that is linked to "Last Ocean".. Although some of them are related to "Last Ocean" as well, like Bismarck's fanfiction.
@João Vitor de Oliveira lana yeah I know. I'm personally a communist who also using that joke around often too. Just this time, Amagi is serious matter
A very beautifully written part one too a new chapter. This choice of main charachter is interesting and im sitting in anticipation for how you develop her. Just a couple of questions. Question one, do you plan on having or do your "fanfiction's" have a conected universe. And Question two,the question i hold very much close to heart, will you continue the bismarck "fanfiction", i hope you do as your extra chapter sparked more extra questions then it solved like themystery surrounding the siren that has an interest in presumably Bismarck and Enterprise, how Bismarck will deal with Enterprises decision, her amnesia and her inability to walk. So in conclusion i hope you continue the Bismarck Fanfiction and tie it all together very satisfingly, emotionally and logically well.
Amagi's Love punch is true damage which bypass physical & magic defense it's like the fusion of saitama's serious punch and toma kamijo's imagine breaker combined together in a single Punch
"Amagi upon seeing Akagi, Taihou and Roon chasing each other for commander boxer" Amagi : it's just casual day.. "Akagi tossed the boxer to Kaga with her JJBA style* " Amagi : well sh*t
My gut is telling me that the mystery nominator is Tosa… that, or its telling me to get something to eat which is weird ‘cause I’ve already had breakfast not thirty minutes ago…
wow amagi fanfiction ok i'll see this one then also MANY YEARS LATER AFTER AKAGI'S PAINFUL HEAD FROM AMAGI'S LOVE PUNCHES..... akagi yet still haven't learned her lesson again...
But I thought her health problem has been resolved with reconstruction (more or less). After all, she is able to do combat and with quite good results that is.
Wow, new fanfiction?! I'm so surprise. Well, Amagi is my best character from Sakura Empire. Thank you so much!! I hope it will be a good work again. At the end, I'm waiting Enterprise fanfiction too. Always cheer up Ryuma!!
Question, is BB Kaga same or separate character from CV Kaga? Ever since in the PV animation of Crimson Echoes reruns, there's the animation that the Akagi-chan was there in Shogi that was played by both Akagi and Kaga themselves.
I'm seeing echoes of Crimson Echoes in her interaction with Akagi... pun fully intended. :) Love these stories, they would probably work so well if they were official. Keep up the great work!
This is pretty darn good.... Not much to say there, also, yes, please do finish this fanfic, it is pretty interesting so far, and this is only the first chapter!
Notification Me: Hmm! An Amagi fanfiction. Interesting. Look at title Me: *I don't like where this is going. That title smell of death flag all over the place!*
*looks at time* ahhhhhh.....its 11:24 am now should probably sleep.... *sees Ryumba post a video* .....nevermind my parents are asleep and I dont care about school right now!
Well friends, this is the first chapter of Amagi, I hope you like it.
After considering the story, her fanfiction will consist of about 5 or 6 chapters.
Remember that you can support the Channel and help me with my medical savings from Patreon: www.patreon.com/RyuumaBrunestud
If you can't collaborate in this way, don't worry, you are also helping here as I thank you for continuing to watch, share and comment on my videos. n__n
What do you think about the first chapter?
Would you add something to the story? Do you have any suggestions? o_O
By the way, I would like to ask you, how did you imagine the first chapter would be?
We'll have another poll next week, sorry I can't speed up these stories, but I'm really trying to put in as much time as I can.
It has been several months since I started all this and I am glad to see that you are still here supporting me, thank you, I know there are not enough words to express, but I think I can express myself more with stories than with words, so let me tell you again thank you for following here supporting me.
Then we'll see you in a next fanfiction, meanwhile, I wish you good health and fortune.
See you later ~ n___n
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PS: Do not forget to comment that you have found this chapter and if you have suggestions for the future, do not hesitate, comment o_O!
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Special Credits:
Persocom - Englishman - P L Λ V Ξ P - Easily Winded - Kai Stasch - Chuco32.
Thanks For Your Support !
Chuco32 - Wolfs_Den_2 - GrAdm Henri G - Carlos Ceja - Benjamin Steber - Bahamut - Kai Stasch - Ian Michaelson - Charlie517 - Orpheus - EasilyWinded - Kadeji - Richard Gauthier III - Slietch - Fritz Krammer - Dylan Boatner - Vi Nguyen - Kuuhaku - Jerome292 - Seigo Nakano - LordTouchMe - Kagrenac - Khôi Lê Minh - Len - Sikof - Faint Smile - Hans Krebs.
A little extra space for those people who have been here more than a year, thank you.
Jerome292 - Slietch - Kadeji - EasilyWinded - Richard Gauthier III - Kagrenac.
Really very good fanfic
From Amagi's feelings to Yorktown's silliness,etc
Well made.
Good job,Ryuma
Stay safe Ryuma Be well !
Don't push yourself❤
Sincerely from your subscribers !
I am at school and can’t watch it!!!!!! Nien nien nein
Im super excited to see what this series has to offer hopefully it doesn't end with me crying.
Wow, your really keep your promise, i think this chapter will be posted tommrow
Me: Well time to slee-
Ryuma: *uploads Amagi fan fiction
Me: 1 hour to 12am? Eh, 30 mins wouldn't hurt right?
I feel that too.
Lmao, what you mean till 12am. Boi I'm up watching this at 0400
Yostar should hire ryuma for event plots
Honestly.. every single one of the fanfiction you made is just too good to be true.. like soo good. The storyline, character line's, the expression, background, the music. Like everything is just superb. Truth to be told sometime's it would even tug at my heartstring like the Bismarck and Tirpitz (one of my favorite). Anyways.. thanks for the amazing fanfiction!! just wanted to say that hehe
Amagi is so Beautiful!
We must protect her smile!
Youre too late. The lewd nation has attacked. Everywhere they go, ruins follows.
Name of love I will protect amagi
@@mathewthedimensiontraveler2655 her smile
@@KmisiGNaG I know . she is beautiful
@@noobselfish1536 let's go my brothers make a Barricade to stop their way
Yorktown being Amagi's wing-woman is both cute and heartwarming to see.
Supportive, playful Yorktown is best Yorktown.
THE COMMANDER'S UNDERWEAR BELONGS TO AKAGI!
Quote of the year
Quote of the century however:
"Bismarck! I have a Bismarck."
@@euaf-crimson1730 *Intense sweating*
@@dutchthespitfire3204 no worries, I think I'll keep quiet.
**He let out a slight chuckle trying to suppress himself**
The hells is goin on here? I was in middle of chat with some of the northern parlament
Ok, so i almost became emotional that I thought she died at the end of this story. And good thing she is not being possessive and manipulative like in Azur Lane Anime (where Orochi takes over her body, and taking control of Akagi).
She looks like she's alive in the game tho
@@nikolaschelucci8388 i meant this story. Well shes alive as long as we have her in this game.
But if Ryuma makes this sad story like this, I would be devastated emotionally. Also i realized this is only Chapter 1, this is not over yet as I generally thought.
Well... If we consider the game, she has already passed away... But that does not mean that she cannot be alive in our hearts.
@@RyumaBrunestud tru
Amagi when Yorktown and SKK jumps out the window: "That looks like fun *giggle*"
Me when Yorktown and SKK jumps out the winod: "USE THE FUCKING DOOR"
I laughed at the part where Amagi punched Akagi on her head by her love fist
*CLANG!*
Also,the 11:30 part was 😂😂
😂😂😂Lol
I can't imagine how cute akagi was
Someone should definitely make a Gif of that
@@demonicninja9321 Yes
@@TWG_50 yus
Akagi: The commander’s underwear belongs to Akagi!” Legend of Zelda item get meme.
Amagi: “Bruh…”
Have you ever imagine amagi's face when she do that terrifying smile?
It's the most terrifying thought
9:10 (disappointed sigh)
I suppose some things never change,
and history repeats itself.
I also thought Kaga was more mature than this!
A surprise to be sure, but a welcome one
Hello there
Glad to see such a nice fanfic done Amagi... especially the music, they really does play the correct atmosphere... keep up the good work!
Though if i am to really scrutinize on small stuff, theres a few place where it perhaps, could be worded better? Also, perhaps leaving bit more time between scenes could be a good idea, as i found myself backtracking quite often throughout this video to read the texts.
They are certainly good suggestions, but I think it will be difficult.
Regarding the sentences, unfortunately English is my third language and I don't get along very well, I even get help from other people to check the text, so we are doing everything possible. Also considering that much of what I wrote is not here, because I don't know how to actually transcribe it.
Regarding the time between the scenes, I can do that, although at the moment it is impossible due to the poor Internet connection that reaches my house, it is a very poor area and there is no fiber optic internet service, that is, upload this video took almost 11 hours ... If the time lengthens even more, there could be errors, it has happened to me several times... I could shorten the duration of the video and upload it in parts, that way I could create a little more time between scenes, I think it would be the only alternative for now for that.... o_O!
@@RyumaBrunestud if ya dont mind, perhaps i can help with the english by proofreading.
Regarding the 2nd suggestion, personally i wouldnt mind ya breaking one episode into several smaller videos, especially if it means i dont have to do much, if any backtracking for the reading (since it does kinda disrupts the overall flow).
@@karseltang8624 It certainly could be considered...
2nd By the way, which part would be an example of that? It is to give me an idea of how much more time is needed.
@@RyumaBrunestud
as these time stamps comes from re-watching, they dont reflect my first experience
Longer wait time
8:03
12:22
13:38
These are places where i think the pause between scenes can be shorter, either to save time, or might give that part some needed abruptness
Shorter wait time
3:40
8:19
17:55
22:07
22:18 (stretched possibly due to the scene name change)
There was a single braincell in my head that expected Tosa to tell Amagi that she has a domestic terrorist/rock guitarist in her head who died 50 years ago, and she has 2 weeks to live or find a cure to get the keanu reeves out of her mind.
Do your fanfics share the same universe or are they separate?
It depends, although in a way those that are published are in different universes, except for "Enterprise's Past" that is linked to "Last Ocean"..
Although some of them are related to "Last Ocean" as well, like Bismarck's fanfiction.
MY WIFE! My beautiful, sickly wife.
Best Kitsune waifu!
@João Vitor de Oliveira lana no, this time I'll not. For I indeed hopelessly in love with her, so no. No Our
@João Vitor de Oliveira lana yeah I know. I'm personally a communist who also using that joke around often too. Just this time, Amagi is serious matter
@@zeroreroneppudding402 if a shipgirl is so precious that one is willing to forfeit their C O M M U N I S T I C ways, then she truly is the besto
A very beautifully written part one too a new chapter. This choice of main charachter is interesting and im sitting in anticipation for how you develop her. Just a couple of questions. Question one, do you plan on having or do your "fanfiction's" have a conected universe. And Question two,the question i hold very much close to heart, will you continue the bismarck "fanfiction", i hope you do as your extra chapter sparked more extra questions then it solved like themystery surrounding the siren that has an interest in presumably Bismarck and Enterprise, how Bismarck will deal with Enterprises decision, her amnesia and her inability to walk. So in conclusion i hope you continue the Bismarck Fanfiction and tie it all together very satisfingly, emotionally and logically well.
I expect some wholesome fanfic like bismarck's
Edit: yorktown is real mvp in both bismarck and amagi fanfic
Powerful support
@@ryukiiichan1777 indeed
Amagi: *uses Ultra Love Punch*
*It was very effective!!!!*
So the most effective weapon against her is her sister Amagi🖒
Amagi's Love punch is true damage which bypass physical & magic defense it's like the fusion of saitama's serious punch and toma kamijo's imagine breaker combined together in a single Punch
I have reloaded several times for this. Welcome Mamagi.
"Amagi upon seeing Akagi, Taihou and Roon chasing each other for commander boxer"
Amagi : it's just casual day..
"Akagi tossed the boxer to Kaga with her JJBA style*
"
Amagi : well sh*t
This is why I married Amagi she's cute and awesome
I like enterprise but Amagi is my third favorite ship
@@natethegamergaming4057 who's the second?
Bismarck
@@natethegamergaming4057 laughs in Prussia
I am just asking is Enterprise fanfic is only 2 parts? I just asking or are you going to make another part in the future videos?
I have other parts planned, but due to limited time, issues, and polls, it's a bit tricky... :(
@@RyumaBrunestud oh ok, and thank you for answering my question 👍
The later half really made me breathless. I smell deathflag all over the place, you made my heart sinking Ryuma
My gut is telling me that the mystery nominator is Tosa… that, or its telling me to get something to eat which is weird ‘cause I’ve already had breakfast not thirty minutes ago…
9:38 hmmm where have i seen that also happen before... Poor akagi and kaga 😂
20:22 the interesting part
I know!
@@terrencechandler9937 Especially the tail stroking part
@@TWG_50 💗💗💗
I love the part when Akagi got a love bonk from Mamagi. Yostar should hire you man your creations are great
Eyyy, I dont play Azur lane but Im in for the story even if its fanfiction, keep up the goodwork
Yorktown is the best Wingwoman I have ever seen.
First episode and ninjas are already cutting onions. My heart breaks everytime Mamagi feels weak 😭
Must protect floof waifu... Must protect TB fox..
wow amagi fanfiction ok i'll see this one then
also
MANY YEARS LATER AFTER AKAGI'S PAINFUL HEAD FROM AMAGI'S LOVE PUNCHES.....
akagi yet still haven't learned her lesson again...
But I thought her health problem has been resolved with reconstruction (more or less). After all, she is able to do combat and with quite good results that is.
"Mamagi love story"
Wow, new fanfiction?! I'm so surprise. Well, Amagi is my best character from Sakura Empire. Thank you so much!! I hope it will be a good work again. At the end, I'm waiting Enterprise fanfiction too. Always cheer up Ryuma!!
Don’t worry amagi I’ll take care of you
*Amagi's ultra love punch*
Sounds *POWERFUL*
Power of love for Amagi!
Yessss finally mamagi have her own fanfic
I can't deny this is such a great content, that maybe Yostar could take a look at it. This fanfics are so good! Keep on it, man!
I cried....dammit ryuuma T_T
This is totally a feel train...
I was dead at the Amagi ultra love punch part
So who had the underwear first was it Roon, Akagi, or Taihou
That will be a mystery i think but that part suprised me
I'll be your love forever Amagi
I'll give a lot of care to her.
Protect her smile
@@TWG_50 Yes! Protect her smile bro!
Question, is BB Kaga same or separate character from CV Kaga? Ever since in the PV animation of Crimson Echoes reruns, there's the animation that the Akagi-chan was there in Shogi that was played by both Akagi and Kaga themselves.
Your music choice introduced me to Katawa Shoujo, thanks.
The best visual novel
what software do you use to make these FFs?
I'm seeing echoes of Crimson Echoes in her interaction with Akagi... pun fully intended. :) Love these stories, they would probably work so well if they were official. Keep up the great work!
Yorktown, The ultimate Wing... Ship ?
She’s the carrier of relationships.
Wait i think i actually suggested this after the end of yandere fanfiction or the bismarck one lmao and apprently i got my wish come true
I'ma be honest it like their daily life in the base
This is pretty darn good.... Not much to say there, also, yes, please do finish this fanfic, it is pretty interesting so far, and this is only the first chapter!
would it be cool if this was in the anime?
I hope to god this event comes back this year I want this girl so badly
it wont😞
@@alexh7865 :(
@@Vampy_VV :(
@@alexh7865 shes my favorite ship tho I have to wait another year now 😩
i just want more fox girls and amagi is important
Notification
Me: Hmm! An Amagi fanfiction. Interesting.
Look at title
Me: *I don't like where this is going. That title smell of death flag all over the place!*
@Mammoth Mk3 well there’s still that chance that she’ll continue to live
This is also a different world/timeline
*looks at time* ahhhhhh.....its 11:24 am now should probably sleep....
*sees Ryumba post a video* .....nevermind my parents are asleep and I dont care about school right now!
You may be the first...
You may be the last...
But most importantly...
I'm watching....
till the end...
mamagi is too pure for this world
I instantly clicked when I saw this on my subscription
Says it was 3 mins ago
Mamagi having a fanfic! This is a blessing!
Wow nice I’m actually interested in this. I don’t really play the mobile game at all but this fanfic caught my attention. More!!
Oh well, time for another cutting onions moment
Who disliked?
I have waited for a while, finally it has come out, once it did, I never thought of how long I have waited, only how good of the project it was.
Stress with Akagi,Roon and Taihou
1 am. Ok last video before sleep ;)
On this week's event, i got Amagi. Now i am worthy of watching this.
An Amagi Fanfic?! A surprise to be sure but a welcome one.
Perfect, just oathed Amagi yesterday. Thank you.
Why do i feel like amagi has pneumonia-
7:36 *I AM THE STORM THAT IS APPROOOAAACHIIING*
Best fluffy girl
Fight me!
Naw fam u right
She isn't
SHE IS THE FLUFFLY GIRL THERE ARE NO OTHERS THAT SHOULD BE IN THE SAME EXISTENCE AS HER
When will be the second chapter be released?
Hol up but amagi died before the azur lane and the others had and alliance
*Y* *E* *S*
good but Yorktown is acting a bit to much like hornet here.
My favorite part 12:05 rain kinda relaxing
Okay, 2020 is saved
Амаги это мама двух дурынд акаги и кага)
I already know ima love this series.
Yorktown, the best wingwoman......
Feels good to lend you a hand on this 👍
detective sherlock Amagi lol and Watson Yorktown
The royal maids efficiency Gees
Late night story
This is a masterpiece with me, 10Q.
This is so damn awesome! I can’t wait to see more of it!
Here we go after finishing mommy tender love friedrich Der GroƁe
That was amazing and i don't like it I LOVE IT!!
Amagi for ever number 1 bro
Please make shinano fanfic
#BestGirl
Yorktown is best wingman lol
Ryuma stay safe and get well ok
Yay Mamagi
Amagi best waifu
MAN! She's gorgeous
LET'S GOOOOOOOOOOOOOO