Velociraptor Falls - inspired by Prehistoric Planet

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  • Опубликовано: 6 ноя 2024

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  • @jakubgavenda4774
    @jakubgavenda4774 2 года назад +35

    Very beautiful story. When those 3 killed Zano after he and Una found their paradise it made me very sad. You really put your heart into this story.

    • @logicholic
      @logicholic  2 года назад +9

      Thanks Jakey. I did :D I loved Una and Xano. When I started, I didn't know how it was going to end.

    • @jakubgavenda4774
      @jakubgavenda4774 2 года назад +8

      @@logicholic I think the ending was beautiful

  • @kaiju115
    @kaiju115 2 года назад +7

    After the letdown that was Jurassic World Dominion, listening to this story & imagining it all felt like breath of Fresh air. Thank you little Fox.
    P.S. I felt so bad for Zano & Una

    • @Alteori
      @Alteori 2 года назад +2

      Thank you so much. I went back to watch that episode and it really felt like a breath of fresh air watching these beautiful creatures

    • @kaiju115
      @kaiju115 2 года назад +1

      @@Alteori agreed. As for me I’m going to be rewatching all of Primal as we speak

  • @Das112293
    @Das112293 2 года назад +5

    Hello Alteori/Logicholic.
    Another Prehistoric Planet story video, yay. This one was very emotional. It was beautiful. She is now free and found peace.
    Anyway, another great story, Alteori/Logicholic, I LOVE/LIKE it, see you in the next one.

  • @Active_Shadow_325
    @Active_Shadow_325 2 года назад +4

    This story really made my night listening to your story’s always help me be able to sleep and I just wanted u to know that we all appreciate you work and time and are really grateful for all you do tysm !!!

  • @DangerDan64
    @DangerDan64 2 года назад +7

    The turns of this story went from basic survival, to some romance, to tragedy, to self motivation, back to romance, then quickly to tragedy to the 3rd degree, then finally with hope with a bit of uncertainty.
    I honestly felt ill for how horrible the situation she was forced to be in. The thought of it is too horrible to the point, I am glad I have yet witnessed it happening in front of me.
    Very personal thing for me, it's something that I know I will loose my mind (in the sense of going enraged like an animal) if a loved one of mine has gone through and I had to see it all happen.

    • @logicholic
      @logicholic  2 года назад +4

      Thanks so much for your comment Danger. I always look forward to them! :D I'm sorry that u went through something awful. My hope for the short story was that Una turned her horrible situation into an advantage.

    • @DangerDan64
      @DangerDan64 2 года назад +2

      @@logicholic My apologies for not making the last paragraph clear, what I am trying to say is that if something like that were to happen. Well if you know the story of Henry Jekyll and Edward Hyde, then it'll be like that but I only stayed being Hyde
      That being said, so far that is an impossibility since the who I loved the most is no longer with us, I don't have to fear something like this at least.
      I talk like this to mask my true emotions, something what some people really do so they won't have to let their friends worry for them.

  • @absolutelychad278
    @absolutelychad278 2 года назад +7

    I know it’s pointless asking but we need a sequel please

  • @brendalone
    @brendalone 2 года назад +5

    This story was beautiful and I enjoyed every minute of it, I would love to see more stories like this

  • @garypfeiffer3489
    @garypfeiffer3489 2 года назад +5

    Ben Kenobi: I thought the baby T-Rex was the only video.
    Yoda: no. There is another

  • @erlindasiaron867
    @erlindasiaron867 2 года назад +1

    Best velociraptor story ive ever heard i love all of your stories hoping to see more❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  • @jaxthewolf4572
    @jaxthewolf4572 Год назад +1

    Beautiful and powerful story. One of the best ones you've made 😭👏🏽

  • @shadonicmotionRS
    @shadonicmotionRS 2 года назад +2

    That made me cry
    I’ve never heard a story like that before, and hearing that made me feel sadder than I’ve ever felt before
    I still really liked the story, it’s amazing, amazing job alteori

  • @King2000.
    @King2000. 2 года назад +4

    Just like the other stories you have told, this is great!

  • @josh-themighty9967
    @josh-themighty9967 2 года назад +10

    This was so saddening/depressing. But I'm at least glad Una was able to have a happy ending but I was also impressed how you incorporated the actual scene from the episode into the story that was so clever!
    When you mentioned the waterfall it clicked inside my mind and I was like "oooh I see how this all connects now!"
    Thank you for doing another brilliant story! :) I hope you'll consider making some more, actually speaking of that I commented on your Disney's dinosaur review with some story ideas I was hoping you could consider. 🤞🙏

    • @logicholic
      @logicholic  2 года назад +2

      Of course and thank you! One is coming out very soon, like in a few minutes. The extended version is already on Patreon and it's inspiration from a scene from Jurassic World Dominion

  • @rarevlbez
    @rarevlbez 2 года назад +11

    perfect now i can sleep better because of this and its very relaxing it will get a Like from me for sure and why does the Channel have the Name logic?

  • @kinggecko503
    @kinggecko503 2 года назад +6

    Heartbreaking story. Rip xano

  • @Tallacus
    @Tallacus 2 года назад +4

    I am blown away by this, omg... so amazing, I need more! I should post my own OC Velociraptor story

    • @Alteori
      @Alteori 2 года назад +4

      That would be amazing 🤩

    • @Tallacus
      @Tallacus 2 года назад +2

      @@Alteori is there a away I can send you the link to my google drive with it?

  • @jaydenbird2517
    @jaydenbird2517 2 года назад +13

    Your voice sounds so relaxing and lovely 😌😌

    • @Alteori
      @Alteori 2 года назад +5

      Thanks. 😅 I wanted this one to be a relaxing bedtime story.
      Sometimes I want a nice creature story, but for bedtime that's not particularly scary, just calming. Lately, the creepypastas I've been listening to are so good they prevent me from falling asleep because I want to find out what happens next.
      I scour RUclips looking for just regular bedtime stories for adults that involve animals or creatures and I can't ever find any.
      That's why I made this one and the one with the banshee and ocelot

    • @jaydenbird2517
      @jaydenbird2517 2 года назад +2

      Woooooow love your stores and I love this one

    • @logicholic
      @logicholic  2 года назад +4

      @@jaydenbird2517 I am so glad :D

    • @Leopardman08
      @Leopardman08 2 года назад +1

      @@Alteori well you succeded

  • @cyberhampter7747
    @cyberhampter7747 2 года назад +1

    More of these pls. I love to do art while listening to this.

  • @PK-MegaLolCaT
    @PK-MegaLolCaT 2 года назад +3

    ...... 8w8 that was beautiful

  • @dinoj4277
    @dinoj4277 2 года назад +2

    10/10 story telling. Still a better love story than Twilight

  • @burningboy14
    @burningboy14 2 года назад +7

    This is the best story

  • @Shehzain
    @Shehzain 2 года назад +3

    This was pretty good, I didn't like how dark it was but it still made sense. The ending was perfect! I'm glad she could escape them and have a happy life.
    Do you think you'll do one about the fire starting Troodontids? I was really fond of those. It's based on actual bird of prey behavior too. So called " fire hawks". This may have also been an inspiration for the author of Mark of the Conifer by Laura Jennings. I highly recommend it. Since you seem to love raptors so much you'd love this story I think. If you read it you should let us know what you think! 💕

  • @This.Heres.A.URL.Handle
    @This.Heres.A.URL.Handle Год назад +1

    I love this, it's beautiful, and your narration voice is perfect! It's both sad an exciting, and the detail of animal rape is perfect, because it happens in nature. My two cats are male and female, and she got mounted and dragged by the him, but I broke them up. You're amazing and this POV is amazing, I have always loved Raptors, (Except for Jurassic World squad) They're scary and smart both scaly and feathered. Logiholic/Alteori, keep up the great work. If you ever make a book, I'll buy it.

  • @gulamonizuku4218
    @gulamonizuku4218 Год назад

    Well I personally like the first person p.o.v stories but I gotta admit this was good also please make more prehistoric planet p.o.v

  • @horror_boi1382
    @horror_boi1382 2 года назад +5

    Are you taking recommendations for these? If so then I would like to suggest basing one of these around either the triceratops or pachyrhinosaurus herd, since those have a lot of potential for emotional weight.
    Also these are actually really bloody good stories you got here, hope you enjoyed making them as much as we enjoy watching them!

  • @brendonmorales8784
    @brendonmorales8784 2 года назад +3

    There is evidence that Kong will get bigger in the hollow earth 🌎 then when we last saw him in Godzilla vs Kong so maybe I’d be kinda interesting if you made him bigger in your monster verse adventures (and maybe even slap Godzilla so hard he starts spinning like a top)😏

  • @Sonicnicholasgameandreview8999
    @Sonicnicholasgameandreview8999 2 года назад +1

    Please do A Blue and Beta Story from Jurassic World Dominion Please

  • @absolutelychad278
    @absolutelychad278 2 года назад +1

    Hi just asking how many story’s of prehistoric planet do you have planned

    • @logicholic
      @logicholic  2 года назад +3

      Well, hmmm, I want to do the triceratops, elasmos, and the duckbill family right now. and the Qianzhousaurus

  • @rarevlbez
    @rarevlbez 2 года назад +2

    Alteori i have to admit its a very good Story and your voice Sounds Like from a movie Like telling the Story from the movie do you understand what i mean? and next time you probably should make a Story about yourself lol that would be awesome

  • @drsamuelhaydensecretgaming6749
    @drsamuelhaydensecretgaming6749 2 года назад +5

    Alteori?

  • @justint8851
    @justint8851 2 года назад +3

    hey Alteori can I ask you this
    are you just going to do one story per episode?

    • @logicholic
      @logicholic  2 года назад +2

      No, just on certain stories

    • @justint8851
      @justint8851 2 года назад +1

      @@logicholic dose that include stories based on scenes from episodes you already did?

  • @volkangulboy8941
    @volkangulboy8941 Год назад +1

    She sounds like alteori

  • @absolutelychad278
    @absolutelychad278 2 года назад +4

    2nd

  • @stefanlaskowski6660
    @stefanlaskowski6660 2 года назад +1

    A velociraptor misogynist 😁

  • @indoirl
    @indoirl Год назад

    Erm.. what the

    • @logicholic
      @logicholic  Год назад +1

      what's the problem

    • @indoirl
      @indoirl Год назад

      @@logicholic Erm why are the animals raping each other

    • @logicholic
      @logicholic  Год назад +1

      ​@@indoirl Because that is something that happens in nature. For example, I was too raped from age 4 - 12.
      Rape occurs across the animal world from scorpionflies and garter snakes to ducks, geese, bottlenose dolphins, and primates. And humans.
      - Bottlenosed dolphins (males will corner and gangbang females; they will also assault other species)
      - Arachnids (esp. those where the female devours the male unless tricked or tied down)
      - Ducks
      - Geese
      - White-fronted bee-eaters
      - Water beetles
      Look it up on the internet and watch some videos to educate yourself on the matter. It sucks but Indeed, rape is common in the animal kingdom, and is observed in insects, 39 species of birds, reptiles, fish, marine mammals and the great apes
      ALSO, the focus should not be that but how the character overcomes the situation.

  • @princessmeek5632
    @princessmeek5632 2 года назад +3

    This is pretty bad

    • @Alteori
      @Alteori 2 года назад +1

      I'm sorry you didn't like it. Thanks for stopping by anyway 🥰

    • @jaxthewolf4572
      @jaxthewolf4572 Год назад +1

      Can't say it's bad, but I know some would be put off by how dark it is. I personally like it though.