A Beautiful story of what real humanity should look like in the future. Zalia and her daughter Irila were rescued by Captain Jonas Walker a human being and his crew after following Zalia's distress transmission. I loved the story, well done.
This wasn't bad, but it could have been better. Mainly it needs a preamble explaining what she and her daughter were doing out there stranded and alone to begin with. The story of hope and new beginnings makes no sense without any background. Secondly, you need to stear away from over use of the cliched "they would do it together" trope. Overusing the cliches takes a nice story and makes it boring. Other than that, it was a nice story.
There needs to be some issues fixed. If the voice is AI, you need to use a human narrator. And your captioning needs to be proof read be for publishing/posting. Words were mispronounced horribly, too many times. The captions constantly changed the spelling of names. This needs to be narrated by some people who speak English/American and understand how to pronounce words based on their use/context. There is a difference in read (past tence) and un"read"able ( present tence action) it should not be pronounced un"red"able. Please fix these atrocious issues. As they make it hard to follow along with such a wonderful story.
A Beautiful story of what real humanity should look like in the future. Zalia and her daughter Irila were rescued by Captain Jonas Walker a human being and his crew after following Zalia's distress transmission. I loved the story, well done.
Glad you enjoyed it❤
So a alien single mom. Our ship is, help us. Lmao!!! Anyway, a single alien mom.
I've watched several of these stories, and I gotta say, I'm getting tired of "it's the right thing to do".
Your awesome
Thanks sir
Hope there is a part two.
Yes
Too bad the captain did not fall in love with her and marry.
Same strategy
Glad you enjoyed it❤
This wasn't bad, but it could have been better. Mainly it needs a preamble explaining what she and her daughter were doing out there stranded and alone to begin with. The story of hope and new beginnings makes no sense without any background.
Secondly, you need to stear away from over use of the cliched "they would do it together" trope. Overusing the cliches takes a nice story and makes it boring.
Other than that, it was a nice story.
Glad you enjoyed it❤
There needs to be some issues fixed.
If the voice is AI, you need to use a human narrator. And your captioning needs to be proof read be for publishing/posting. Words were mispronounced horribly, too many times. The captions constantly changed the spelling of names.
This needs to be narrated by some people who speak English/American and understand how to pronounce words based on their use/context.
There is a difference in read (past tence) and un"read"able ( present tence action) it should not be pronounced un"red"able.
Please fix these atrocious issues.
As they make it hard to follow along with such a wonderful story.