Well... It's been a long time since the first chapter... If I'm honest with you, I wouldn't know how many chapters this story would have, because it is linked to the novel that I wrote at a certain point and there it would move... Remember that you can support the Channel and help me with my medical savings from Patreon: www.patreon.com/RyuumaBrunestud If you can't collaborate in this way, don't worry, you are also helping here as I thank you for continuing to watch, share and comment on my videos. n__n What do you think of this second chapter? What do you think of those two scenes that intervene in the story? o_O! The Amagi fanfiction is in the works and will be available this weekend if there are no problems.. n__n So as I said, this month there will be two fanfictions... Thank you for continuing here with me, I really appreciate the opportunity I had to meet this warm community, thank you again. Then we'll see you in a next fanfiction, meanwhile, I wish you good health and fortune. See you later ~ n___n - PS: Do not forget to comment that you have found this chapter and if you have suggestions for the future, do not hesitate, comment o_O! - Special Credits: Persocom - Easily Winded - Englishman - P L Λ V Ξ P. Thanks For Your Support ! Admirals: Chuco32 - Ian Michaelson. Commanders : Yama - KoP152 - Notte - Seigo Nakano - Wolfs_Den_2 - GrAdm Henri G - Carlos Ceja - Benjamin Steber - Bahamut - Kai Stasch - Charlie517 - Orpheus - EasilyWinded - Kadeji - Richard Gauthier III - Slietch. Lieutenants : Anirban Banerjee - Grimmson6681 - Bryce Ostrem - Fritz Krammer - Dylan Boatner - Vi Nguyen - Kuuhaku - Jerome292 - LordTouchMe - Kagrenac - Khôi Lê Minh - Len - Sikof - Faint Smile - Hans Krebs.
12:57 "The cell phone was empty inside, the battery was nowhere to be seen, just a sticker with akashi's face" Me: THAT'S IT! (goes to her store then kicks the door in, grabs Akashi by the ear and drags her off into the back room). You and me are gonna have a nice long chat about your recent stint with Mikasa. 29:19 (quickly walks up to enterprise and looks at the commander) "Looks like he remembered something he shouldn't have, something from a previous life perhaps. A mistake..the guilt of not taking heed of a warning in order to stop the flywheel of slaughter set in motion"
I really liked the Akashi scene Also we get to have a look for Sovetskaya Rossiya Also I loved the part between Enterprise and Commander scene in infirmary. It was romantic
One Word: *YES* Edit: Also for anyone who is curious on who is Constitution, USS Constitution is a ship build during October 21,1797 and is still afloat to this day
I TRULY did liked and enjoyed watching and reading through this! I was pleasantly surprised with the appearance of the 3 Enterprises, I'm looking forward to more on that. And now, the plot continues to thicken right here....
Your Azur Lane fanfiction are amazing. It makes me think, if Azur Lane anime get another season, I hope they hire as a writer, because your work are amazing.
@@young_gorilla4370 It really hurts when in the anime, they're just a bunch a lesbians. Not one man in sight. I don't even think they included the commander in the anime. Tbh, they should maybe make another Azur Lane anime that's maybe based on the Commander's harem. It'll be more entertaining. First Azur Lane anime was meant to be a shitty recreation of WW2 or smt plus with a bunch of fan service. I actually rather watch this guy's Yt videos than wasting my time on that anime.
Can't believe akashi did that to Mikasa...I mean even if Mikasa is retired.i believe she still has authority on Sakura empire. And what happened to nagato?
I think that blind people need to be aslo included, because they can only hear the music rigth now, I'm not blind, almost, now I have only 5/10 on both eyes, but i know some blind people, and i want them to get a full experience of those wonderfull strories that you make. you work is wnderfull keep on this track, fast or slow is not important, we can wait, but keep on
I'm not sure I'm a fan of "only-knows-war-and-fails-at-everything-else" Enterprise. I much prefer "only-knows-war-but-tries-to-expand-her-horizons-and-be-more-than-that" Enterprise, and it's sad that the animé pretty much pigeonholed her to be the former.
The beginning was so Erotic lol Oh no! Have Mercy! 😂 Akagi is so Jelly! (Jealous) Amagi to the rescue! Akashi has strike back yet again! Ehehehehe! Goodbye, you greedy Neko I recognize that Enterprise with the New uniform. That's her skin Seems like the 2 grey ghosts are fighting Enterprise (Alter Ver.) Yappari! (I knew it!) He was having a nightmare Again? How many times did the Commander fainted?! 😂😂😂 Granny?! Date A Live Reference (Enty Cutting the apples for the Commander)
mayabe fa fan fiction about sovetskaya royssya, she is presented to us in such a cold manner, very detached way, mayebe can be a very good strat from an informal relation from work to a real relationship but whit some problems, because perfect relationships are much easier to write but boring after sometime.
Another great fanfiction, since i found your channel about a year ago. I've watched every single one and i love them all, and keep up the good work and hoping you get better soon. I would like to see a Zara or Ayanami one, that just my suggestion.
Well... It's been a long time since the first chapter...
If I'm honest with you, I wouldn't know how many chapters this story would have, because it is linked to the novel that I wrote at a certain point and there it would move...
Remember that you can support the Channel and help me with my medical savings from Patreon: www.patreon.com/RyuumaBrunestud
If you can't collaborate in this way, don't worry, you are also helping here as I thank you for continuing to watch, share and comment on my videos. n__n
What do you think of this second chapter?
What do you think of those two scenes that intervene in the story? o_O!
The Amagi fanfiction is in the works and will be available this weekend if there are no problems.. n__n
So as I said, this month there will be two fanfictions... Thank you for continuing here with me, I really appreciate the opportunity I had to meet this warm community, thank you again.
Then we'll see you in a next fanfiction, meanwhile, I wish you good health and fortune.
See you later ~ n___n
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PS: Do not forget to comment that you have found this chapter and if you have suggestions for the future, do not hesitate, comment o_O!
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Special Credits:
Persocom - Easily Winded - Englishman - P L Λ V Ξ P.
Thanks For Your Support !
Admirals: Chuco32 - Ian Michaelson.
Commanders : Yama - KoP152 - Notte - Seigo Nakano - Wolfs_Den_2 - GrAdm Henri G - Carlos Ceja - Benjamin Steber - Bahamut - Kai Stasch - Charlie517 - Orpheus - EasilyWinded - Kadeji - Richard Gauthier III - Slietch.
Lieutenants : Anirban Banerjee - Grimmson6681 - Bryce Ostrem - Fritz Krammer - Dylan Boatner - Vi Nguyen - Kuuhaku - Jerome292 - LordTouchMe - Kagrenac - Khôi Lê Minh - Len - Sikof - Faint Smile - Hans Krebs.
Stay healthy man we can wait.
This is another upload in what seemed like no time, keep your body healthy and stay save Ryuma.
I haven't seen it all but i loved the first one and i know I'm going to love the second,Hope your staying safe Ryuma.
Thanks a lot for making this fanfic Ryuma!!
Stay safe and get well soon!!!
It would be chapter 3.
@@TWG_50 They are different fanfictions.. o_O
Enterprise's slap was really powerful indeed
Also, we've again seen the Amagi's "love blow"
25:56 lots of foul words from Dark Enterprise
Very powerful!
Sayan Hansda do you know what enterprise said?
@Jin Xuan Lin there was a part in the video that it wasn’t showing what enterprise said, but it’s been a while since I’ve watched this one so idk
12:57 "The cell phone was empty inside, the battery was nowhere to be seen, just a sticker with akashi's face"
Me: THAT'S IT! (goes to her store then kicks the door in, grabs Akashi by the ear and drags her off into the back room). You and me are gonna have a nice long chat about your recent stint with Mikasa.
29:19
(quickly walks up to enterprise and looks at the commander)
"Looks like he remembered something he shouldn't have, something from a previous life perhaps. A mistake..the guilt of not taking heed of a warning in order to stop the flywheel of slaughter set in motion"
😑😑😑🙁
Ain't ganna trust her no more.
Well actually didn't even trust her long time ago.
I really liked the Akashi scene
Also we get to have a look for Sovetskaya Rossiya
Also I loved the part between Enterprise and Commander scene in infirmary.
It was romantic
Best mother Russia shipgirl!
One Word:
*YES*
Edit: Also for anyone who is curious on who is Constitution, USS Constitution is a ship build during October 21,1797 and is still afloat to this day
Wasn't that the rocket-ship thingy of Fallout 4?
I wonder if she'll be in Azur Lane, someday.
@@TheBizzareBirb I really want that but I seriously doubt it
@@ville_delta2563 She could be an unobtainable character that appears in the story to support the Eagle Union characters like what we have with sirens
@@kengokaslana1776cw You right I want that to happen Lmao
22:51 Out of context, this looks like that one meme with the two yearbook photos.
"Enterprise"
"The Cooler Enterprise"
the third one at 23:34 "The Even Cooler Enterprise"
I have a theory or actually more of a feeling that "Enterprise..?" is the Enterprise from the Bismarck fanfics
@Ken Yam if it is her, then im a fucking prophet, but in the latest ep theres little mention of "Enterprise..?"
And the lore continues to grow...
Also I didn't expect Vestal have such temper...
I must also say, for a "granny", Aurora is quite childish.
I TRULY did liked and enjoyed watching and reading through this!
I was pleasantly surprised with the appearance of the 3 Enterprises, I'm looking forward to more on that.
And now, the plot continues to thicken right here....
Your Azur Lane fanfiction are amazing. It makes me think, if Azur Lane anime get another season, I hope they hire as a writer, because your work are amazing.
(sniffle) thats so sweet of you!
No, the anime is just a bunch of lesbians. But in the game it isn't because they eventually Fall in love with you right?.
@@young_gorilla4370 It really hurts when in the anime, they're just a bunch a lesbians. Not one man in sight. I don't even think they included the commander in the anime. Tbh, they should maybe make another Azur Lane anime that's maybe based on the Commander's harem. It'll be more entertaining. First Azur Lane anime was meant to be a shitty recreation of WW2 or smt plus with a bunch of fan service. I actually rather watch this guy's Yt videos than wasting my time on that anime.
@@KrugerderGrosse yeah true
7:16 Ah, classic Shoukaku
Called it!
Can't believe akashi did that to Mikasa...I mean even if Mikasa is retired.i believe she still has authority on Sakura empire.
And what happened to nagato?
Damn, Vestal is more of a Yan than I expected, lmao
So.... this fanfic series is all about veteran dealing with post war issue right?
*Interesting.*
Interesting about how someone has post war syndrome for ship infused girls.
I'm totally curious about the name 'Constitution'
And I feel like it came from a very old vessel named USS Constitution...
There's no other in the navy called constitution except for the one docked at boston
So yeah its very likely to be uss constitution
Now, this is up to debate, but I'm considering to oath either Enty or Belfast. Which one should I oath? I really like both of them. :V
Enty, though I have bias for cute ghost as she was my first, so yeah. . .
@@kengokaslana1776cw Lol. I've considered that too...
I think that blind people need to be aslo included, because they can only hear the music rigth now, I'm not blind, almost, now I have only 5/10 on both eyes, but i know some blind people, and i want them to get a full experience of those wonderfull strories that you make.
you work is wnderfull keep on this track, fast or slow is not important, we can wait, but keep on
That first part tho... I see the commander likes enty so much
Scary Vestal, that look on her face was downright scary.
I always wondered who was enterprise with the short hair can someone tell me please
Something like Enterprise from different dimension where war was even fiercer, world losing to siren n many characters died
I'm not sure I'm a fan of "only-knows-war-and-fails-at-everything-else" Enterprise. I much prefer "only-knows-war-but-tries-to-expand-her-horizons-and-be-more-than-that" Enterprise, and it's sad that the animé pretty much pigeonholed her to be the former.
The beginning was so Erotic lol
Oh no! Have Mercy!
😂 Akagi is so Jelly! (Jealous)
Amagi to the rescue!
Akashi has strike back yet again!
Ehehehehe! Goodbye, you greedy Neko
I recognize that Enterprise with the New uniform. That's her skin
Seems like the 2 grey ghosts are fighting Enterprise (Alter Ver.)
Yappari! (I knew it!) He was having a nightmare
Again? How many times did the Commander fainted?!
😂😂😂 Granny?!
Date A Live Reference (Enty Cutting the apples for the Commander)
Sorry if i am wrong, but there are two Enterprise fan fiction series right? One with the past life and one current
Yes.. o_O!
Aarav Tulsyan, I was thinking the same thing
I wanted this for so long I'm so happy!
I, too, have been waiting this...
Same
I've waited a year for this.
Me too for so long
Take my hand Enterprise!
She'll always be with you
@@TWG_50 Yes she is!
Now that I think of it, If commander can cry into her shoulders just by standing she must be very tall
"NYAAAAAAH ?"
- A gems thief getting arrested, 2020
me, starts watching this vid.
Me gets to scene with Akashi.
Rossiya enters
me; gulag?
13:37 so uhh Akagi is undercover Akashi?
Oh... Shit.. xD
I thought I had changed that, my bad.
@@RyumaBrunestud It looked so funny when i read it.
Yes!!, more of our loving Enterprise Waifu 🥰❤️. I hope for more.
mayabe fa fan fiction about sovetskaya royssya, she is presented to us in such a cold manner, very detached way, mayebe can be a very good strat from an informal relation from work to a real relationship but whit some problems, because perfect relationships are much easier to write but boring after sometime.
Enty the best girl... lets be honest with that fact guys
26:43 having a scene like that in other fanfiction you make would probably be cool like making 1 of those where the commander cough up blood
Tf
when Commander made Enterprise to sleep on the grass it reminded me of SAO
Holy smokes. I just realized. Did you just make a reference to the USS Constituition, one of the first US navel ships? *N A N I ?*
Ah, it’s been so long and I waited for this to continue. Thank you for continuing this story.
Oh man the Katawa Shoujo ost
Yeah, I like the music, for every scene they're playing in, they enhance the moment.
I've been waiting for this for a long time.
Thank you Ryuma!!!
I love it!
@@terrencechandler9937 Yes.
Especially the romantic scene between Enterprise and Commander in infirmary
@@TWG_50 Cool!
Another great fanfiction, since i found your channel about a year ago. I've watched every single one and i love them all, and keep up the good work and hoping you get better soon. I would like to see a Zara or Ayanami one, that just my suggestion.
Man I need to look up Katawa Shoujo the ost slaps
*music
@@aaravtulsyan *ost it got autocorrect to is smh. Thanks for pointing it out.
GASP! I’ve been waiting for this!!!
These are good
Not like some umm questionable
Belfast and enterprise ones
JA
psst Eugen fanfic when?
Imagine them acting in a video insted of reading the words
Finally that Akashi is behind bars
Yay Enty best girl!
23:34 code g go brrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
YOSHAAAA!!!!! My homie ryuma upload fanfic of my waifu
NOW IM GET MOTIVATED!!!!!
edit: IM FULLY MOTIVATED AFTER SEE THE CODE G/ASH/ALTERPRISE
This is poggers moment.
I’ve been waiting for this i feel INCREDIBILIS!!!
Nice centurion reference
Man Akagi these days Man
This is good. Will there be a next one?
Oh man I can’t express how much I love these fanfics
21:29 I am the storm that is approaching
It seems I've returned from my long sleep.
thx for the chapter again Ryuma
Aww man. . . . Easily Winded did it better. . . Gotta work on my skills even more. . .
So proud of Akagi hahhahahaha
Sasuga waifu sama
Another yandere has been add to the namelist.
Yeeeeeeeeee
im still waiting for Part 3
Well done, i'll be wait for part 3
Yeah enty started again :)
Where's the first episode?
Good morning~ Here is the playlist of Enterprise's fanfictions.
ruclips.net/p/PLtcIpssejGno1kCQ8XZCO1zICe6X7jJDz
@@RyumaBrunestud TY
PogChamp
no I'm afraid not
i was waiting for the enterprise fanfic continuation, thanks!
How are you doing ?
It's been a long time since you uploaded
Saty healthy 😁
Worth the wait... Finally had it
thank you
OwO
Enterprise Vs enterprise I think I am crazy and another enterprise what the that's it Im out here
Yes yes yes yes
YES
Will you make fanfic about deutchland?
Currently fanfictions are chosen by the community, although if I am honest with you, I would like to write about her.
@@RyumaBrunestud that's great i want to see a fanfic about deutchland
Amagi chapter continuation plesi :3
im a week late but hey better late than not experienced
So happy!!!!!
Love it